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Infinity 8 #1
The Demon Lord of California
Stripped of his psychic powers, Calico Winghorse barely made it to 19th century Earth via his interdimensional portal. As a mixed-blood phoenix concealing himself in human form, he opens a bakery in the San Francisco Bay Area and quietly licks his wounds. But the unique method of his escape has drawn the unwanted attention of Infinity Corporation.
Representing this angelic-run company is Agustín Chávez de la Cruz, the Demon Lord of California. Even though Agustín is the corporation’s heir, he finds himself demoted from his daily duties for a new assignment: take absolute control of the portal.
As Agustín formulates a more gracious avenue of acquiring Calico’s gateway, the demanding head of IC interferes, further complicating matters. From this unexpected interlude, Calico and Agustín realize they both wish to establish more than a mere business arrangement. So negotiations stumble along, all the while Calico ensures that the good people of the city are getting their fill of baked goods.
Yet due to Calico’s injuries, the portal remains vulnerable to the darker forces that want it at any cost. Agustín will have to push both his angelic heritage, and his own psychic powers to the very limits to mend someone who not only bears celestial blood, but who is also the god of space and time.
Representing this angelic-run company is Agustín Chávez de la Cruz, the Demon Lord of California. Even though Agustín is the corporation’s heir, he finds himself demoted from his daily duties for a new assignment: take absolute control of the portal.
As Agustín formulates a more gracious avenue of acquiring Calico’s gateway, the demanding head of IC interferes, further complicating matters. From this unexpected interlude, Calico and Agustín realize they both wish to establish more than a mere business arrangement. So negotiations stumble along, all the while Calico ensures that the good people of the city are getting their fill of baked goods.
Yet due to Calico’s injuries, the portal remains vulnerable to the darker forces that want it at any cost. Agustín will have to push both his angelic heritage, and his own psychic powers to the very limits to mend someone who not only bears celestial blood, but who is also the god of space and time.
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First published March 3, 2019
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July 17, 2019I might try this again later. Just not in the mood for this one. I am in a very particular mood lately.
March 1, 2019
** 3.5 stars **
This is my first time reading this author's work, and I had hard time rating it. There were parts that I loved and parts I was not sure what to think about. World-building wise this book is excellent. It's very detailed, and at times I found myself slightly dazed since there were so many little tidbits to keep track of. But at the same time I sometimes felt as if I was thrown into the situations that I somehow should have already known, I felt like I was missing small pieces here and there. And through it all I still wanted to know how it ends.
Calico Winghorse is a smorgasbord of species that at times baffled me. He is a contradiction - very fragile and soft spoken, very traditional and unready to accept changes yet strong and powerful at the same time. There were moments when he appeared so sweet it was endearing but then he would say something that would make me slightly roll my eyes. It was 50/50 when it came to liking him. His two brothers who were identical to Calico were also a big part of the plot. They were equal parts amusing and overprotective. I think I liked them a bit more than Calico.
Augustin the Demon Lord of California is an heir to the Infinity Corporation which protects humans from being stolen by Xiwir Empire (this was one moment where there was lack of info). He is half demon and half angel. I liked him most of the time. He is loyal to his team of misfits Infinity 8, he is there for Calico, and he acknowledges when he makes mistakes and tries to make amends. What I found strange was that Augustin never stood up for himself when it came to Mr Harper, the President of Infinity Corporation and his father. I understand that in 1900s many views and priorities were different but Augustin was powerful in his own right, he should have told his Dad to take a hike when he was just annoyingly rude and unnecessary cruel. Otherwise I liked him.
There were plenty hitched breaths, longing gazes and veiled looks but beyond that the MCs connection was more psychic in nature than physical. It didn't go beyond holding hands here. Romance is mild here, very mild. MCs establish trust and link their minds together, and during the process they fall in love. That was a bit of a stretch for the imagination. They became very sweet and overly cute but in the scheme of things I was okay with that.
Action wise most of the book didn't have much going on. It was mostly preparations for Calico and Augustin to help Calico heal from the curse and get him to be able to use his portal. That part was prolonged and a bit too staid for me, but the ensuing battle between Calico, Augustin and Calico's grandfather was awesome. It was graphic, edgy and gripping. This book was well written and well edited. I loved the side characters, and the epilogue was kind of unexpected that answered a question that bugged me all through the book. I liked the book in general. Some parts were not what I expected but I still found myself curious about this new world and its inhabitants. I recommend it. Copy received via Booksprout for my honest and unbiased opinion
This is my first time reading this author's work, and I had hard time rating it. There were parts that I loved and parts I was not sure what to think about. World-building wise this book is excellent. It's very detailed, and at times I found myself slightly dazed since there were so many little tidbits to keep track of. But at the same time I sometimes felt as if I was thrown into the situations that I somehow should have already known, I felt like I was missing small pieces here and there. And through it all I still wanted to know how it ends.
Calico Winghorse is a smorgasbord of species that at times baffled me. He is a contradiction - very fragile and soft spoken, very traditional and unready to accept changes yet strong and powerful at the same time. There were moments when he appeared so sweet it was endearing but then he would say something that would make me slightly roll my eyes. It was 50/50 when it came to liking him. His two brothers who were identical to Calico were also a big part of the plot. They were equal parts amusing and overprotective. I think I liked them a bit more than Calico.
Augustin the Demon Lord of California is an heir to the Infinity Corporation which protects humans from being stolen by Xiwir Empire (this was one moment where there was lack of info). He is half demon and half angel. I liked him most of the time. He is loyal to his team of misfits Infinity 8, he is there for Calico, and he acknowledges when he makes mistakes and tries to make amends. What I found strange was that Augustin never stood up for himself when it came to Mr Harper, the President of Infinity Corporation and his father. I understand that in 1900s many views and priorities were different but Augustin was powerful in his own right, he should have told his Dad to take a hike when he was just annoyingly rude and unnecessary cruel. Otherwise I liked him.
There were plenty hitched breaths, longing gazes and veiled looks but beyond that the MCs connection was more psychic in nature than physical. It didn't go beyond holding hands here. Romance is mild here, very mild. MCs establish trust and link their minds together, and during the process they fall in love. That was a bit of a stretch for the imagination. They became very sweet and overly cute but in the scheme of things I was okay with that.
Action wise most of the book didn't have much going on. It was mostly preparations for Calico and Augustin to help Calico heal from the curse and get him to be able to use his portal. That part was prolonged and a bit too staid for me, but the ensuing battle between Calico, Augustin and Calico's grandfather was awesome. It was graphic, edgy and gripping. This book was well written and well edited. I loved the side characters, and the epilogue was kind of unexpected that answered a question that bugged me all through the book. I liked the book in general. Some parts were not what I expected but I still found myself curious about this new world and its inhabitants. I recommend it. Copy received via Booksprout for my honest and unbiased opinion
January 3, 2023
This is my first time reading this author's work. And demons, angels, hybrids, the Phoenix, and so much more? Yes please!
The story is a slow burn, and I found myself wanting more at times... because the story is well developed, with strong characterization and scenic description.funny and exciting, but some more heat was needed!
Overall, i liked it and am looking forward to the next one!
*I received a copy of this book from Gay Romance Reviews, and this is my honest review.*
The story is a slow burn, and I found myself wanting more at times... because the story is well developed, with strong characterization and scenic description.funny and exciting, but some more heat was needed!
Overall, i liked it and am looking forward to the next one!
*I received a copy of this book from Gay Romance Reviews, and this is my honest review.*
January 5, 2023
I have to admit that I fell in love with this book when I first saw the cover. You can't blame me - the colors are so pretty and with those angel and demon wings, clock, I'm intrigued. Good thing it was her, because to be honest the summary confused me a bit.
This is one of those books that has so many things I love - fantasy theme, set in the 1900s, slow burn, extremely sexy main characters who can kill you with their cuteness. And these are just some of the things that won me over. Adding to them the presence of angels, demons, hybrids, phoenix...and my heart was filled with happiness.
