this will be the....3rd? 4th? mcbain story i've read....kindle....apparently it is the 5th....and all of them w/i the last year or two.
starts out:
everybody has a right to earn a living.
that's the american way. you get out there and sweat, and you make a buck. and you invest that buck in lemons and sugar. the water and ice, you get free. you've got yourself a little lemonade stand by the side of the road, and pretty soon, you're pulling in five bucks a week.
hoorah!
and then the gov't comes and messes w/your business plan (as they did w/the little girl in...where was it? st. louis? kansas city?...sent in the epa swat team and waddled her)
onward and upward.
update at the 32% mark:
mcbain does some interesting things w/this one, not in any order:
1. he includes a missing person report...an actual form, looks like,
two pages worth
2. there is a chapter or two, or two partial chapters' worth of the worldly view of a con man...sort-of...using the second-person "you"...almost like an advice column, cynical advice--it is from a con man
2a. or...something....this one lengthier section includes a pitch from a soap salesman, another introducing "the most compelling novel since gone w/the wind called, all in caps: the tattered piccolo. heh!
3. there is a 7-numbered list by sam grossman, a police lieutenant who is also a skilled lab tech...his lab, divided into 7-sections.
4. there is a lengthy letter from a girl who is/turns out to be a missing person, likely victim of murder
5. there is a "man seeking woman" add at the end of one section, and in the next section, a woman is answering it...her letter is included...both letters are like the story-in-a-story
6. there's also some sort of...report on a bad guy, two page, front/back...
7. as well as several hearts drawn out, printed out that way...i wonder how common that was in the late-50s when this was 1st published? vonnegut did that a lot in a few of his, others, stephen king,
the narrative does not follow one cop, one con man, one victim, though it has so far followed many cops, many victims of either a con, or more.
there's a nice "afterword" in which mcbain includes a mistake from a previous version of the story, scene where teddy (the wife of one of the cops) hears things....she's a "deaf-mute" in an earlier incarnation, though no longer referred to as such...mcbain says in the afterword that a reader said the term is derogatory...etc.
there's some nice scenes here...charlie chen, the tattoo artist is a hoot. chinese. although who knows...there's probably some that see some sort of defamation in his character, too. wonder when animal-rapists will march on washington?
good read...narrative follows several detectives as they try to solve cases...intense chase scene at the end there, teddy, deaf and mute, cop-wife....following...etc etc...