I picked this novel up on impulse and discovered a surprising page-turner ahead of my favorite season of the year, and one based on my favorite story of that season, too. I'm not sure Clinch was trying to write a Christmas novel, even given his source material (which of course is Dickens' A Christmas Carol), but he sure nailed the atmosphere: foggy London streets, creepy houses, and several key scenes at Christmastime. The writing clips along--I finished it in three days, a rarity for me--and the ending was a nice set-up for What Comes Next (which I re-read at least in part every year). I also appreciated the lack of the supernatural, except as metaphor. That was appropriate, and also wise, as it would be very hard to follow Dickens in that regard. The references to key elements of the original tale (the door knocker, the chains, Bob Cratchit, a graveyard scene, and the handkerchief tied around Marley's chin) were enough, as was the way the fire in Scrooge's office dwindles from a friendly blaze down to a single coal as the years go on.
So why only three stars? Because any redemption of Marley, Scrooge, or the other characters is contingent on knowing what happens in the later book. Maybe that's a given (even those who haven't read A Christmas Carol have a pretty good idea what happens), but I still would have liked a glimmer of it here. Without Dickens in this book's future, all you have at the end are three sorry souls (Marley, Scrooge, and Scrooge's sister Fan), two of them having departed this world and the third dining alone on his cold dish of revenge. I think Clinch was trying, through Marley's relationship with Fan and his affection for her son, Fred, near the end of the book to make it seem like a real change had happened in Marley's heart. But I had been so thoroughly convinced by that point that Marley was irredeemably damned that I didn't believe he was doing anything more than using Fan for the sex he could no longer get at whorehouses. Not satisfying for someone who likes not only redemption, but also likeable characters. It may be a fault that I must have at least one likeable character in any novel that I read...but I do. They can be flawed, but they still must be sympathetic on some level. In this book, it was almost Belle, Scrooge's failed love interest, but she wasn't strongly drawn enough; nor was her relationship with Scrooge. I did like Fan for most of the book, but both her descent into despair and her succumbing to the charms of syphilitic Marley after the death of her husband struck me as unrealistic as well.
None of this ruined the book. I'd recommend it. Just read its antecedent right afterwards. That's the best way to get the whole story. I'll get you started: "Marley was dead, to begin with."