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Disowned
Can the D that marks her shame also be her key to a new life?
Disowned by the only family she’s ever known, her humanity stripped from her with a brand that marks her as a commodity to be sold, Celeste is desperate enough to try anything to escape.
After a near fatal plunge over a cliff, she washes ashore to find a family willing to nurse her back to health.
Celeste recovers, slowly coming to trust the family, and despite his fierce appearance, even the terrifying ex-knight who speaks only with strange hand signs.
Her tenuous peace is shattered when the eldest son, a soldier, sworn to return illegal slaves to their owners, arrives injured and furious with his family for harbouring her.
Corporal Mick Haynes must choose where his loyalties lie—with the life as a dutiful soldier who always has a plan and plays by the rules, or protecting the girl he never expected to fall for and risk it all?
With war on the horizon, and bounty hunters closing in on Celeste’s location, time is running out…for them both.
Disowned by the only family she’s ever known, her humanity stripped from her with a brand that marks her as a commodity to be sold, Celeste is desperate enough to try anything to escape.
After a near fatal plunge over a cliff, she washes ashore to find a family willing to nurse her back to health.
Celeste recovers, slowly coming to trust the family, and despite his fierce appearance, even the terrifying ex-knight who speaks only with strange hand signs.
Her tenuous peace is shattered when the eldest son, a soldier, sworn to return illegal slaves to their owners, arrives injured and furious with his family for harbouring her.
Corporal Mick Haynes must choose where his loyalties lie—with the life as a dutiful soldier who always has a plan and plays by the rules, or protecting the girl he never expected to fall for and risk it all?
With war on the horizon, and bounty hunters closing in on Celeste’s location, time is running out…for them both.
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Sarah Addison-Fox
17 books459 followersSarah Addison-Fox is a New Zealand misfit with a weakness for stubborn heroes, fierce heroines, and stories that throw punches—sometimes literally. Whether she’s writing YA dystopian or steampunk, expect fast action, big feelings, and romance by the truckload.
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April 25, 2017
DAHHHHH! 12 billion trillion stars!! Review to come when I can think clearly. ;)
January 9, 2018
This book wasn't a loud, dominating book.
It wasn't an incredibly explosive, streaking star kind of book.
No, Disowned stands out in its quietness, its hominess, its drive to depict a family full of love. It may not be as ambitious as the Lunar Chronicles or as violent as the Blades of Acktar, but that's okay.
Disowned is, first and foremost, I think, a story about family.
It's about the family Celeste seeks without realizing it and the one she finds. It's about how your loved ones can heal so many wounds (and even if they can't cure them all, they still provide the safe arms to run to.) The thing that spoke most to my heart was that the theme of adoption is central. Celeste's real family was awful to her. It's the family she finds once she's escaped slavery that is where she is finally able to feel safe, and loved, and happy.
And I loved that.
This isn't my typical format for a review, but I'm making an exception for this book. Disowned quietly took a place at the top of my Kindle, and has planted itself in my heart and dug its way deep into my affections. Well done, Ms. Addison-Fox. Well done. Now please hurry up with the sequel. XD
(And btw I totally ship Celeste and Mick...)
It wasn't an incredibly explosive, streaking star kind of book.
No, Disowned stands out in its quietness, its hominess, its drive to depict a family full of love. It may not be as ambitious as the Lunar Chronicles or as violent as the Blades of Acktar, but that's okay.
Disowned is, first and foremost, I think, a story about family.
It's about the family Celeste seeks without realizing it and the one she finds. It's about how your loved ones can heal so many wounds (and even if they can't cure them all, they still provide the safe arms to run to.) The thing that spoke most to my heart was that the theme of adoption is central. Celeste's real family was awful to her. It's the family she finds once she's escaped slavery that is where she is finally able to feel safe, and loved, and happy.
And I loved that.
This isn't my typical format for a review, but I'm making an exception for this book. Disowned quietly took a place at the top of my Kindle, and has planted itself in my heart and dug its way deep into my affections. Well done, Ms. Addison-Fox. Well done. Now please hurry up with the sequel. XD
(And btw I totally ship Celeste and Mick...)
January 18, 2018
Me: *opens book to see if it’s any good* Me hours later: *still reading*
Since this is the first book in the series, I can tell that a lot of things are still being set up, but I’m already enjoying the medieval-ish feel of the fantasy world. Ethan, Maggie, and the children were such sweet characters! I especially liked how Ethan was portrayed as strong but also sensitive. I felt all the suspense in the first few chapters (and even when Mick came home) deeply. The sense of hiding, waiting, and danger was really strong.
And can we talk about the heroine? She didn’t come as some perfect, superlady “chosen one”. Nope, she was realistic, scared, and had to train. (And I loved her reasons for training too--not feminist or anything, just practical.) A+ for that! Also, her medical skills are fantastic. I’m excited to see how those serve her as the adventure pans out. *huge grin*
I was a little disappointed that Etra didn’t figure into the story more, but hopefully that will pick up as the series goes on. Also, I can’t decide about Asher. He’s...confusing. ;) I really loved the monks. :D
There were a few things that took away from my enjoyment, but they’re really just personal preference. It’s more of “it’s me, not the book” thing. ;) As a young woman, I hated reading about Celeste’s “evaluation”. It wasn’t a long description, just very bluntly put and not something I’d like to read about in a book I’ve picked up for entertainment. This book overall wasn’t very violent, but the knife fight in the woods (especially the aftermath *shudders*) was a bit too much for me. (I’m always the one who asks for knife fights to be filtered out of movies, though.)
Just a note that there are a few instances of d*** and b****y, and a soldier gets very drunk. Also, a young man notices a woman’s shape a couple times, making me want to kick him.
Best quote: Ethan hefted Mick up. “He’s out cold.” He dragged Mick back inside to the bed. “Oh, good,” Mick slurred. “I think I’ll join him.”
Altogether, I enjoyed this dystopian adventure and am interested to see how the rest of the series goes. ;)
Since this is the first book in the series, I can tell that a lot of things are still being set up, but I’m already enjoying the medieval-ish feel of the fantasy world. Ethan, Maggie, and the children were such sweet characters! I especially liked how Ethan was portrayed as strong but also sensitive. I felt all the suspense in the first few chapters (and even when Mick came home) deeply. The sense of hiding, waiting, and danger was really strong.
And can we talk about the heroine? She didn’t come as some perfect, superlady “chosen one”. Nope, she was realistic, scared, and had to train. (And I loved her reasons for training too--not feminist or anything, just practical.) A+ for that! Also, her medical skills are fantastic. I’m excited to see how those serve her as the adventure pans out. *huge grin*
I was a little disappointed that Etra didn’t figure into the story more, but hopefully that will pick up as the series goes on. Also, I can’t decide about Asher. He’s...confusing. ;) I really loved the monks. :D
There were a few things that took away from my enjoyment, but they’re really just personal preference. It’s more of “it’s me, not the book” thing. ;) As a young woman, I hated reading about Celeste’s “evaluation”. It wasn’t a long description, just very bluntly put and not something I’d like to read about in a book I’ve picked up for entertainment. This book overall wasn’t very violent, but the knife fight in the woods (especially the aftermath *shudders*) was a bit too much for me. (I’m always the one who asks for knife fights to be filtered out of movies, though.)
Just a note that there are a few instances of d*** and b****y, and a soldier gets very drunk. Also, a young man notices a woman’s shape a couple times, making me want to kick him.
Best quote: Ethan hefted Mick up. “He’s out cold.” He dragged Mick back inside to the bed. “Oh, good,” Mick slurred. “I think I’ll join him.”
Altogether, I enjoyed this dystopian adventure and am interested to see how the rest of the series goes. ;)
April 27, 2018
Going into this book, I hardly had a doubt in my mind that I was going to like it. I make that assumption a lot, and this time, I wasn't disappointed at all! (I guess the only reason it isn't five stars is that it's such a quiet book. It didn't slam me to the ground and scream in my face with its awesomeness. But it was still REALLY, REALLY good.)
Also going into this book, I didn't quite know what I was expecting (other than loveliness). It was one of those that even though I may have read the synopsis, I just didn't know what I was about to plunge into.
And what did I find, you ask? Well...
- I found a family. This family is called the Haynes family, and they are epic. Joe and Sadie are the most precious of the precious. <3 <3 Like... I feel like YA needs more innocent little children like these two darling kiddos.
The sibling love is one of my best parts of this book! The way Joe looks up to Mick as a role model melts my heart, and the care and compassion Mick shows to both him and Sadie is just... UGH, I LOVE YOU FOR THAT, MICK. I mean, the guy does have some issues, but I'm a fangirl anyway and I can't wait to see how he grows. <3
And then Ethan and Maggie are incredible parents - the type that YA needs more of, if you ask me. I especially loved the relationship that develops between Maggie and Celeste.
- OKAY, SO CELESTE. I literally just started Dissemble, but her arc is STUNNING in this book alone! A super likable protagonist to root for and sympathize with, Celeste is the perfect blend of strong and weak. GO, CELESTE!!!
The plot was slow-burning, but the family won me over so quickly that I didn't even care as long as the Haynes were on the scene. The intrigue over Celeste and all the problems and conflicts that came with her slave status kept me hungrily reading on. And then it picked up speed! OH BOY, DID IT PICK UP. Suddenly things were getting suuuuuper intense, and my heart was beating fast. By the end of the novel, I was breathless.
