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The Ashen Levels
When Balagir awakens at the fire with no recollection of his past, he discovers he is an ashen—a mysterious group of black-eyed vagabonds, addicted to the smoke they must pay the ghostly piper in exchange for power. With the help of a unique chisp (a sentient spark) and a band of nefarious companions, Balagir will have to traverse the northern wilds, cross seas and survive foreign wars if he is to discover the truth behind the Ashen Levels.
The Ashen Levels is dark, progression fantasy with underlying GameLit elements.
This is the COMPLETE version, and contains all five parts of Balagir's journey.
The Ashen Levels is dark, progression fantasy with underlying GameLit elements.
This is the COMPLETE version, and contains all five parts of Balagir's journey.
- GenresFantasy
689 pages, ebook
Published March 25, 2019
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About the author
C.F. Welburn
12 books141 followersCraig Farndale Welburn is an award-winning author for his series: The Ashen Levels.
He was born in the year of Star Wars, in the birth town of Charles Darwin, and caught the fantasy bug as a child at the top of a faraway tree, in a hole in the ground and through a snowy wardrobe.
He left Shropshire to study literature, travel the lands and seek his fortune. (He’s still seeking…)
He lives in Madrid with his wife Jessica and son Otis.
He was born in the year of Star Wars, in the birth town of Charles Darwin, and caught the fantasy bug as a child at the top of a faraway tree, in a hole in the ground and through a snowy wardrobe.
He left Shropshire to study literature, travel the lands and seek his fortune. (He’s still seeking…)
He lives in Madrid with his wife Jessica and son Otis.
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August 28, 2020
Do you like riddles? And how about games of trickery and deceit? All within a tale written in a wonderful, poetic and expressive prose?
You do?
Then this is a must read!
After reading Book 1 of this Series a while back, I just had to go on with the series. Because the riddle was too irresistible and the mystery too intriguing to simply stop there. So I grabbed this omnibus the first chance I got.
The Ashen Levels is a dark, progression fantasy with underlying GameLit elements and this omnibus here is the COMPLETE version, which contains all five parts of Balagir's journey. Now, GameLit is not my favorite genre and yet, I absolutely loved this tale!
The Ashen Levels is one of the most unique and refreshingly original series I have stumbled upon. It turns deception and trickery into a game one must not only master but also balance on a knife's edge. And it's so very beautifully written!!!
Balagir awakened at a fire with no recollection of his past and discovered he is an ashen—a mysterious group of black-eyed vagabonds. Addicted to the smoke they must pay the ghostly piper in exchange for power.
He had nothing save an empty pouch, the garments on his back, an awkward belt with disks reflecting oaths he would be compelled to take, and an inkling of destiny. Well, that and that nagging feeling 'he had walked into a trap without truly understanding what the trap might be.'
Hoping to somehow have his memory restored, Balagir sets off on a path, not quite of his choosing. With the help of a unique chisp (a sentient spark) and a band of nefarious companions, Balagir will have to traverse the northern wilds, cross seas and survive foreign wars if he is to discover the truth behind the Ashen Levels. All the while trying to fulfill oaths and escape curses, and juggling trickery and deceit, set as traps along his path in the most unexpected places, by the unlikeliest foes.
In The Ashen Levels, Welburn gives us a dark and riveting tale with a distinctive Gothic atmosphere, unique and wonderfully creepy characters and an ingenious debt and reward system that involves oaths, with smoke for currency. All told in a beautiful and at times downright poetic prose that is an absolute pleasure to read. And as far the prose is concerned, I need to stop here and make a note, because Welburn's mastery of language and tone is absolutely impressive.
From the world, to the atmosphere, plot, pacing and characters, everything here conveys an otherworldly feeling, typical to that of a gripping fairytale. Albeit one on a decidedly darker side.
Even the lack of a fully fleshed out background for the characters themselves, only adds to the mystery of the story itself.
