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Windwalker #1

Forbidden Flight

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Winged raptors, deadly sand-warriors, and a rebellious girl who breaks all the rules.

Sixteen-year-old Kiva Fariq has always dreamed of soaring on the four-winged raptors that scour the desert skies. But the windwalker sect is closed off to women. What's more, the flying predators are said to kill any woman attempting to bond them.

Undeterred, Kiva attempts the perilous windwalker trials in secret. Should she survive, she will face an even greater challenge: bonding a raptor of her own. When signs of an ancient enemy appear upon the plains, she desires more than ever to protect her people. But the threat is closer than anyone realizes, and will soon bury them all in a tomb of sand and stone—unless she can stop it.

234 pages, Kindle Edition

Published January 1, 2018

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H.G. Chambers

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H.G. Chambers is a huge nerd. I mean, you should see this guy’s collection of Zelda, Star Wars, D&D, and Tolkien nonsense! He’s also written a few books, I’m told, though chances are they’re equally nerdy. So unless you’re fluent in Klingon and enjoy painfully drawn out conversations about obscure Elden Ring lore, maybe don’t ask what he’s into. Despite what should be a catastrophic social handicap, he’s managed to find an awesome wife and has two implausibly awesome kids (talk about beating the odds). H.G.C. lives out his pathetically nerdy life on Vancouver Island, Canada, where people are polite, and the geese are complete jerks. Seriously…don’t mess with the geese, they will end you.

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414 reviews93 followers
April 21, 2018
Yeah this book was great, amazing, awesome, terrific and just so horribly good!!

We are introduced to Kivanya, Kiva to her family. She has two older brothers, Mica and Amir, who she constantly battle with to prove that she is better than them, especially Amir.
Because of this upbringing, she isn't the typical female. She doesn't like weaving, she doesn't sing or do those "womanly" things they are suppose to do.
Her biggest dream? To be a windwalker. Yeah she has to bond with a kiraeen. Dragon like creatures.

But the problem? Traditions says that no woman is ever allowed to become a windwalker. So what does Kiva do? Ignores them all and takes up the challenge in secret.

But, by doing so she sets off a chain of events that could harm her and her family.
If Kiva is to prove to her people that women are capable of doing a man's job, she has to prove to them why that is so.
And she does this with the help of another fellow windwalker, Jonah, who also believes there must be a change.

But Kiva will have to go through many dangers and life threatening situations to achieve her goal.
Can she succeed ? What if she does? Can the people accept her ? Will they break off centuries of traditions just for her sake?

Terrific read, the pace was well done and the story was executed very well! Definitely worth picking up :)

Recieved a copy from the author himself, for an honest review, thank you!
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617 reviews14 followers
October 19, 2019
Excuse me? You have no right to destroy my heart. I didn't give you permission.

*dies*

*dies again*

*dies some more*

WHY HAVE I NEVER READ H. G. CHAMBER'S BOOKS BEFORE???! That was amazing. That was devastating. That was invigorating. That was inspiring. But most of all that was to die for.

I knew as soon as I picked the book up that this was for me. It was written for me. My type. I have never loved the fantasy description of a book more. It had FLYING KIRAEEN. UMMM... hello??? Anything that FLYS, and has a WARRIOR INSTINCT, and acts like TOOTHLESS, is perfection. This book had it all!! *screeches*

The description was radical. Did I mention that I died?? Because I did. I felt like I was flying. Like I was the one bonding with the Kiraeen. Like I was the one falling through air currents, gripping the wind, dancing in the sky. Doing acrobats on Kiraeen. It was magical, perfect, lovely. I've never been so engrossed in details before. I was eating it up.

The content wasn't bad. It wasn't anything really. Two or three minor kissing scenes. A couple fighting scenes that got detailed weirdly. And the talk of war. This book wasn't gory. It was clean. DID YOU HEAR ME???! THIS IS A CLEAN YA SERIES. CLEAN.

