First book? 16? Alright, alright, alright.
Good job, Benjamin Vogt! So why only three stars? The genre and violence just aren't my cup of tea. I think you have an intriguing plot. I liked some of the characters (though I didn't have time to LOVE any of them in particular.) I appreciated that the language was kept clean and I think you are well on your way to author fame and fortune. By all means, keep writing! It is so cool what you have accomplished so far and yes, I will read future books too. P.S. I loved your acknowlegements at the end.