The world is very well built by the author. The small details helped me imagine exactly where the action was taking place and added to the whole picture. However, when I read the first chapter I felt like something happened that I don't know about. It's like I start the book somewhere in the middle or there was another book before that. Fortunately, as the action progressed I was able to figure out what was going on.
Augustin was my favorite throughout most of the book. I admired his strength, loyalty and attitude towards his team and Calico.
I don't know how to continue this review WITHOUT spoiling the book, so I'll end this review here. I received an advance review copy for free, and I am leaving this review voluntarily.
This is one of those books that has so many things I love - fantasy theme, set in the 1900s, slow burn, extremely sexy main characters who can kill you with their cuteness. And these are just some of the things that won me over. Adding to them the presence of angels, demons, hybrids, phoenix...and my heart was filled with happiness.
The world is very well built by the author. The small details helped me imagine exactly where the action was taking place and added to the whole picture. However, when I read the first chapter I felt like something happened that I don't know about. It's like I start the book somewhere in the middle or there was another book before that. Fortunately, as the action progressed I was able to figure out what was going on.
Augustin was my favorite throughout most of the book. I admired his strength, loyalty and attitude towards his team and Calico.
I don't know how to continue this review WITHOUT spoiling the book, so I'll end this review here. I received an advance review copy for free, and I am leaving this review voluntarily.
September 5, 2019
What a story. Demons, angels, hybrids, Phoenix, and so much more. And an asshole I want to punch that leads the corporation.
Agustín has been known as the Demon Lord of California for a while. It's his territory. He works for a corporation that tries to keep paranormals under 'the law' so to speak. But some of those teams cross the line and he's tired of it. Case in point, when a Mr. Triptych is sent to meet him with information and Agustín has found out he's basically been demoted. And this guy has taken over. The problem is what they are after is something Agustín doesn't want to do. He's instantly attracted to Calico and wants to protect him and ease him into things, but others have different plans….namely Mr.Harper. The asshole that runs things. He sent another team in that hurt Calico and destroyed his livelihood. But Agustín is determined to make everything right. He just doesn't realize how many spies Mr. Harper has and how involved Triptych really is. When Agustín decides to help Calico with what IC is after and to help him unlock his curse, he realizes how much he cares for the man and that he will do anything to help him and keep him safe. And literally almost died several times in making it happen. But Calico's greatest fear is about to be realized. He will do what IC is asking of him, but he knows it's going to cost him. Thankfully, Agustín is there for him to support him, but the cost may be Agustín and himself. Will the sacrifice be worth what the price is?
Ok, first of all, I hate Harper. When you read him, you will too. He is a dick of epic proportions and when it was revealed who he is to a lot of people, including Agustín, I was disgusted. I hate the man. When he sent a team to hurt Calico, I hated him even more. Bullying someone into doing what you want. What a dick. Oh my gah, I hate him.
But Calico is what made this book for me. Coming from a different world to Earth, he's trying so hard to understand everything but some things he just doesn't get. And he can't read English real well. He's got this innocent quality about him, even considering what he really is. But his soul is so beautiful. He has this glow about him that is just like sunlight in your life. And Agustín was like a month to the flame. Agustín is good for Calico. He brings him out of his shell a bit. Although, it's taking time. But what I love is the devotion he has to Cal. He risks his life so many times to end Cal's suffering. It's not an easy process either. (You've got to read to find out.) Needless to say, lots of things get caught on fire. Literally. But the bond they create is a lasting one. They're miserable without each other. And even though it's a slow burn, (Agustín knows he needs to go slow), it's sweet and romantic.
It's a good book. Lots of action and people you want to smack. Paranormals everywhere. And a character that has started working for Cal that I have a hunch about but am not quite sure. So it's going to be interesting to see what happens next. I hope Agustín tells Harper to go to hell and walk off to be honest. But we will see.
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January 5, 2023
Sometimes writers have all the tools at their disposal to materialize a fascinating plot into an incredible read yet miss the mark and end up producing a hot mess of a story. It unfortunately is the case here. In attendance are an intricate and lovingly detailed universe, ambitious story spanning a vast compass both spatial and temporal, characters with more layers (at first glance) than is usual in fantasy/paranormal romances, and respectable literary chops, yet things do not quite gel, creating in this reader's mind torn between what should have been and what was actually delivered a feeling of schizophrenic frustration. Not only is the writing rife with numerous, unnecessary epithets for the protagonists and all sorts of ridiculous mannerisms that clash with the elevated tone this tale of gods and angels and seraphs strives after - obviously the author failed to make up his mind on whether he went for seriousness or silliness. Entirely too many elements do not tally due either to bad taste or a fondness for gaudy discordances over harmonious associations of ideas or themes (incongruities are writ large within the cast, from a baker slash weird beast who shifts from doormat to powerhouse and back at the drop of a hat and without the least bit of cogency according to the immediate needs of the plot, to a comically silly half-demon half-angel mix whose abilities intermingle bureaucratic hijinks and paranormal feats and has the emotional range of a teaspoon). Furthermore, the flow of the story is choppy, the overall structure of the book strikes one as at best weak and at worst artless, and what makes the reading more tedious than such a plot has any right to be is that it assumes far too much from the reader (were scenes cut down at the eleventh hour on account of the book's already immense length? was it because the first chapters do not impart enough information?). I cannot giver more detail without spoiling the few surprises in store for the less discriminating readers who may fall for this glib but feeble penny dreadful. On the whole, a sadly missed opportunity and a book that attempted to be a sleek racing horse only to end up a cantankerous, bloated donkey. Two stars and a half, rounded down.
March 28, 2023
I admit, I didn’t think I’d care for this one. Time & space? No, thanks. Angels & demons? Pass. But, I found myself quite enjoying this. And as soon as I realized this, I was dismayed that I committed myself to yet another series starter that I’d have to bide my time for the next… so I did draw this out and savour it.
While the plot was interesting (and at times a tad confusing), I absolutely loved Calico, and the slowburn relationship.
I’m interested to see more exploration of Calico’s gender, what happens with the curse, if Gus tells Harper to shove it, and when our MCs will discover their new leader’s identity.
While the plot was interesting (and at times a tad confusing), I absolutely loved Calico, and the slowburn relationship.
I’m interested to see more exploration of Calico’s gender, what happens with the curse, if Gus tells Harper to shove it, and when our MCs will discover their new leader’s identity.
April 14, 2019
The Demon Lord of California by Jeanne Marcella was such a fun read. I enjoyed the characters way more than I first anticipated, they are so precious. I did enjoy the story although there were some disconnects for me, which I'll get to in a moment.
A few things I loved about this book:
- It's the year 1900 and the aesthetics are EVERYTHING!
- M/m (interracial!) relationship. I found myself giggling often because they are just so cute!
- One of the MCs works in a bakery so there's an abundance of yummy food, and you know how I am about mixing my fantasy and my baking. (I'm looking at you The Confectioner's Guild.)
- Lots of feminism, queer, POC, and mixed-species rep!
- The cultural realisticness of the time period (towards queer folks, women, polyamory, how the cities in CA smell like garbage which will forever transcend time, etc).
CHOCOLATE DRAGON, IN A CHOCOLATE FOREST?! I'd totally devour that cake, just saying.
◆ Agustín: Demon Lord of California, heir to Infinity Corporation, leader of Infinity 8, and self-made billionaire. Agustín is Mexican and mixed-species (half demon, half angel) with dark skin, long dark hair, one blue eye, and one honey-amber eye. Anime watchers can already tell he's going to be badass, we know what's up. He's also either Pan or Bi, showing interest in both women and men. He's ALSO also a total sugar daddy in every sense of the word as he seems to be an older gentleman, has a serious sweet tooth (I couldn't help myself here, he was constantly giving me cravings for sweets), and spoils his love interest with wild abandon.
◆ Calico: Passionate baker, business owner, and family man. He loves his brothers (he's a triplet!) and his bakery they all work at together more than anything in the world, and it really shows through his confections. He's so shy and proper, it's adorable! And he has a pony! I just loved Calico straightaway, I can't even. Calico appears to be white and is also mixed-species (phoenix, God of Space and Time?!) with creamy pale skin, dark hair with one shaved side, and warm brown eyes. It would seem that he's Gay as we only see his interest in men, but he's oh so timid of exploring feelings of that nature.