Fast paced and with an intriguing mystery, this series is one hell of an adventure that will have you ensnared from the very first chapter. And yet, it doesn't make for a very fast read. You can neither skip nor skim and it's not a light bedtime read either. The prose, the riddles, the mystery and wordbuilding itself, require the reader to pay attention for a proper understanding. And if you dive into it... expect the unexpected.
Because that end.... What? Wait a second. What?!
AWESOME!
If you are on the lookout for a unique and truly imaginative read, dark, fascinating and wonderfully written, The Ashen Levels is A MUST READ.
You do?
Then this is a must read!
After reading Book 1 of this Series a while back, I just had to go on with the series. Because the riddle was too irresistible and the mystery too intriguing to simply stop there. So I grabbed this omnibus the first chance I got.
The Ashen Levels is a dark, progression fantasy with underlying GameLit elements and this omnibus here is the COMPLETE version, which contains all five parts of Balagir's journey. Now, GameLit is not my favorite genre and yet, I absolutely loved this tale!
The Ashen Levels is one of the most unique and refreshingly original series I have stumbled upon. It turns deception and trickery into a game one must not only master but also balance on a knife's edge. And it's so very beautifully written!!!
Balagir awakened at a fire with no recollection of his past and discovered he is an ashen—a mysterious group of black-eyed vagabonds. Addicted to the smoke they must pay the ghostly piper in exchange for power.
He had nothing save an empty pouch, the garments on his back, an awkward belt with disks reflecting oaths he would be compelled to take, and an inkling of destiny. Well, that and that nagging feeling 'he had walked into a trap without truly understanding what the trap might be.'
Hoping to somehow have his memory restored, Balagir sets off on a path, not quite of his choosing. With the help of a unique chisp (a sentient spark) and a band of nefarious companions, Balagir will have to traverse the northern wilds, cross seas and survive foreign wars if he is to discover the truth behind the Ashen Levels. All the while trying to fulfill oaths and escape curses, and juggling trickery and deceit, set as traps along his path in the most unexpected places, by the unlikeliest foes.
In The Ashen Levels, Welburn gives us a dark and riveting tale with a distinctive Gothic atmosphere, unique and wonderfully creepy characters and an ingenious debt and reward system that involves oaths, with smoke for currency. All told in a beautiful and at times downright poetic prose that is an absolute pleasure to read. And as far the prose is concerned, I need to stop here and make a note, because Welburn's mastery of language and tone is absolutely impressive.
From the world, to the atmosphere, plot, pacing and characters, everything here conveys an otherworldly feeling, typical to that of a gripping fairytale. Albeit one on a decidedly darker side.
Even the lack of a fully fleshed out background for the characters themselves, only adds to the mystery of the story itself.
Fast paced and with an intriguing mystery, this series is one hell of an adventure that will have you ensnared from the very first chapter. And yet, it doesn't make for a very fast read. You can neither skip nor skim and it's not a light bedtime read either. The prose, the riddles, the mystery and wordbuilding itself, require the reader to pay attention for a proper understanding. And if you dive into it... expect the unexpected.
Because that end.... What? Wait a second. What?!
AWESOME!
If you are on the lookout for a unique and truly imaginative read, dark, fascinating and wonderfully written, The Ashen Levels is A MUST READ.
September 10, 2019
The Ashen Levels by C.F. Welburn is all five books in one edition, FLEDGLING; JOURNEYMAN; ADEPT; HERO; PARAGON. Welburn has a beautiful writing style, and a wonderful imagination. This story has a very unique magic system and odd, wonderful characters. I can't say enough about this story. If you read one book this year, or any other year, for that matter, you must read The Ashen Levels! You will be thoroughly delighted!
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October 11, 2019Baligr awakens by a fire, he has none of his belongings or a memory of how he got there or of anything but his name.
This falls in to the Progression fantasy niche, which is pretty new to me. The story kind of has that game feel where our mc Baligr is doing little quests, and things (called oaths) to level up, the oaths get progressively bigger and harder as he gets more items, armour and strength. To be honest, it took me a little while to catch on, especially about the smoke (I may have mentioned that once I add a book to my kindle I rarely read the summary, which in this case, turns out actually clears up a lot of confusion so yeah should have checked it out sooner).