The romance I found to be amazingly perfect. Basically forbidden love, typical right? Not. I loved their relationship. I loved it. The love was not extravagantly detailed. It was straight to the point, and very firm. ((**second reread** The romance was unbelievable.....and hard to grasp. They based it off of temporary things. While I could enjoy it in part, it wasn't perfect. It was nearly insta love... ;P))

The characters were so real. I am going to read this book so many times ( or if not that replay the scenes over and over in my head while telling the story to others ). Yes, the characters are to die for. So deeply heartfelt, and soul crushing. I died - if you didn't know - and it's mainly the character's fault. ( Also the description + creatures + author, but mainly the characters ).

Kiva ~ Do you know how many times I was screeching in excitement at her warriorness????!! I can't tell you because I didn't keep track. Just know it was a lot. She was burdened by everything and most everyone around her as their opinions and poisonous actions nearly drove her to death. But she didn't give up. She didn't grow faint. She pressed on. Like the warrior she was, and I died because if it.

Jonah ~ Yes. I'm in love for Kiva. He rides a Kiraeen, also he's a WARRIOR and is passionate about things. Have I said enough? DID I CONVINCE YOU THAT HE'S AMAZING??! No? He also has courage far beyond anyone else. Courage and humility. He is bonded to a Kiraeen that acts like Toothless.

Noor ~ Love. So much love. GAH, SHE IS PERFECT FOR KIVA!! I love her personality so much. Hardened warrior, capable Kiraeen, made of tough stuff. You can't break her, and you certainly can't beat her. *grins*

Mica ~ I was slightly suspicious at first, I honestly don't know why. But yes, I was nervous to allow my heart to accept him. However at the end he was good. And now I'm good. But I'm dead so I'm not good. Where's the next book???! *coughs* So yeah, he's a Shadestalker. Not as amazing as a WindWalker, but still. Amazing enough.

I can talk about all the characters I loved, just know they were all this amazing and overall this book is perfection!!

ARE YOU LOOKING FOR A CLEAN YA FANTASY???! YES?? Well, you've come to the right book. This is perfect for you. Just as it was for me. *grins*

**NOTE** I actually got this for free off Amazon. So no review required. All opinions are my own and the deal was AWESOME. Because even if I didn't get it for free I would still be willing to buy it.

Did I mention I died?
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Author 6 books325 followers
March 9, 2019
I just so happened to see this book for free as recommended by another author, and that beautiful cover convinced me to give it a try.

Boy, am I ever so glad I did! I've never heard of this author, but he is AWESOME.

The desert atmosphere is so vivid, the action is intense, the characters are excellent, all important qualities to tell a good story, and a good story this is. It follows the journey of a sixteen year old girl determined to prove that a woman can also join a special sect of her people known as the windwalkers--protectors of the land who bond with and ride upon incredible sentient raptors.

So it seems like a straightforward YA plot, right? Young girl stands up against a male-dominant society to prove she is strong. Typically, that means she is oppressed by all males (maybe tolerated by a boyfriend) because all males are awful. Well, Kiva certainly faces the outrage and danger of angered traditionalists, but she is hardly without support from both men and women.

But this book throws away some common tropes. Kiva actually has living parents who support her. Initially, she thinks in typical teenage immaturity that there's no way her family would understand or would help, but she finds out she's wrong. She finds out her "overbearing" mother is actually a strong woman who loves her fiercely. That her dad is proud. She has two brothers who also love her (even if they have mixed feelings about her boldness). There are disagreements and struggles in the family, but they are FAMILY and they will stand by one another. This incredible and highly rare example of family strength and love is one thing I love in this book.

Another thing I love is Jonah. A highly talented young windwalker who immediately sees that if it's possible for a girl to become a windwalker--then heck yeah, she should be trained! There is an oncoming threat, and he sees in her something special. He doesn't hesitate to begin training her in secret and takes quite a bit of joy and pride in seeing her succeed. He's such a dear...charming, impish, confident in his own strength and skill but never once trying to lord himself over Kiva.

