2.5 stars - I liked it well enough but not enough for 3 stars
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Charlie Parker, age 30, works for her brother's private detective firm. Single, no kids, with only a dog to tie her down, Charlie likes her work and has few regrets that her boyfriend eloped with her best friend. That was 10 years ago and she's moved on- or has she? When her former best friend, Stacy North, reenters her life, Charlie is surprised. Stacy has come to Charlie for help. Stacy is missing a Rolex watch Brad gave her. It's half of a his and hers set and he'll know if she buys a replacement. Stacy believes the watch was taken by a man in her home, a man with whom she had a one night stand affair. Stacy wants Charlie's help to get the watch back. While Charlie isn't really a detective, her brother has taught her a few things that help her in her investigation. When the man turns up dead, Stacy is beside herself with worry that the police will come calling and Brad will find out what she did. Stacy needs Charlie to investigate the murder and clear her name before the police discover Stacy's affair. Stacy was there for Charlie when Charlie needed her and though she repaid Charlie by stealing Brad, it sounds as if she did Charlie a favor. Charlie has just enough friendly feelings left for Stacy to try to clear her old friend of suspicion.
This mystery wasn't bad. I didn't care for the writing style. Charlie is very detached, as if she's giving a briefing after the fact. She is a very unemotional storyteller. I give the author a little leeway since this was her first novel written over 20 years ago. Young readers prepare to be amazed by such quaint things as phone books, pay phones and maps. (Before Google and Smart Phones? *gasp*) The mystery itself isn't bad. I was interested enough to stick with it after the initial boring search for Stacy's watch. I wondered who killed Gary all the way to the end. I was so certain it was one person so I was very surprised by the reveal. That thought had not even crossed my mind!
This story is also not cozy enough for me. It lacks small town charm and quirky characters. Charlie's dog, Rusty, comes along for the ride but plays no major role in the story. I was sadly disappointed. Charlie may be unemotional from the death of her parents and the betrayal of her best friend and boyfriend. She doesn't have much backstory here yet except for her relationship with Stacy.
The other probable recurring characters are Charlie's divorced brother Ron and his doughnut bringing receptionist Sally. Neither is in the story long enough to get to know them or like them. Charlie's other brother, Paul, and his family show up for comic relief. The author completely nailed the behavior of small children and their frazzled parents. I felt like my own sister was visiting with her young children! They do add some light humor to the story. Detective Kent, Ron's friend, will probably also be a recurring character. He's a very by the book cop and doesn't have any charming interactions with Charlie. He doesn't reveal much about the investigation or in personality.
None of the secondary characters are appealing. Brad sounds like a horrible abuser and Charlie was lucky to escape him. While I felt bad for Stacy, I don't condone what she did. I'm not sure I would have been as patient as Charlie. Gary Detweiller sounds like a real prize (not!) too. The wealthy people, aside from the lawyer, are all annoyingly stereotypical. The poor people are also annoying stereotypical : beer drinking, rich people hating, lazy slobs. I did feel sorry for Jean and I kind of liked her. I didn't understand why she was still with Gary if he was such a loser and a bad influence on their son.
Overall, this wasn't a bad first effort. The characters didn't charm me into wanting to read more of the series, but the library does have them (aside from this first one-go figure) so I may end up picking up the series later on.