From the beginning we have so much confusing information laid on us as if we were being thrown into the middle of a story, and this was fairly consistent throughout, so much so that I had wondered if this was either mid-series or part of a spinoff series - however it is in fact the first book in an original series. Not much of the information is explained very well, and because of that it felt disjointed for me so I was less likely to make a connection long enough to understand or care about the situation.
I was quickly taken with Agustín and Calico's relationship, which was so wholesome and innocent (okay I know I just mentioned bread-sucking, but it's innocent I promise!), and I just found them so endearing. While I really truly loved them, I felt like so much of the story leaned on their chemistry. Not much happens, aside from them working through their infatuations (insta-lust turned insta-love in all but a few days), and then towards the end there was a slew of confusing action sequences that, for me, came on way too quickly. The seriousness felt forced because of the missing information mixed with the rushed plot. Tweaking the pacing could really improved these issues.
With all that said, my favorite parts centered around Agustín and Calico, I couldn't get enough of their whirlwind romance. Their story really touches on the vulnerability of opening up to another person, how intimacy varies for each individual, the frightening headrush of first love, and that feeling of falling so hard for someone you would do anything in your power to make sure they're safe and happy at any cost. I also REALLY LOVED the respectful dialogue between them, and how they're willing to apologize for their mistakes and accept each other's feelings and differences. Their friends and siblings were phenomenally supportive and caring, especially Maars and Fraazil the best brothers ever. I'm also very interested in Triptych and Charlotte, they bring so much mystery to the table and I wish their characters had been expanded on more. I feel like this could be a really sweet and adorable queer romance slice-of-life, sans the whole saving the world thing. Such scandal!
Thank you to Broad Universe for providing me with this eARC via NetGalley in exchange for an honest review!
The quotes provided were taken from an eARC and are subject to change upon publication.
Content Warnings for violence, past loss of a loved one, toxic/violent families, robbery, house fires, light mention of homophobia, and heavy themes surrounding adultery ('bastard' children, cultural/religious views). ♡
A few things I loved about this book:
- It's the year 1900 and the aesthetics are EVERYTHING!
- M/m (interracial!) relationship. I found myself giggling often because they are just so cute!
- One of the MCs works in a bakery so there's an abundance of yummy food, and you know how I am about mixing my fantasy and my baking. (I'm looking at you The Confectioner's Guild.)
- Lots of feminism, queer, POC, and mixed-species rep!
- The cultural realisticness of the time period (towards queer folks, women, polyamory, how the cities in CA smell like garbage which will forever transcend time, etc).
It was cake unlike any he had ever seen in his life. It wasn't just the chocolate garnishes molded into jagged, dramatic trees that caught the eye. It was the three-dimensional miniature dragon basking atop the cake's surface.
CHOCOLATE DRAGON, IN A CHOCOLATE FOREST?! I'd totally devour that cake, just saying.
◆ Agustín: Demon Lord of California, heir to Infinity Corporation, leader of Infinity 8, and self-made billionaire. Agustín is Mexican and mixed-species (half demon, half angel) with dark skin, long dark hair, one blue eye, and one honey-amber eye. Anime watchers can already tell he's going to be badass, we know what's up. He's also either Pan or Bi, showing interest in both women and men. He's ALSO also a total sugar daddy in every sense of the word as he seems to be an older gentleman, has a serious sweet tooth (I couldn't help myself here, he was constantly giving me cravings for sweets), and spoils his love interest with wild abandon.
"You will not come into my pristine bakery, or touch my faultless creations, while covered in unmentionables."
◆ Calico: Passionate baker, business owner, and family man. He loves his brothers (he's a triplet!) and his bakery they all work at together more than anything in the world, and it really shows through his confections. He's so shy and proper, it's adorable! And he has a pony! I just loved Calico straightaway, I can't even. Calico appears to be white and is also mixed-species (phoenix, God of Space and Time?!) with creamy pale skin, dark hair with one shaved side, and warm brown eyes. It would seem that he's Gay as we only see his interest in men, but he's oh so timid of exploring feelings of that nature.
Agustín calmly met this man's infuriated glare, especially since the baker was using a loaf of fresh-baked bread as a weapon. Agustín's heart thumped faster. Sweat beaded his brow, and his stomach was doing delightful somersaults. It took all his control not to lean forward, take hold of the fluffy length, and suck. Or bite.
From the beginning we have so much confusing information laid on us as if we were being thrown into the middle of a story, and this was fairly consistent throughout, so much so that I had wondered if this was either mid-series or part of a spinoff series - however it is in fact the first book in an original series. Not much of the information is explained very well, and because of that it felt disjointed for me so I was less likely to make a connection long enough to understand or care about the situation.
I was quickly taken with Agustín and Calico's relationship, which was so wholesome and innocent (okay I know I just mentioned bread-sucking, but it's innocent I promise!), and I just found them so endearing. While I really truly loved them, I felt like so much of the story leaned on their chemistry. Not much happens, aside from them working through their infatuations (insta-lust turned insta-love in all but a few days), and then towards the end there was a slew of confusing action sequences that, for me, came on way too quickly. The seriousness felt forced because of the missing information mixed with the rushed plot. Tweaking the pacing could really improved these issues.
"You are here, and there. The essence of the chaotic universe, of the in between. Of past. Present. Future. I've come to acknowledge and adore that which is you. All coiled and contained within this physical presence standing before me. A combination I've come to greatly admire."
With all that said, my favorite parts centered around Agustín and Calico, I couldn't get enough of their whirlwind romance. Their story really touches on the vulnerability of opening up to another person, how intimacy varies for each individual, the frightening headrush of first love, and that feeling of falling so hard for someone you would do anything in your power to make sure they're safe and happy at any cost. I also REALLY LOVED the respectful dialogue between them, and how they're willing to apologize for their mistakes and accept each other's feelings and differences. Their friends and siblings were phenomenally supportive and caring, especially Maars and Fraazil the best brothers ever. I'm also very interested in Triptych and Charlotte, they bring so much mystery to the table and I wish their characters had been expanded on more. I feel like this could be a really sweet and adorable queer romance slice-of-life, sans the whole saving the world thing. Such scandal!
Thank you to Broad Universe for providing me with this eARC via NetGalley in exchange for an honest review!
The quotes provided were taken from an eARC and are subject to change upon publication.
Content Warnings for violence, past loss of a loved one, toxic/violent families, robbery, house fires, light mention of homophobia, and heavy themes surrounding adultery ('bastard' children, cultural/religious views). ♡
January 9, 2023
What a fantastic story with a fabulous world-building that is both enthralling and interesting.
Agustin is the lord Demon of California, he is part of an organization that deals with the supernatural beings and he is a busy man. Then he gets a task assigned that takes him to meet Calico, who just wants to break his curse and go back to his world.
I loved both MCs. Agustin is a man of law but he falls for Calico and the sweet man becomes his life. Because Calico is sweet, indeed, and innocent, he has a beautiful heart and love baking delightful desserts just as delicious as he is. How he struggles to have a life on Earth and how he looks after his brothers was very touching. I loved the bond Agustin and him have, how they get hooked in each other despite the multiple obstacles. It was heartwarming to read how their love develops slowly but strongly.
This is a paranormal story with a great setting, lots of action and a slow burn romance that stole my heart. I truly enjoyed this book because it's a marvellous fantasy so well created by the author. There is a villain very well constructed easy to hate but so good in his role at the same time, and the supporting characters added very needed bits of humour into the story.
There is magic, love, meddling brothers and seconds in command, an incredible world of paranormal creatures and some plot twists that make this book amazing.
Agustin is the lord Demon of California, he is part of an organization that deals with the supernatural beings and he is a busy man. Then he gets a task assigned that takes him to meet Calico, who just wants to break his curse and go back to his world.