- I've seen some people complaining about the cliffhanger ending, but I have NO problem with the way the author cut it off. It was tastefully done, and I wouldn't have it any other way. Every story needs a strong beginning, middle, and end, and Disowned had all three. But trilogies are special, you see, and although the first book in any trilogy must be a story in itself (duh), it's almost just as important that it be the set-up for the rest of the series. If it doesn't leave enough things hanging, what are the chances a reader is gonna come out of it saying, "OH MY GOODNESS, I NEED THE NEXT ONE"?
Overall, I really enjoyed this book and I can't wait to see more of these incredible characters and this incredible fantasy world. <3
Also going into this book, I didn't quite know what I was expecting (other than loveliness). It was one of those that even though I may have read the synopsis, I just didn't know what I was about to plunge into.
And what did I find, you ask? Well...
- I found a family. This family is called the Haynes family, and they are epic. Joe and Sadie are the most precious of the precious. <3 <3 Like... I feel like YA needs more innocent little children like these two darling kiddos.
The sibling love is one of my best parts of this book! The way Joe looks up to Mick as a role model melts my heart, and the care and compassion Mick shows to both him and Sadie is just... UGH, I LOVE YOU FOR THAT, MICK. I mean, the guy does have some issues, but I'm a fangirl anyway and I can't wait to see how he grows. <3
And then Ethan and Maggie are incredible parents - the type that YA needs more of, if you ask me. I especially loved the relationship that develops between Maggie and Celeste.
- OKAY, SO CELESTE. I literally just started Dissemble, but her arc is STUNNING in this book alone! A super likable protagonist to root for and sympathize with, Celeste is the perfect blend of strong and weak. GO, CELESTE!!!
The plot was slow-burning, but the family won me over so quickly that I didn't even care as long as the Haynes were on the scene. The intrigue over Celeste and all the problems and conflicts that came with her slave status kept me hungrily reading on. And then it picked up speed! OH BOY, DID IT PICK UP. Suddenly things were getting suuuuuper intense, and my heart was beating fast. By the end of the novel, I was breathless.
- I've seen some people complaining about the cliffhanger ending, but I have NO problem with the way the author cut it off. It was tastefully done, and I wouldn't have it any other way. Every story needs a strong beginning, middle, and end, and Disowned had all three. But trilogies are special, you see, and although the first book in any trilogy must be a story in itself (duh), it's almost just as important that it be the set-up for the rest of the series. If it doesn't leave enough things hanging, what are the chances a reader is gonna come out of it saying, "OH MY GOODNESS, I NEED THE NEXT ONE"?
Overall, I really enjoyed this book and I can't wait to see more of these incredible characters and this incredible fantasy world. <3
January 31, 2018
Thoughts:
- Ethan and Maggie are a sweet couple. <3
- Mick = #nothanks #y'allcanhavehim
- I really admire Celeste for her independence. That girl knows what's up and she won't let anybody push her around. Me like. *nods*
- Can't she marry Asher tho?? I LIKE Asher. He's funny and down-to-earth.
- Also, I really hope Celeste becomes a soldier in the next book. To heck with convention. Let her realize her potential. She's good at this stuff.
- The setting is . . . quite interesting, really. It's not much like any other fantasy book I've read. It's kind of a mishmash of several cultures and aesthetics; sometimes it felt like the Old West, other times it felt more like Africa, and so on. Which is rather cool.
- The concept of warrior monks intrigues me. #hardcore
- I really like the ending!!! It doesn't try to wrap everything up in a neat bow & finish it off. It allows room for the story to continue to grow and expand. I'm curious what happens next :)
- Ethan and Maggie are a sweet couple. <3
- Mick = #nothanks #y'allcanhavehim
- I really admire Celeste for her independence. That girl knows what's up and she won't let anybody push her around. Me like. *nods*
- Can't she marry Asher tho?? I LIKE Asher. He's funny and down-to-earth.
- Also, I really hope Celeste becomes a soldier in the next book. To heck with convention. Let her realize her potential. She's good at this stuff.
- The setting is . . . quite interesting, really. It's not much like any other fantasy book I've read. It's kind of a mishmash of several cultures and aesthetics; sometimes it felt like the Old West, other times it felt more like Africa, and so on. Which is rather cool.
- The concept of warrior monks intrigues me. #hardcore
- I really like the ending!!! It doesn't try to wrap everything up in a neat bow & finish it off. It allows room for the story to continue to grow and expand. I'm curious what happens next :)
August 28, 2017
When one of my close Goodreads friends messaged me asking if I would like to alpha read for her, I said yes a bit fearfully, not sure what to expect out of her debut novel. What if the writing was horrible or I didn’t like the plot? I would be stuck reading it! And how would I politely say I disliked it to my GR friend that I had become close with over the past couple of months? Let me just say that I shouldn’t have worried. I. Loved. This. Book! Loved it! The night Sarah added to Goodreads and set up her author profile, I was up till 1 A.M. emailing her ecstatically and sitting in front of my computer with a goofy smirk plastered to my face. Really ask my brother; he’s my sole witness in this case. (I think he found it amusing to see his usually intelligent sister reduced to a fangirling blubbering mess.)
So, what is it about Disowned, book one in the Allegiance series by Sarah Addison-Fox, that has caused my excessive fangirling and driven me to disturb the lives of so many of my friends and family by loudly and repeatedly declaring to them that they need to read this book? So, many things did. First off, the writing quality went above and beyond my expectations. I couldn’t believe that this was only Sarah’s first book. Secondly, I loved the characters- they are all so individually awesome and unique to themselves. The Haynes family has completely won me over! Maggie is such a dear mothering spirit. And her kids- Joe and Sadie- are little dears, especially Sadie, I fell in love with her when she drew that picture of a mermaid for Celeste. *heart shatters* One of Sarah’s strong writing points is in her dialogue among the characters, which definitely impressed me.
Also, the setting is very unique. It is not your typical medieval fantasy world, but rather a world in a limbo setting between modern and medieval times. So, electricity, rifles, and a few other modern conveniences make their appearance, but there are horses instead of cars and an old fashion feel to the entire book. Another neat thing about the setting is the unique landscape that she’s portrayed, much of it based off the New Zealand fauna and landscape that is so familiar to the author.
And then there’s the plot. Celeste is a run-away slave from Kyraena, an underdeveloped country of spiritual darkness where slavery is rampant. Etraea is a land where she hopes to find freedom. But is freedom ever even possible for a slave? Mick is an injured soldier returning to recover at home only to find out that his family is harboring an illegal fugitive. Mick is honor bound to turn Celeste in according to a treaty that is just barely holding together the fragile peace between Kyraena and Etraea. Mick’s family, and especially his mother Maggie, seem determined to protect Celeste. Why, do they insist on complicating everything? And poor Celeste is painfully learning how to trust and trying to adjust to being around people who actually care and love each other.
It really is a struggle for Mick to understand Celeste’s POV; he very much begrudges Celeste’s very presence as well as little things like her accidentally sitting in his seat at the table for supper. For Mick who thinks of life as a series of problems for him to systematically solve, Celeste is going to prove to be his biggest problem yet.
I love the Haynes family’s impact on Celeste. As it is with any Christians who truly live their faith, they can’t help but attract Celeste with their faith in Etra (God). Their prayers to Him are far more personal and different than the prayers she’s seen given to the many gods of Kyraena. I am looking forward to seeing more of this aspect in the next book in the series.
But nothing that I’m telling you will fully be able to explain why I love Disowned so much. You need to read it for yourself! I’ve read it completely over three times (and enjoyed it every time) as I’ve alpha read for Sarah, which has been an infinite delight for me. Every time I’ve read a new version of the book, I’ve seen it improve and get even better which I did not think was possible at the beginning. It’s been amazing to see! I would definitely recommend Disowned to fans of clean Christian non-magical fantasy. Do get a copy! It’s beyond an amazing book!
So, what is it about Disowned, book one in the Allegiance series by Sarah Addison-Fox, that has caused my excessive fangirling and driven me to disturb the lives of so many of my friends and family by loudly and repeatedly declaring to them that they need to read this book? So, many things did. First off, the writing quality went above and beyond my expectations. I couldn’t believe that this was only Sarah’s first book. Secondly, I loved the characters- they are all so individually awesome and unique to themselves. The Haynes family has completely won me over! Maggie is such a dear mothering spirit. And her kids- Joe and Sadie- are little dears, especially Sadie, I fell in love with her when she drew that picture of a mermaid for Celeste. *heart shatters* One of Sarah’s strong writing points is in her dialogue among the characters, which definitely impressed me.
Also, the setting is very unique. It is not your typical medieval fantasy world, but rather a world in a limbo setting between modern and medieval times. So, electricity, rifles, and a few other modern conveniences make their appearance, but there are horses instead of cars and an old fashion feel to the entire book. Another neat thing about the setting is the unique landscape that she’s portrayed, much of it based off the New Zealand fauna and landscape that is so familiar to the author.
And then there’s the plot. Celeste is a run-away slave from Kyraena, an underdeveloped country of spiritual darkness where slavery is rampant. Etraea is a land where she hopes to find freedom. But is freedom ever even possible for a slave? Mick is an injured soldier returning to recover at home only to find out that his family is harboring an illegal fugitive. Mick is honor bound to turn Celeste in according to a treaty that is just barely holding together the fragile peace between Kyraena and Etraea. Mick’s family, and especially his mother Maggie, seem determined to protect Celeste. Why, do they insist on complicating everything? And poor Celeste is painfully learning how to trust and trying to adjust to being around people who actually care and love each other.
It really is a struggle for Mick to understand Celeste’s POV; he very much begrudges Celeste’s very presence as well as little things like her accidentally sitting in his seat at the table for supper. For Mick who thinks of life as a series of problems for him to systematically solve, Celeste is going to prove to be his biggest problem yet.
