Undone

Creed MC #3

by Jax Hart

LUCE... ***My heart beat only for him. I waited but he never came. My heart turned to ice and now I'm determined no one will crack it again. But a dangerous man more ruthless than the first pursues me. They both want me. Desire me. *** I'm lost in the woods but only one of them can take me home.

From AMAZON BESTSELLING AUTHOR JAX HART, UNDONE CREED MC #3. This is a standalone full-length novel. You can read this without reading the other two books. However, the author recommends reading in order. ****These series are less about the MC life and more about the men who run them.**** This is Smith & Luce's Story... you first meet them in UNSCRIPTED #2 in the series.

Genres: Contemporary Romance, Romance, Romantic Suspense

353 pages, Kindle Edition

Published March 25, 2019

Reviews

[Ryan · Rating 5 out of 5]

This is my first book by this author and will not be my last. Luce and Smith are the most perfect couple. In the beginning things were complicated but truthfully what relationship isn't when you have. man like she had. All he did was for her and it took a bit for her to realize that. When yiu take a man like him who has pride, regrets nothing, lives to be living and never thinks of settling down and then enters Luce who rocks the foundation literally you have the ultimate couple. I recommend this read. You will love watching them grow together as a couple as well as apart as individuals on the road called life. This is a one click you will not regret.

[Shirl · Rating 5 out of 5]

I loved this book. I think it was my favorite of the series. This is the last of the full length books but I still have a novella to read. Would be nice if the author would write more about some of the other members of the club.

Smith is the one who took over for Duke in the first book as president of the club. He had big shoes to fill and found out the hard way it's a hard job to do.... especially if you find the other half of your heart. Problem is when he thinks he can make room for her he has to let her go.

Luce came from Chicago to visit her best friend and she too fell in love. He made all the promises and said everything right until he ghosted her. Every time she tries to rebuild herself he comes back and breaks her heart again and again. Finally she can't do it anymore. When Luce and a couple of the other women get in trouble who comes out to be the biggest badass?

[Kathy Rouchelle · Rating 4 out of 5]

I really did like this book, once it took off. I found it to be a little slow in the beginning, for me. But when it took off I had a very hard time putting it down as it enticed me, intrigued me and the action and intensity of the situations pulled me in and wouldn't let go. There was one part towards the end that I thought skipped something important, but maybe it was just me that missed something. Nevertheless, I did enjoy reading about Creed and Luce and meeting the rest of the MC and their ladies as this is the first book of the series that I have read, and the first time reading this author. The details paid to the locations were spot on and the supporting characters as well as the lead characters were very well written and quite complex. I loved how Luce seemed to be quite the little damsel in distress until the point that she wasn't. She began to stand up for herself and her backbone stiffened and she stood her ground, until she couldn't..and that's on Creed..LOL. Creed, the total alpha male and Dom was good up until the point that he broke her heart and made me want to reach into the book and strangle him (it was just one particular scene that caused that reaction). As far as the Dom part of his personality, he said it a few times, but I never really saw that particular part of him come out when things did get heated. He spoke of punishment which never came to light. So if anyone is into the Dom/sub reads, they would be disappointed in that area. It didn't bother me however, because I'm more about the storyline, but if it is put out there and doesn't show up when the scene calls for it then I think that is a little bit of a miss. My opinion only.

Other than the slow start, I thoroughly enjoyed this book and their story. I wish I had read the first two, but there was really no need as far as the storyline itself.

[Angels · Rating 5 out of 5]

Book Review for Undone by Jax Hart Creed MC Series #3
 
 
 

 
Title: Undone
Series: Creed MC Series #3
Author: Jax Hart
Genre: Contemporary Romance/Suspense
Release Date: March 25, 2019 Reviewed by Angels With Attitude Book Reviews ARC copy provided for honest review 5 stars from us
 
 

 
 
 

 
I had to leave her behind. Forget I ever laid eyes on her beautiful face.
 
 
I did it to protect her... to shield her from the ugly side of the life I'm in.
 
The life I chose.
 
We left things UNDONE.
 
UNFINISHED.
 
My love might break her, but it's what I crave-- what I need... absolute submission she'll accept me as her king. Because I've already decided, I'll take her to be my QUEEN and when I do--nothing will be UNDONE between us... we'll be UNBREAKABLE. 
 