Kiva is not a soft girl in the slightest--she is fierce--but she is definitely female and relatable. Her temper can sometimes get the best of her, but she usually realizes if she made a mistake once she cools down. And hurrah for character growth, she actually learns to hold her tongue a few times when her outrage makes her want to shout at the wrong people.

The kiraeen (the bird/dragon/griffin creatures) in this book are another delight. The flying scenes are so epic, and once a bond is struck, the rider and creature share each other's thoughts, leading to some humorous interactions.

This is clean YA fiction, perfect for girls or boys. And I love the fact that it was written by a male author...his respect and admiration for female strength in this story is honestly a bit humbling. :)

(also what is it with male authors and their ability to write exhilarating action scenes, I am so jealous.)
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Author 6 books1,518 followers
January 6, 2020
4.5 Stars! =D

This book is a pure masterpiece! I don't know why, but I love reading about characters like Kiva. Determine, stubborn, and brave.

THIS BOOK WAS SO AWESOME!!!!

What I Liked:


I love just about everything about the Kiraeen's. The fact that they were aggressive, especially the females. How they got bonded to people. How there has never been a female Kiraeen who has been tamed and how there never been a human girl able to tame a Kiraeen. I love Noor, who was very much a character just as Kiva was. I love Noor's attitude and personality; she was sometimes aggressive and fitted Kiva wonderfully. I also really liked Jonah's Kiraeen, Zakai, and how Zakai came to like Kiva.

I really enjoyed Jonah's personality. He was fun and I enjoyed how he trained Kriva. Even though I wasn't sure about their relationship, I think I will really enjoy the two of them being together.

And as I said before, I love Kiva. I love how no matter what people said, she pursued in the thing that mattered to her most.

But another thing I really liked about this story is the strong theme of family and how family is supposed to stand by each other. It was very well played in this book and I love that.

I also really like this setting. The description. The nesting ground. The small village. The climbing of the cliffs. And when Kiva is flying the Kiraeen. It was so wonderfully described. I can't wait to continue reading more about the windwalkers in the series.

What I Didn't Like:

There were parts that were a little slow going for me. Even though those parts were important, I was ready to proceed to the next part of the novel. Also I didn't really like Kiva's older brother. I mean, he was just being his character, but there were things he said to her that just made me mad at him. I forgiven this character now though, he did make some things right. But still...

Content in Book:

1. Violence. (Talks about a coming war. Throwing stuff at someone. Violence from creatures. Etc.) (The violence is pretty clean).

2. Talk about banishing a kid in the wilderness.

Who I Would Recommend This Book Too:

Those who want to read a clean fantasy with cool creatures to ride in them. Those who love cool, awesome, fantastic, wonderful, great books. (Because that is what this book is).

Will I Continue To the Next Book In The Series???

YES!!! I REALLY WANT THE NEXT BOOK!!!
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950 reviews17 followers
April 23, 2018
This is a prequel that takes place a long time before the Aeternum Chronicles. The main character is a sixteen year old girl called Kiva who dreams of flying high as a Windwalker, something that would be totally forbidden for her as a female. She loves rock climbing with her brothers and taking risks but her mother wants her to join the weavers sect.

One of her brothers is already in a sect, the Shadestalkers, who helped to protect the city when attacked and her other brother is trying to find the courage to make his challenge at the annual ceremony, the Stonemelter sect, who make weapons for the warriors sect. When the ceremony begins the next day, Kiva watches her brother start his challenge and then goes off to try something for herself.

She attempts the Windwalker trials in secret, but the final step may be a step too far. She will have to bond with a kiraeen to finally become a windwalker. When she faces the elders and everyone realises who it is under her scarf, being female is a massive problem. Her wish to join the windwalkers and protect her people has never been done by a female and the men believe women could never do the job.

