I feel like, overall, this comic is a very good introduction/overview of Demacia's storyline, but it fails in providing any real depth and honestly leaves more questions than answers. I also feel like, and this somewhat of a common criticism anyway, Sylas is unjustly portrayed as the villain. We see first hand by the portrayal of the comic itself the cruelty of the mageseekers. Only a rebellion like he's staging would fix the issue of them existing and mistreating the mages. Lux's peaceful protest type deal is more like putting a band aid on an open wound.
Unless all of that is intentional for setting up the conflict between one side being an extremist and the other being too much of a pacifist, with an added flavour of them knowing each other and having been friends (even... more than friends?) then it's probably a mark of bad storytelling. If it IS intentional, then that makes this whole comic a 5 stars. But I think Riot's writing team shines best at portraying characters that are somewhat in the middle anyway, so we'll have to see.
As for the other characters, it's easy to see that Jarvan IV and Garen are honorable people (or at least they think they are) and are more or less just understood to be victims of the system, something that I do think is interesting. And considering Lux's betrothal to Jarvan IV that's going to definitely set up conflict because she wasn't exactly happy about it.
Overall, as an origin story for Lux and a set up for future, more fully fledged stories, this an excellent read. But as I said, it does pose too many questions and is taking a direction that has created ludonarrative dissonance among Runeterra lore fans in general. The next piece of media that I can engage with is The Mageseeker, which I will play, because there is no way I'm being left in the dark about what happens with these characters.
edit: I started playing the mageseeker, and it fixes a solid 70% of the problems I had with this comic. It still needed more flavour, but it's a start.
edit 2: I finished the mageseeker, and I still stand by that. It fixed the comic, sure. But I was left wanting a bit more, I think.
Overall, I'd say this is a 4 Stars, B tier read.
(Copied from my review on the 5th Issue of this comic)