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Pallor Mortis
A Retelling of the Bride of Frankenstein
We were made from each other and others long since dead.
Father is a madman on the brink of a scientific breakthrough and he's using his progress with us to create the perfect beautiful creature.
My brother is afraid of him, but I'm not. I'll sacrifice every last fiber of my being to keep him safe and end this madness once and for all.
Time is running out.
Our bodies are slowly starting to decay no matter what Father treats us with.
My name is Elsa, and this is the story of how we tried to stop a monster.
Pallor Mortis is A Horror Bite; a short story that puts all of the elements loved about horror into one quick read.
We were made from each other and others long since dead.
Father is a madman on the brink of a scientific breakthrough and he's using his progress with us to create the perfect beautiful creature.
My brother is afraid of him, but I'm not. I'll sacrifice every last fiber of my being to keep him safe and end this madness once and for all.
Time is running out.
Our bodies are slowly starting to decay no matter what Father treats us with.
My name is Elsa, and this is the story of how we tried to stop a monster.
Pallor Mortis is A Horror Bite; a short story that puts all of the elements loved about horror into one quick read.
- GenresHorrorShort Stories
23 pages, Kindle Edition
Published March 23, 2019
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About the author
Yolanda Olson
222 books1,884 followersYolanda Olson is a USA Today Bestselling and award-winning author. Born and raised in Bridgeport, CT where she currently resides, she usually spends her time watching her favorite channel, Investigation Discovery.
Occasionally, she takes a break to write books and test the limits of her mind. Also an avid horror movie fan, she likes to incorporate dark elements into the majority of her books.
You can keep in touch with her on Facebook, Twitter, and Instagram.
Occasionally, she takes a break to write books and test the limits of her mind. Also an avid horror movie fan, she likes to incorporate dark elements into the majority of her books.
You can keep in touch with her on Facebook, Twitter, and Instagram.
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March 31, 2019
Beautiful play on Frankenstein and the bride of Frankenstein.
This story takes Frankenstein to a whole new level. I always felt for the monster but now I feel for him more. These characters are beautifully written and draw you in. I enjoyed this take on Frankenstein. Yolanda did a wonderful job .
This story takes Frankenstein to a whole new level. I always felt for the monster but now I feel for him more. These characters are beautifully written and draw you in. I enjoyed this take on Frankenstein. Yolanda did a wonderful job .
March 27, 2019
Loved it
Loved this.
I didnt read the anthology this was in but i love Yolanda's work.
This was an amazing story.
Loved this.
I didnt read the anthology this was in but i love Yolanda's work.
This was an amazing story.
March 28, 2019
Yolanda's stories always leave you guessing as to what happened, and what happens next!
These 2 people, created by Victor Frankenstein, are hoping to not have any more created siblings, and they do what they have to do to make sure that doesn't happen.
Very quick interesting story!
These 2 people, created by Victor Frankenstein, are hoping to not have any more created siblings, and they do what they have to do to make sure that doesn't happen.
Very quick interesting story!
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March 30, 2019
Such a fun take on Bride of Frankenstein! Yolanda has a way with weaving a story and making you feel for characters you didn't think you would. Definitely one everyone needs to check out!
November 2, 2025
4.5★
As creations of Victor, Elsa and Frankie have learned to adapt but when a threat arises, they must act in the only way they know how.
Narrated mainly from Elsa’s point of view, she and Frankie draw much sympathy as they must not deviate from Victor’s wishes. Their connection is palpable, especially given the short length of this novella. Protecting themselves, the storyline progresses and ends quite poetically for these characters.
*This was a (F)BR with Twinsie Hawkey*
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As creations of Victor, Elsa and Frankie have learned to adapt but when a threat arises, they must act in the only way they know how.
“I saved Elsa. I saved myself.”
Narrated mainly from Elsa’s point of view, she and Frankie draw much sympathy as they must not deviate from Victor’s wishes. Their connection is palpable, especially given the short length of this novella. Protecting themselves, the storyline progresses and ends quite poetically for these characters.
*This was a (F)BR with Twinsie Hawkey*
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March 27, 2019
A Siblings Love.......
This is a nice retelling of the Bride of Frankenstein. We get to see the love of Frankie and Elsa, their sibling love. Elsa tries to protect her brother, the best way she can. She feels that their father is sick in the head and she wants him to stop with all the foolishness. But when she decides to do something about it, a little situation happens and Frankie goes to help her.
This is a nice retelling of the Bride of Frankenstein. We get to see the love of Frankie and Elsa, their sibling love. Elsa tries to protect her brother, the best way she can. She feels that their father is sick in the head and she wants him to stop with all the foolishness. But when she decides to do something about it, a little situation happens and Frankie goes to help her.