But first, I need to win her back make her understand she was always in my heart, even when the only choice I had was to walk away.
 
LUCE...
 
My heart beats only for him. I waited but he never came. My heart turned to ice and now I'm determined no one will crack it again. But a dangerous man more ruthless than the first pursues me. 
 
They both want me.
 
Desire me.
 
I'm lost in the woods but only one of them can take me home.
 
 
From AMAZON BESTSELLING AUTHOR JAX HART, UNDONE CREED MC #3. This is a standalone full-length novel. You can read this without reading the other two books. However, the author recommends reading in order. 
 
****These series are less about the MC life and more about the men who run them.****
 
This is Smith & Luce's Story... you first meet them in UNSCRIPTED #2 in the series.
 

 
Let's start off my saying this is a brand new author for us and Wow ! just Wow !This story was griping intense,heart wrenching,tons of drama, was funny,exciting ,had wonderful character's and had some major heat going on and we loved every second of it.What a page turner!
 
I always pick a favorite author but, It was really hard to choose but, we decided on Luce even though this story had a great cast of amazing characters.
 
Luce was a character that was fun,had a sense of humor,loving ,caring,is sensual ,artistic a little lonely and not comfortable in her own skin and quite emotional but, throughout the story she kept growing more confident and more comfortable in her own skin but, what she was not is a door mat for any man to walk all over anymore.We just loved her.She was just one of those character's that was so easy to love.
 
Lucas- Now Lucas was all Alpha,tall dark, dangerous,had the looks of a mountain man, was a Dom in the bedroom and pretty much out of it lol,protective and possessive and done right scary and pretty much a A-hole most of the time but,with good reason. Omg ! I loved his and his mom's relationship and all their uncomfortable conversations as they were down right hilarious together .Even with his A-hole-ish ways he was down right delectable and pretty much irresistible.He was definitely was fan worthy!
 
Not only did we love these character's we loved,Dare,Rog,Duke,Rogue and we have to say we loved the old ladies as they were just priceless and a lot of fun.I have to say that there for a bit while I was swooning over Rogue the dark tall handsome deadly and dangerous Mafia King I was rooting him to win the prize.
Holy Hotness !
 
I have to say the author started the story off with a bang and kept us engrossed in the pages the entire time  because once we started reading it we couldn't put the book down until we were finished it. The story was just that good and we loved it.We are so looking forward to more books in this series and getting caught up with the rest of the series.Would love to see Rogue get his own story even if it was a novella where the MC & The Mafia King team up as we would loved to see more of him.I think we were just a little bit in love with him. Grins..
 
Also we wanted to mention that this story had one hot cover and we love it !
 
Recommended read to all !
 
 
 

 
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Jax Hart: Singer, a songwriter, living creatively through art. Dirty Romance author from the great state of Washington. Duke is his first full-length novel. He generally hates most people, plays the bass guitar, and enjoys camping trips with his son. 

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[Pearl · Rating 5 out of 5]

Undone!

I'm wiped out after reading this one! Smith is going to be the death of me! He knows how to sex up a girl but then he turns into an a@@hole for a bit. Luce has such a fiery spirit that compliments Smith. These two have some hellacious obstacles to climb over before they get to their HEA but the ride is oh so worth it!
Great job Jax!

[JoAnna G · Rating 4 out of 5]

I have not read this author before and none of the other books in this series though I was able to follow along just fine and I really enjoyed this book. It is well written and the author did an amazing job with the perfect amount of drama and angst. The push and pull were dragging me deeply. MC books are like kryptonite for me. I love reading about them. These men are such alphas but would do anything for the people they love. Including something that can break your heart as well as his. Here is Luce and Smiths story

What can I say about Luce? I loved her spunk. She is sassy and classy and everything about her you like. She is a strong woman and I felt like I could feel her love and anger and the betrayal she felt.

Smith is the Prez of the Mc. He would do anything for it as well as the woman he loves. He is an alpha male that feels he needs to rule and oh, did I forget to mention he is a DOM. It isn't hardcore but elements are there. He makes some alliances or are they already alliances and we just don’t know. I loved all the bad boy macho vibes with the MC’s and with the mob. It isn't over the top and it was done perfectly.