I love the Haynes family’s impact on Celeste. As it is with any Christians who truly live their faith, they can’t help but attract Celeste with their faith in Etra (God). Their prayers to Him are far more personal and different than the prayers she’s seen given to the many gods of Kyraena. I am looking forward to seeing more of this aspect in the next book in the series.
But nothing that I’m telling you will fully be able to explain why I love Disowned so much. You need to read it for yourself! I’ve read it completely over three times (and enjoyed it every time) as I’ve alpha read for Sarah, which has been an infinite delight for me. Every time I’ve read a new version of the book, I’ve seen it improve and get even better which I did not think was possible at the beginning. It’s been amazing to see! I would definitely recommend Disowned to fans of clean Christian non-magical fantasy. Do get a copy! It’s beyond an amazing book!
January 18, 2018
I picked this book up for free on Kindle, and I am very glad I didn't pay for it.
First off, here are some things I did like about the book:
1. The characters were very vivid. They shined through the pages, making you feel like you knew them personally.
2. The writing style was solid. It kept me turning the pages.
3. I loved Mick's family. They were awesome, lovable people.
What I didn't like so much:
1. The number one reason this book got such a low rating for me was all the references to nudity. I have a very good imagination, so this was a bit disturbing how many times Celeste was without clothes. Even in her memory's of being a slave there were a lot of mentions of it and what they wanted to use her as. Now I will say, it was always for a good reason, but I really hated it and felt it could have been avoided.
2. Mick is a jerk. Now, he isn't a Christian, so I'll give him some slack, but I really wanted to punch him repeatedly. He hates Celeste until she turns up in a pretty dress, then he's all over her. He can't keep his eyes off her... especially when she shows up in a tight shirt. He also cusses (mildly) several times and is drunk at one point.
3. I felt lost through a lot of the book. I could never figure out what kind of setting it was in.
4. Other then mentioning God briefly several times, there was almost no Christian content.
Overall, I think a lot of people would like this book, but it was not my kind of book at all. Because of the negative content, I would not recommend it to anyone under 14.
First off, here are some things I did like about the book:
1. The characters were very vivid. They shined through the pages, making you feel like you knew them personally.
2. The writing style was solid. It kept me turning the pages.
3. I loved Mick's family. They were awesome, lovable people.
What I didn't like so much:
1. The number one reason this book got such a low rating for me was all the references to nudity. I have a very good imagination, so this was a bit disturbing how many times Celeste was without clothes. Even in her memory's of being a slave there were a lot of mentions of it and what they wanted to use her as. Now I will say, it was always for a good reason, but I really hated it and felt it could have been avoided.
2. Mick is a jerk. Now, he isn't a Christian, so I'll give him some slack, but I really wanted to punch him repeatedly. He hates Celeste until she turns up in a pretty dress, then he's all over her. He can't keep his eyes off her... especially when she shows up in a tight shirt. He also cusses (mildly) several times and is drunk at one point.
3. I felt lost through a lot of the book. I could never figure out what kind of setting it was in.
4. Other then mentioning God briefly several times, there was almost no Christian content.
Overall, I think a lot of people would like this book, but it was not my kind of book at all. Because of the negative content, I would not recommend it to anyone under 14.
January 5, 2018
4.5 stars. Review coming. . .
January 15, 2018
Wow.
This book is so unique in so many ways. I echo the thoughts of other reviewers when I say how quaint and sweet it is.
It's not flashy or loud and booming like so many books are nowadays, instead it lets the storyline prove itself. And prove itself it does.
Simply beautiful.
This book is so unique in so many ways. I echo the thoughts of other reviewers when I say how quaint and sweet it is.
It's not flashy or loud and booming like so many books are nowadays, instead it lets the storyline prove itself. And prove itself it does.
Simply beautiful.
April 5, 2018
Review to come after publication. . .
January 11, 2018
(Review originally posted on my book blog: https://thepagedreamer.wordpress.com/...)
What a unique, enjoyable book!
The story kept me absorbed and guessing, and it’s a nice mix of action/thrilling, and life sequences with character moments. There’s a dash of romance which was alternately cute and frustrating—just say what you mean, already, characters! (The usual. ;)) It could be raw and real and emotional and deal with war and things, but also be lighthearted and fun at other times. Quite balanced and well-written. :) Anyway, I liked the story and I can’t wait to see where it goes next!
On to characters!
Mick was my favorite; I loved him! The soldier type, he has a temper and a gruff exterior at times, but he’s goodhearted and loyal, and has a wry sense of humor. His dialog was the best. :D It was also neat picking out his relationships with everyone around him, like his family and Celeste and Asher.
Celeste was a good heroine and I liked how the author did a great job with her outlook on things clearly showing how foreign the more “normal” world of Mick and his family was to her, since Celeste is from the country with which his homeland is at war. I loved Mick and Celeste figuring each other out after being at odds.
Mick’s family, the Haynes, were so nice. ^_^ Having an entire family as central characters was a sweet and refreshing element! I liked how they were just good people, and a tight-knit little group. We have Maggie and Ethan, the parents (who share POV switching back and forth with Mick and Celeste), who were both such homely, good people; Maggie’s so sweet and motherly, and Ethan’s a solid, strong sort of father-figure. Then there’s Joe and Sadie, the little siblings of Mick; they’re fun, though I was occasionally unsure what age they’re supposed to be. A lot of the lightheartedness comes from them. :)
Other characters were intriguing, particularly Mick’s friend Asher (I’d like to find out more about him), and the monks who we saw a few times, though not as much as I thought at first. Everyone was very individual and came to life on the page! :)
The setting was very interesting! Some might call it non-magical fantasy, but there’s nothing fantastical about it—it’s merely non-historical countries in another land. Hence the newly-named genre Kingdom Adventure, which this book definitely belongs to. :) I thought it might be medieval-esque, but while it does have dashes of that (with a monastery and things), it ended up feeling almost more like a frontier western type of era, 1800s perhaps, with a smidge of more modern feel too. There are guns, horses, potbellied stoves, and a little town with shops, as well as an organized military and intelligence which felt more modern with a lot of the wording, and electricity is a new thing so there’s lightbulbs... But apparently there’s a queen and there are many references to the Crown, so the western feel doesn’t totally fit. I guess it’s like non-magical fantasy meets western meets kingdom meets almost-modern. :) Anyway, the point is that it felt very unique! A few times some of the elements didn’t mesh totally for me, but on the whole it felt like its own individual land that I’ve now become familiar with. ^_^ That’s one of the fun things about Fantasy and Kingdom Adventure—the feel of the world and getting to know it. I hope to go back to this land of Etraea sometime!
Content-wise, for those who wish to know, it’s a little bit gritty at times, so I’d recommend it to slightly older teens. There’s a little bit of gruesomeness due to war, and some other references/things which might make it more PG-13, but fairly mild. And there’s a faith element which was nicely integrated, since there’s an allegorical God and so forth. I liked how faith-filled the Haynes family was. :)
That ending! It didn’t cliff-hanger, exactly, but it sort of... stopped rather suddenly, and there are quite a few questions left hanging, including some big changes. I keep wondering what happens next (I want the next scene!) and I’m extremely curious to find out what will happen in later books! I want to know what happens with Mick and Celeste and their stories!
Overall, I enjoyed it very much indeed! ^_^ It was just... really good, and I loved the characters! <3 (And and and -- book 2, where are you?!) I recommend it to anyone who likes a good adventure story, and I’ll be watching for more books by this author! :D
I received a free e-copy of this book from the author (many thanks!). These opinions are my own.
What a unique, enjoyable book!
The story kept me absorbed and guessing, and it’s a nice mix of action/thrilling, and life sequences with character moments. There’s a dash of romance which was alternately cute and frustrating—just say what you mean, already, characters! (The usual. ;)) It could be raw and real and emotional and deal with war and things, but also be lighthearted and fun at other times. Quite balanced and well-written. :) Anyway, I liked the story and I can’t wait to see where it goes next!
On to characters!
Mick was my favorite; I loved him! The soldier type, he has a temper and a gruff exterior at times, but he’s goodhearted and loyal, and has a wry sense of humor. His dialog was the best. :D It was also neat picking out his relationships with everyone around him, like his family and Celeste and Asher.
Celeste was a good heroine and I liked how the author did a great job with her outlook on things clearly showing how foreign the more “normal” world of Mick and his family was to her, since Celeste is from the country with which his homeland is at war. I loved Mick and Celeste figuring each other out after being at odds.
Mick’s family, the Haynes, were so nice. ^_^ Having an entire family as central characters was a sweet and refreshing element! I liked how they were just good people, and a tight-knit little group. We have Maggie and Ethan, the parents (who share POV switching back and forth with Mick and Celeste), who were both such homely, good people; Maggie’s so sweet and motherly, and Ethan’s a solid, strong sort of father-figure. Then there’s Joe and Sadie, the little siblings of Mick; they’re fun, though I was occasionally unsure what age they’re supposed to be. A lot of the lightheartedness comes from them. :)
Other characters were intriguing, particularly Mick’s friend Asher (I’d like to find out more about him), and the monks who we saw a few times, though not as much as I thought at first. Everyone was very individual and came to life on the page! :)
The setting was very interesting! Some might call it non-magical fantasy, but there’s nothing fantastical about it—it’s merely non-historical countries in another land. Hence the newly-named genre Kingdom Adventure, which this book definitely belongs to. :) I thought it might be medieval-esque, but while it does have dashes of that (with a monastery and things), it ended up feeling almost more like a frontier western type of era, 1800s perhaps, with a smidge of more modern feel too. There are guns, horses, potbellied stoves, and a little town with shops, as well as an organized military and intelligence which felt more modern with a lot of the wording, and electricity is a new thing so there’s lightbulbs... But apparently there’s a queen and there are many references to the Crown, so the western feel doesn’t totally fit. I guess it’s like non-magical fantasy meets western meets kingdom meets almost-modern. :) Anyway, the point is that it felt very unique! A few times some of the elements didn’t mesh totally for me, but on the whole it felt like its own individual land that I’ve now become familiar with. ^_^ That’s one of the fun things about Fantasy and Kingdom Adventure—the feel of the world and getting to know it. I hope to go back to this land of Etraea sometime!
