“Starfall” is a novella in Stephen Baxter’s Xeelee Sequence, a series of novels and stories laying out millenia of future history for mankind and for a variety of powerful alien races. “Starfall” itself sticks mostly to humans – Earth has established an empire among the stars, but Imperial rule is paranoid and tyrannical. The novella describes the colonists’ rebellion against Earth – a massive military operation that must be carried out in total stealth, and under relativistic speeds. For the rebellion to have any chance of success, the final preparations must be made 60 years before the first shot will be fired, and no one can be allowed to uncover it in the meantime…
This setup makes for an exciting tactical exercise, for building suspense as the day of open attack draws near, for exciting, unusual space battles, and for depicting the calculating minds necessary to wage war under such conditions – as well as the harsh circumstances that compel them to do so. In all these, Baxter does an excellent job, and any reader who likes space battles, tension, and scientific speculation should enjoy the book greatly.
However, somewhere along the way, the novella takes a turn I found less satisfying. I won’t spoil the surprises, but at some point, the novella ceases to be about the oppressed colonies striking back against the Earth-based Empire, and becomes all about a previously-concealed threat on Earth, which the rebellion is in fact aimed at stopping.
This shift has two significant drawbacks. The first is that much of the story’s early, compelling momentum is killed. The rebellion and strife between colonists and Empire are shunted aside. Questions of loyalty, morality and sacrifice are suddenly made obsolete by an overriding, catch-all evil. Quite simply, Baxter has swapped stories on us mid-way – and unsurprisingly, the second story doesn’t satisfy what the unfinished first got us excited about.
The second drawback is that the new plotline introduced in the later half of the novella just isn’t as well-executed as the first half. Instead of the mounting anticipation and squaring off we have in the rebellion plot thread, the threat-to-humanity plot thread is meant to gradually uncover the details of the threat, and defeat it. That’s a fair plot structure, and I have to say that a lot of those details are surprising and creative. The problem is that each of these details, brilliant as many of them may be, seem to serve only as thinly-veiled macguffins and plot coupons. The brilliant details are plot twists that have no discernible effect on the plot; at least in the eyes of this reviewer, they seem to be for decorative purposes only.
It is as though a hero is trying to stop a bomb, and then when he gets there he finds out it is not just any bomb. It is a special, quantum, hyperspatial bomb, and the author makes clear to the reader how interesting and original the idea of this bomb is. Then the hero cuts the blue wire, and the end credits roll. Why bother? What difference did all that make? Why treat the revelations as though they’re significant, and then do nothing to give them real significance?
This flaw doesn’t ruin the book, nor even detract much from the enjoyment of the many other elements I noted. However, it certainly stands out, and I consider it particularly problematic for three reasons. Firstly, the dissonance I mentioned between this plot thread and that of the rebellion; this means the reader is predisposed to see this plot thread as secondary and less important, especially when the thread is structured as a slow buildup of revelations – it starts out slow, and we’re looking somewhere else. Secondly, characters are not Starfall’s strong point – they’re simple and fairly flat; not a problem with the broad, tactics-centered rebellion plotline, but the second plotline leans upon them much more heavily, and to poor effect. And thirdly, many of these details tie into the wider Xeelee Sequence, but the significance of “The Friends of Wigner” or various references to alien races were lost upon a newcomer such as myself – while most of the story up until the turning point was quite self-contained.
All in all, Starfall reads like the prose equivalent of a special-effects blockbuster. Not in the sense of lots of things blowing up; Starfall’s special effects are Baxter’s inventions and his unusual, uniquely-constructed ideas. These are combined with suspense and action to achieve an exciting piece in which the right kind of reader frequently goes “Whoa.” And yet even to him, it will be painfully obvious that plot, structure and character are not what they could be. A shame – since with just a bit more care for story construction, this could have been a novella I’d be able to recommend much more wholeheartedly.
This review originally published in The Fix Online.