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The Elder Stones Saga #4
The Coming Chaos
The leader of the Ai’thol has worked for centuries on his plan to control the power of the stones. The final steps in that plan come into focus.
Altered and augmented by his increased connection to the metal lorcith, Haern must use this ability to protect the women he’s brought with him from the dangerous city of Dreshen. A series of attacks suggests a control over metal even Haern might not be able to withstand. Worse, the source of the attacks might be closer than he knows.
Daniel’s search for the remaining stone brings him to a surprising place. Once there, it becomes increasingly clear how little they know about the stones—or how to protect them. Answers require he learn how to master aspects of his powers that have been beyond him, but are essential for what is to come.
Lucy begins to suspect another threat that rivals even Olander Fahr. Learning more about this threat requires she chase the one person she fears most. If she can’t find and face the Architect, they won’t know what Olander Fahr intends in time to stop his plan.
Separated from the Great One, Ryn wants to understand her blessing, but she’s tasked with much more. Searching for answers reveals a deeper divide within the Ai’thol. As emissary, she shouldn’t be the one to fix it, but in the Great One’s absence, she might be the only one who can.
Power begins to gather to stop a great danger for more than the power of the Elder Stones is at stake.
Altered and augmented by his increased connection to the metal lorcith, Haern must use this ability to protect the women he’s brought with him from the dangerous city of Dreshen. A series of attacks suggests a control over metal even Haern might not be able to withstand. Worse, the source of the attacks might be closer than he knows.
Daniel’s search for the remaining stone brings him to a surprising place. Once there, it becomes increasingly clear how little they know about the stones—or how to protect them. Answers require he learn how to master aspects of his powers that have been beyond him, but are essential for what is to come.
Lucy begins to suspect another threat that rivals even Olander Fahr. Learning more about this threat requires she chase the one person she fears most. If she can’t find and face the Architect, they won’t know what Olander Fahr intends in time to stop his plan.
Separated from the Great One, Ryn wants to understand her blessing, but she’s tasked with much more. Searching for answers reveals a deeper divide within the Ai’thol. As emissary, she shouldn’t be the one to fix it, but in the Great One’s absence, she might be the only one who can.
Power begins to gather to stop a great danger for more than the power of the Elder Stones is at stake.
- GenresFantasy
662 pages, Kindle Edition
First published June 7, 2019
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January 14, 2020
Excellent storylines, well constructed world and magic system. Perhaps too much drama and difficulties around the acquisition of information, but good information is hard to Conner by.
Good, fast-paced, fantasy novel series. Character development is difficult to follow sometimes, as is the acquisition of knowledge which seems already acquired in some cases. Ryn’s storyline for example. But it’s a good read and addictive. Funny how I knew Daniel Elvrareth would be my favorite character before the first 25% of the first book was read. Please reconnect Haern’s storyline to the rest of the plot. Thx
Good, fast-paced, fantasy novel series. Character development is difficult to follow sometimes, as is the acquisition of knowledge which seems already acquired in some cases. Ryn’s storyline for example. But it’s a good read and addictive. Funny how I knew Daniel Elvrareth would be my favorite character before the first 25% of the first book was read. Please reconnect Haern’s storyline to the rest of the plot. Thx
July 9, 2019
Good story line
I like the story line, I think it's really interesting. The characters seem a bit under developed and I feel like they talk in monotone. The author doesn't use much in the way of words like he said, she cried, he said impatiently, etc. And I'm sorry but I hate the term, "How come ______" in a sentence. "Why" is a much better word. And questions in a book when it's not dialogue doesn't come across well either. I think the idea is great and interesting and I hope a bit more editing is done on future books.
I like the story line, I think it's really interesting. The characters seem a bit under developed and I feel like they talk in monotone. The author doesn't use much in the way of words like he said, she cried, he said impatiently, etc. And I'm sorry but I hate the term, "How come ______" in a sentence. "Why" is a much better word. And questions in a book when it's not dialogue doesn't come across well either. I think the idea is great and interesting and I hope a bit more editing is done on future books.