I loved both MCs. Agustin is a man of law but he falls for Calico and the sweet man becomes his life. Because Calico is sweet, indeed, and innocent, he has a beautiful heart and love baking delightful desserts just as delicious as he is. How he struggles to have a life on Earth and how he looks after his brothers was very touching. I loved the bond Agustin and him have, how they get hooked in each other despite the multiple obstacles. It was heartwarming to read how their love develops slowly but strongly.
This is a paranormal story with a great setting, lots of action and a slow burn romance that stole my heart. I truly enjoyed this book because it's a marvellous fantasy so well created by the author. There is a villain very well constructed easy to hate but so good in his role at the same time, and the supporting characters added very needed bits of humour into the story.
There is magic, love, meddling brothers and seconds in command, an incredible world of paranormal creatures and some plot twists that make this book amazing.
March 8, 2019
This was a difficult book to review. I had mixed opinions about the book.
Story Line
Plot wise the book was interesting, detailed and yet seemed to missing on some information. It left me very lost at places.
Writing Style
Detailed & descriptive this book is a well written book. The author is very skilled in writing and though this is the 1st book that I'm reading Jeanne Marcella's work I liked and enjoyed what she's written.
What did not work for me
There were many times when I just wanted to leave the book but something kept me hooked wanting to know what next. It felt that in spite of all the information given there was still something missing.
I received a free copy of this book via Booksprout and am voluntarily leaving a review.
Story Line
Plot wise the book was interesting, detailed and yet seemed to missing on some information. It left me very lost at places.
Writing Style
Detailed & descriptive this book is a well written book. The author is very skilled in writing and though this is the 1st book that I'm reading Jeanne Marcella's work I liked and enjoyed what she's written.
What did not work for me
There were many times when I just wanted to leave the book but something kept me hooked wanting to know what next. It felt that in spite of all the information given there was still something missing.
I received a free copy of this book via Booksprout and am voluntarily leaving a review.
March 4, 2019
Talk about a slow burn! I liked this. Looking forward to the sequel.
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November 24, 2024I may try this again later.
I just can’t get into it right now. Only 8% in over three days. I’m not sure if it’s me or the book but i dont know what the heck is even going on so far.
I just can’t get into it right now. Only 8% in over three days. I’m not sure if it’s me or the book but i dont know what the heck is even going on so far.
June 13, 2019
*This book was provided by Net Galley in exchange for an honest review*
This book drew me in from the first chapter. The world building and characters were the best thing about this book. It was great to see a LGBTQ Science Fiction book be so amazing. Quirky, cute and totally swoon worthy.
This book drew me in from the first chapter. The world building and characters were the best thing about this book. It was great to see a LGBTQ Science Fiction book be so amazing. Quirky, cute and totally swoon worthy.
March 23, 2019
This is a rich and cleverly developed story with strong characterisation and scenic description. As a tale, it launches without preamble and the reader is drip-fed background and context as the plot unfolds. This is the critical area of weakness in what otherwise would be a very good read. The problem is that the characters and their history are the rationale for the story and explain the personalities of the central characters. Without this background knowledge, the reader is left floundering through most, if not the entire book. For a lighter, less well-developed story this approach can work and allow the reader to grow in their understanding as their empathy for the characters develop. However, in this book, the two central characters are a demon lord and a god, both of whom are based firmly in the mortal world. Other planets and planes of existence are hinted at as well and yet it always feels as though the reader is missing a whole preceding book that would contextualise what is going in.
With a lack of context, the reader is left to fall back on the central characters, their growing association and how they interact with those around them in the hope that all will be revealed in due course. Fortuitously the author provides interesting characters that differ significantly from many in the genre. Similarly, secondary characters are well fleshed out in most cases. There are exceptional characters that appear to be influential and yet are shadowy. The reader is likely to respond to their actions and lack of definition in a dynamic way, never quite sure of their motives towards the central characters. Mortal humans are without exception poorly defined even when one is allowed to interact directly with the central characters behind their masks. Description of the environment is rich and interesting and provides an effective counterbalance to the vagueness of the characters.
The plot itself is described but lacks critical information to allow the reader to be confident of what is going on. That makes the story quite purposeless. It is more like the reader drops into an on-going situation and has to make sense of it before the end.
The central characters are richly described and interesting and their growing association is delicate and endearing. The reader should not expect sex between these characters even though it clearly happens around them. They are not naïve but their natures seem to hold them back from effective commitment. Nevertheless, the reader is left with little doubt that intimacy between them will happen at some point.
There is a steady pace to the story and this is sufficient to allow the rich descriptions to be absorbed rather than raced over. There are points of tension that assist in keeping the story moving.
By the end of the book, the assumption would be that the background would make sense and that there would be clear leaders into the next book that offer new challenges. This is not the case here. Many of the questions about the characters and their backgrounds remain unclear and the rationale for subsequent plot lines is presented without much explanation. As such, if the reader can cope with this lack of information, there is an anticipation of what is to come.
This review is also posted at Gay Book Reviews
With a lack of context, the reader is left to fall back on the central characters, their growing association and how they interact with those around them in the hope that all will be revealed in due course. Fortuitously the author provides interesting characters that differ significantly from many in the genre. Similarly, secondary characters are well fleshed out in most cases. There are exceptional characters that appear to be influential and yet are shadowy. The reader is likely to respond to their actions and lack of definition in a dynamic way, never quite sure of their motives towards the central characters. Mortal humans are without exception poorly defined even when one is allowed to interact directly with the central characters behind their masks. Description of the environment is rich and interesting and provides an effective counterbalance to the vagueness of the characters.
The plot itself is described but lacks critical information to allow the reader to be confident of what is going on. That makes the story quite purposeless. It is more like the reader drops into an on-going situation and has to make sense of it before the end.
The central characters are richly described and interesting and their growing association is delicate and endearing. The reader should not expect sex between these characters even though it clearly happens around them. They are not naïve but their natures seem to hold them back from effective commitment. Nevertheless, the reader is left with little doubt that intimacy between them will happen at some point.
There is a steady pace to the story and this is sufficient to allow the rich descriptions to be absorbed rather than raced over. There are points of tension that assist in keeping the story moving.
By the end of the book, the assumption would be that the background would make sense and that there would be clear leaders into the next book that offer new challenges. This is not the case here. Many of the questions about the characters and their backgrounds remain unclear and the rationale for subsequent plot lines is presented without much explanation. As such, if the reader can cope with this lack of information, there is an anticipation of what is to come.
This review is also posted at Gay Book Reviews
December 31, 2021
This book follows our Demon Lord Agustin and the half blood Phoenix Calico who's here in human form. It's a story about fitting in where it matters, finding yourself and accepting yourself, making new friends and some demon fighting and portal travelling thrown in for some good measure.
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🌟🌟🌟💫[3.5/5]
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First I really loved the world and how the different concepts were explained. The corporation, their needs and workings, was interesting to read about. Agustin was a cinnamon roll bundled up in a grumpy exterior. The way he cared for his people was such a cute thing. Calico was a complex character, but his bond with his brothers was such an amazing thing to read about. His mannerisms was such a contrast with Agustin that they made a wonderful pair when put together. Second, I really liked the side characters and their fire in doing things right. Especially when it came to saving their loved ones and risking everything for your people.
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Now coming to the story and character development, I really loved reading about Calico and how he came to grew as a character so much. Being cast out and surviving in a new world is no feat, but he did it with passion and determination. The way Agustin helped Calico bring out his personality and his true self was such a treat to read about. I really liked the ending, but the way it was executed wasn't my favourite. So maybe it dampened my reading experience. Overall, I really enjoyed it and will definitely continue this series.
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Thank you @gayromancereviews for the gifted review copy!
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Kindle/Arc/March2021/ Book 047
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🌟🌟🌟💫[3.5/5]
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First I really loved the world and how the different concepts were explained. The corporation, their needs and workings, was interesting to read about. Agustin was a cinnamon roll bundled up in a grumpy exterior. The way he cared for his people was such a cute thing. Calico was a complex character, but his bond with his brothers was such an amazing thing to read about. His mannerisms was such a contrast with Agustin that they made a wonderful pair when put together. Second, I really liked the side characters and their fire in doing things right. Especially when it came to saving their loved ones and risking everything for your people.