Content-wise, for those who wish to know, it’s a little bit gritty at times, so I’d recommend it to slightly older teens. There’s a little bit of gruesomeness due to war, and some other references/things which might make it more PG-13, but fairly mild. And there’s a faith element which was nicely integrated, since there’s an allegorical God and so forth. I liked how faith-filled the Haynes family was. :)
That ending! It didn’t cliff-hanger, exactly, but it sort of... stopped rather suddenly, and there are quite a few questions left hanging, including some big changes. I keep wondering what happens next (I want the next scene!) and I’m extremely curious to find out what will happen in later books! I want to know what happens with Mick and Celeste and their stories!
Overall, I enjoyed it very much indeed! ^_^ It was just... really good, and I loved the characters! <3 (And and and -- book 2, where are you?!) I recommend it to anyone who likes a good adventure story, and I’ll be watching for more books by this author! :D
I received a free e-copy of this book from the author (many thanks!). These opinions are my own.
Favorite Quote
“You picked a bad time to get shot.”
Mick raised an eyebrow. “Is there a good time to get shot?”
January 14, 2018
Another reviewer mentioned that this book stands out for its quietness and homeyness, and if that isn’t a good description of Disowned, I don’t know what is. It’s not action-packed, full of heroes that never go wrong, no—it’s filled with real people living real lives with real problems. I was invested in Celeste’s life from the very beginning, since the story begins in medias res, and once she found herself in a home with people that didn’t see her as an object—and in fact wanted nothing more for her than her welfare—well, it was then that her healing began. Granted, it takes a while, but that makes it realistic.
As for the characters, Celeste is rough-around-the-edges, having spent almost her entire life in slavery, Mick is lovable and humorous despite being rough-around-the-edges in a different way, Maggie is the picture of strong, affectionate motherhood, Sadie and Joe are sweet, Ethan a big teddy bear (I mean really xD), and Asher... is Asher. *sidelong still-suspicious glance*
I also loved seeing a Christian homeschool family depicted in such a relatable way! It’s not something you see very often in fiction, and it brought back memories of my childhood. The Haynes’ faith in Etra (God) seemed natural, and wasn’t pushed on Celeste, but they made no effort to hide it, and when she asked to be taught from Etra’s book, Maggie was ready and willing. That said, there was a different religion in Kyraenea. Though it wasn’t described in detail, it was a nice addition! It’s another thing that made Celeste’s world so achingly familiar and realistic.
The “stuff” comes in the form of brief instances of smoking, drinking (including Someone getting very drunk), a very light smattering of swear words (two or three times total?), injuries being described in a fair amount of detail (which might bother some—I’m not squeamish), a couple instances where a male observer took extra notice of female beauty, and the fact that working the mines isn’t the only kind of slavery Celeste’s people engage in... there’s also one that involves a revealing red dress. That sort of thing is always difficult to think about, especially as a woman, but it was handled tactfully, and in the end, I had no objection to it being there.
My only non-“stuff” dislikes are mainly about the... vagueness?... of the physical appearance of the world. There was a lot of world building, but I found myself missing a mental image for the kinds of structures to be found in a typical Etraean village. They had electricity, so it seemed fairly modern, but Celeste observed early on that they were more advanced that Kyraenea, so I wasn’t sure whether the world took a more fantasy or sci-fi or modern-with-a-hint-of-fantasy leaning. I guess I’ll learn more about that in the next book, after the way this one ended, but it would have helped to have a little more detail there.
In the end, however, everything about Disowned is so down-to-earth, that what I just mentioned interfered very little with my enjoyment of it. The effect of war on a man, the highly-researched injuries, treatments and symptoms, the way it embraces every messy detail of life, including upchuck, water rings on the table, dishes, and the occasional bit of family tension... seriously, you guys. Read it! It’s refreshing in its quiet power.
As for the characters, Celeste is rough-around-the-edges, having spent almost her entire life in slavery, Mick is lovable and humorous despite being rough-around-the-edges in a different way, Maggie is the picture of strong, affectionate motherhood, Sadie and Joe are sweet, Ethan a big teddy bear (I mean really xD), and Asher... is Asher. *sidelong still-suspicious glance*
I also loved seeing a Christian homeschool family depicted in such a relatable way! It’s not something you see very often in fiction, and it brought back memories of my childhood. The Haynes’ faith in Etra (God) seemed natural, and wasn’t pushed on Celeste, but they made no effort to hide it, and when she asked to be taught from Etra’s book, Maggie was ready and willing. That said, there was a different religion in Kyraenea. Though it wasn’t described in detail, it was a nice addition! It’s another thing that made Celeste’s world so achingly familiar and realistic.
The “stuff” comes in the form of brief instances of smoking, drinking (including Someone getting very drunk), a very light smattering of swear words (two or three times total?), injuries being described in a fair amount of detail (which might bother some—I’m not squeamish), a couple instances where a male observer took extra notice of female beauty, and the fact that working the mines isn’t the only kind of slavery Celeste’s people engage in... there’s also one that involves a revealing red dress. That sort of thing is always difficult to think about, especially as a woman, but it was handled tactfully, and in the end, I had no objection to it being there.
My only non-“stuff” dislikes are mainly about the... vagueness?... of the physical appearance of the world. There was a lot of world building, but I found myself missing a mental image for the kinds of structures to be found in a typical Etraean village. They had electricity, so it seemed fairly modern, but Celeste observed early on that they were more advanced that Kyraenea, so I wasn’t sure whether the world took a more fantasy or sci-fi or modern-with-a-hint-of-fantasy leaning. I guess I’ll learn more about that in the next book, after the way this one ended, but it would have helped to have a little more detail there.
In the end, however, everything about Disowned is so down-to-earth, that what I just mentioned interfered very little with my enjoyment of it. The effect of war on a man, the highly-researched injuries, treatments and symptoms, the way it embraces every messy detail of life, including upchuck, water rings on the table, dishes, and the occasional bit of family tension... seriously, you guys. Read it! It’s refreshing in its quiet power.
November 16, 2018
This book was gripping (I read it one sitting, y'all...).
The writing style was fun and easy to follow.
The story and themes are realistically portrayed and strong. I was always interested and things flowed evenly. There were a few 'major' decisions that I had some issue with but nothing that I can't give leeway to, considering the characters/motivations overall.
The characters were awesome -- good and bad characters, they were well done. While I adored them... there were some times where I got a bit frustrated, especially halfway through the book and onward. There was some choices that just seemed way more logical... but they weren't chosen, and, yo, bad things happened because of that. I can understand the reasons for different decisions, but... still. And, spoilers about one thing that bugged me slightly:
Overall, I loved this book. It made me laugh (even when I should've not... ha...) and the characters were fantastic in the plot. ALSO: ASHER. YOOO. I have an Asher in my novel Seek so it was soo funny 'cause they have so much in common.
The writing style was fun and easy to follow.
The story and themes are realistically portrayed and strong. I was always interested and things flowed evenly. There were a few 'major' decisions that I had some issue with but nothing that I can't give leeway to, considering the characters/motivations overall.
The characters were awesome -- good and bad characters, they were well done. While I adored them... there were some times where I got a bit frustrated, especially halfway through the book and onward. There was some choices that just seemed way more logical... but they weren't chosen, and, yo, bad things happened because of that. I can understand the reasons for different decisions, but... still. And, spoilers about one thing that bugged me slightly:
Overall, I loved this book. It made me laugh (even when I should've not... ha...) and the characters were fantastic in the plot. ALSO: ASHER. YOOO. I have an Asher in my novel Seek so it was soo funny 'cause they have so much in common.
March 15, 2018
OKAY. I have calmed down and had time to chew on this story and now I think I can write a review. Maybe. We'll see how this goes.
series playlist here: https://open.spotify.com/user/mylittl...
First thing to be made aware of: I read this book in one day. The whole thing. In a day. A day where we went to Disney, too. But during the two hour round trip and when I got home (and immediately crawled into bed with this book in hand), I devoured this story and I loved every second of it.
The characters weren't my favorite at the beginning. Well, actually, I take that back, I loved Mick's family from the minute we met them. They're great. But Mick and Celeste? I think they just kind of showed traits that usually bother me in fiction. But they grew! And there was character development! YAY!
The world, y'all. THE. WORLD. That was 100% my favorite part of this book and it may just be me who is so obsessed with it but I am obsessed with it. And I cannot wait for book 2. Like seriously, GIVE IT TO ME NOW.
*cough* Okay I'm done. I really liked it. 4.5 stars (with the half star taken off for a bit of language and the aforementioned original dislike of the characters)
series playlist here: https://open.spotify.com/user/mylittl...
First thing to be made aware of: I read this book in one day. The whole thing. In a day. A day where we went to Disney, too. But during the two hour round trip and when I got home (and immediately crawled into bed with this book in hand), I devoured this story and I loved every second of it.
