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Out of the Tutorial Zone, Lucus, or Demon Lord Akor, finally faces the first problems in the coming months. From building his village into a town, producing food and protection and more, the real troubles have only begun for him in his [Magic Life].
Not only will he have to face animals, monsters and other demon tribes that appear like grass, to advance he will even have to go against other gods, angering them to carve out his path as a Lord player but his troubles aren't only in the game. The real world is slowly changing along with the game and he will have to start adapting as he slowly unfurls his wings.
Not only will he have to face animals, monsters and other demon tribes that appear like grass, to advance he will even have to go against other gods, angering them to carve out his path as a Lord player but his troubles aren't only in the game. The real world is slowly changing along with the game and he will have to start adapting as he slowly unfurls his wings.
200 pages, Kindle Edition
Published February 19, 2019
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July 23, 2019
This was a fun read. It pretty much builds on the first book. There's only one major issue I take with this book. It's STAT HEAVY AF. I'v eno issues with stats being in the game, I do have one when it's a huge portion of the game. Not everyone plays games with .xls sheets open. A story book shouldn't read like one. Don't get me wrong. There is a LOT of story, but there are a ton of stats and I feel it doesn't strike a good balance. Also speaking of the story. This one is a slow burn, but it is a fun read.
June 6, 2019
Meh...
It was fun. The story was bland with less clear goals than the last. The English is still broken, so the reader has to edit on the fly. Oddly the “unlearned” and “inexperienced” main character is yet again somehow the expert making all the right moves and teaching others how to play. It’s good chewing gum, but the story and world deserve more plot, development, and editing. Still would like to read the next.
It was fun. The story was bland with less clear goals than the last. The English is still broken, so the reader has to edit on the fly. Oddly the “unlearned” and “inexperienced” main character is yet again somehow the expert making all the right moves and teaching others how to play. It’s good chewing gum, but the story and world deserve more plot, development, and editing. Still would like to read the next.
March 4, 2019
Kingdom building. Needs an editor.
The story is interesting and the litrpg aspects are decent. The problem is with grammar (can be over looked) and numerous errors in continuity. I hope the author continues the series, but he should also take bit more time to have a beta reader go over the draft to check for continuity errors.
The story is interesting and the litrpg aspects are decent. The problem is with grammar (can be over looked) and numerous errors in continuity. I hope the author continues the series, but he should also take bit more time to have a beta reader go over the draft to check for continuity errors.
February 27, 2019
Great from the start
I had no idea what to expect from the cover. I was very pleasantly surprised. Straight forward writing with a number of interesting story elements. A town/empire builder reminiscent of civilization. Overall an excellent book.
I had no idea what to expect from the cover. I was very pleasantly surprised. Straight forward writing with a number of interesting story elements. A town/empire builder reminiscent of civilization. Overall an excellent book.
March 3, 2019
Another great
This book is a vast improvement over book 1, the characters develop further and more twists are thrown into the mix my only bad point is.... I need more the book needs to be longer or I need book 3 soooon.
This book is a vast improvement over book 1, the characters develop further and more twists are thrown into the mix my only bad point is.... I need more the book needs to be longer or I need book 3 soooon.
April 9, 2019
Good follow up
Solid follow up to the first book. Its a bit short, but it gives some more background on the real world, in addition to the game. Good development, looking forward to the next book.
Solid follow up to the first book. Its a bit short, but it gives some more background on the real world, in addition to the game. Good development, looking forward to the next book.
February 23, 2019
Love this book series
Great story can not wait for next book just wish a little longer chapter wise
Also love the foreshadows coming.
Great story can not wait for next book just wish a little longer chapter wise
Also love the foreshadows coming.
February 23, 2019
My review
Love the series so far found the first one book really interesting this one is really interesting to but it seems to be more of a filler than a sequel
Love the series so far found the first one book really interesting this one is really interesting to but it seems to be more of a filler than a sequel
March 12, 2019
Nice story
I found the story unique and interesting and look forward to seeing the next installment of this series of books
I found the story unique and interesting and look forward to seeing the next installment of this series of books
March 23, 2019
Great book
Great book for number 2 in the series I'm looking forward to reading more into series perhaps more books by this author I recommend this book I enjoyed it
Great book for number 2 in the series I'm looking forward to reading more into series perhaps more books by this author I recommend this book I enjoyed it
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