When Luce comes to visit her best friend Dev she is instantly attracted to Smith. They have this connection that you can feel it. They fall fast and hard. Everything is great until it's not. With Luce grieving her relationship the friendship she has with Dev kind of gets tossed aside when she needs her friend the most. I hurt for Luce and she didn't have a lot of support. HSe formed new friendships and she had her old friends when she needed them as well.

The book was good, I loved the premise, the writing, and people. I even liked the little surprise element that I actually didn't see coming. I wish somethings were different and she really made him work for her forgiveness a bit more. With all of that said I am going back to read the other books. I liked this one and want to see what I was missing by not reading them.

[Jennifer Pierson · Rating 4 out of 5]

Undone was a story that started out a bit slowly for me to be honest, not to mention a bit confusing for whatever reason, but once I got past that, OMG! I couldn't put it down, and that was even with my insane frustration at a lot of the things going on. When Smith met Luce he's done for, but at the first sign of big trouble, he takes the choice out of her hands of whether they should be together, and ghosts her. And the way that he does is it, well, it's a total cowardly way that had me completely enraged to be honest. Then to make matters worse, he really stuck the knife in to make sure he broke her heart, so yeah, I wanted nothing to do with him anymore. And still, he wasn't done with her, as he kept coming back, and leaving, so I got mad at her, because she kept letting him. She starts to really get stronger, and guess what? He's still trying to boss her around, and at this point, I want to set him on fire, not going to lie, and yes, I understand that the club comes first, but there are other women who are with their men, so that excuse didn't fly with me. Obviously there's also a ton of twists going on, which had my f-bombs dropping besides my colorful metaphor name calling, & very interesting threats against Smith throughout. Luckily, there's other men from the club that make up a great cast of secondaries, not to mention her friends, as they were hilarious together. Anyway, Jax Hart is very talented to keep me reading despite my murderous thoughts when it came to Smith, so bravo! And I can't wait to read more in this series as it's definitely original & full of action! HIGHLY RECOMMEND!

[Jamie Chomyc · Rating 5 out of 5]

Reviewed for Angel Babe's Blog!!

I absolutely loved this book, I love the entire series!! Undone is book #3 in Jax Hart's Creed MC series!! This book can be read as a standalone but I recommend reading the first 2 books in the series as the characters are part of the backstory!! This is Smith and Luce's story and what a story it is!! This book has a great storyline and fantastic characters, what I love the most is that Smith is the MC Prez and Jax Hart shows us that being the Prez of an MC isn't all that easy!! Smith's decision's and choices are not always about what he wants he is responsible for all the men in his MC and at the end of the day the consequences of his choices are all on him!!
When it comes to Luce Smith knows what he wants and nothing will stand in his way!! He's a complete alpha badass!! The chemistry between them is insane and they are hot together!! I highly recommend this book and the series you will not be disappointed, I can't wait for the next book in the series!!

[Lisa Menor · Rating 5 out of 5]

Smith has changed, he's not the man Luce remembers. Smith met Luce through Rog and his girl Dev. Rog owns The Sassy Wench Tavern, the club's bar. One look is all it took and Smith instantly knew Luce was his. Luce is willing and wants to belong to Smith, but being with the Prez of Creed MC comes with a price. That price just might be Luce's life.
Smith feels the only way he can protect Luce is by abandoning her. There's a threat from another MC and Smith cant, will not, let Luce be harmed. He'd give her up before he would ever let that happen. In doing so, all hopes of a life with the only woman who's ever meant anything to him would die. To save her, Smith will have to become someone even he will despise and form alliances with people so dangerous he may never be able to extricate himself.
AMAZING READ ! ! !
HOT, ALPHA OUTLAWS🔥 PROTECTING THEIR WOMEN WHILE AT WAR WITH RIVAL MC CLUBS ! FULL OF UNEXPECTED SURPRISES ! DARK, RAW DESIRE MIXED WITH INTENSE, EMOTIONAL PASSION ! ! ! SO EXCITED FOR MORE BOOKS IN THIS WILD, AMAZING SERIES !

[Heather Chaotic Creatives · Rating 4 out of 5]

The title of this book is perfect for this story. The blurb says it all......

