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286 pages, Hardcover
Published December 25, 2018
This is my first review on Goodreads, so feel free to criticize, encourage, berate, extol, etc. I loved the first novel in this series and was pretty excited for the sequel, but I was quite disappointed by the changes in scale and pace. As I'm currently the only 2 star rating for this book I feel like I should explain why. Spoilers for both Windswept and Inkspice are in this review.
The first novel sees us getting to know Fox and his friends as he slowly begins to explore and grow his magical abilities. We get to experience his village and the surrounding areas through his brief travels and interactions with others, and through ceremonies and festivals we learn the culture of his lands. There's also some interpersonal drama and plenty of mysterious hints about some conflicts among the gods. In the end, the major conflict revolves around keeping the people of his village safe. I loved how it was a break from the "random teenage villager becomes the hero that saves the world" thing that many fantasy stories do. Fox is still growing, and there's a sense that he might be that person one day, but it will be a process as he grows magically and gets more experience.
So in this sequel, we naturally break from all of that and Fox becomes the random teenage villager who saves the world. We do see him working at mastering his powers, but the massive jump in what he can do seems unreasonable. He also apparently gets trained by a master spy in espionage along the way, though we don't directly witness that training. Who knows what hidden talents he now has. Most of the story takes place in a single city, but we don't really get to know it that well. We certainly get an idea of what it looks like, but we hardly know the culture, customs, or lifestyle at all; a stark contrast with how we learned about the myriad of differences between the villages in the first book. Instead, we get to learn about the power structure and military capabilities of the city and its relations with its neighbors and the rest of the kingdom. Not exactly the sort of thing the son of a village trapper is typically concerned with. We do learn a little more about some the mysteries of the gods hinted at in Inkspice, but not much.
Many of the major characters of the first novel make a return appearance, and we get to see the various relationships between them grow and change. We don't get to know most of Fox's travelling companions all that well, but I think that was the right call; they aren't all that significant to the plot of this book and look like they won't be significant in the sequels, so they are essentially background characters even if Fox knows them quite well. The few major characters added seemed to complement the existing cast well, and I look forward to seeing how they all interact. I felt like the addition of an apparent archenemy at the end was a bit ham-fisted, but I'll reserve total judgement on that until I see how it plays out. The memory-loss induced romance drama seemed unnecessary (and honestly a bit irrational); as teenagers in a long-distance relationship, natural relationship struggles and drama would be not just plausible but expected.
On the whole, I think if this had been the 4th or 5th book of the series I would have had minimal problems with it, but as the 2nd book it feels like it was way too much too fast. We switched from a somewhat slice-of-life-ish story about a villager growing his magical abilities onto a hero story where that villager suddenly takes interest in political machinations and then saves the world with his incredible magical power by dispatching a godlike magical foe. There were just too many things that felt dubious and stretched. I will still read the next book in the series - I'm too invested in the characters not too read it - and I hope that the author only keeps things along the lines of the hinted "restoring a god's power" plotline rather than the "saving the world" plotline we received in this novel. The worldbuilding, interpersonal relationships, and realistic growth were the biggest appeal of Windswept, and I look forward to seeing more of that in the sequel to Inkspice.