There just wasn’t enough...
I know this is a novella,and a novella is a short story,but to me there just wasn’t enough...
I really liked Rose and Talon,and there just wasn’t enough...
These were two very interesting characters,two older MC’s with ages you rarely if EVER get in a book or story...
Not just two grey haired guardians there/here to protect those younger than them or to just stand around imparting wisdom to those willing to listen. Not there to just tell the younger ones to do this or that.
No for once we get the privilege of seeing that being older can still be alive and sexy and vital in ways that are about seeing you still have a life to live and you can see feel sexy and desired and loved....
But Sadly out of the 13 chapters in the book, only in the first five do actually get to have the H and h together,( well of course til they are reunited for their HEA that for me felt more like a HFN with how it was done) .
Just five chapters together out of 13 ,one sex scene, they’ve barely started to get together and barely started to relax with each other and become couple, when they are parted..
Sorry the spoiler there,but it kinda ticked me off...
Now while I can understand why they get separated and it might have been ok, if IF they didn’t back together just a scant few pages before the book ended...
WTH?!?!?
For once, ONCE the H and h are actually grown up and older, and we get a chance to read a about a couple who have life experience and we can hopefully get a new/different take on loving and romance with ppl who have lived life and hopefully have more sense than all the young and foolish 20 somethings we ALWAYS get in these books...
Bitter ? Yeah a little... I’m over 40, and PNR is my fave type of romance to read,and shifters in particular ... Lord, if we could be one mI’d love it. Though hopefully one a 100% less troubled than the shifters Ms. Joyce usually writes about.
I was soo excited when I saw this,both MC’s are older than me but you rarely see older MC’s in PNR unless it’s a shifter or Vampire or maybe a Fae and then it’s usually the H because his h is some clueless 18-22 yr. old virgin.
To many books act like a h over 30 is a “ mature” or older woman,gah. I kid you not I once tried ( yes tried) to read a story where the heroine was only 32 but has the nerve to call herself a “cougar” and tried to reject the H because he was 27.
Seriously ? That was sooo dumb.
Anyway, sorry for the rant, I should be sticking to the facts.
This is a wonderful story about to lost and hurting souls finding each other and getting together but to me it’s dearly hurt by it brevity.. Stories where we get to see two ppl w/some grey in their having fun and being sexy and enjoying life as just ppl is soo rare and far between for most there story for them to be apart and then end five seconds after they get back together is just wrong...
We deserved more and soo did they.
Nice story but to me it’s a desperately incomplete one.