Very minor spoilers below (not enough to hide completely, but enough to bear warning):
Suffice to say A Shot in the Dark is everything I wanted and needed as a wrap up to A Taste of Shine. I blazed through it from beginning to end, drinking up every word and living for the strengthening of Charlie and Matthew's relationship. There is action, squabbling, bar fights. We got more Beau and Martha and some background on their relationship with Charlie. Matthew is one big cuddle of sweet, grumpy menace, and Charlie is the consummate spitfire. It perfect and yet having said that I still finished with a nagging feeling of overall disappointment.
It's hard to explain but I'll do my best. I noted my original disappointment at the end of a Taste of Shine, highlighting Cain's decision to split a previously published book into two parts. I cited the fact that it appeared to be nothing more than an attempt to make more money, but I secretly hoped that by splitting it she was going to add to strengthen the tale and make me eat my words. Now I caveat this by saying I never had the chance to read the original as a whole (my fault, not hers), but from my standpoint it doesn't appear that she used her decision wisely and ultimately it distracted me from what could have been (and to a degree, when I get past my annoyance, still is) a fun fast, highly enjoyable ride.
A Shot in the Dark is 156 pages. That's it, and unless you're using Kindle Unlimited costs the same price as the original, complete tale at $4.99. First off, that's a rip off, but I spent it anyway (times 2) for both books because that's how much I love Charlie and Matthew. 156 pages is not even novella length. It's basically a couple of chapters of fanfiction (although the quality is much higher). Because of this part two, in comparison felt rushed. The speed at which we moved through problems seemed jerky in comparison to the steady build in book 1, and would be understandable only if both were joined in one complete novel and she somehow had to accomplish everything in a preconceived page allotment. But she doesn't this time, so instead, the cliffhanger by which Charlie scuttles back to Chicago will her tail between her legs is summed up and subsumed within the first chapter of the book. A cliffhanger I agonized over for 3 months while I waited for this book. I was disappointed, but with their relationship finally consummated I was ready to put it behind me in exchange for some good old fashioned Matthew lovin'. But the next thing I know, people are breaking into the grill after Charlie, we're dealing with planning a mobster wedding, and visiting Charlie's long lost mother in the span of 70 pages and everything feels rushed. Cain has ample space to add to and enhance this story. In a Taste of Shine we spent an entire chapter at a dinner at Drake's, dancing, wining, and dining, where now conversation is shortened to a couple of pages followed by a scene break.
There is a decided lack of detail in comparison to its predecessor. Where once we spent time at the stills packaging moonshine and teasing, going to barn dances, or disappearing on hunting trips, now there is only a forward push to find the man responsible for the grill attack. Don't get me wrong, it's exciting and thrilling. The Emmersons can do no wrong, but I couldn't fully immerse myself because of how cheated I felt. Now with them split, neither book is a complete thought. Book one doesn't have a problem, and book two doesn't have time of stop and smell the roses and to just breathe and enjoy. I unwillingly sped through when all I wanted were more details to languish over. I couldn't savor it because it just moved too quickly.
I even made sure to read a Taste of Shine again before starting this to make sure I both remembered everything and was able to give the story a fair shake. Truthfully, if you read both books one right after the other and you use Kindle Unlimited to avoid paying, none of this going to matter to you and you'll ultimately enjoy the story. I would have probably enjoyed it just fine if I didn't know about a Trick of the Light, I would have probably said the two pieces need editing but that they are ultimately enjoyable. Except this time they've been published, pulled, edited, and republished. Having the two parts in this condition after all of that is inexcusable and a clear money grab. Sadly Cain is still an excellent writer which means even though I'm highly annoyed I'll probably go back and reread my favorite parts from both books, because they're very good in an entertaining way. Just beware that they're ultimately a rip off but that both books are at least a begrudgingly entertaining rip off. *** 4 wounded stars*** (anything less well written would have gotten less. )