The characters weren't my favorite at the beginning. Well, actually, I take that back, I loved Mick's family from the minute we met them. They're great. But Mick and Celeste? I think they just kind of showed traits that usually bother me in fiction. But they grew! And there was character development! YAY!
The world, y'all. THE. WORLD. That was 100% my favorite part of this book and it may just be me who is so obsessed with it but I am obsessed with it. And I cannot wait for book 2. Like seriously, GIVE IT TO ME NOW.
*cough* Okay I'm done. I really liked it. 4.5 stars (with the half star taken off for a bit of language and the aforementioned original dislike of the characters)
January 16, 2018
4.5 stars *I received a free copy in exchange for my honest review*
First, Sarah's from New Zealand, which means not only is the book chock full of British spellings, but there are also awesome British styled words. Like "smelt" instead of "smelled" or "learnt" instead of "learned". I loved it!
The book does say "d- it" twice, which might not be a bad word in New Zealand. She also uses "bloody", which isn't bad here in the U.S. Just a caution.
But the book was very good. Sadie and Joe were pretty cute and I liked the characters. There are several plot twists and it's almost comical to see Celeste having no clue about things. I feel like there is still so much story to learn (I want to hear Maggie's story) and of course, Celeste gets a some weighty information that I hoped is fleshed out in future books. The ending is kind of mean.
While calling Etra "Lord" was a bit much, I so appreciated that the God-figure was named differently. It is a fantasy world after all. The things like electricity and a few other things like that were a bit off, but you could forget that most of the time.
First, Sarah's from New Zealand, which means not only is the book chock full of British spellings, but there are also awesome British styled words. Like "smelt" instead of "smelled" or "learnt" instead of "learned". I loved it!
The book does say "d- it" twice, which might not be a bad word in New Zealand. She also uses "bloody", which isn't bad here in the U.S. Just a caution.
But the book was very good. Sadie and Joe were pretty cute and I liked the characters. There are several plot twists and it's almost comical to see Celeste having no clue about things. I feel like there is still so much story to learn (I want to hear Maggie's story) and of course, Celeste gets a some weighty information that I hoped is fleshed out in future books. The ending is kind of mean.
While calling Etra "Lord" was a bit much, I so appreciated that the God-figure was named differently. It is a fantasy world after all. The things like electricity and a few other things like that were a bit off, but you could forget that most of the time.
May 7, 2018
What a story! Wow, this is such a different story than what I've read before. I liked that it was a fantasy world, but one on the cusp of the industrial era with electricity and technology, I've never come across this before.
This story is a little slower than most stories that I usually read, but it still has plenty of interesting scenes, and I was left turning the pages unable to put it down, not knowing what would happen next.
I would have to say that Mick was probably my favorite character. He may have been the most annoying of the characters, but that was because he was the most human and that was why I liked him the best. It was watching the male version of me run around *winces*
His family was adorable, Asher hilarious, and I really like Celeste. And yeah, I ship Mick with Celeste, have since Mick first came on the scene. Shameless shipper here.
There's some language, but not much. Other than that, it's clean.
I am VERY interested in how this series continues. I still have so many questions and I can't wait to see how the story progresses!
Many thanks to the author for the copy which she provided. I received a complimentary copy of this novel. I was not required to post a positive review and all views and opinions are my own.
This story is a little slower than most stories that I usually read, but it still has plenty of interesting scenes, and I was left turning the pages unable to put it down, not knowing what would happen next.
I would have to say that Mick was probably my favorite character. He may have been the most annoying of the characters, but that was because he was the most human and that was why I liked him the best. It was watching the male version of me run around *winces*
His family was adorable, Asher hilarious, and I really like Celeste. And yeah, I ship Mick with Celeste, have since Mick first came on the scene. Shameless shipper here.
There's some language, but not much. Other than that, it's clean.
I am VERY interested in how this series continues. I still have so many questions and I can't wait to see how the story progresses!
Many thanks to the author for the copy which she provided. I received a complimentary copy of this novel. I was not required to post a positive review and all views and opinions are my own.
April 27, 2018
This was such a great fantasy book - I'm utterly intrigued to see what happens next! Disowned by Sarah Addison-Fox follows the life of a slave girl and the dear family who takes her in. It had action, suspense, tenderness, and some budding romance. I love the characters (though disappointed with the path Celeste's on) and can hardly wait to see how their lives progress. I was thrilled to see that there's a solid faith aspect, by all appearance. And ... yes! I'm just excited about having discovered an amazing new fantasy world! Check this one out, friends!
Caution: There are a couple instances were a swear word is used. And there's a little violence/gore.
Caution: There are a couple instances were a swear word is used. And there's a little violence/gore.
January 22, 2018
Original Review in December 2017:
AGH IT IS JUST SOOOOO GOOD AND SAD AND AWESOME I CAN'T EVEN BEGIN.
I'm giving it 4.5 stars because I felt that the end was extremely sudden and left me with an unsettled feeling (even though I do realize there will be further books ... can't wait for that!).
Full Review in January 2018:
Originally posted on Reveries Reviews.
Title: Disowned
Author: Sarah Addison-Fox
Series: Allegiance, #1
Genre: Christian Fantasy Adventure (though I’d say more dystopia but in a fantasy world and with slightly less drama)
Setting: Etraea and Kyraenea, both countries in a made-up world. Non-magical.
Publisher: Sarah Addison-Fox
Source: from author (in exchange for honest review)
Overall Rating: 4.5/5
Here I am again. Trying to put my thoughts about a truly excellent book into words. So … if this review is a little incoherent and ridiculous and includes little girl squealing … that is why.
Because when you like a book, you can easily put thoughts into words, but when you love it …? There’s really not much to say but “AGADSFASDGFASDF IT WAS SO GOOD.”
And I promised I wouldn’t be one of those reviewers, but … ADFKAJDSKFJADS HOW CAN I HELP IT???
PLOT: 4/5
It started out super fast-paced. I felt that it slowed down a bit in the middle, but then it picked up again, and I absolutely loved it!
The beginning was definitely my favorite part. It was just so amazing! Rarely has a book pulled me in from the first page and kept my attention so well. The backstory was woven in as it went on, and it was just … wowza. Like I said, words aren’t enough. *cue screaming*
I also loved all the little Celeste/Mick moments. These two … so cute. But they need to get together. *puts hands on hips* *glares at them*
It ended on a huuuge cliff-hanger, though! *can’t wait for book 2*
CHARACTERS: 5/5
Best. Part. Of. The. Book.
(As with all truly GREAT books, in my opinion.)
Maggie was probably my favorite. She is absolutely the most sweet woman ever. She’s an amazing wife and mother with such faith, strength, and perseverance! And she has a messed-up past which she overcame. I can’t wait to read more about her! (Also, the author said something about a possible Maggie/Ethan story? Like a prequel? I WOULD LOVE THAT.)
Ethan was a strong, lovable teddy bear. I know an Ethan in real life (my best friend’s “little brother” who weighs twice as much as me in pure muscle and anger), so it took me a while to shake that Ethan out of my head. I was just like, “Ethan would never do that … oh, wait, wrong Ethan …” 😛
At first, I didn’t know what to think about Mick. I was just, “Dude. If you turn her in I will shoot you. Er, you know, once I get that my passport updated for fictional worlds.” And then … he stopped being a jerk, and I started loving him.
Joe and Sadie. ❤ That is all.
Annnnd, the girl we’ve all been waiting for = Celeste! Poor baby! I just want to hug her forever. THANK GOODNESS FOR THE HAYNES. BECAUSE SHE NEEDED RESCUED. ARGGGG.
(Another thing I loved about this book: realisticness of the characters – especially Celeste – reacting to the way they’d been “raised,” if you will.)
SETTING: 3/5
Could have used a little work here. Although I got a pretty good idea of the cultural/religious situations in both countries, which was cool … I felt like there could have been a lot more description and scene-setting.
(This is what bumped it down from 5 to 4.5 even though it was originally because of the ending, which was sudden. But I understand that now, knowing about the sequel.)
As several reviewers have commented, the farm and everything about it was so gentle, sweet, and homey. It sets the book apart from your average doom-and-gloom dystopian-type book with its beauty and perfection.
And … that is just so lovely. *is almost cry* *because nostalgia* #farmgirl Well … #ranchgirl
WRITING: 5/5
Love the author’s style. Just enough of everything – dialogue and action, slows and fasts, sweet and funny, dramatic and happy … really balances out well. The one thing, as I said, that might have been lacking was description … more towards the end of the book, though.
CONTENT: 2/5
Language: about three instances of d*mn, nothing else that I can remember.
Violence: description of bad burns, wounds, etc. People die from bombings, war. There is blood and such. I don’t feel like it was too detailed/scary, but it was there.
Sexual: it’s hinted but never stated that Celeste was intended for prostitution now that she’s no longer young enough to work in the mines and that this happens to young girls often. A couple no-details kisses.
Other: Celeste was abandoned as a child by her own uncle. She’s been a slave all her life.
Okay for most teens. I’d say 14+, perhaps. Depends on the family rules, etc.
The biggest worry would be the cussing. I was a bit surprised since this is a Christian book, but it didn’t bug me that much and, as I said, was very infrequent.
The violence shouldn’t bother anyone say 14+. Maybe younger. Depends on the kid. #isverytough 😉
OVERALL: 4.5/5
IT WAS JUST SO GOOD.