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Now coming to the story and character development, I really loved reading about Calico and how he came to grew as a character so much. Being cast out and surviving in a new world is no feat, but he did it with passion and determination. The way Agustin helped Calico bring out his personality and his true self was such a treat to read about. I really liked the ending, but the way it was executed wasn't my favourite. So maybe it dampened my reading experience. Overall, I really enjoyed it and will definitely continue this series.
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Thank you @gayromancereviews for the gifted review copy!
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Kindle/Arc/March2021/ Book 047
January 26, 2023
It sounded intriguing, but I couldn't get into the story at all.
The beginning is very slow and there's too much information to keep up with. Agustin dives into a lot of details about his job and Etney, then goes on to complain about Harper and then we jump to a scene where he admires a nym man. All of these things go on and on in the first chapter as if the main character didn't know what to focus on. It took me a few tries to finish it.
Then we have a weird sex scene in chapter two. I could've enjoyed it if I understood what the heck was going on, but it was so awkward. The "rent boy" (who ends up not being a rent boy) knows Agustin, but Agustin doesn't know him? And it didn't occur to the guy to just ask who this nym is and how he knows Agustin? Communication, man. Just ask. Right after the "rent boy" / cupcake man introduces himself... he runs away. Just like that. What? Why? What was that?
I thought things would pick up in chapter three, but we're back to more complaining about the Infinity Corporation, repeated statements about Agustin's physical appearance and a demotion. It feels like the story should've started with the demotion, but it's where I decided to stop reading.
It's possible the next chapters will get better, but I'm not interested enough to find out.
The beginning is very slow and there's too much information to keep up with. Agustin dives into a lot of details about his job and Etney, then goes on to complain about Harper and then we jump to a scene where he admires a nym man. All of these things go on and on in the first chapter as if the main character didn't know what to focus on. It took me a few tries to finish it.
Then we have a weird sex scene in chapter two. I could've enjoyed it if I understood what the heck was going on, but it was so awkward. The "rent boy" (who ends up not being a rent boy) knows Agustin, but Agustin doesn't know him? And it didn't occur to the guy to just ask who this nym is and how he knows Agustin? Communication, man. Just ask. Right after the "rent boy" / cupcake man introduces himself... he runs away. Just like that. What? Why? What was that?
I thought things would pick up in chapter three, but we're back to more complaining about the Infinity Corporation, repeated statements about Agustin's physical appearance and a demotion. It feels like the story should've started with the demotion, but it's where I decided to stop reading.
It's possible the next chapters will get better, but I'm not interested enough to find out.
January 4, 2023
Reviewed for Love Bytes – 2.5 hearts
As the heir to an empire that protects Earth from evil paranormal entities, much is expected of Agustin – but his unyielding father expects everything from him. Calico is a God of time and space, but he has been broken by a curse. Having travelled back in time, Cal gets flashes of something in his future, but his damage can give confusion as much as clarity.
The Demon Lord of California is a book I picked up due to the great blurb. Reading it was a very different experience. It’s a story that has great potential, which includes some ingenious character names, but I’m not sure it’s there yet.
The story is told in the third person, and the cover artistry is one of my favorites. World-building begins in the opening pages with a family tree. This feature is helpful for a book in paperback as it is a quickly booked mark reference. However, in kindle format, without magnification, it isn't easy to read, and although possible to bookmark, it is a rarely used feature. Continuing forward, the scene-setting is detailed. But there were many occasions when the unrestrained picture painting derailed the flow of a scene, which is a shame because there were some beautiful scenes – if only they’d stayed in the moment. This isn’t my first foray into paranormal stories, but I clearly don’t have enough experience since I needed google to hand as my dictionary.
Homesick Phoenix, Calico, is a quirky individual whose outlook on everything can be challenging to follow as he zones into different timeframes. Occasionally, he can also be a walking contradiction. While Agustin values the ideals of his father’s empire, he’s an unhappy man who longs for a life outside the Infinity Corporation. These feelings/views made a hefty portion of the early chapters akin to reading a tossed salad of experiences, which were not conducive to pulling me into the story – some parts were delicious, others not. The only thing that made sense for a long time was chocolate – hell yeah.
The extended cast adds another dimension to the story, especially Ms Dasheel – she’s my kind of woman. The difference in cultural customs/propriety between the paranormal worlds and humans added another element that was mostly learn as you go.
The Demon Lord of California is a quirky book that I struggled to get to grips with. It contains a variety of paranormal beings, a host of situations and other worldly traditions. At 113K, it felt like a huge jigsaw that needed organizing. And although it got better as the story progressed, editing out a few thousand words would have made it punchier – less would have been more. Then again, if you are the type of reader that enjoys a story (in the immortal words of the Gump matriarch) that is like a box of chocolates, then this is a must for your shelf.
This book was provided free in exchange for a fair and honest review for
Love Bytes.
As the heir to an empire that protects Earth from evil paranormal entities, much is expected of Agustin – but his unyielding father expects everything from him. Calico is a God of time and space, but he has been broken by a curse. Having travelled back in time, Cal gets flashes of something in his future, but his damage can give confusion as much as clarity.
The Demon Lord of California is a book I picked up due to the great blurb. Reading it was a very different experience. It’s a story that has great potential, which includes some ingenious character names, but I’m not sure it’s there yet.
The story is told in the third person, and the cover artistry is one of my favorites. World-building begins in the opening pages with a family tree. This feature is helpful for a book in paperback as it is a quickly booked mark reference. However, in kindle format, without magnification, it isn't easy to read, and although possible to bookmark, it is a rarely used feature. Continuing forward, the scene-setting is detailed. But there were many occasions when the unrestrained picture painting derailed the flow of a scene, which is a shame because there were some beautiful scenes – if only they’d stayed in the moment. This isn’t my first foray into paranormal stories, but I clearly don’t have enough experience since I needed google to hand as my dictionary.
Homesick Phoenix, Calico, is a quirky individual whose outlook on everything can be challenging to follow as he zones into different timeframes. Occasionally, he can also be a walking contradiction. While Agustin values the ideals of his father’s empire, he’s an unhappy man who longs for a life outside the Infinity Corporation. These feelings/views made a hefty portion of the early chapters akin to reading a tossed salad of experiences, which were not conducive to pulling me into the story – some parts were delicious, others not. The only thing that made sense for a long time was chocolate – hell yeah.
The extended cast adds another dimension to the story, especially Ms Dasheel – she’s my kind of woman. The difference in cultural customs/propriety between the paranormal worlds and humans added another element that was mostly learn as you go.
The Demon Lord of California is a quirky book that I struggled to get to grips with. It contains a variety of paranormal beings, a host of situations and other worldly traditions. At 113K, it felt like a huge jigsaw that needed organizing. And although it got better as the story progressed, editing out a few thousand words would have made it punchier – less would have been more. Then again, if you are the type of reader that enjoys a story (in the immortal words of the Gump matriarch) that is like a box of chocolates, then this is a must for your shelf.
This book was provided free in exchange for a fair and honest review for
Love Bytes.
January 11, 2023
CW's and CN's at the end
My first book from Bennu Bright and what an amazing rollercoaster ride this historical fantasy was! I’m not going to even attempt to summarize the intricacies of this plot but I absolutely loved this love story between Agustin Chavez De la Cruz, Demon Lord of California, and Calico Winghorse, phoenix, time and space god and the most cinnamon roll baker to boot.