Smith felt what he was doing was right. Felt like he was protecting his heart, his soul, his Luce. While I understand to extant why he felt the need to do this, I desperately wanted to knock him upside his damn head. As you will find out when delve into this book you will see his heart is so full of love for her that he truly wants to protect her.

Lucille or Luce to her friends finds everything she has ever wanted in Smith. He makes her feel safe. He makes her feel loved, but most importantly he makes her feel like she will have what every woman wants. I will give Luce huge props, because I think I would have lost my mind. She is strong and finds her sassy along the way.

I will say that when the two of them get together smoke may just start leaking from your kindles. The chemistry is hot and it really is impossible for the two of them to be apart.

We get caught up with former characters and get introduced to a few new ones.

[Cassie Ashford · Rating 5 out of 5]

Oh my heart! Where do I start? This book had my heart pounding until the end!

Luce and Smith were meant to be from their first meeting. Smith laid claim to her immediately and made it clear she was his.

Not long after their first meeting things so sideways and Smith makes a decision that not long breaks Luce but destroys him.

Everything decision he made was to keep her safe. Luce had no answers why he did what he did so she moves and tries to make a life without him.

Luce ends up in the crossfire in the end and Smith is determined to keep her safe not only from the physical danger after them but the other man that has his sights set on Luce and wants her for himself.

This book will have you biting your nails until the end and leave you guessing who Luce ends up with. Spectacular book!

[Tianna McPherson (Anna Lee) · Rating 5 out of 5]

So if you've read book 1 and 2 then book 3 will truly blow your mind. In it finally see what becomes of Luce and Smith. They have this fast, hot as Sin love affair that makes us blush so damn bad that we can't tell if we're coming or going.  We watch as desire rolls off of them and watch as life gets in the way but one thing is for sure love is always the most powerful thing to try and break. It's a fact that's just proven when you think you lost something gut in all actuality it never left. Smith is the Prey but also a very very rich man who doesn't show it and Luce is the fabulous artist afraid to act on it. But in the end 2 worlds collide and make for one happy ending. I can't wait to read in this series. Jax Hart knows what's what and I fully intend to be apart of this adventure.  I give it 5 stars. I voluntarily read and reviewed this book as an Advanced Reader's Copy.

[Lynn Stifle · Rating 5 out of 5]

This is the third book in the Creed series, it is a MC romance following our two lead characters Luce and Smith. Luce starts out as a meek character, however throughout the story she gains confidence, more of a backbone, and asserts herself much more. Smith is an alpha male, Dom, and he is the president of the Creed MC, and one thing I can say about him is he knows what he wants and goes after it, such an alpha..be still my heart! I loved their journey and watching Luce and Smith fall in love. Their characters are so easy to like, complex, and fiercely loyal, and you won't be able to help yourself from falling in love with them and the ones they call family. This story is raw, dark and emotional and filled with romance, action, and unexpected surprises. Absolutely brilliant book and series, I highly recommend you pick it up and read for yourself, you won't be disappointed.

[Deb · Rating 5 out of 5]

This story had everything that makes a great book. Suspense, drama, angst, intrigue, betrayal and love. The characters were what made this book great through their actions, reactions and awesome dialogue. This book is a great addition to the series. I love that the author brings back characters from previous books who are also actively participating in the storyline but do not deter from the main characters. The suspense builds as the story plays out, capturing my attention and not letting it go. I wanted to jump right into the story and help them out because they were such a wonderful couple together. Great storytelling.

[Wendy Livingstone · Rating 4 out of 5]

This is the third book in this awesome series, and is Luce and Smith’s story. These two are complex characters who have intense chemistry between them. I loved all of the secondary characters, some old and some new. This is a well written story which is intriguing, intense, and with action and love. The only down side, and this is my opinion only, is that I felt this story started off slowly, and rushed towards the end. I look forward to reading more from this talented author, whose work I recommend for all.

[Night Owl Book Blog · Rating 5 out of 5]

Undone is the 3rd Creed MC novel and they just keep getting better! Luce and Smith get their story now - it’s everything and more than I could have hoped for. The chemistry between them is off the wall. However I did want to smack some sense into Smith a few times but I also wanted to hug him...he’s such a complex man. Luce, I wanted to help kick Smith in the nuts. Her heart couldn’t take anymore breaking and it hurt to read in places. Jax Hart has written a beautiful love story with just the right amount of action for the MC side of it all. I cannot wait for the next book. I highly recommend you read this book and it’s predecessors.