March 26, 2019
Retelling of the Bride of Frankenstein
Damn... the story was short and rather sweet. I even cried. CRIED!! The ending... Ugh... I didn't know I would care about the characters, Elsa and Frankie, so much. Their relationship was amazing. They cared about each so much.
Damn... the story was short and rather sweet. I even cried. CRIED!! The ending... Ugh... I didn't know I would care about the characters, Elsa and Frankie, so much. Their relationship was amazing. They cared about each so much.
March 27, 2019
Superbly executed, a quickie, that will have you caring greatly for the characters, Elsa & Frankie. Danger lurks throughout making this a captivating read.
March 27, 2019
I enjoyed this unique retelling of the Bride of Frankenstein.
November 2, 2025
Title: Pallor Mortis
Author: Yolanda Olson
Genre: Horror
Type: Short Story
POV: First Person- Female
Rating:
As the creation of Victor Frankenstein, Elsa knew he had to be stopped. With her brother's life on the line, she vowed to protect Frakie and destroy their maker, no matter the cost.
For such a short story about monsters, this book packed a lot of hearts. I felt so much for the characters and found myself rooting for them until the end.
Brief yet impactful. Exactly how I like my short stories to be.
✖️💀✖️. . . (F)BR with Twinsie CC . . .✖️💀✖️
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Author: Yolanda Olson
Genre: Horror
Type: Short Story
POV: First Person- Female
Rating:
As the creation of Victor Frankenstein, Elsa knew he had to be stopped. With her brother's life on the line, she vowed to protect Frakie and destroy their maker, no matter the cost.
For such a short story about monsters, this book packed a lot of hearts. I felt so much for the characters and found myself rooting for them until the end.
Brief yet impactful. Exactly how I like my short stories to be.
✖️💀✖️. . . (F)BR with Twinsie CC . . .✖️💀✖️
For more reviews/interviews/book talk/promo visit:
For graphics, trailers & author services visit Warhawke Design Studio.
April 22, 2019
Can they free themselves from Hell?
A tale that takes you back in time where we are reintroduced to Victor Frankenstein and his two monster creations... his daughter and his son. A tale of strong sibling love and a deep hatred for their creator. 4 Sacrificial Stars for "Pallor Mortis"... when even monsters have deeper feelings.
A tale that takes you back in time where we are reintroduced to Victor Frankenstein and his two monster creations... his daughter and his son. A tale of strong sibling love and a deep hatred for their creator. 4 Sacrificial Stars for "Pallor Mortis"... when even monsters have deeper feelings.
May 1, 2020
I have a new author obsession and it is... YOLANDA OLSON. I've been binging her books and Pallor Mortis is my absolute FAVORITE. I know it's only 23 pages, but I loved the classic "monsters" and the love between Elsa and Frankie. This story isn't as dark as her usual books. I only wish I this was in paperback so I can display this beauty on my shelf.
April 14, 2019
Quick read
Fab quick read with the fast paced kind of story I've come to know and love from Mrs Olson this one wasn't as horrific as some of her other works but still a fab quick read
Fab quick read with the fast paced kind of story I've come to know and love from Mrs Olson this one wasn't as horrific as some of her other works but still a fab quick read
April 19, 2019
A unique take on Frankenstein's Monster and the Bride
This is a very fast read. It's a twisted retelling of Frankenstein's Monster and his relationship with his sister who was his bride in Mary Shelly's Frankenstein.
This is a very fast read. It's a twisted retelling of Frankenstein's Monster and his relationship with his sister who was his bride in Mary Shelly's Frankenstein.
March 31, 2019
It may have been an extremely short read, however, it was extremely captivating. Loved it.
April 6, 2019
Ok story
It was ok. Not very imaginative, in my opinion. Vague in description at times. The story between "siblings" was sweet.
It was ok. Not very imaginative, in my opinion. Vague in description at times. The story between "siblings" was sweet.
April 8, 2019
Great
Great twist to a classic. I really enjoyed reading this short story. I will be checking what else this author writes.
Great twist to a classic. I really enjoyed reading this short story. I will be checking what else this author writes.
April 10, 2019
A great retelling of the Bride of Frankenstein .Even though it's a short story you felt all the heart and emotion the author put into bringing the characters of Elsa and Frankie back to life .
April 18, 2019
Awesome!!
This is a great quick read of the retelling of the Bride of Frankenstein as only Yolanda can tell it.
This is a great quick read of the retelling of the Bride of Frankenstein as only Yolanda can tell it.
April 28, 2019
A dark captivating story of a retelling the Bride of Frankenstein. Elsa and Frankie's love for one another stood strong. Siblings who hate their father.
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