She is held until the council of elders can hold a trial on her challenge and the consequences of her action. While this is happening, there are warning signs of an ancient danger coming to their homes. Will the elders and people allow a woman to join the sect or have an equal role in their society? This is about more than just a tale of Kiva’s attempt to fly high in the sky on the back of a vicious creature. Women’s roles in their society are beneath those of men, not equal and Kiva’s actions can perhaps bring about a revolution, have her help to save her city or die trying.

A great story that I just wish there was more of!

I would have loved to hear more of Kiva and Jonah, windwalkers and the enemy they are facing. Her strong parents and her brothers as well as other courageous female characters who might follow her. But mostly, more about Kiva in her wish for role of windwalker and more about this sect.

I was given an ARC copy of this book from the author and I have freely given my own opinion of the book above.
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Author 1 book37 followers
April 17, 2018
Disclaimer time: I received a free ARC copy of this book to review.
Yet again H. G. Chambers has written a brilliant story filled with vibrant characters and immersive story. The story follows Kiva, a young lady living in a desert environment who dreams of breaking free of the life she sees before her. Kiva is a well written character, a young person who develops through the story. There are a number of side characters, including 2 non-human characters, who are well fleshed out and enjoyable to read.
The book is a pleasure to read, moving along well with a good mix of action and character development. The world building is subtle but superbly done leaving me feeling that I had actually spent time amongst the dunes of the Miralaja.
The book is a coming of age story set to the theme of epic fantasy which I found highly enjoyable. There are enough subplots to keep the attention, and a few twists and turns although nothing which I found truly shocking. The story ends well, wrapping up pretty much everything and left me with a nice sense of closure.
I’ve spent a fair bit of time looking to find something wrong with this book to comment on, and I truly struggling. The worst accusation I can lay at the story is that there a couple of wooden, stereotypical characters, and that I would have liked the romance side of things to be a bit more fleshed out. It felt almost as if this was supposed to be a large part of the story, but it got cut in the edit.
Overall, this is another superb story from a master of epic fiction which I highly recommend you read. I have given this book 4.9 stars.
3 reviews
April 21, 2018
Why is a book better than a movie? I think it is the inner connection between the story and my imagination. Movies are always someone else interpreting for you.
This new stand alone Story by HG Chambers is a "brightly woven tale" (Kay quote) that expands the background of Aeternum Chronicles series scope and time span. I loved the strength and matter of fact heroine who knows in her heart what she can do but of course she must battle judgement and fear of change in her own community.
The imagery is very descriptive and paints a beautiful odyssey. I connected deeply with the characters and felt their elevator of emotions.
I highly recommend this book and other works by this author.
282 reviews5 followers
April 16, 2018
I finished this book in one sitting! so needless to say - I enjoyed it! It was fast paced with engaging main characters. As with other books by this author it has a little bit of everything, some great action, some romance, some back story to build some history into the fictional world, and most of all great characters, human and otherwise. I don't know if more books are planned... but I suspect there are.... lots of story left to tell, and I will look forward to reading them.
1,814 reviews14 followers
April 23, 2018
Kiva dreams of being a windwalker and soaring above the clouds on her kiraeen. Windwalkers are for men only in this society. Kiva sneaks out and trains with Jonah to become a windwalker. She succeeds but get exiled from her community. A sand storm appears with Sharum soldiers to attack the community. This is a adventurous and thrilling story line. The author keeps your interest in the evolution of Kiva and her journey.
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255 reviews27 followers
December 13, 2018
This novella made my top 2018 indie reads. Seriously! I love the rich world building, the sand, the characters, the birds! The author has created a tangible fantasy world with filled with a vibrate culture who have their own unique mythology. I know strong female character can sound like a buzz word, but I really felt like this story portrayed a very real person who was strong in spirit and in action while staying true to her femininity.
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Author 31 books231 followers
August 19, 2020
Enjoyable fantasy story.

