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Demon Party
This world needs your help. Leave your body behind and be born into the world of Jurop. Kill the monsters of this world and your new cloned body will live forever. Build your party and set forth on an adventure. The world is yours for the taking. Just don't stop killing monsters. We mean it. Don't forget. You came here because you wanted to. Join the Demon Party and adventure with Gene the harbinger of the dark faction as he struggles to make sense of his new world and his place in it.
153 pages, Kindle Edition
Published March 18, 2019
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January 23, 2021
Ok, but in severe need of a competent editor. The punctuation and even sentence structure were messed up enough that it was difficult to follow in parts.
Concept had/s potential, but I feel that the author is trying too hard to make goofy characters and the tone of the book isn't consistent. The comic relief character is one of the most difficult to get right, so a re-focus on the "serious" parts of the story would help. That doesn't mean turning it into a grimdark slog, but I suggest that the attempts to lighten the mood didn't really work as intended.
Concept had/s potential, but I feel that the author is trying too hard to make goofy characters and the tone of the book isn't consistent. The comic relief character is one of the most difficult to get right, so a re-focus on the "serious" parts of the story would help. That doesn't mean turning it into a grimdark slog, but I suggest that the attempts to lighten the mood didn't really work as intended.
May 3, 2023
It needs work
The story started interesting. Then it slowly defended into incomprehensible. And the third act was very dumb. I wanted to like it, but the decision of the author to kill a certain character made me lost all interest in this story. Random meaningless deaths in a world of magic and an author willing and culprit of using deus exmachina moments for some character but not others. It just makes me sick.
The story started interesting. Then it slowly defended into incomprehensible. And the third act was very dumb. I wanted to like it, but the decision of the author to kill a certain character made me lost all interest in this story. Random meaningless deaths in a world of magic and an author willing and culprit of using deus exmachina moments for some character but not others. It just makes me sick.
October 29, 2020
Enjoyed it.
First off let me just apologize for I'm not good at reviews. Certainty a twist on the reincarnation theme. Lots of behind the scene plans. I thought it was good. would like to read more.
First off let me just apologize for I'm not good at reviews. Certainty a twist on the reincarnation theme. Lots of behind the scene plans. I thought it was good. would like to read more.
February 13, 2021
Will definitely pick up the next one
Fun read, it gets added to the list of series I'll be reading this year. Has great set-up for the next book. First time reading this author, so I'll check out his other books as well.
Fun read, it gets added to the list of series I'll be reading this year. Has great set-up for the next book. First time reading this author, so I'll check out his other books as well.
September 12, 2021
An okay read
This book is okay but with it's premise it could be great. I think the biggest problem with this book is all of the logical leaps the author makes. It's like he couldn't get his thoughts to the paper fast enough so skipped words.
This book is okay but with it's premise it could be great. I think the biggest problem with this book is all of the logical leaps the author makes. It's like he couldn't get his thoughts to the paper fast enough so skipped words.
January 30, 2021
Good book
I enjoyed it it was a little wordy with some things but it was good over all I’d read any sequels
I enjoyed it it was a little wordy with some things but it was good over all I’d read any sequels
February 25, 2021
This was fun. I wish the author had more books out, though. It's a bummer to see so much potential in a series that hasn't been realized yet.
August 9, 2021
Fun Kindle Unlimited read
Would I pay $5 for this book? Probably not, but it was a fun, quick Kindle Unlimited Read. The story got markedly better when the MC started to work with his new party and other characters viewpoints started to be shown.
Would I pay $5 for this book? Probably not, but it was a fun, quick Kindle Unlimited Read. The story got markedly better when the MC started to work with his new party and other characters viewpoints started to be shown.
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