There are some books that are simultaneously deeply complex, with layers of sophisticated worldbuilding while also containing a story so powerful in its simplicity. This novel was definitely an example of this and I was captivated by the various ups and downs our characters experienced. The two main characters–Agustin and Calico–were one of the biggest strengths of this novel, both having rich individual narratives as well as the most precious love story when they came together. Having fled his home dimension and recovering from a huge trauma, Calico is attempting to make a life for himself and his brothers in 1900s San Francisco as a baker. I was so charmed by his sweetness, his absolute adherence to propriety and his strong bond with his brothers. Augustin, the half-demon and half-angel heir apparent to the Infinity Corporation, has his hands full when his boss and father demands that Calico be recruited for his portal powers, especially when Calico proves to be reluctant and skittish. This led to such a wonderful slow-burn with these two characters and I loved watching them get to know each other, build trust and eventually fall in love in the sweetest ways. Though Calico has a lot to recover from, Agustin’s assurances and his cautious approach prove to be the biggest push the phoenix needs to begin his healing process. In particular, I loved the symbolic bonds of love we see in the characters’ telepathic journeys in each other’s minds and the descriptions were nothing short of poetic.
I am so excited to see where this series goes next and to dig into some of the unresolved threads that were introduced in this book. Calico and Agustin, as well as the ensemble of engaging side characters, were a joy to spend time with and I can’t wait to see what lies in store for them.
CW’s: Robbery and assault; mentioned sexual harassment; mental abuse from a parent; PTSD and psychic trauma as effects of a curse; fire, burning and burning alive in the context of fire elementals and phoenixes; implied prostitution and suicide; perceived betrayal and assault by a family member (under specific story/fantasy circumstances)
CN’s: This is an urban fantasy that takes place in 1900s San Francisco. All main characters are supernaturals of some kind including phoenixes, lycanthropes, angels and demons. The romance is a slow burn and is low to medium heat with on-page sex scenes (including in the opening scene).
My first book from Bennu Bright and what an amazing rollercoaster ride this historical fantasy was! I’m not going to even attempt to summarize the intricacies of this plot but I absolutely loved this love story between Agustin Chavez De la Cruz, Demon Lord of California, and Calico Winghorse, phoenix, time and space god and the most cinnamon roll baker to boot.
There are some books that are simultaneously deeply complex, with layers of sophisticated worldbuilding while also containing a story so powerful in its simplicity. This novel was definitely an example of this and I was captivated by the various ups and downs our characters experienced. The two main characters–Agustin and Calico–were one of the biggest strengths of this novel, both having rich individual narratives as well as the most precious love story when they came together. Having fled his home dimension and recovering from a huge trauma, Calico is attempting to make a life for himself and his brothers in 1900s San Francisco as a baker. I was so charmed by his sweetness, his absolute adherence to propriety and his strong bond with his brothers. Augustin, the half-demon and half-angel heir apparent to the Infinity Corporation, has his hands full when his boss and father demands that Calico be recruited for his portal powers, especially when Calico proves to be reluctant and skittish. This led to such a wonderful slow-burn with these two characters and I loved watching them get to know each other, build trust and eventually fall in love in the sweetest ways. Though Calico has a lot to recover from, Agustin’s assurances and his cautious approach prove to be the biggest push the phoenix needs to begin his healing process. In particular, I loved the symbolic bonds of love we see in the characters’ telepathic journeys in each other’s minds and the descriptions were nothing short of poetic.
I am so excited to see where this series goes next and to dig into some of the unresolved threads that were introduced in this book. Calico and Agustin, as well as the ensemble of engaging side characters, were a joy to spend time with and I can’t wait to see what lies in store for them.
CW’s: Robbery and assault; mentioned sexual harassment; mental abuse from a parent; PTSD and psychic trauma as effects of a curse; fire, burning and burning alive in the context of fire elementals and phoenixes; implied prostitution and suicide; perceived betrayal and assault by a family member (under specific story/fantasy circumstances)
CN’s: This is an urban fantasy that takes place in 1900s San Francisco. All main characters are supernaturals of some kind including phoenixes, lycanthropes, angels and demons. The romance is a slow burn and is low to medium heat with on-page sex scenes (including in the opening scene).
January 9, 2023
An interesting reading and the beginning of a new series, “The Demon Lord of California” by Bennu Bright tells Agustín and Calico’s story. Agustín is the overworked Demon Lord of California, in charge of supervising all paranormal life in his region. He is also in charge of one of the Infinity groups of the Infinity Corporation, which polices paranormal activity, including interdimensional activity. Calico is a baker who recently arrived on Earth and a powerful magical being, though he and his brothers are victims of a curse that has left him deprived of most of his powers. Distinct to this novel is the late 19th-/early 20th-century background, which translates to technology but particularly to language and societal mores. So this book is all about polite language typical of elite society at the time, and suggesting more than showing when it comes to physical intimacy. The latter is even more acute because in Calico’s original world, marriage and sex are tightly intertwined, and it feels like one could get married almost by kissing a stranger. These two features merge with the result of slowing quite a bit the narrative, which is probably why the story starts with a hot scene involving Calico and Agustín at the beginning that we won’t see again almost until the end of the book. In that sense, though the book reads well, it demands patience and sticking with it, particularly for the first half of it, as it takes a bit to take off and may feel a bit alien – or so it happened to me. Then things pick up a bit, mostly because we learn about Calico’s identity and the worldbuilding expands. Even then, though, the chivalry style commands the narrative flow. On the other hand, MCs have room enough to develop emotionally and mature and spark the reader’s sympathy. This is the case with Calico, whose flustering moments oscillate between cute and tiresome.
I feel this book will improve with the following ones, not only because Calico and Agustín’s relationship will settle (though we have seen glimpses of their future, an appealing feature of the plot), but also because there’s a lot of side information that kind of hangs in there in this one. A last note goes to spelling. It caught my attention that some characters use perfect Spanish, with written accents where they are due, like “Sí, señor”. However, Spanish given names lack accents: “Ramirez” instead of “Ramírez”, and “Agustin Chavez de la Cruz” instead of “Agustín Chávez de la Cruz”. I couldn’t help but wonder about the reason behind this…
I received an ARC and this is my honest opinion.
I feel this book will improve with the following ones, not only because Calico and Agustín’s relationship will settle (though we have seen glimpses of their future, an appealing feature of the plot), but also because there’s a lot of side information that kind of hangs in there in this one. A last note goes to spelling. It caught my attention that some characters use perfect Spanish, with written accents where they are due, like “Sí, señor”. However, Spanish given names lack accents: “Ramirez” instead of “Ramírez”, and “Agustin Chavez de la Cruz” instead of “Agustín Chávez de la Cruz”. I couldn’t help but wonder about the reason behind this…
I received an ARC and this is my honest opinion.
January 5, 2023
Agustin Chavez de la Cruz is the Demon Lord of California and he is not happy with his life. Then he meets Calico Winghorse. Calico’s life is definitely problematic. He fled his home to California with his triplet brothers. The three of them start a bakery but Calico struggles as many of his powers have been blocked. His arrival in California does not unnoticed as he is the owner of an interdimensional portal. Infinity Corporation is interested in procuring the portal for their use and Agustin is their representative. Unfortunately, his boss is not happy with his progress and sends in a different team to help and really messes up the negotiations. In spite of this, Agustin realizes he wants so much more from Calico than his portal.
Both Agustin and Calico were hybrids. For Agustin, it was angel and demon while Calico had many parts to him but phoenix was among the strongest. Both men seemed to be unique. Agustin was tired of being bullied and told what to do in both his love life and his professional life. Calico was a unique blend of naivety and strong feelings. He had some strange ideas on courting and marriage which made him delightful. The two together were amazing as Agustin strived to help Calico unlock his powers and to protect him from Infinity Corporation.
The world building was incredible and well thought out. It was easy to imagine what we were seeing in the pages. The population of this world was wide and varied and enriched the story so very much. Agustin had his own team I-8 whose members had issues of some sort. They added so much to the story. The plot was engaging and revealed slowly. Background information was provided piece by piece but it avoided that too much too soon feeling. You cannot help but fall in love Calico and his brothers as well as Agustin and his team mates. This is a new series and I look forward to more and to learning more about all the characters.
Both Agustin and Calico were hybrids. For Agustin, it was angel and demon while Calico had many parts to him but phoenix was among the strongest. Both men seemed to be unique. Agustin was tired of being bullied and told what to do in both his love life and his professional life. Calico was a unique blend of naivety and strong feelings. He had some strange ideas on courting and marriage which made him delightful. The two together were amazing as Agustin strived to help Calico unlock his powers and to protect him from Infinity Corporation.