Kiva’s story as the only female windwalker of her times was a wonderful read.
She has saved her people many times but still the conservative men look upon her with anger.
Now when a new challenge comes to their land, Kiva has to ignore all that and protect her people.
The story was complex, intricate and had enough twist and turns to keep it unpredictable till the very end. The characters, especially Kiva was very well etched. Her sarcasm and the way she handled her problems were penned very well. Loved it.
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1,826 reviews461 followers
August 17, 2019
Windwalker took me by surprise. I didn’t expect to enjoy it so much, but it has it all - winged raptors, sand-warriors, a rebellious protagonist willing to break the rules and follow her dreams.

Kiva Fariq wants nothing more than to help her tribe as a Windwalker scouring the desert skies on the back of a giant flying predator. She has the skill, will, and determination. Unfortunately, she’s a girl and the windwalker sect is closed off to women.

When the time comes, Kiva attempts the perilous windwalker trials in secret. Even if she succeeds, the question is open whether the elders will accept or banish her.

In the spirit of youthful adventures, Chambers makes the teenage protagonists seem far more capable than the adults. Not only is she willing to challenge ungrounded beliefs and fight for her future, but she’s also the only one to see approaching danger. Younger readers, especially girls, will enjoy her inspiring growth. But even older readers should appreciate a good balance between appealing to a youthful target audience and creating a captivating, but ultimately comfortably predictable plot.

Overall, Windwalker: Forbidden Flight is a strong and uplifting start to intriguing series. It should appeal to a wide range of readers, from middle grade to young adult. I won't be surprised to see adult readers enjoying this one as a well-deserved rest between bleaker stories.

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Author 3 books11 followers
September 9, 2019
Another of the 3 1/2 stars rounded up variety. :-) I don't remember how I came to own this book, but my desire to read something current prompted me to open it. The summary is fairly accurate, so I won't repeat it here, but there is also something of a love interest involved as well.

One thing I really liked is that for a change the main characters weren't blonde-haired and blue-eyed. Readers notice and get tired of those things, so this story with Middle Eastern-type characters was a nice deviation. Aside from that though, this seemed to suffer from the old two-dimensional sickness that seems to infect a lot of modern books. Everyone involved was a predictable type with virtually no variance, including the headstrong, can-do-it-better heroine. My other problem was that this book just moved really, really fast. Things just went boom-boom-boom and before you know it, the villain is at the door and only Kiva stands in the way. I like well-paced books, but this one was just too fast-paced for my tastes. For a change, an extra 50 or 60 pages would have been appreciated.

All told, this is a pretty good book that seems to be geared mostly to the younger (under 25) female readers, though most people (apparently) really enjoy it. Though I won't be pursuing the rest of the series, I would put this book as a good read.
28 reviews1 follower
May 13, 2018
Windwalker: Forbidden Flight reminded me of Anne McCaffrey's Dragonflight, the first of a series I devoured when they came out. I recommend Windwalker: Forbidden Flight to anyone who appreciates a strong female protagonist willing to test the limits of her society's norms and fight for what she knows is right. If you enjoyed the movie Whale Rider, you will love this book.

Thanks to author HG Chambers for providing a free e-pub copy of Windwalker for me to review.
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389 reviews1 follower
April 23, 2018
I am so amazed at the strong lead of a young girl that is brave and walks her own life road. I fell in love with Kiva and road the winds with her. I was tense when she was and once relaxed so was I. I lived the adventure right beside her. I would never have missed reading such a great book.
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Author 6 books65 followers
February 5, 2019
Kiva, a young ordinary citizen of the desert had always dreamed of flying the awesome raptors of the sky.
With determination and much adventure and heartache, Kiva bonded with a female of the magnificent, four winged dragons of the sky and is flying. But she faces more adventure than she had ever dreamed of.
A wonderful read and i recommend it to everyone how likes dragons of the sky
1,065 reviews11 followers
April 24, 2018
Title: Windwalker Forbidden Flight
Author: H. G. Chambers
Publisher: H. G. Chambers
ISBN: B07C2TKQPH
Buy Link: https://hgchambers.com/windwalker-for...
Reviewer: Teresa Fallen Angel
Blurb:
An Aeternum Chronicles Prequel

Sixteen-year-old Kiva Fariq has always dreamed of soaring on the four-winged raptors that scour the desert skies. But the windwalker sect is closed off to women. What's more, it's said the deadly predators can only be bonded by men.
Undeterred, Kiva attempts the deadly windwalker trials in secret. Should she survive, she will face an even greater challenge: bonding a raptor of her own. When signs of an ancient enemy appear upon the plains, she desires more than ever to protect her people. But the threat is closer than anyone realizes, and will soon bury them all in a tomb of sand and stone—unless she can stop it.

