1.5 stars
This was garbage. G-A-R-B-A-G-E.
Marianne is the daughter of the most dangerous pirate sailing the Eastern Isles. His crew call themselves “Vipers”, and they are all merciless killers. Marianne has been trained to join them since she was a little girl, but, in her heart, she knows she isn’t a killer. She doesn’t want to join her father’s crew. She’d rather learn to hone her healing skills and help people instead of murdering them.
Upon the day of her initiation, she makes her choice and runs away. Leaving behind her life spent on board a ship and her once-trusted friend and companion Bronn. But she knows she can’t run forever because her father will have his revenge.
First of all: the writing.
I felt like I was reading a badly-written fanfic most of the time. Here are just a few examples that made me cringe:
“Across the meadow, using the height of the flowers for cover, a she-wolf is prowling towards us, her intent clear. We’re lunch.”
“Hunger I hadn’t realised I had roars to take over.”
“… beady of sweat trickle down my forehead to hang like diamonds from my lashes.”
And one of my personal favourites:
“Darkness has me in its unrelenting grip. Revenge is my mistress and I will be obedient.”
To top this, sometimes an incredibly graphic death would follow a cheesy and cringe-worthy paragraph and vice versa. I do love a bit of gore, but it felt like characters were killed for shock factor? Just for the hell of it? One character got their eyes gouged out by Marianne’s father towards the end of the book. Like we needed a reminder that he is the ultimate baddie.
Second: world-building, which was non-existent.
We don’t even know how big the world/continent/country the plot takes place in is. All we know is: there is the sea (it doesn’t have a name, okay) and twelves isles. Those twelves isles were once united under one banner, but a war tore them apart. The six Eastern Isles are ruled by a King, but no one really knows what happened to the six Western Isles. No one dares to venture too deep into the Western Isles’ waters. The Isles themselves have different names like “Mist Isle” or “Rock Isle” (you see where this is going, don’t you?). We are told about the different isles in little paragraphs of info-dumping, but they are often only described by one characteristic. Like hey, King’s Isle is where the King lives, the Third Isles grows flowers, the Rock Isles is where they mine for minerals. YAWN, YAWN.
Oh, magic also exists in this world/realm/whatever, but it has supposedly disappeared alongside those who know how to wield it. But being the special snowflake Marianne is, of course, she can wield it (which she does by having read a few books and afterwards mumbling a few words). BAM! Of course, the magic system and how it works wasn’t explained.
Third: the plot. Bro, where do I start?
The storyline jumped around a lot. Six months go by within a single chapter. Characters are introduced and killed within a dozen pages, broken relationships are repaired, and love is rekindled. The book still felt too long! The ending was very predictable, so when I’d finished the book, I was like: “so?” I simply didn’t care.
Fourth: the characters.
They were so flat, haha; it was almost ridiculous. Marianne was very soft and weak, and her “I can’t kill another human being, uwuuu, please don’t make me” attitude annoyed the hell out of me. But then she went on and on about how she had to stop her father and that she would do what she must. All tell, now show. She was a very generic YA characters (lost princess to another kingdom, dead mother, arranged marriage to save the kingdom, in love with her best friend etc.).
The rest of the characters were so one-sided as well. How do you recognise a baddie? Easy: when they are either ugly (missing teeth, eye-patch) or want to rape Marianne within the first few minutes of meeting her, you know exactly who they are. Well done, now you know what all baddies in this book have in common!
Fifth: the love story.
There was zero tension between Marianne and her former best friend “who only betrayed her to save her” Bronn. Zill. Null. Nada. At the beginning of the book, Marianne’s father forces her into an arranged marriage with Prince Torin. This, of course, makes Bronn jealous, but Marianne doesn’t yet know he is in love with her. The only relief to this situation was that it wasn’t really a love-triangle, for the prince is in love with his bodyguard (called “Sharpe” damn, that name sucks), which means…
… THE ONLY GOOD THING ABOUT THIS BOOK WERE THE TWO GAY SIDE CHARACTERS.