Phew, it's over.
I need a shelf for "Finished out of a sense of duty, do not recommend to a single soul.'
It's a shame, really, because even though the broken crown series isn't my normal fare, I can say that it's quite good. This? Isn't.
Maybe it was her first novel. If so, a lot is forgivable.
Like the names. Oh my word. If you want to invent new cultures and have amazing names like Kallandros, and Khrysanthos, and Espere, you go. You do you. Let the creative juices flow, but do not, I repeat, do not, pair them with Stephen. It's way too cringy when the main character has a pronounceable name and every other character has something with a thousand syllables. It's jarring.
The setting doesn't make sense.
There's this culture of people who couldn't feed themselves farming like every other culture so their god gave some of their men the power to commune with dogs so that they could hunt and feed their family in exchange for the god hunting the men once a year. Okay. That's fine, I can go with that. Then how do they have cities? Villages? Why do the villagers have to be told to go plant stuff, and then also line the road to treat the hunters with reverence as they go off to do this sacred hunt? Why don't they just raise pigs, cows, or rabbits to get their protein? They have horses that they have domesticated, so why don't they just farm their meat that way? I suppose she tries to cover this by having him be not just a god of hunting but also fertility. After all, if they don't have this sacred hunt, their crops fail. But that doesn't make sense in the greater universe because you have these gods of individual things: Knowledge, time, justice, wisdom. And now you have a god that covers two domains? Hunting and fertility? They're not even related. I can go with it's a different domain than the other gods, he's an outsider, fine. But do break all the rules and get two things under his control? Why is he that special? Especially when you already have a goddess of the hunt, Winter, the Lady, as is established in the rest of the books? She seems kind of possessive, I can't imagine her sharing The Hunt.
The society doesn't make any sense. In the other series where we interacted with two different cultures, both bigger and more populated than this itty bitty one in the middle of nowhere and we never saw a maker-born, and saw like, two mage-born the entire time. Now? We have mage-born delivering bodies, healer-born tripping all over themselves, and maker-born everywhere making sculptures of stone, of wood, of antlers, of leaves. Everyone knows one. Are they born at a higher rate here? Why? The hunters, the ones that are responsible for keeping the kingdom going, are treated surprisingly cavalierly. Stephen knows, through the bond, that Gilliam is in danger and tells his mother, this Lady of the realm so, and she's just like 'oh, well go forth and find him my hero.' Why didn't she organize a search party? Why didn't she take up her crossbow and dagger and venture forth to protect her son? Nope, instead we have her just kind of sitting there waving a handkerchief as her other son sallies forth to do battle with the darkness.
Not only that, but the hunters are well, kind of dumb. They are only interested in hunting and being with their dogs, but then they somehow manage to get married to these super knowledgeable Ladies who wield more power than they do, acting as judges, managing estates, and being submissive to their husbands? How does that make sense? It's a super feudal society, a Lord with a house and a village with a headman or headwoman who are under his authority and treat him as their ruler, but he doesn't have to do anything for the village other than provide meat to them? What about mutual defense? Feudal societies normally built up around a Lordship because he kept a small fighting force to fight off marauders. Are there no marauders? Then why does the Lady Elseth have crossbows on hand? How does she manage to use them without having been trained? How does she manage to sneak up on three people in skirts that are massive, impractical, and rustle? How does she manage to hit someone on her first try? Just saying "She thought they did very well for all that they hadn't been trained" doesn't cover it. She's throwing daggers by the end 'because all women are trained to it' only there was no mention of it anywhere else in rest of the book. It's always been focused on her brocade, not her steel.
Actually the character of Elsabet didn't make sense in the slightest. She's the mother of Gilliam, who needs a huntbrother from the 'common people' to remind him of humanity, so they hunt a child out of the slums and then adopt him, she becomes his mother. He thinks she's an angel on earth and does everything to obey her, respect her, worship her, and live up to the gift of calling her 'mother'. Then her husband dies and he's suddenly calling her a pet name 'Elsa' and cupping her cheek in his hand?
Dude. That's weird.
My brothers still call my mom 'mom' they don't call her Cin Cin or something creepy and then gently cup her face in their hand while gazing soulfully into her face.
That's not how mothers and sons interact. Gilliam doesn't treat his mother like this. Mauebelle, or however you spell her name, doesn't treat her mother like this. It's creepy and weird and completely uncalled for. Why would the lady who is a super stickler on manners, and family honor, and not bringing shame to the line, be okay with an 18 year old she raised calling her a pet name?
The strong point of the later series is how everything is implicit. You have to read between the lines. What is left unsaid is where all the meaning is.
Not so here. Absolutely everything is explained. All of the things that don't need to be explained are dwelt on. A god statue tells Stephen to 'Go', and by go, that doesn't just mean venture forth. It means leave behind this woman that you love who is throwing herself at you because now is not the time for your tryst to be consummated. No. Really? I kind of got that by him looking up from kissing the girl to have the god statue frown and say 'Go'. Gods that think it's important enough to animate a statue of stone in order to give a supernatural message are usually not willing to wait for the poor mortals to have their little tryst. I didn't need a paragraph explaining it to me. I could figure it out on my own.
I wonder if this was originally one book and she had to stretch it out to make it a duology?
Sigh, I'm really not looking forward to the next one.