Total Score: 5/5

Summary:
Kiva is always challenging herself by striving to overtake her brothers in typical activities that men do. Her goal to rock excel in rock climbing has a deeper meaning. She has always loved watching the raptors, or Kiraeen, fly with their male counter parts, but that sect, windwalkers, doesn't allow women. Kiva is determined to follow her dreams even though the odds are against her. There trial to join is very dangerous, but when she overcomes the odds the struggle has just begun as an old enemy shows signs of returning.

This was an amazing story of one young woman's fight to change traditional thinking of what a woman is allowed to do. Kiva's people live in difficult would where enemies from the past are fated to return except most people believe that they are just myth. A few people like Kiva and Jona, an windwalker and very close friend of Kiva, see the changes and are determined to protect their people in spite of their refusal to listen. This is a complex and riveting story filled with unexpected twists that keep the reader waiting to see what happens next. The growing feelings between Kiva and Jona added another dimension to the plot. The desire to follow your is one many people can understand as Kiva's determination to become a windwalker takes her beyond what she ever expected. I loved every minute of this story and would definitely recommend it.
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Author 4 books6 followers
August 14, 2018
A heartwarming story of a young girl, Kiva, as she matures and follows her dream - challenging the traditions of the past along the way. Action, mystery romance, and humor made this story an easy and thoroughly enjoyable read. As well as the unusual and intriguing creatures. YA Fantasy at its best.

The reader is taken on Kiva’s journey as she prepares to become a Windwalker - a protector of the people - and as she bonds with one of the raptors, known as kiraeens.

The author has a wonderful way of writing, and the scene setting in this novel was done in a clever and beautiful way. It was easy to visualize the markets in Kiva’s world, see her climbing stairs, racing through crowds and confronting her challengers. Two examples -

Her mouth watered at the smell of roasting meat, mingled with the floral scents of alshaysha smoke and incense…

The varied, hollow beat of drums and high pitched jingle of hand symbols competed with loud laughter and spirited conversation, as small children danced before the performers.

And the language of Kiva’s people was peppered throughout the story, adding another dimension to the worldbuilding.

I must admit it was funny to recognize traits of the characters. For example, reading how Kiva’s mother called her by her full name when she was in trouble. It was reminiscent of my childhood. When Mum called me by my full name, I knew I was in for it.

I highly recommend this novel to anyone who loves to read adventure Fantasy, YA Fantasy, stories about other people, cultures and imaginative creatures. Even if you haven’t read fantasy before, this is definitely worth the read. It might convert you.

My sincerest congratulations to the author.
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1,837 reviews
November 2, 2018
This is a really solid 4.5 star sort of story. A proper coming-of-age tale with a slight twist on the dragonrider trope we've all come to know and love. It sticks to the formula, but it's a really well written version and if you're going to do a trope you might as well do it justice.

Heroine Kiva is everything she's supposed to be: scrappy, spirited, full of righteous indignation and with the guts to risk everything to get not just what she wants but the means to protect her people and the recognition that the women of her society deserve (yes, feminism in a fantasy world!) She wants to become a windwalker, a warrior who rides the flying kiraeen, despite the "fact" that there never has been a female rider before. She finds support in unexpected places, and must face many trials to get there. But along the way she discovers something worse than the patriarchy is threatening her people.

