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The Deadly Trap
Discover an absolutely gripping crime thriller which will captivate you till the stunning ending.
Bianca Rice's fourteen year old sister has been kidnapped by a notorious serial killer. And being the hero that she is, Bianca decides to go in after her... Too bad she thought the only thing in danger was her life.
Bianca Rice's fourteen year old sister has been kidnapped by a notorious serial killer. And being the hero that she is, Bianca decides to go in after her... Too bad she thought the only thing in danger was her life.
190 pages, Kindle Edition
Published March 23, 2019
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Displaying 1 - 9 of 9 reviews
May 15, 2019
Who was the proofreader????
I thought this book was far fetched. How many times does Bianca save herself and go back for more after almost being killed?
Who proofread this ? Multiple grammar and spelling mistakes. “the commentators were tied up to their trunks” ??? “They where watching” ??? As the book went on, I lost track of all of the mistakes.
I do not recommend this book.
I thought this book was far fetched. How many times does Bianca save herself and go back for more after almost being killed?
Who proofread this ? Multiple grammar and spelling mistakes. “the commentators were tied up to their trunks” ??? “They where watching” ??? As the book went on, I lost track of all of the mistakes.
I do not recommend this book.
June 17, 2019
Grade school editing
Almost every page had typos of grammatical errors. These made it difficult to follow story line. Out of curiosity I managed to finish reading. But very frustrating to stay engaged.
Almost every page had typos of grammatical errors. These made it difficult to follow story line. Out of curiosity I managed to finish reading. But very frustrating to stay engaged.
June 19, 2019
Unfortunately, this author came across as amateurish in his writing. Also, he needs to find a new publisher. The grammatical errors within this book were the worst I've ever seen from any publisher. There were misspellings, grammatical errors, missing words, unclear thoughts, etc.
June 29, 2019
Good plot but....
The story line was good with some twists that kept it interesting. There were so many typographical errors that it made reading difficult at times. I would like to see how it ends
The story line was good with some twists that kept it interesting. There were so many typographical errors that it made reading difficult at times. I would like to see how it ends
August 8, 2019
Interesting
I hope Jack Parker writes book 2. I want to see what happens next. This book was interesting and I felt like scenes throughout could really happen. Frightening. I became attached to characters.
I hope Jack Parker writes book 2. I want to see what happens next. This book was interesting and I felt like scenes throughout could really happen. Frightening. I became attached to characters.
April 17, 2019
Great read
Very gripping story to think there really are people in this world like that makes you think about what is happening to this world.
Very gripping story to think there really are people in this world like that makes you think about what is happening to this world.
April 22, 2019
Not finished
This thing is so full of typos I could not finish it total waste of time and money. C!Dan it up and maybe just maybe I will give it another chance.
This thing is so full of typos I could not finish it total waste of time and money. C!Dan it up and maybe just maybe I will give it another chance.
April 29, 2019
Needs proofing
The story is interesting and different but there are so many spelling and grammar errors that it is distracting and you have to back to understand what you read.
The story is interesting and different but there are so many spelling and grammar errors that it is distracting and you have to back to understand what you read.
May 15, 2019
Needs a Good Proofreader
A good plot did not make up for a book full of significant grammar, spelling, and punctuation errors. It was obvious no-one proofread it.
A good plot did not make up for a book full of significant grammar, spelling, and punctuation errors. It was obvious no-one proofread it.
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