[Jax Reid · Rating 5 out of 5]

The 3rd book in Creed MC Smith and Luce's story and what a story it is. This book had me turning page after page biting my tongue shouting at Smith to get his head outta his butt to willing Luce to slap him senseless lol. The story was a non stop rollercoaster ride. So hold on tight for the ride of your life. A well deserved *5 can't wait for Dare's story.

[Danielle Monteleone · Rating 5 out of 5]

This book pulled all the emotions out of me until I became Undone , it was perfect. Smith and Luce’s story is raw, passionate, and beautiful like the perfect storm. I literally could not stop reading once I started . Jax really put all his heart and soul into this pair. I loved every minute of it. It’s truly a must read ❤️

[Aroha Spark · Rating 5 out of 5]

Great next book Smith n Luce

Smith has so much on his shoulders, but damn life’s all bout decisions ...Luce deserves happiness she’s a sweet heart ..their story is so full of khaos ,These two are magic and khaos heart breaking, what a journey oh and these MC boys are adorable hmmm read enjoy folks, love ya boys Jax damn look forward to next book.

[Red Hot Romance Blog · Rating 3 out of 5]

I received an ARC in return for an honest review. I have mixed feelings about Smith and Luce. The story had good bones I just personally need more buildup between them. I hate when they just fall in love in the first 5 minutes. I also prefer not to have the guys POV so much. It was an ok read.

[Written Word Addict · Rating 5 out of 5]

Wow! Wow! Wow! Holy crap Jax Hart has done it again! I knew Smith and Luce's story would be a long, angsty road but this was so much more! So many twists and turns, epic battles, love found and lost. My heart hurt, my emotions were all over the place and dang if this book didn't make me cry. The wait for this book was so worth it!

[Lucylu · Rating 5 out of 5]

Leaves you wanting more....

I was waiting for this story for a bit and wasn’t disappointed as I dived in and was hooked again, I have a bad case of withdrawal now and can’t wait to read more!!! I highly recommend this series and any books by Jax Hart.

[Lady Raven Books · Rating 5 out of 5]

Amazing read

OH MY GODDESS this book is amazingly perfect. Smith and Luce are the ultimate couple. Please send me a Smith. This story takes you on one heck of an emotional journey. Ups, downs, back, forward, and round, and round. It's one I absolutely would go on again. The writing and flow of this book is top notch. I absolutely recommend this book and series.

[Kara Coens · Rating 4 out of 5]

Smith and Luce had me flipping the pages to see what would happen next. At times i wanted to schmuck Smith upside the head, but I still loved him! I really wanted to tell Luce to go and smarten the man up, but alas i couldn't! This story had everything in it to keep me on the edge and flipping the pages! I loved this and can't wait for more!!!

[Julia Leonard · Rating 5 out of 5]

Holy MC

This third book in the Creed series was well worth the wait.
Smith and Luce will keep your head spinning.
Plenty of drama in this one for sure.
I can not wait to hear Roque's story.
He has me thoughly intrigued.

[Angela · Rating 5 out of 5]

Smith & Luce

Be warned my contain triggers for some. Love this book! Strong alpha male bordering on caveman. A heroine who is struggling to find herself along the way. Can’t wait for the next book in this series.

[Crystal · Rating 5 out of 5]

This MC Prez goes on quite the mission to get his lady. The characters have a wild ride and amazing chemistry. Their journey will make you both love and hate The Prez. It is a well written book that I do recommend. So enjoy the ride.

[E&A Book · Rating 5 out of 5]

Every book in this series gets better and better. Undone was a can't puy it down read with complex characters and a storyline that will leave you on the edge if your seat. I can't get enough of this MC and will be anxiously waiting to see what happens next.

[Linda Newbern · Rating 5 out of 5]

Smith and Luce’s story is full of heat, protection, MC rivalries, love and hot sex. Sometimes a person has to sacrifice their needs in order to protect another. This is the story of such sacrifice. I recommend this book to anyone who believes in true love.