The only let-downs were the "romance" angle (it's a YA coming of age tale so it had to have one - thankfully not overblown, but maybe a bit clunky), and that feeling at the end that despite being wrapped up nicely in a character sense, there's a huge void left by the sudden sort-of defeat of the ancient threat. Of course this being a prequel to a series it should explain things later on, but the epilogue just felt a bit abrupt.

Really well written, easy to read, great pacing... If you like the magic formula of teens and dragons and hidden dangers, you'll love this.

-I received a free copy of this ebook from the author's site-
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Author 1 book38 followers
April 23, 2018
So. Kiva has two older brothers, the younger of whom has yet to challenge a sect to join. Kiva, however, has dreams of being a windwalker. However, women are not allowed to join the windwalker sect. They are not even allowed to go as far as challenging the sect. Kiva isn't one to take "no" lying down, though. She's pretty sure she has what it takes. And so, on the day of her big brother's own challenge, she sets off to complete the windwalker challenge - unannounced.

What she doesn't bargain on is the sidi (leader) of the sect's unbending nature, and the necessity that is reality. As she begins her illicit training, she learns of a great threat to the Bowl she lives in.

This is a fun story that is quick and easy to read. It was good to see a different part of the world of the Aeternum Chronicles, and I can only hope that I see more of the windwalkers in the next series novel Chambers writes. I also want to know whether the troubles this Bowl are dealing with have any bearing on the issues the rest of the world is having, as read about in the main series. Having read Anne McCaffrey's PERN series, I wondered how Chambers would deal with the bonding with the kiraeen in this story, and I felt he handled it very well, really. It was clear what was happening, he set out the rules clearly, and I wasn't disappointed.
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457 reviews5 followers
June 16, 2020
2.5 stars

This started out with a lot of promise. A determined girl who flouts tradition to try and join the windwalker group(dragon riders). She takes on the trials and everything was mostly going well until she meets Boy.

Kiva acts more like a 12 year old and she's perfect at everything. Like anything she does she just does amaaaaazingly. She couldn't just be the first girl to attempt the windwalker trial, no she had to have the perfect first flight where she figured out how to do everything on her own. She has no struggles . . . ever. Day 2 of practice is also flawless. She doesn't need taught how to bond with a kiraeen either. She just does it. I was actually happy when she FINALLY had something go wrong. But she brushed off a dislocated shoulder like it was nothing and within a day she was out flying and whipping around all over the place and fighting and who knows what else.

So it's like the ONE setback she had wasn't really a setback.

Then of course her and Boy fall in love after 2-3 days of a couple hours of training where she spent most of the time flying by herself.

The romance was silly, the ease of which everything comes to Kiva makes her hard to identify with, and that compiled with a few other meh bits just made the story not one I'm interested in continuing.
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2,768 reviews59 followers
May 8, 2018
This book brought so much enjoyment to me whilst reading that if I could I would rate it higher than the five stars allowed. If you, like me enjoy reading about female feisty characters this is surely the book for you. I also believe that young adult readers can benefit if they read this book as Kiva is a character to emulate. She was part of the Sahra people, a people living in the desert, tied to custom and hanging on to tradition, a people where women had their places cut out for them, however Kiva did not want to spend her life as part of the weaver sect, she wanted to soar the heights on the back of a raptor as part of the windwalker sect! A path closed to women. This is a book about fighting for change, following your heart and fulfilling your dreams and not taking no for an answer no matter what the cost. One small defiant move can bring about a revolution, it only takes the one person no matter how small or young this person may be and Kiva was just this young women! Well done H. G. Chambers for this brilliant book, I did not want it to end, and I love the ambience you used of the Sahra and the few words thrown in of the beautiful Semitic language which is so similar to my own language - Maltese, these were like honey on the tongue.
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909 reviews11 followers
February 15, 2019
Windwalker was a surprising book with a unique (to me) world building, at the beginning. For a world in which women are submissive, I found the revolution too quickly embraced. Even in our world, change takes time - and often more than one bold action - before it takes hold and runs rampant. The idea a young sixteen can drive change too immediately in this world, and in this book, felt unrealistic. We aren’t provided any indication of an unrest of the status quo.

