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296 pages, ebook
Published April 12, 2019
No. Just no. The Heroine is supposed to be a super assassin, raised as one, with other of her "kind"....but all I hear are the thoughts of a 15 y.o. girl? At best? Same with the way she acts. The author needs to learn to write better. Sorry guys, but this is literally like the fanfic I used to write when I was 15.
This is not how someone behaves when they've been abused most of their life. Or someone who has been trained to observe minute details about everything. Or seamlessly blend in in any environment.
There were moments where unnecessary supposedly "cool" moments happened that weren't needed or that weren't actually "cool" at all.
Whatever the author wanted to show in this book, to transfer from her mind to ours, is failed big time. Sorry Miss Jones, but perhaps before you write your next book, read some of the best authors in this genre, see how they can manipulate language in order to give us a good book, and how they can produce a story that doesn't sound like the fantasies of a teenage mind.