The fourth book in the Coilhunter series might have had promise, but it couldn’t hold up to the challenge of being another entertaining book in this multi-book saga. Here’s why:
None of the books in author Dean F. Wilson’s series are particularly well-written, but what they do have is charm. There is a playful adventurous in the way he describes the action. Most of all, the tongue-in-cheek names for all the colorful characters are, to me, a major piece in why the first three Coilhunter books worked and this one didn’t. All the names are alliterations – Hammerback Harry, Rustbucket Riley, Buckhorn Bobby – and their back stories are usually something to look forward to.
Unfortunately, this important piece has been shunted into the corner for this book, and the few times it is allowed out, the pacing seems rushed. It is almost as if the author wished to get the explanations out of the way so he could go back to the story. For the world Mr. Wilson has created, however, the inhabitants ARE the story. It seems he forgot that in this recent book.
This leaves the interactions primarily between the Coilhunter (NOX), Oakley, and Porridge. Porridge is a one-dimensional character that overstayed his welcome in the book, yet the author carried the annoying pattern of speech (Porridge calls even fruit and vegetable names – cabbage, peach, plum, etc.) all the way to the last chapter. Oakley came on too late to save the book, which left NOX with little to interact with, almost making him a caricature of himself.
I was a fan of this series, but the change of style exposed some of the grammar issues that were easierfto overlook when I felt entertained. I am sure that Mr. Wilson’s fans will like this book, but for me, it became tedious and a chore to get to the last page. Three stars.