Kiva was an ambitious sixteen year old and we aren’t in her shoes long enough to get into her head to follow her on her quest. The writing is driven by telling, not showing. A grave injustice, given this is told in third person. A missed opportunity numerous times over.

I’d suggest another thorough edit or three with a copy editor to create a deeper and complex book. As it stands, it’s a pass and wouldn’t be missed. And I’ve no desire to follow Kiva & Company.
1,156 reviews6 followers
April 14, 2022
This is advertised as a prequel but can just as well work as a completely standalone book - it is about a young woman who wants to become a windwalker, but most people believe that women cannot do that. Actually, it is about a lot more than that, and is a really great story.
I think that this author has a really good ability to create worlds without boring us with tedious realms of description, and he made the city where Kiva lives very easy to imagine. Many fantasy books are about the same things nowadays, but this is different, and a joy to read. I really hope that more books will be written about Kiva and her people.
16.6k reviews153 followers
April 28, 2018
she has always wanted to be a wing walker but she is female and they are not allowed. only men are allowed but she decides to try anyway. she does it in secret but will she succeed? will she bond with one? danger is coming to them and only she will be able to help. follow her adventures
I received an advanced copy and I enjoyed it so much that I want to review
12.6k reviews189 followers
April 24, 2018
Kiva is not your typical female , doesn’t like singing, weaving. She wants to bond with a raptor, which is a male dominated thing. There is danger out there, but she’s game. Loved this strong female character and looking forward to more stories about Kiva.
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1,269 reviews7 followers
July 14, 2018
Young female heroine. Loved the characters, the story! Gives hope to all young women. Also reminds elders that things change over time. We have to keep changing too. I would recommend to all!
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Author 50 books125 followers
November 6, 2019
Sometimes, you just want a fun, straight-forward read about a young hero who defies tradition and saves the day. Windwalker delivers a rendition of this classic tale with fast-paced action and thrilling flights. As a bonus, the world is definitely not a generic European medieval setting, with a unique culture with people of color. There are also unique creatures like the kiraeen, enormous birds of prey which can be tamed and ridden by those chosen to join the windwalker sect.

The main character, Kiva, has always dreamed of becoming a windwalker, but girls are forbidden from joining the windwalker sect. There is a strict gender division of labor in her society with boys allowed to train for combat roles like windwalker or shadestalker, but girls can only join groups like the weavers. On her town’s challenge day, when young adults are all trying to prove themselves and join their chosen sect, Kiva disguises herself and makes the climb to the kiraeen’s nesting grounds. Her success sets off a ripple of change as other women are inspired to speak up for equal representation.

This is a short book with a straightforward plot that I read in about two sittings, but it isn’t short on details. There was lots of information about the kiraeen, the structure of Sahra’ society, Kiva’s family, and the roles that men and women play. There was also realistic arguments as women protested for equal rights. Instead of just portraying all men as misogynistic, there are a variety of viewpoints in the society and people come to a compromise over time.

But the main action is focused on Kiva training to become a windwalker and learning how to fly on a kiraeen. I loved all the details about how the warriors bond with their birds and fight together. The one thing I wanted to know more about was their enemies, the sharun, who don’t show up until the very end. But I think there will be more information in future books.

I recommend this to fans of young adult female-led fantasy like Alanna aka the Song of the Lioness series, the Dragonriders of Pern series, The Deed of Paksenarrion, and The Blue Sword.
33 reviews
January 31, 2019
YA novella with a fearless female lead! If it takes working harder than the males to be considered equal Kiva will try until she succeeds. Set in the world of the Aeternum Chronicles there is a large desert with flying dragons. The male only sect of dragon riders refuses her the chance to tryout so she completes the trial on her own only to be ostracized by the tribe. One open minded rider helps her train in secret on his dragon only to find that the male dragons don’t bind with female riders but then a female dragon shows up.
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