The world building was incredible and well thought out. It was easy to imagine what we were seeing in the pages. The population of this world was wide and varied and enriched the story so very much. Agustin had his own team I-8 whose members had issues of some sort. They added so much to the story. The plot was engaging and revealed slowly. Background information was provided piece by piece but it avoided that too much too soon feeling. You cannot help but fall in love Calico and his brothers as well as Agustin and his team mates. This is a new series and I look forward to more and to learning more about all the characters.
January 3, 2023
The Review
What a fantastic way to begin the new year. The epic proportions of this novel’s world-building were incredible to read. The vastness of the novel’s paranormal world burst open on a grand scale that kept me enthralled by the author’s storytelling. The balance the author found between humor and romance as the story delved into the more everyday, mundane, and human aspects of the story with the more epic, chilling, and heavy aspects of the cosmic scale fantasy horror elements of the story were incredible to see come to life on the page.
The depth of emotional connection the author was able to achieve with the characters in this book was superb. Not only did the author manage to craft a villain that everyone will love hating, but the protagonists of this story found a way to add a level of connection and relatability to their bond together that is not always easy to accomplish when dealing with otherworldly beings. The way Calico opens up Agustin’s world and viewpoints to the point of making sacrifice after sacrifice to help the wayward god of space and time and the connection they shared not only brought that beloved LGBTQ romance and relationship to life, but added the heart to the narrative.
The Verdict
Thoughtful, mesmerizing, and entertaining, author Bennu Bright’s “The Demon Lord of California” is a must-read fantasy and LGBTQ Paranormal novel to kick off 2023, and a great start to the author’s Infinity 8 series. The heart and compassion of the character’s arcs blend well with the action and fantasy world the author has brought to life through incredible imagery in their writing, and the twists and turns will have readers eager for more as the book comes to its climactic conclusion.
What a fantastic way to begin the new year. The epic proportions of this novel’s world-building were incredible to read. The vastness of the novel’s paranormal world burst open on a grand scale that kept me enthralled by the author’s storytelling. The balance the author found between humor and romance as the story delved into the more everyday, mundane, and human aspects of the story with the more epic, chilling, and heavy aspects of the cosmic scale fantasy horror elements of the story were incredible to see come to life on the page.
The depth of emotional connection the author was able to achieve with the characters in this book was superb. Not only did the author manage to craft a villain that everyone will love hating, but the protagonists of this story found a way to add a level of connection and relatability to their bond together that is not always easy to accomplish when dealing with otherworldly beings. The way Calico opens up Agustin’s world and viewpoints to the point of making sacrifice after sacrifice to help the wayward god of space and time and the connection they shared not only brought that beloved LGBTQ romance and relationship to life, but added the heart to the narrative.
The Verdict
Thoughtful, mesmerizing, and entertaining, author Bennu Bright’s “The Demon Lord of California” is a must-read fantasy and LGBTQ Paranormal novel to kick off 2023, and a great start to the author’s Infinity 8 series. The heart and compassion of the character’s arcs blend well with the action and fantasy world the author has brought to life through incredible imagery in their writing, and the twists and turns will have readers eager for more as the book comes to its climactic conclusion.
January 6, 2023
This book intrigued me as I am not a usual reader of historical romances, however the paranormal aspect pulled me in. The cover art is gorgeous and I appreciate the listing of triggers within the book. There is some on page violence that can be unsettling and I would definitely check out the rest of the triggers listed at the front of the book. There is a super helpful glossary and character guide located at the back of the book. I definitely found myself referring to it when I got wrapped up in the book and wanted to refresh my memory.
There is impressive world building that merges historical world of 1900s with paranormal magical characters. It’s a very slow burn with lots of angst. It picks up a lot of steam and surprises halfway through the book. There were definitely a few, ah-ha moments for me in the second half of the book which kept me turning the pages to see what other surprises I would find.
Cal’s character is in a bad place-stuck in a form with parts of his magic trapped. He’s such a different character that it takes a bit to figure him out but I really enjoyed his character. It took me a bit to warm up to Agustin’s character. He’s stuffy and proper in the beginning but as Calico gets to know him, I feel like the reader does as well.
Delightful secondary characters with fun exchanges between Maars and Etney. Cal’s brothers are funny and I can’t wait for more of their witty banter. How the characters are connected to each other is very interesting and starts to connect more about half way through. The mysterious Mr. Triptych intrigues me as well.
I sense there is more chaos to follow this group around and it ends in a HFN, thankfully not a cliffhanger. Looking forward to the second book and what happens next for this group.
There is impressive world building that merges historical world of 1900s with paranormal magical characters. It’s a very slow burn with lots of angst. It picks up a lot of steam and surprises halfway through the book. There were definitely a few, ah-ha moments for me in the second half of the book which kept me turning the pages to see what other surprises I would find.
Cal’s character is in a bad place-stuck in a form with parts of his magic trapped. He’s such a different character that it takes a bit to figure him out but I really enjoyed his character. It took me a bit to warm up to Agustin’s character. He’s stuffy and proper in the beginning but as Calico gets to know him, I feel like the reader does as well.
Delightful secondary characters with fun exchanges between Maars and Etney. Cal’s brothers are funny and I can’t wait for more of their witty banter. How the characters are connected to each other is very interesting and starts to connect more about half way through. The mysterious Mr. Triptych intrigues me as well.
I sense there is more chaos to follow this group around and it ends in a HFN, thankfully not a cliffhanger. Looking forward to the second book and what happens next for this group.
April 7, 2019
I received a free copy of this book on NetGalley, and am voluntarily leaving a review.
I didn't know what to expect when I picked up this book, as I had never read something in the LGBTQ Science Fiction/Fantasy Realm before. Overall, I enjoyed the book, and finished it pretty quickly.
Some of the strongest points for the book were the detailed world building and characterization of the diverse cast of characters. That being said, while the world building had great detail, sometimes that detail seemed misplaced and left the reader with more questions than answers. There were many things about the world-building that I loved, but there were also a lot of details that were necessary to keep track of, and at times this could be slightly confusing. Even with this, the plot was engaging, and I was driven to finish, to find out what would happen to the characters that were so easy to love.
The characters were my favorite part of this book, with 2 main characters that were well developed as well as a plethora of supporting characters that also had interesting lives and character development, it was easy to get invested. The only thing I struggled with in getting to know the characters was their very interesting backgrounds and histories that we didn't get a lot of information on early on. I expect more development and backstory to be filled in in the sequel.
Overall, an enjoyable read, and a great first foray into LGBTQ Science Fiction/Fantasy.
I didn't know what to expect when I picked up this book, as I had never read something in the LGBTQ Science Fiction/Fantasy Realm before. Overall, I enjoyed the book, and finished it pretty quickly.
Some of the strongest points for the book were the detailed world building and characterization of the diverse cast of characters. That being said, while the world building had great detail, sometimes that detail seemed misplaced and left the reader with more questions than answers. There were many things about the world-building that I loved, but there were also a lot of details that were necessary to keep track of, and at times this could be slightly confusing. Even with this, the plot was engaging, and I was driven to finish, to find out what would happen to the characters that were so easy to love.
The characters were my favorite part of this book, with 2 main characters that were well developed as well as a plethora of supporting characters that also had interesting lives and character development, it was easy to get invested. The only thing I struggled with in getting to know the characters was their very interesting backgrounds and histories that we didn't get a lot of information on early on. I expect more development and backstory to be filled in in the sequel.
Overall, an enjoyable read, and a great first foray into LGBTQ Science Fiction/Fantasy.
January 5, 2023
Great start to the series
This ends on a "we will be happy someday" scene it is not a cliffhanger more a lead in to the next book
I don't want to spoil anything but I am excited to see where we go next
The author introduces us to the different creations/characters while setting the foundation for the series
It takes place in a recency-type era on early earth
Our cast is a mix of different worlds/dimensions - We have everything from Angels to Mythological beings - One of the things I truly enjoyed about this read was the mix of "races"
For me the supporting cast was just as important as our two main characters - I felt like the overall story was the primary focus and their relationship took second place.
