"There’s a way that you’re outside of life. I’m not sure how to say this but it’s like you’re on the periphery, on the outside looking in. You sort of skirt the perimeter, asking questions and wondering what it’s like instead of diving in and becoming a part of it. Maybe even living out at the lake is an example of that. You live out there and watch Saratoga from a safe distance.”
“Is that why you won’t go out with me?” asked Charlie, uncertain what Doris was saying.
“That may be one of the reasons. I mean, what makes you good as a policeman or a detective is that you’re curious and ask questions, but then you do the same thing with life itself, as if you’re in a store deciding whether to buy or not to buy. You can’t do that with life. You have to jump into the middle and take what comes.”
Private-detective novels are often built on fantasy projects of the sort of man men are supposed to want to be: tough, stoic, skilled, capable of righteous savagery, psychological acute, unerringly judgmental, and therefore irresistibly attractive (usually) to the opposite sex. And when a woman hurts a private detective, they do so because they're liars, cheaters or otherwise morally, one-dimensionally dismissible, and worthy only of ferocious violence, verbal or otherwise. This is supposed to represent some sort of masculine ideal, but I've always found it sad and pathetic, even as I've nursed my own wounds over women and sometimes firehosed my wounds in their faces because I was unable to face the man in the mirror.
Then there's Charlie Bradshaw, the central character in eleven mystery novels by Stephen Dobyns set in Saratoga Springs, New York (a series that started in 1976, with its most recent entry published in 2013 after a fifteen-year absence). Charlie is poor and dresses like it, with cheap sport coats with flapping linings and Hush Puppies sporting crushed heels. He isn't handsome; he's a little overweight, with thinning hair, a round face and "a nose like a grape." He's not particularly feared, and he's not respected by the most respectable members of Saratoga society. What is he is observant and stubborn.
In SARATOGA SNAPPER, Charlie has dated Doris Bailes, a bar waitress, for a number of years, and even fallen in love with her, without ever being able to get comfortable in their relationship. And when she breaks off their relationship to see another man more aligned with her outlook on life, Charlie is driven to hangdog reflections on who he is, how he lives his life, and if those things could ever be appealing to anyone but himself: "The trouble was that Doris didn’t even dislike Charlie. She just liked Roger Phelps more. He played squash and had a sort of ruddy vigor. If he could just forget her, Charlie told himself, he could continue with his life and maybe meet other women—women who liked him and didn’t mind if he wasn’t too tall and was a little overweight and getting bald. The awful truth was that despite his age he was still liable to the paralyzing crushes which had plagued his high school years. These were never appropriate. Nor had he much interest in 'sensible' women."
I found this storyline tremendously appealing. Charlie is a real person, and as I've often said, I read crime fiction not to escape from reality but to escape INTO it. I'm kind of a Charlie myself, and when I read a story about a Spenser or an Elvis Cole or a Jack Reacher, I never think: "I want to be THAT guy." What I want is to be more comfortable with the me that I am, and when I see people like me working through their stuff, even in fiction, with great authority and plausibility, it gives me ideas and how to do that for myself. And ideas often lead to hope, and that leads to a positive experience, especially when the fictional version of me is somehow able to overcome the obstacles in spite of their perceived shortcomings and gain a little respect, self-induced and otherwise, along the way. And when that's just one component of a well-crafted story, that's just about as positive an experience as one can have with a book, in my opinion.
But SARATOGA SNAPPER has a lot more going for it. I like it when a series uses a setting nit just for selective lifestyle porn, but bothers to unpack its history and culture without losing a single MPH of plot momentum. Every SARATOGA novel does this to some degree, and its anecdotal look at Sarataga's intersections with gambling and crime are especially entertaining and informative. In SNAPPER, Charlie is pursuing an octogenarian bank robber in the mid-1980s, a legend from the days of Dutch Schultz and Arnold Rothstein and Murder Incorporated named Tommy Polanksi, who's making one last bid for lasting respect as he stares down his terminal cancer. When Charlie finally crosses paths with Polanksi, the old man has enough left in him for one last speech:
"'I really liked Saratoga,' said Polanski. 'Not now, of course, now it’s just a developer’s paradise, but way back before they caught me and stuck me in prison.' He struggled again to sit up. Charlie leaned forward to help him, lifting him up in the seat and surprised at how light he was. 'I remember when they repealed the old Agnew–Hart Law,' Polanski continued, 'and all the bookies came back to the betting ring at the track. That was probably in ’34. A great bunch of people—Blue Jaw Magoon, Jenny the Factory, the Dancer, Irish John Cavanagh. Then at night you could go over to the Chicago Club or one of them other places. It’s all gone now, but that one hotel, you know, the Bentley, I mean it’s not really the way things were but it looks a little like it.'"
All the SARATOGA mysteries are at least above average, but SNAPPER in particular is a high point in the series. I reread them every few years and find new Easter eggs in them each time. "Character counts" is a cliché, but in this case it speaks loudest and longest.