Okay, so, I don’t read a ton of Fantasy/Dystopian, but … this was sooo lovely. (And I think I do secretly adore fantasy/dystopian … I just won’t admit it.) (It’s a sickness.) (Blame my mom.) (Or my sister.) (Either of my sisters.)
I’d definitely recommend this book to any lover of dystopian reads that are different and exciting and yet still sweet in a beautiful way. A must-read.
~Kellyn Roth, Reveries Reviews
AGH IT IS JUST SOOOOO GOOD AND SAD AND AWESOME I CAN'T EVEN BEGIN.
I'm giving it 4.5 stars because I felt that the end was extremely sudden and left me with an unsettled feeling (even though I do realize there will be further books ... can't wait for that!).
Full Review in January 2018:
Originally posted on Reveries Reviews.
Title: Disowned
Author: Sarah Addison-Fox
Series: Allegiance, #1
Genre: Christian Fantasy Adventure (though I’d say more dystopia but in a fantasy world and with slightly less drama)
Setting: Etraea and Kyraenea, both countries in a made-up world. Non-magical.
Publisher: Sarah Addison-Fox
Source: from author (in exchange for honest review)
Overall Rating: 4.5/5
Here I am again. Trying to put my thoughts about a truly excellent book into words. So … if this review is a little incoherent and ridiculous and includes little girl squealing … that is why.
Because when you like a book, you can easily put thoughts into words, but when you love it …? There’s really not much to say but “AGADSFASDGFASDF IT WAS SO GOOD.”
And I promised I wouldn’t be one of those reviewers, but … ADFKAJDSKFJADS HOW CAN I HELP IT???
PLOT: 4/5
It started out super fast-paced. I felt that it slowed down a bit in the middle, but then it picked up again, and I absolutely loved it!
The beginning was definitely my favorite part. It was just so amazing! Rarely has a book pulled me in from the first page and kept my attention so well. The backstory was woven in as it went on, and it was just … wowza. Like I said, words aren’t enough. *cue screaming*
I also loved all the little Celeste/Mick moments. These two … so cute. But they need to get together. *puts hands on hips* *glares at them*
It ended on a huuuge cliff-hanger, though! *can’t wait for book 2*
CHARACTERS: 5/5
Best. Part. Of. The. Book.
(As with all truly GREAT books, in my opinion.)
Maggie was probably my favorite. She is absolutely the most sweet woman ever. She’s an amazing wife and mother with such faith, strength, and perseverance! And she has a messed-up past which she overcame. I can’t wait to read more about her! (Also, the author said something about a possible Maggie/Ethan story? Like a prequel? I WOULD LOVE THAT.)
Ethan was a strong, lovable teddy bear. I know an Ethan in real life (my best friend’s “little brother” who weighs twice as much as me in pure muscle and anger), so it took me a while to shake that Ethan out of my head. I was just like, “Ethan would never do that … oh, wait, wrong Ethan …” 😛
At first, I didn’t know what to think about Mick. I was just, “Dude. If you turn her in I will shoot you. Er, you know, once I get that my passport updated for fictional worlds.” And then … he stopped being a jerk, and I started loving him.
Joe and Sadie. ❤ That is all.
Annnnd, the girl we’ve all been waiting for = Celeste! Poor baby! I just want to hug her forever. THANK GOODNESS FOR THE HAYNES. BECAUSE SHE NEEDED RESCUED. ARGGGG.
(Another thing I loved about this book: realisticness of the characters – especially Celeste – reacting to the way they’d been “raised,” if you will.)
SETTING: 3/5
Could have used a little work here. Although I got a pretty good idea of the cultural/religious situations in both countries, which was cool … I felt like there could have been a lot more description and scene-setting.
(This is what bumped it down from 5 to 4.5 even though it was originally because of the ending, which was sudden. But I understand that now, knowing about the sequel.)
As several reviewers have commented, the farm and everything about it was so gentle, sweet, and homey. It sets the book apart from your average doom-and-gloom dystopian-type book with its beauty and perfection.
And … that is just so lovely. *is almost cry* *because nostalgia* #farmgirl Well … #ranchgirl
WRITING: 5/5
Love the author’s style. Just enough of everything – dialogue and action, slows and fasts, sweet and funny, dramatic and happy … really balances out well. The one thing, as I said, that might have been lacking was description … more towards the end of the book, though.
CONTENT: 2/5
Language: about three instances of d*mn, nothing else that I can remember.
Violence: description of bad burns, wounds, etc. People die from bombings, war. There is blood and such. I don’t feel like it was too detailed/scary, but it was there.
Sexual: it’s hinted but never stated that Celeste was intended for prostitution now that she’s no longer young enough to work in the mines and that this happens to young girls often. A couple no-details kisses.
Other: Celeste was abandoned as a child by her own uncle. She’s been a slave all her life.
Okay for most teens. I’d say 14+, perhaps. Depends on the family rules, etc.
The biggest worry would be the cussing. I was a bit surprised since this is a Christian book, but it didn’t bug me that much and, as I said, was very infrequent.
The violence shouldn’t bother anyone say 14+. Maybe younger. Depends on the kid. #isverytough 😉
OVERALL: 4.5/5
IT WAS JUST SO GOOD.
Okay, so, I don’t read a ton of Fantasy/Dystopian, but … this was sooo lovely. (And I think I do secretly adore fantasy/dystopian … I just won’t admit it.) (It’s a sickness.) (Blame my mom.) (Or my sister.) (Either of my sisters.)
I’d definitely recommend this book to any lover of dystopian reads that are different and exciting and yet still sweet in a beautiful way. A must-read.
~Kellyn Roth, Reveries Reviews
August 24, 2018
I loved this book soooo much!!! It was sooo good!!! 5 Stars!!! =D
This book was everything I wanted it to be. Small bits of action. Lovable characters. Believable world. Great writing style.
One of the biggest themes in the story is family. We have this very lovable family who still had flaws and arguments and problems. But they were always able to make it right with one another, they still loved one another. I really loved Sandi and how she made Celeste a hand drawn picture to try to help her feel better.
The thing that was really was cool in the story was when Celeste comes and interrupts their normal lives, they didn't turn her away but helped her with open arms and with joy. Sure some of the members of the family had some doubts but that didn't stop them from helping.
I also really liked the homeschooling aspect of this book. It felt kinda nice to read about that for a change, being homeschooled myself.
Celeste was just a strong character! She wasn't like overly strong that she could get through everything. No, she got through stuff but felt the effects of each event she went through. She was scared. And she should be. But the minute she was faced with an opposed force she'd fought tooth and nail to survive.
I wasn't really sure about Mick at first. He was doing his job and believed in his job. Well, there were sometimes I question if he really believed in his job or not. But the downright thing is that he is loyal to his country. I can admire that. But the price he was willing to pay for his country was a little shocking, I will admit to that.
And Asher! I wasn't sure about him at first either, but.... YES!
One of the things that did concern me was how some of the characters seem to accept other characters too quickly. I mean, who wouldn't like Maggie and her family, they are so kind and peaceful as a whole, why wouldn't you like them? I just thought that maybe some of the characters were like okay even with some of the circumstance going on.
Content in Book:
1. Slaves. And young kids being disowned by their parents and sold into slavery.
2. A scene that alludes what happens to female slaves when they are too old to work in the mines. Not very descriptive.
3. Mentions of worshiping other gods.
4. Mentions of a war. Not too descriptive.
5. Some mentions of head wounds and other injuries, including gunshot injuries and knife stabs.
6. Some violence. (Hand-to-hand combat, with a knife, with guns, hair pulling, trying to choke someone, setting stuff on fire on purpose, mentions of a bombing).
7. Tattoos and a mark to brand a slave on their arm.
8. Smoking.
9. Alcohol and someone getting drunk.
Who Would I Recommend This Book To:
Those who love dystopians. Those who like strong stories about families.
Will I Read The Next Book:
YES!!! I REALLY LOVED THIS BOOK!!!! Already reading Dissemble!
This book was everything I wanted it to be. Small bits of action. Lovable characters. Believable world. Great writing style.
One of the biggest themes in the story is family. We have this very lovable family who still had flaws and arguments and problems. But they were always able to make it right with one another, they still loved one another. I really loved Sandi and how she made Celeste a hand drawn picture to try to help her feel better.
The thing that was really was cool in the story was when Celeste comes and interrupts their normal lives, they didn't turn her away but helped her with open arms and with joy. Sure some of the members of the family had some doubts but that didn't stop them from helping.
I also really liked the homeschooling aspect of this book. It felt kinda nice to read about that for a change, being homeschooled myself.
Celeste was just a strong character! She wasn't like overly strong that she could get through everything. No, she got through stuff but felt the effects of each event she went through. She was scared. And she should be. But the minute she was faced with an opposed force she'd fought tooth and nail to survive.
I wasn't really sure about Mick at first. He was doing his job and believed in his job. Well, there were sometimes I question if he really believed in his job or not. But the downright thing is that he is loyal to his country. I can admire that. But the price he was willing to pay for his country was a little shocking, I will admit to that.
And Asher! I wasn't sure about him at first either, but.... YES!
One of the things that did concern me was how some of the characters seem to accept other characters too quickly. I mean, who wouldn't like Maggie and her family, they are so kind and peaceful as a whole, why wouldn't you like them? I just thought that maybe some of the characters were like okay even with some of the circumstance going on.
Content in Book:
1. Slaves. And young kids being disowned by their parents and sold into slavery.
2. A scene that alludes what happens to female slaves when they are too old to work in the mines. Not very descriptive.
3. Mentions of worshiping other gods.
4. Mentions of a war. Not too descriptive.
5. Some mentions of head wounds and other injuries, including gunshot injuries and knife stabs.
6. Some violence. (Hand-to-hand combat, with a knife, with guns, hair pulling, trying to choke someone, setting stuff on fire on purpose, mentions of a bombing).