Plenty of action and suspense some even drew out loud "OMG NO" others I just held my breath and held on hoping all would work out
Agustin needed to make a choice - personally, I would have dumped pops a long time ago. Nothing was worth what that being put him through.
Lots of light humor - Calico was a mess - both future and present - you'll see.
Some angst moments that drew those little tears
And a slow-build romance that was sweeter than a cinnamon roll
I do wish some scenes had a bit more detail and others less - if that makes sense. The ending was more like a beginning
This ends on a "we will be happy someday" scene it is not a cliffhanger more a lead in to the next book
I don't want to spoil anything but I am excited to see where we go next
The author introduces us to the different creations/characters while setting the foundation for the series
It takes place in a recency-type era on early earth
Our cast is a mix of different worlds/dimensions - We have everything from Angels to Mythological beings - One of the things I truly enjoyed about this read was the mix of "races"
For me the supporting cast was just as important as our two main characters - I felt like the overall story was the primary focus and their relationship took second place.
Plenty of action and suspense some even drew out loud "OMG NO" others I just held my breath and held on hoping all would work out
Agustin needed to make a choice - personally, I would have dumped pops a long time ago. Nothing was worth what that being put him through.
Lots of light humor - Calico was a mess - both future and present - you'll see.
Some angst moments that drew those little tears
And a slow-build romance that was sweeter than a cinnamon roll
I do wish some scenes had a bit more detail and others less - if that makes sense. The ending was more like a beginning
January 3, 2023
A Joyfully Jay review.
2.75 stars
The Demon Lord of California is a quasi-historical, very paranormal fantasy from Bennu Bright. The action takes place largely in early 20th century California where Agustin impresses in finely cut suits and top hats, while Calico toils in a bakery and uses a horse and cart to deliver his wares. Despite these clear time and culture markers for Earth, neither character seems to care about social norms for the era. Instead, Calico expects Agustin to follow courtship rules from Calico’s dimension. This includes several chapters’ worth of Calico wringing his hands over why Agustin does not provide a chaperone as Calico’s people require and having a meltdown when Agustin attempts to kiss Calico (in Calico’s world, a kiss is like a declaration of undying love). I did not like this unbalanced dynamic where Calico doesn’t seem to ever attempt or understand the need to explain his expectations to Agustin; meanwhile, Agustin seems completely aloof to everything but his own smoldering attraction.
Read Camille’s review in its entirety here.
2.75 stars
The Demon Lord of California is a quasi-historical, very paranormal fantasy from Bennu Bright. The action takes place largely in early 20th century California where Agustin impresses in finely cut suits and top hats, while Calico toils in a bakery and uses a horse and cart to deliver his wares. Despite these clear time and culture markers for Earth, neither character seems to care about social norms for the era. Instead, Calico expects Agustin to follow courtship rules from Calico’s dimension. This includes several chapters’ worth of Calico wringing his hands over why Agustin does not provide a chaperone as Calico’s people require and having a meltdown when Agustin attempts to kiss Calico (in Calico’s world, a kiss is like a declaration of undying love). I did not like this unbalanced dynamic where Calico doesn’t seem to ever attempt or understand the need to explain his expectations to Agustin; meanwhile, Agustin seems completely aloof to everything but his own smoldering attraction.
Read Camille’s review in its entirety here.
January 3, 2023
3.5-4 stars
First of all, this is a LONG book, that's not a criticism in the slightest, it's just a fact. Even though I've read the whole thing, I'm still really not sure what it was I read. It's set in the early 1900s, and I'm still unclear on whether the supernatural/paranormal are a known thing or not. Calico and his brothers are identical triplets, and Calico is also the god of space and time, albeit without most of his powers due to a curse. Agustin is the titular demon lord of California, although he's a hybrid demon/angel trying to juggle both parts of his heritage.
There was a lot going on in this book, a lot of jumping about in time for Calico and I was more than a little lost at times. Lots of phoenixes and lots of explanations about bloodlines and forges and it was a little much at times. I did enjoy the story for the most part, I did like how naive Calico was, although it seemed he'd flip quickly from naive to wanton at the drop of a hat (although this was sort of explained). I'm not sure I'll stick with this for the whole series, but might have a look at the next and see if it intrigues me.
I received an ARC from GRR and this is my honest review.
First of all, this is a LONG book, that's not a criticism in the slightest, it's just a fact. Even though I've read the whole thing, I'm still really not sure what it was I read. It's set in the early 1900s, and I'm still unclear on whether the supernatural/paranormal are a known thing or not. Calico and his brothers are identical triplets, and Calico is also the god of space and time, albeit without most of his powers due to a curse. Agustin is the titular demon lord of California, although he's a hybrid demon/angel trying to juggle both parts of his heritage.
There was a lot going on in this book, a lot of jumping about in time for Calico and I was more than a little lost at times. Lots of phoenixes and lots of explanations about bloodlines and forges and it was a little much at times. I did enjoy the story for the most part, I did like how naive Calico was, although it seemed he'd flip quickly from naive to wanton at the drop of a hat (although this was sort of explained). I'm not sure I'll stick with this for the whole series, but might have a look at the next and see if it intrigues me.
I received an ARC from GRR and this is my honest review.
January 4, 2021
The plot of this novel is intricate enough that I won’t tie myself in knots trying to recap it in a sentence or two here--it’s a beautiful, complex, at times convoluted world the author has created, and one well-worth experiencing in full. Calico and Augstin are multifaceted characters who inhabit a world of gods, demons, curses, angels, shady corporations, threats from another dimension, possible time travel, and baked goods. There are some excellent supporting characters as well: Calico’s brothers and Augustin’s right-hand woman are dynamic additions that occasionally add some much-needed humor to the drama. I really enjoyed this book-- the writing is good and the worldbuilding is exquisitely detailed. It definitely feels like the beginning of a longer adventure, so readers will want to brace themselves for some plot threads, and relationship milestones, yet to be realized at the close of this installment.
*I received an ARC of this book and am voluntarily leaving a review.
*I received an ARC of this book and am voluntarily leaving a review.
January 5, 2023
This book was well written, the story building world for the current setting was great, the characters were likable enough however throughout the entire book I felt like I was missing vital information. The story is very entertaining however it took me several times to start this book before I finally felt an interest and wanted a good outcome for both MC's. I was constantly confused as Calico kept time jumping in his mind. I felt that there was no backstory of the Winghorse triplets which really harmed this book as you were guessing the entire time. I would have liked to had a better description of what the IC actually was, why there were Lord's for states, and the background of Agustin. Again vital information that the story needed. I feel bad giving it three stars because I liked the flow of the writing, the plot was entertaining, I did eventually want a happy ending for the characters, but this story just fell short in background area of characters which for me in a fantasy book is highly needed.
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January 2, 2023
This book is set in the 1900's and was a bit confusing for me at times. The world building was great but at times I felt like I was already supposed to know some of the facts. Augustin is the Demon Lord of California and works for the Infinity Corporation that protects humans and is run by his bully of a father, Mr. Harper. Calico is a phoenix that has lost his powers and is transported with his brothers to California where they open a bakery. Calico has the power to travel thru time which could disrupt the human world. The relationship between Augustin and Calico is messy with Calico at first hiding his true nature and fading powers and Augustin's father trying to force his will on Augustin. Overall, I enjoyed the story which is a bit of a slow burn romance and look forwards to the next book in the series.
March 28, 2019
This is my 1st read and review for this author and wow what an amazing story I was glued, hooked whatever you want to call it to this story. If a story has demons and angels in it I’m very interested and I want to read it, the world building was amazing what an imagination this author has it’s very well written and very detailed and I loved the characters Calico and Augustin and Calico’s brothers they were hilarious. Sorry guys no spoilers today this story is just too good and I will be looking out for more from this author, this book has taken its rightful place on my to read again shelf. This is an amazing story and I highly recommend this book it’s definitely well worth the read.
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