I didn’t have any complaints really about the writing, other than there were a couple of instances that were a little cloudy, where I didn’t understand why Baligr was doing an oath he clearly said no to. That sort of thing but on the whole I liked the style and I thought it suited the story.
Once I got the hang of the story, it’s kind of fun to see what he’d gain next- I found the oaths were creative and almost felt like fairytale/legend type stuff- which I liked. The Island one was on the creepy side and I loved the puzzle room. But I also couldn’t help but wonder at 700 pages (which felt like my 25 percent just barely dented) if that’s all there is; fetch, return, get smoke, rinse repeat until Baligr has powered up enough to do what he has to do. Which I am not too sure yet what that is (other than to regain his memories) because at this point, we were still building up. I hate to drop something that intrigues me but I also was feeling frustrated wanting to skip ahead to find out where it’s going, but knowing I’d be lost if I did.
I think this one that a lot of people would enjoy, especially if they’re into the game-lit and have a little more patience for the pay-off than I did.
score for spfbo purposes 4/10
This falls in to the Progression fantasy niche, which is pretty new to me. The story kind of has that game feel where our mc Baligr is doing little quests, and things (called oaths) to level up, the oaths get progressively bigger and harder as he gets more items, armour and strength. To be honest, it took me a little while to catch on, especially about the smoke (I may have mentioned that once I add a book to my kindle I rarely read the summary, which in this case, turns out actually clears up a lot of confusion so yeah should have checked it out sooner).
I didn’t have any complaints really about the writing, other than there were a couple of instances that were a little cloudy, where I didn’t understand why Baligr was doing an oath he clearly said no to. That sort of thing but on the whole I liked the style and I thought it suited the story.
Once I got the hang of the story, it’s kind of fun to see what he’d gain next- I found the oaths were creative and almost felt like fairytale/legend type stuff- which I liked. The Island one was on the creepy side and I loved the puzzle room. But I also couldn’t help but wonder at 700 pages (which felt like my 25 percent just barely dented) if that’s all there is; fetch, return, get smoke, rinse repeat until Baligr has powered up enough to do what he has to do. Which I am not too sure yet what that is (other than to regain his memories) because at this point, we were still building up. I hate to drop something that intrigues me but I also was feeling frustrated wanting to skip ahead to find out where it’s going, but knowing I’d be lost if I did.
I think this one that a lot of people would enjoy, especially if they’re into the game-lit and have a little more patience for the pay-off than I did.
score for spfbo purposes 4/10
February 19, 2021
A great read, with a single pov mc. Balagir awakens at a fire with little understanding of himself or his world and over the course of the series, pieces together his story.
Packed full of ideas, with well written prose, this is a unique read, which I suppose is a selling point and a problem: Welburn hasn't produced 'another X', so this series will appeal to readers who genuinely want a new experience. Veering from Progression/Gamelit to Gothic/Dark Fantasy, the storyline became Epic in scope by the end, with an underlying mystery that keeps the reader wanting to find out more - with everything tied up by the end.
Easy to recommend and an author worth keeping an eye on.
Packed full of ideas, with well written prose, this is a unique read, which I suppose is a selling point and a problem: Welburn hasn't produced 'another X', so this series will appeal to readers who genuinely want a new experience. Veering from Progression/Gamelit to Gothic/Dark Fantasy, the storyline became Epic in scope by the end, with an underlying mystery that keeps the reader wanting to find out more - with everything tied up by the end.
Easy to recommend and an author worth keeping an eye on.
October 6, 2021
I am forever changed.
Some stories leave you different at the end of their telling. Noah’s Ark. Superman. Lord of the Ring. Harry Potter. Romeo and Juliet. This one joins that list.
This is the tale of a man who awakens with no memory and seeks to recall his past. That’s the back drop, but this is a story about humanity, what it means, what it is and what it isn’t.