March 10, 2026
3 - 3.5 Stars
The Coming Chaos is the fourth book in The Elder Stones Saga by D.K. Holmberg’s. I was drawn into an epic YA fantasy series, with plenty of mystery, and high-stakes. This adventure will definitely appeal to readers who enjoy immersive worlds and adventure quests.
This series follows a sweeping journey where ancient magic, political intrigue, and personal destiny are intertwined — all revolving around the mysterious and powerful Elder Stones.
A richly imagined, steadily-building fantasy saga with heart, intrigue, and an interesting magic system.
Happy Reading…
The Coming Chaos is the fourth book in The Elder Stones Saga by D.K. Holmberg’s. I was drawn into an epic YA fantasy series, with plenty of mystery, and high-stakes. This adventure will definitely appeal to readers who enjoy immersive worlds and adventure quests.
This series follows a sweeping journey where ancient magic, political intrigue, and personal destiny are intertwined — all revolving around the mysterious and powerful Elder Stones.
A richly imagined, steadily-building fantasy saga with heart, intrigue, and an interesting magic system.
Happy Reading…
March 2, 2022
Book 4
Book 4 had errors throughout and was okay overall. The characters and plot were a bit slow and repetitive in places. The characters keep repeating themselves with new people and do not seem to get any new ideas on what is needed. The story has become a bit boring with running around everywhere and trying to save people. It is dragging more and more as the books continue on.
Book 4 had errors throughout and was okay overall. The characters and plot were a bit slow and repetitive in places. The characters keep repeating themselves with new people and do not seem to get any new ideas on what is needed. The story has become a bit boring with running around everywhere and trying to save people. It is dragging more and more as the books continue on.
August 3, 2019
I just can't stop reading this series and afraid that it will end :-( D.K. Holmberg's writing style is so good to follow. I'm starting to read the last book of this series, "The Depth of Deceit" and have to wait for the next one come out.
January 11, 2020
Fantasy Mystery
This really deserves a 5-star rating, but this series is irritating me. I am losing sleep trying to get to the end, wanting to know if my suspicions are right. I could always put down other mystery stories, but this one..!
This really deserves a 5-star rating, but this series is irritating me. I am losing sleep trying to get to the end, wanting to know if my suspicions are right. I could always put down other mystery stories, but this one..!
June 11, 2019
Good series
Well written series with well developed main characters. A few typos , but not enough to detract from the overall quality of the book. I'm looking forward to book 5 .
Well written series with well developed main characters. A few typos , but not enough to detract from the overall quality of the book. I'm looking forward to book 5 .
June 13, 2019
Intrigue
More complex leaving you with a lot to think about and puzzle out what is going to happen and who is the real threat.
More complex leaving you with a lot to think about and puzzle out what is going to happen and who is the real threat.
September 20, 2019
Coming Chaos
Interesting and entertaining story. Can’t wait to see who the real villain is. I hope it’s not Carthage’s, she is one of the good guys!!
Interesting and entertaining story. Can’t wait to see who the real villain is. I hope it’s not Carthage’s, she is one of the good guys!!
September 26, 2019
Never ending amusement!
I love this author and so far every book Ive read of these stories. Almost all of them. Cant wait to see what happens next.
I love this author and so far every book Ive read of these stories. Almost all of them. Cant wait to see what happens next.
October 5, 2019
Amazing
This book is amazing. I would highly recommend this book to anyone! I can’t wait to read the next book .
This book is amazing. I would highly recommend this book to anyone! I can’t wait to read the next book .
July 2, 2021
Excellent
The story draws the reader in and has them on the edge of their seat at times. Complex plot masterfully executed.
The story draws the reader in and has them on the edge of their seat at times. Complex plot masterfully executed.
November 8, 2024
gripping
I couldn’t put the book down as it was captivating. I am looking forward to reading the next book in the series
I couldn’t put the book down as it was captivating. I am looking forward to reading the next book in the series
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