This book had a unique premise, and I was excited to dive into something different with some meat to it.
But unfortunately, the delivery made it a tough, and very long read.
The story starts with a lot of unnecessary exposition. There’s a lot of telling instead of showing, especially when it comes to the character’s emotions. For example, with the anxiety disorder where the reader is told “my anxiety is bad.” A few times is fine, but it was an annoying constant throughout the book. The first person, past tense narrative made it difficult to stay immersed, and felt unnatural.
The relationship between the main characters, we’re told they love each other instantly on meeting, but we don’t get to see them growing together. Instead of meaningful conversations, or shared experiences to deepen their connection, they spend a lot of time doing mundane things like watching TV with the kid. Maybe have one scene where they take her little brother to the park, and they have a meaningful conversation? There was a lot of information dumping, instead of it flowing naturally through dialog.
The book is over 600 pages and many of the scenes and sections that don’t move the plot forward should have been cut. The author repeats herself a lot, and I found myself skimming through many of the pages just to get to something meaningful.
The focus on elaborate world building, where much of it didn’t matter to the actual plot, took attention away from the emotional core of the story. You don’t need 10 chapters to build tension if you know how to do it correctly.
I really wanted to love this book because the core idea is creative, and the connection between the characters had potential. But the writing made it hard to enjoy.
If you’re okay with slow pace, heavy on unnecessary details with some pay off at the end, and are willing to push through, you might still find something in this book to enjoy. But for me, it was a struggle.