As Balagir faces ever growing, ever deepening challenges, he is constantly beset by doubt and questions - challenges we all face, from Jedi to Kryptonians. It’s is not his clever mind, though he is sharp, nor his lion’s heart, though none could doubt it’s size; it is his stupid, foolish, relentless pursuit that ingratiates us to his plight.
He is driven not by purpose, but by denial, refusal to accept that life is a pointless hollow journey doomed to be harsh and brutal only to end grim and pointless. Finding his purpose, ALL of your purpose, becomes purpose enough.
He turns every stone, lights every dark corner and pulls on every thread in his hunt, regardless of the foe or circumstance thrown against him.
Beyond that: the world building is steady and gradual, the magic is grounded and practical almost thoughtful, the challenges and challengers grow with every chapter and every character met along the way is unique, developed and unforgettable. I’ve yet to mention the twists, surprises, reveals, and his burrowing beautiful prose.
I read the entire series nonstop neglecting my own writing. This is godcraft.
Some stories leave you different at the end of their telling. Noah’s Ark. Superman. Lord of the Ring. Harry Potter. Romeo and Juliet. This one joins that list.
This is the tale of a man who awakens with no memory and seeks to recall his past. That’s the back drop, but this is a story about humanity, what it means, what it is and what it isn’t.
As Balagir faces ever growing, ever deepening challenges, he is constantly beset by doubt and questions - challenges we all face, from Jedi to Kryptonians. It’s is not his clever mind, though he is sharp, nor his lion’s heart, though none could doubt it’s size; it is his stupid, foolish, relentless pursuit that ingratiates us to his plight.
He is driven not by purpose, but by denial, refusal to accept that life is a pointless hollow journey doomed to be harsh and brutal only to end grim and pointless. Finding his purpose, ALL of your purpose, becomes purpose enough.
He turns every stone, lights every dark corner and pulls on every thread in his hunt, regardless of the foe or circumstance thrown against him.
Beyond that: the world building is steady and gradual, the magic is grounded and practical almost thoughtful, the challenges and challengers grow with every chapter and every character met along the way is unique, developed and unforgettable. I’ve yet to mention the twists, surprises, reveals, and his burrowing beautiful prose.
I read the entire series nonstop neglecting my own writing. This is godcraft.
November 17, 2019
Leveling
A very well done book that took a different view of leveling and accruing power. The book was more of a thriller then a fantasy but I’ll take it.
Favorite Line: Flaunting is a precarious vice in the company of green-eyed men
A very well done book that took a different view of leveling and accruing power. The book was more of a thriller then a fantasy but I’ll take it.
Favorite Line: Flaunting is a precarious vice in the company of green-eyed men
October 19, 2020
Audio Omnibus Review
Overall, the story was wonderful. The characters and world-building were well done. I really enjoyed the magic system and mystery underlying the whole series. Jez Jameson's narration made this one of my favorite audiobooks I've ever listened to.
I originally reviewed each part separately so here are my spoiler-free thoughts broken down by part.
Fledgeling: Part 1
From the first sentence I was excited by the clean, yet old-world style of prose. Every sentence was a delight to hear. Narrator Jez Jameson does a wonderful job capturing the characters and emotions throughout the book. The dialogue is so well written I feel like I’m eavesdropping on real conversations. Let’s talk about Balagir, because he’s my new best friend, and I already know I will be with him till the end of his journey. He wakes up at a campfire and has very few memories, only his name and mysterious old medallion no one can decipher. Through many trials and errors he figures out how the oaths, smoke, and paying the piper, all work for what he’s become, a black-eyed Ashen. The Ashen are like a tribe drawn from nearly every race and have bad reputations almost everywhere they go. It seems to be “every Ashen for themselves,” but Balagir is often torn between helping others and making his own way to find the truth of his origins. Eventually he decides his answers lie South, and makes his way as far as he can.
