This Nanny’s Hard Work Pays off . . . In the Bedroom.
Rich AF That’s what they call us. We have more money and power than two men could ever dream of—or need. But we’re also flawed AF One of us lost our wife, and the other hides behind a string of one-night-stands. Besides the kids, we’ve closed ourselves off from connecting with anyone, and we prefer it that way—until we meet her. A gorgeous beauty standing on our doorstep with eyes like an angel, and a body made for sin. Screwing the Nanny is a bad idea, right? Even if she is the first woman to get both our motors going in a long while . . . We should keep things professional, but we’ve also never been ones to follow the rules. So we say f*ck it and give in, unable to keep our hands off her luscious curves and thick, wet lips. We’re gonna give her satisfaction like she’s never experienced before and we’ll add in a dash of panty-dropping kink to show her that pleasure can be enjoyed even more, when you bring in a bit of pain. She better get ready . . . because naughty times are coming in our playroom.
The Nanny and The Billionaires is a is a standalone, butterfly-inducing romance, from your new favorite author Harper West. This one is ALL about her pleasure, with a sprinkling of BDSM and a guaranteed HEA. Get ready, these billionaires are loaded in their banks accounts . . . and their pants.
SUCH WASTED POTENTIAL. I can deal with occasional spelling and grammar issues. Not multiple of each on every page. I don't know if the heroine's name was Kinsley, Kingsley, or Linsley. The smut made no sense. The heroine is not likeable. Parts of the plot made no sense whatsoever. Dialogue involving the heros would get mixed up, and names would be switched. This was by far the worst book I have ever read. It reads like a rough draft that wasn't even read before it was published. Don't waste your time. I love.mfm stories and was happy to find an author who wrote quite a few of them. I won't check out any other by this author
I want to love this book and aside from my issues with the book the storyline is one that I was intrigued with and had high hopes for and it started off great and then started rolling downhill! I really liked the characters: Kinsley, Cam & Tim...I thought they had a great bond and passionate chemistry! The plot of the story is a predictable one but it’s a tale as old as time and I love them! The thing that made me rate this book so low was the word errors, misspelled words and the grammar! I’m really not part of the grammar police and I can generally overlook such errors but there were just too many to count. There were times when the word “on” was meant to be the word “of” and or simple words were just missing to complete the sentence! I think if this book had another chance to go through an editing process that it would have so much potential to be a five star read!!
How has this not been edited yet based on the reviews? Numerous grammatical errors and missing words, epilogue a joke with a completely different name for the nanny character, and scenes that make absolutely no sense (nanny suddenly stripping her clothes off, best friends suddenly breaking up over paternity question, main character running away when pregnant, the minister refusing to marry based on an objection, to name a few). The nanny sounded so mature dealing with various issues the children had, but then her behavior demonstrated such immaturity that it seemed like two different people. The storyline and characters need more development. At the very least, it needs serious editing and proofreading.
This book had potential until the epilogue. How do you misspell the main characters name not once but all throughout the epilogue. It was so confusing for a moment agai I had to go back to make sure I wasn’t losing it. I didn’t understand how the bear friend and father’s relationship could be considered homosexual with him helping him. It had to be common knowledge that he was mourning the death of his wife and his bear friend was helping him. Also did Cam continue to pursue his own business? So many unanswered questions.
WOW, what a disappointment. This by no means measured up to Harper West's other book, " The Billionaires secret baby. Too many proofreading errors on each page that it was really distracting. That is all part of the overall quality of writing. I'd almost believe this isn't her work. Such a shame, for the story line was a good one.
Nice read, however, kind of difficult with all the misspelling - ie. wonton s/b wanton, Lindsay s/b Kindsay. Just to name a couple. I can associate with Tim's feelings. Been there. Losing the love of your life is difficult. Tim was blessed to have a best friend like Cam and adding Kindsay to the mix was the right ingredient.
This book was good. Story line was good. What I couldn’t get past was all the typos and errors that should have been caught during editing. The last chapter they even spell the main characters name incorrectly 😳. I would have rated it better if. Could get past the excessive amount of errors that shouldn’t be.
Needs a editor. They couldn’t even spell the lady’s name right. I also hate reel-reading sentences. Finish a chapter the next chapter is the last paragraph I read coming from the others POV. Story line wasn’t even realistic and who the hell strips in front of them barely knowing them? No character development, never felt like I knew them. It was raunchy
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Good story marred by poor editing. The heroine's name changed in the last chapter, thought she had two babies at first. She also had a different name on some of the chapter headings. There are repeated sentences, missing words. I liked the heroes and their story . Could have been a 5 but for the editing.
This book was steaming hot. The passion and steamy scenes was hot. The emotional turmoil the characters went through was unbelievable. The story ended with a happily ever after.
This is my first book from this author. The storyline and the characters were awesome. I usually try to give the author the appropriate rating, as I'm sure they put a lot into it. But there were so many mistakes with the words and wording it was hard to follow her thought.
It was a good book. My only issues were spelling errors, a lot of them. And the last chapter you have the main character's name spelled wrong. If I wasn't into the book and wanting to know how things ended, I would have stopped read8ng it halfway thru.
This time a young woman gets a job with a widow billionaire as his nanny to his two young children & runs into his best friend thus the fireworks start! A good all round read both story & characters!
I enjoyed this story a lot. Both Billionaires are masculine hunks who seem to take charge. I did kinda feel like some bits got skipped that would have been fun to explore.
Wonderful story, great characters & very sexy at times. It does need a proof read, lot of spelling mistakes or words missing/switched. Poor Kinsley’s was Linsley at the end. I love all of your books!! Keep them coming!!!
A great story it’s just such a shame the editing let this book down so badly. I would have given it more stars but when you have the wrong words used, repeated sentences and to top it off, the wrong name used. I just draw the line, sorry.