7. Tattoos and a mark to brand a slave on their arm.
8. Smoking.
9. Alcohol and someone getting drunk.
Who Would I Recommend This Book To:
Those who love dystopians. Those who like strong stories about families.
Will I Read The Next Book:
YES!!! I REALLY LOVED THIS BOOK!!!! Already reading Dissemble!
August 24, 2018
Re-read 8/18: just as fun and engaging as the first time! Loved getting back to these characters and excited to finally move on to book 2!!
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So I will admit that this book started out a little slow for me. But by chapter 4-5 it just took off! Don't get me wrong, the first chapter is a really gripping and strong start, so I think it might have been me that took some extra time to read.
Celeste was a great character, but I didn't really feel like I connected with her as much as I wanted to. We started spending more time in Mick's head and kind of lost her in the middle of the book. But the ending made up for that.
So Mick. The impulsive soldier forced to come home due to a wound and discovers his family is hiding a slave...illegally. Thankfully he's not a jerk about it for very long and sees that his wonderful mother is right about everything. :P I liked him and I think I connected more with him than with Celeste, even when he got crazy random ideas. lol! He and Celeste were pretty cute together. :)
The rest of his family was great! I loved Maggie and Ethan, and I enjoyed the brief glances we got in their POV. The kids of course were adorable.
Like I said before, the plot took small bit to get going, but once we did, I read a huge chunk of this book in one sitting. The threat of war is lurking throughout the book. Bounty hunters are after Celeste. And then an attack hits the town sending the story speeding on a crazy ride towards a killer ending! I was talking to the book (which I do quite frequently) hoping certain characters wouldn't make decisions or actually get their act together. And then it just ended! Not fair! :)
So yeah, can't wait for book 2 because I'm excited to see where this plot twist will take us! It was a really neat book and I'm really glad I picked this book up for review. Thanks to the author for a copy! :) Highly recommended!
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So I will admit that this book started out a little slow for me. But by chapter 4-5 it just took off! Don't get me wrong, the first chapter is a really gripping and strong start, so I think it might have been me that took some extra time to read.
Celeste was a great character, but I didn't really feel like I connected with her as much as I wanted to. We started spending more time in Mick's head and kind of lost her in the middle of the book. But the ending made up for that.
So Mick. The impulsive soldier forced to come home due to a wound and discovers his family is hiding a slave...illegally. Thankfully he's not a jerk about it for very long and sees that his wonderful mother is right about everything. :P I liked him and I think I connected more with him than with Celeste, even when he got crazy random ideas. lol! He and Celeste were pretty cute together. :)
The rest of his family was great! I loved Maggie and Ethan, and I enjoyed the brief glances we got in their POV. The kids of course were adorable.
Like I said before, the plot took small bit to get going, but once we did, I read a huge chunk of this book in one sitting. The threat of war is lurking throughout the book. Bounty hunters are after Celeste. And then an attack hits the town sending the story speeding on a crazy ride towards a killer ending! I was talking to the book (which I do quite frequently) hoping certain characters wouldn't make decisions or actually get their act together. And then it just ended! Not fair! :)
So yeah, can't wait for book 2 because I'm excited to see where this plot twist will take us! It was a really neat book and I'm really glad I picked this book up for review. Thanks to the author for a copy! :) Highly recommended!
October 31, 2017
Thank you very much to the author for giving me a copy of her book for review!
First of all—I have to stop and say that cover is SO PRETTY.
Okay—on to the review! :)
I thought Disowned was a good read! It’s a sweet story of love and redemption, the story of a runaway slave and a soldier.
One of the things I particularly liked was how distinct Mick and Celeste’s character voices were. They come from different background, and their narratives were spot-on. Sometimes in books that switch between character perspectives they all sound the same. Not with Disowned—I always knew whose head we were in.
And I’m so grateful to find a book with nice parental figures. Too often all of the adult characters are evil or clueless, so I greatly appreciated the actively-involved, kind parents in Disowned.
Some mature topics were also handled delicately. I would caution younger readers due to some tough topics, but overall they were handled tastefully.
The negatives I saw were that the romance developed a little too quickly (in my opinion) and there were a couple uses of very mild language (nothing too harsh or frequent—just something I wasn’t expecting). Overall, though, I enjoyed this one a lot!
And after that cliffhanger, I’m eager for the next book!
First of all—I have to stop and say that cover is SO PRETTY.
Okay—on to the review! :)
I thought Disowned was a good read! It’s a sweet story of love and redemption, the story of a runaway slave and a soldier.
One of the things I particularly liked was how distinct Mick and Celeste’s character voices were. They come from different background, and their narratives were spot-on. Sometimes in books that switch between character perspectives they all sound the same. Not with Disowned—I always knew whose head we were in.
And I’m so grateful to find a book with nice parental figures. Too often all of the adult characters are evil or clueless, so I greatly appreciated the actively-involved, kind parents in Disowned.
Some mature topics were also handled delicately. I would caution younger readers due to some tough topics, but overall they were handled tastefully.
The negatives I saw were that the romance developed a little too quickly (in my opinion) and there were a couple uses of very mild language (nothing too harsh or frequent—just something I wasn’t expecting). Overall, though, I enjoyed this one a lot!
And after that cliffhanger, I’m eager for the next book!
November 12, 2019
If you like non-magical fantasy with a strong dash of romance about a girl who fights against incredible odds to find freedom and her place in the world, then this is for you.
Celeste is a slave girl who yearns desperately for more. When she dramatically escapes a cruel buyer, she finds a warm and loving family who accept her. If you like the rare stories that show a consistently warm and loving family where the husband and wife are in one accord throughout, you will find this here.
Celeste's interactions with a strange new world are one of the highlights of this book. So too is the return of Mick, a loyal soldier, to his family home. He is horrified to find Celeste is there and is determined to obey the law and turn her in to the authorities.
This is a well-written debut novel and is the first in a series. Hence it ends on a cliffhanger as the men who seek to control Celeste and take away her freedom strike.
Celeste is a slave girl who yearns desperately for more. When she dramatically escapes a cruel buyer, she finds a warm and loving family who accept her. If you like the rare stories that show a consistently warm and loving family where the husband and wife are in one accord throughout, you will find this here.
Celeste's interactions with a strange new world are one of the highlights of this book. So too is the return of Mick, a loyal soldier, to his family home. He is horrified to find Celeste is there and is determined to obey the law and turn her in to the authorities.
This is a well-written debut novel and is the first in a series. Hence it ends on a cliffhanger as the men who seek to control Celeste and take away her freedom strike.
July 17, 2018
Though 'Disowned' is a fantasy novel by a New Zealand author, I feel like big aspects of the plot can easily be applied to slavery in the USA's own history.
I'll admit that, yes, the first chapter was a little hard for me to sink into right away, but once I did, the characters and imagery became so real to me that it was quite incredible, I LOVE the overall plot — as I said above, it definitely reminds me of slavery in the USA's own history — and the characters, especially Celeste and Mick, felt especially real and true for their ages and rankings. They — especially Celeste — read in ways that both seems natural for their settings, while also appealing to modern readers who don't live in fantasy lands.
I was approached by the author to read and review Disowned because she wanted to know whether 'Disowned' was a little too preachy or not. However, while I definitely am not much of a religious person, I didn't find the religious aspects very forced-upon at all. Personally, I'm not sure whether the non-preachiness has to do with the fact that their Higher Being isn't called God — instead, rather, he's called Etra — but I think the book does a good job of interweaving religion even for readers who may not be particularly fond of the subject. Plus, the aspect is woven naturally into their lives so the times that religion IS mentioned, it reads like it's MEANT to be there — not just used to be a tool of preachy preachiness. If that makes sense.
I really, really like how Celeste and Mick's relationship unfolds throughout the book. Mick approaches her with caution at first, as he should, but I like how Celeste, though shy and understandably nervous, can actually take a stand for herself as well — especially so in the barn scene when she was trying to sneak off with the horse. Celeste is timid, but she also has a backbone, which I LOVE — too many times in YA it seems like it's just one or the other with main (especially female) characters.
Overall, I actually enjoyed this book a lot more than what I was expecting. Celeste and Mick are both likable and read very naturally, and I would recommend to any fantasy lover! As I said before, I don't know if this was intentional, but I loved how fantasy interweaves with the historical parallels, and religion is dealt with in a way that I can respect. A highly worthy read!
I'll admit that, yes, the first chapter was a little hard for me to sink into right away, but once I did, the characters and imagery became so real to me that it was quite incredible, I LOVE the overall plot — as I said above, it definitely reminds me of slavery in the USA's own history — and the characters, especially Celeste and Mick, felt especially real and true for their ages and rankings. They — especially Celeste — read in ways that both seems natural for their settings, while also appealing to modern readers who don't live in fantasy lands.
I was approached by the author to read and review Disowned because she wanted to know whether 'Disowned' was a little too preachy or not. However, while I definitely am not much of a religious person, I didn't find the religious aspects very forced-upon at all. Personally, I'm not sure whether the non-preachiness has to do with the fact that their Higher Being isn't called God — instead, rather, he's called Etra — but I think the book does a good job of interweaving religion even for readers who may not be particularly fond of the subject. Plus, the aspect is woven naturally into their lives so the times that religion IS mentioned, it reads like it's MEANT to be there — not just used to be a tool of preachy preachiness. If that makes sense.