Journeyman: Part 2
Balagir’s journey continues, at sea this time, with the unsavory crew of the Spite Spear. He proves to be just as conniving as the rest, Ashen or otherwise, and deftly turns tables as often as they are turned on him. The worldbuilding only gets richer, mysteries deeper, and the seas stormier. The prose and dialogue are just as wonderful in the second book, building the world and characters in a way that makes them feel alive in the mind. I’m an absolute fan of narrator Jez Jameson, who really captures the world and characters.
Adept: Part 3
“Why are you here?” Balagir’s need to answer this question continues to drive him South. Who is the piper, and why must he be paid in smoke? Not only did I want to know, but I desperately wanted Balagir to know too! He reconnects with some old companions and meets some new ones. The way is harder, the enemies more vicious, and the question of the Ashen’s existence is still more mysterious. The beautiful prose and wonderful narration keep drawing me back again and again.
Hero: Part 4
War looms, and someone is pulling the strings. Can Balagir untangle the web and make a difference in the fated outcome? I was on the edge of my seat through the whole book. Action, intrigue, deception and misinformation swirl around Balagir and a ragtag company of Ashen as they meddle in the politics of men. Balagir finds himself thrust into a leadership position among the Ashen who have never been united for anything before. The battle scenes were incredible, and at one moment all hope was lost. As the battle rages, so does Balagir. I’ll cheer on Balagir to the bitter end!
Paragon: Part 5
The final book of the Ashen Levels takes Balagir to the very bottom of the Ashen mythos. He manages to unearth long lost things that were perhaps better off left alone. In the end, the Good Company prevails, though at heartbreaking costs to all involved. I loved the way so many things from early in the series were brought back around, loose ends tied, and comeuppances had. The ending was both bitter-sweet and very satisfying. I loved the titles of the 5 book sequence, and though they all fit perfectly with Balagir’s journey, start to finish. Balagir and the Good Company will stay in my heart for a very long while. Thank you CF Welburn for a wonderful tale, I truly enjoyed the whole of it.
Overall, the story was wonderful. The characters and world-building were well done. I really enjoyed the magic system and mystery underlying the whole series. Jez Jameson's narration made this one of my favorite audiobooks I've ever listened to.
I originally reviewed each part separately so here are my spoiler-free thoughts broken down by part.
Fledgeling: Part 1
From the first sentence I was excited by the clean, yet old-world style of prose. Every sentence was a delight to hear. Narrator Jez Jameson does a wonderful job capturing the characters and emotions throughout the book. The dialogue is so well written I feel like I’m eavesdropping on real conversations. Let’s talk about Balagir, because he’s my new best friend, and I already know I will be with him till the end of his journey. He wakes up at a campfire and has very few memories, only his name and mysterious old medallion no one can decipher. Through many trials and errors he figures out how the oaths, smoke, and paying the piper, all work for what he’s become, a black-eyed Ashen. The Ashen are like a tribe drawn from nearly every race and have bad reputations almost everywhere they go. It seems to be “every Ashen for themselves,” but Balagir is often torn between helping others and making his own way to find the truth of his origins. Eventually he decides his answers lie South, and makes his way as far as he can.
Journeyman: Part 2
Balagir’s journey continues, at sea this time, with the unsavory crew of the Spite Spear. He proves to be just as conniving as the rest, Ashen or otherwise, and deftly turns tables as often as they are turned on him. The worldbuilding only gets richer, mysteries deeper, and the seas stormier. The prose and dialogue are just as wonderful in the second book, building the world and characters in a way that makes them feel alive in the mind. I’m an absolute fan of narrator Jez Jameson, who really captures the world and characters.
Adept: Part 3
“Why are you here?” Balagir’s need to answer this question continues to drive him South. Who is the piper, and why must he be paid in smoke? Not only did I want to know, but I desperately wanted Balagir to know too! He reconnects with some old companions and meets some new ones. The way is harder, the enemies more vicious, and the question of the Ashen’s existence is still more mysterious. The beautiful prose and wonderful narration keep drawing me back again and again.
