While traversing through the dense brush of writers block while writing erotic fiction, Snek Guy's name repeatedly slithered across many of the threads I encountered, often described as one of the best authors in the space for male readers. I figured I'd check out his work, both for inspiration and because I thought his pseudonym was funny.
The first of his stories I read, Alien: Lineage, doesn't appear to be on Goodreads (likely due to copyright) which is disappointing because I'd love to share my thoughts on it. I read Date With a Drifter shortly afterwards, and a lot of my points of praise and criticism carry over between them.
The first thing you might notice when reading one of Snek Guy's works is his attention to detail. The bar for storytelling in the smut space is rather low, but Snek Guy always puts an impressive amount of thought into the world-building and it shows. It's very easy to immerse yourself in the world of his narratives, even if the quality of his prose can fluctuate from time to time.
A common pitfall in stories with a dominant female love interest is when writers characterize the male lead as awkward or pathetic to compensate for (or perhaps to further emphasize) the suave confidence of the former. I was delighted to find that Date With a Drifter avoids this misstep. The male lead is a bit bashful and soft-spoken, but he isn't afraid to say what he wants, and this results in some especially flirty banter between the two leads that had me blushing from page to page.
I've often found that erotic stories featuring a human protagonist getting freaky with a big scary monster tend to avoid the inherent discomfort and disgust the comes with that territory, which I would also classify as a common pitfall. It's a frustration many women voice too; simply put, the type of person (regardless of gender) that craves being dominated by a giant feral beast generally isn't looking for cozy, soft lovemaking. Whether it be a Xenomorph in heat or a Werewolf looking to rut, the encounter would likely involve lots of drool, lots of primal growling, sharp fangs, destroyed bedspreads, and awkward attempts at kissing lip-less maws... and that's the whole appeal. To remove that, to humanize the distinctly inhuman, would be like making a no-contact mosh pit or a slice of NYC pizza that doesn't give you heartburn. In this area, Snek Guy also excels. His encounters always sell the imposing, dangerous edge of their creatures while utilizing the messy nature of their coupling to erotic success. It all feels very primal, fear giving way to a forbidden desire until the line between monster and human starts to blur.
Now, onto my points of criticism (some spoilers below).
It often feels like Snek Guy writes the moment-to-moment of his stories somewhat stream-of-consciousness. Points that should hang to let the tension build are glossed over in a rush to get to the next scene. The werewolf pounds on the door to the bedroom, breaks the hinge, and finally corners the horrified protagonist— all condensed into a single plainly worded sentence. The text can feel rushed, and when it does, big moments with lots of potential can end up feeling rather anticlimactic.
Similarly, Snek Guy has a bad habit of repeating details. The main character notes how odd he finds the love interest's habit of calling him "kid" numerous times throughout the text, each time like it's the first time it's being brought up, hammering you over the head with little to no subtly. It also starts to feel silly when the tightness of the love interest's leather pants is mentioned nearly every time she enters a scene, each time with a different descriptive simile.
My biggest problem with Snek Guy's writing, and what I think could take his stories to the next level, is how compartmentalized the sexual encounters feel within the text. Given how detail oriented and thoughtful of a writer he clearly is, I wish his sex scenes felt a bit more creative and character driven. Instead, it can often feel like you're reading through unbridled fantasies, which CAN be effective (don't get me wrong), but they would be even more impactful if he included character building moments within those scenes.
Take, for example, the final encounter in this story. The male protagonist had a long night of passion with the love interest less than 24 hours ago and is now face-to-face with this massive female werewolf (which he thinks might've eaten her). Of course, we're well aware as readers that this werewolf is the love interest transformed, but he isn't as far as we can tell. Terror gives way to lust as the beast moves upon him, and I figured this encounter would be one where he realizes, through the subtleties of the beast's body language and the way she responds to their shared pleasure, who this creature really is. It would not only be emotionally erotic to have him recognize a familiar attraction within something so otherworldly, but it would also explain why he eventually embraces the sexual encounter with the beast despite not knowing where his love interest is.
Instead, he falls asleep in the beast's arms after their shared climax and is confused when he wakes up next to his human love interest in the morning. Not only would this added layer make every sexual act during that scene emotionally meaningful, but it would explain away the weirdness of stopping your desperate search for the girl you like to fuck the monster that might've killed her. The romantic ending falls a little flat without this added detail, which is a shame, because all the pieces are there to make that encounter the emotional payoff it deserves to be.
This story was well written and drew me in from the start! The characters are well developed and relatable, the spicy scenes are very spicy, and the love story has a fantastic conclusion. If you have any werewolf fantasies, this story is definitely for you. It's a short read, but well worth it!
Not my typical read but it is short. I absolutely loved the way the author described the FMC! Fabulous! The spicy was spicy and the author used other words than I'm used to in describing anatomical features. I wasn't mad at it. Will I read something else from this author? Yeah, I might.
Love it, smash it with five stars, this is a pure fuckin masterpiece!
I've been trying to find one of those kind of books about a paranormal romance between werewolf female and the human boy, and trust me, finding those books It's like digging a deepest hole that would take me to a different country, all to just find this damn gold.
Sure, I've read/listen two or three book about this type of paranormal romance, and yeah, they were gold. But this book is nothing else than a pure diamond.
Every book that was about the werewolf and a human romance were boring or not my type, cause most of them were about a girl falling in love with a large werewolf male, and not the other way around.
Im thanking this writer so much for making my day. And I wish that maybe someday will get a part two that would be similar to a "wolf like me" series. (but not with the bullshit where he'll become a werewolf too. Pls dont!)