I really, really like how Celeste and Mick's relationship unfolds throughout the book. Mick approaches her with caution at first, as he should, but I like how Celeste, though shy and understandably nervous, can actually take a stand for herself as well — especially so in the barn scene when she was trying to sneak off with the horse. Celeste is timid, but she also has a backbone, which I LOVE — too many times in YA it seems like it's just one or the other with main (especially female) characters.
Overall, I actually enjoyed this book a lot more than what I was expecting. Celeste and Mick are both likable and read very naturally, and I would recommend to any fantasy lover! As I said before, I don't know if this was intentional, but I loved how fantasy interweaves with the historical parallels, and religion is dealt with in a way that I can respect. A highly worthy read!
August 9, 2018
This first book in the Allegiance series shows a promising start. While I wasn't as invested in the characters as I would have liked, the plot held my interest and the writing was pretty good.
WHAT I LIKED:
-I'm always down for a good dystopian/fantasy/speculative thing and Disowned had an intriguing world that I'd like to know more about. I do wish there'd been a little more time spent on world-building, but overall I was satisfied.
-Asher! Liked him much better than Mick (puh-lease say that Asher and Celeste become A Thing in the later books). He was great.
-The writing. Kept me turning pages (well, figuratively, 'cause I read this on my tablet). Really interested in the rest of this series now.
WHAT I DIDN'T LIKE:
-As I mentioned, I didn't full connect with any of the characters (except Asher). Maybe that's because the book was written in a slightly distant first person, IDK. The monks seem cool, though. Really like to know more about them.
-There were times when I saw that the writing could use some polishing, but...that's about it for 'what I didn't like'. It's just that characters tend to make or break a book (for me) so if I can't get behind many - or any - of them, it tends to be a three-star read. Good, just not the best.
I received a free copy of this book from the author in exchange for my honest review
WHAT I LIKED:
-I'm always down for a good dystopian/fantasy/speculative thing and Disowned had an intriguing world that I'd like to know more about. I do wish there'd been a little more time spent on world-building, but overall I was satisfied.
-Asher! Liked him much better than Mick (puh-lease say that Asher and Celeste become A Thing in the later books). He was great.
-The writing. Kept me turning pages (well, figuratively, 'cause I read this on my tablet). Really interested in the rest of this series now.
WHAT I DIDN'T LIKE:
-As I mentioned, I didn't full connect with any of the characters (except Asher). Maybe that's because the book was written in a slightly distant first person, IDK. The monks seem cool, though. Really like to know more about them.
-There were times when I saw that the writing could use some polishing, but...that's about it for 'what I didn't like'. It's just that characters tend to make or break a book (for me) so if I can't get behind many - or any - of them, it tends to be a three-star read. Good, just not the best.
I received a free copy of this book from the author in exchange for my honest review
January 21, 2018
These are the kinds of books that I like. The quiet, unassuming ones with faith and courage as the biggest themes, but has action, a dash of romance and enough mystery for you to be invested in these characters and their lives.
This fantasy world of Etraea and Kyraenea, two different countries and a girl, Celeste, trapped and caught in between piqued my interest from the get go. I loved that an Etraean mother who had essentially rescued and healed her, had her own ties to Kyraenea. The family dynamic was lovely in its portrayal of close knit, without being cliched and that their faith was and is their main priority.
Sarah Addison-Fox paced this book fairly well. We get glimpses of the other character's point of view but mostly, we're in Celeste's head and her fear of being taken back to slavery and her acceptance of what may come. The moments leading up to the war moved quickly and before I knew it, the book was over. Which explains my rating. I wished it didn't end so abruptly but I'm excited for Addison-Fox and would love to see where Celeste goes and what happens to the Haynes family.
***I received this book in exchange for an honest review. I am not required to write a positive one. These thoughts and opinions are my own.***
This fantasy world of Etraea and Kyraenea, two different countries and a girl, Celeste, trapped and caught in between piqued my interest from the get go. I loved that an Etraean mother who had essentially rescued and healed her, had her own ties to Kyraenea. The family dynamic was lovely in its portrayal of close knit, without being cliched and that their faith was and is their main priority.
Sarah Addison-Fox paced this book fairly well. We get glimpses of the other character's point of view but mostly, we're in Celeste's head and her fear of being taken back to slavery and her acceptance of what may come. The moments leading up to the war moved quickly and before I knew it, the book was over. Which explains my rating. I wished it didn't end so abruptly but I'm excited for Addison-Fox and would love to see where Celeste goes and what happens to the Haynes family.
***I received this book in exchange for an honest review. I am not required to write a positive one. These thoughts and opinions are my own.***
March 30, 2018
4.5 stars!
I enjoyed this story. A lot of indie books I read tend to struggle with pacing, but this story was spot on in pacing for its genre and themes. The prose was solid, leaving me confident in the author's storytelling and patient to let her take me wherever she wanted.
It is a fantasy story, but the way the story is told reminded me very much of historical fiction. I appreciated the focus on the value of human life. And Celeste's mistrust and struggle to find her identity was very realistically portrayed.
It is a quiet book with down to earth characters. If you are a fan of Christian historical fiction, you will probably love this book! The setting is just different enough to explore themes of slavery and the value of human life in a completely non-threatening way.
There were a couple of plot points in the story that didn't make much sense to me, but I tend to overanalyze that stuff and I doubt it would hinder you from enjoying the story.
I enjoyed this story. A lot of indie books I read tend to struggle with pacing, but this story was spot on in pacing for its genre and themes. The prose was solid, leaving me confident in the author's storytelling and patient to let her take me wherever she wanted.
It is a fantasy story, but the way the story is told reminded me very much of historical fiction. I appreciated the focus on the value of human life. And Celeste's mistrust and struggle to find her identity was very realistically portrayed.
It is a quiet book with down to earth characters. If you are a fan of Christian historical fiction, you will probably love this book! The setting is just different enough to explore themes of slavery and the value of human life in a completely non-threatening way.
There were a couple of plot points in the story that didn't make much sense to me, but I tend to overanalyze that stuff and I doubt it would hinder you from enjoying the story.
December 12, 2017
I definitely enjoyed this book. The characters and setting were excellent. I realize that this is Book one of a series, but I personally don’t appreciate when a book ends as abruptly as this one - no sort of wrap up of any of the various plot lines or warning that the end is coming. Still, the story was wonderful, despite some minor grammatical deficiencies. I especially enjoyed The worldbuilding of the two unique and distinct countries.
November 28, 2017
Review to come closer to blog tour :)
March 21, 2018
I was so enjoying this story, but then got at the 68% point and ran into a cuss word. As anyone who reads my reviews knows, I don't read stories with cussing in them - so I had to stop. Grrr!
January 29, 2018
It took me far too long to read this book, and that's due to lack of time on my part. It certainly wasn't the book's fault since I really wanted to gobble it up in one sitting.
I especially loved the world in this book. It is fantasy (in that it is set in a fictional world) yet there is nothing magical that I can recall in the book. The countries are also on the cusp of transitioning out of a rural, more medieval setting to a more modern one with guns, so there is a crazy mix of electric lights and guns yet still transportation by horses. I'm envisioning the war between the two countries going along the lines of the later US Civil War battles / WWI warfare. That's a really unique change from most fantasy that is fully medieval in its setting.
Celeste is a really interesting main character. She has a lot of hurt and lots of room to grow. This book doesn't try to make all of her growth happen all at once, but let's her take her time.
Mick, the main guy, has a lot of growing to do as well. He is torn between doing his duty and doing what is right, and the war begins to take a toll on him by the end.
I especially loved Maggie and Ethan! They were probably my favorite characters in the book!
While sometimes it can be confusing what is happening and some of the worldbuilding and character development could have been deepened in spots, it is still a really good first book by this author and I look forward to future books as the author grows!
There are a few spots of language (two or three, if I remember right). Mostly said by Mick, which to me felt very accurate for a soldier, even one that is a follower of this world's allegory for God. It can be a struggle for a soldier to not speak that sort of language after living in a barracks full of guys who do.
The romance was very mild and the book very clean. It is Christian fantasy with an allegorical God and Bible, but it is kept very mild and unobtrusive in this book.
After the ending of this book, I really can't wait for Dissemble!
I especially loved the world in this book. It is fantasy (in that it is set in a fictional world) yet there is nothing magical that I can recall in the book. The countries are also on the cusp of transitioning out of a rural, more medieval setting to a more modern one with guns, so there is a crazy mix of electric lights and guns yet still transportation by horses. I'm envisioning the war between the two countries going along the lines of the later US Civil War battles / WWI warfare. That's a really unique change from most fantasy that is fully medieval in its setting.
Celeste is a really interesting main character. She has a lot of hurt and lots of room to grow. This book doesn't try to make all of her growth happen all at once, but let's her take her time.
Mick, the main guy, has a lot of growing to do as well. He is torn between doing his duty and doing what is right, and the war begins to take a toll on him by the end.
I especially loved Maggie and Ethan! They were probably my favorite characters in the book!
While sometimes it can be confusing what is happening and some of the worldbuilding and character development could have been deepened in spots, it is still a really good first book by this author and I look forward to future books as the author grows!
There are a few spots of language (two or three, if I remember right). Mostly said by Mick, which to me felt very accurate for a soldier, even one that is a follower of this world's allegory for God. It can be a struggle for a soldier to not speak that sort of language after living in a barracks full of guys who do.
The romance was very mild and the book very clean. It is Christian fantasy with an allegorical God and Bible, but it is kept very mild and unobtrusive in this book.
After the ending of this book, I really can't wait for Dissemble!
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