School Summer holidays were always something to look forward to. At 16 years old Jim was sure this was going to be his last one with the rents so he was going to make the most of it - what were they going to do? Send him home ?Follow Jim on a summer holiday he will never forget
I'll say I enjoyed the story even with the grammatical issues. I realize the writer is from England and lives in Irela, so there are some differencese between British English and U.S. English. But, that being said there are some thing that are the same between the two like missing wordss. Overall the storytelling is gtear, with description being in detail. The writer jumps back and fort to make the reader understand different details in the characters lives that bring them to where they are, and why they are the person's they are today.