Hero: Part 4
War looms, and someone is pulling the strings. Can Balagir untangle the web and make a difference in the fated outcome? I was on the edge of my seat through the whole book. Action, intrigue, deception and misinformation swirl around Balagir and a ragtag company of Ashen as they meddle in the politics of men. Balagir finds himself thrust into a leadership position among the Ashen who have never been united for anything before. The battle scenes were incredible, and at one moment all hope was lost. As the battle rages, so does Balagir. I’ll cheer on Balagir to the bitter end!
Paragon: Part 5
The final book of the Ashen Levels takes Balagir to the very bottom of the Ashen mythos. He manages to unearth long lost things that were perhaps better off left alone. In the end, the Good Company prevails, though at heartbreaking costs to all involved. I loved the way so many things from early in the series were brought back around, loose ends tied, and comeuppances had. The ending was both bitter-sweet and very satisfying. I loved the titles of the 5 book sequence, and though they all fit perfectly with Balagir’s journey, start to finish. Balagir and the Good Company will stay in my heart for a very long while. Thank you CF Welburn for a wonderful tale, I truly enjoyed the whole of it.
August 29, 2019
Prose which pops and a book that pushes your imagination. Perhaps the most impressive thing Welburn has achieved here is ending the (substantial) book in a very satisfying and unexpected way, tying up the loose ends and giving significance to all the varied scenarios throughout Balagir's journey. Highly recommended.
October 7, 2020
Pretty good story overall
This was a very interesting read and at times very compelling. I definitely would mark it as an enjoyable read. I found the world and magic system to be unique and witty. However, the character development outside of the main character was a little lacking for me. There were plenty of opportunities for more depth but the other characters are more like scenery going by. Early on the lack of dialogue tags and the continuation of a new character's action, after dialogue of a different character, was killing me, but the story was pulling me in then. Pacing got a little tedious around 40% but it takes off again if you make it halfway. The conclusion kept me hooked and it is a standalone book, so the ending was pretty satisfying. (It is actually a series of shorter books that were put together.) The author uses a near literary vocabulary throughout much of the book, but I found it enjoyable. The LITRPG elements that are tied in are done in a natural way which makes the story more fun to me. I think fans of the LITRPG genre will definitely enjoy it. Overall I think it's a great story and loads of fun, so I am giving it 4 stars.
This was a very interesting read and at times very compelling. I definitely would mark it as an enjoyable read. I found the world and magic system to be unique and witty. However, the character development outside of the main character was a little lacking for me. There were plenty of opportunities for more depth but the other characters are more like scenery going by. Early on the lack of dialogue tags and the continuation of a new character's action, after dialogue of a different character, was killing me, but the story was pulling me in then. Pacing got a little tedious around 40% but it takes off again if you make it halfway. The conclusion kept me hooked and it is a standalone book, so the ending was pretty satisfying. (It is actually a series of shorter books that were put together.) The author uses a near literary vocabulary throughout much of the book, but I found it enjoyable. The LITRPG elements that are tied in are done in a natural way which makes the story more fun to me. I think fans of the LITRPG genre will definitely enjoy it. Overall I think it's a great story and loads of fun, so I am giving it 4 stars.
July 25, 2020
In The Ashen Levels, C F Welburn weaves a glorious story set within a beautifully realised world, with it's own fully crafted and organically realised lore.
Balagir's story is one of awesome discovery. As a reader, you join him throughout his journeys across the many glorious locales and as he comes into contact with a myriad of equally interesting characters.
I felt as though we were walking side by side as we both peeled away the layers of C F Welburn's seemingly limitless imagination, whilst on route to a satisfying and perfectly balanced conclusion.
This novel is a must for anyone who enjoys epic fantasy tales.
Balagir's story is one of awesome discovery. As a reader, you join him throughout his journeys across the many glorious locales and as he comes into contact with a myriad of equally interesting characters.
I felt as though we were walking side by side as we both peeled away the layers of C F Welburn's seemingly limitless imagination, whilst on route to a satisfying and perfectly balanced conclusion.
This novel is a must for anyone who enjoys epic fantasy tales.
March 4, 2020
I'm uncertain how to explain but I enjoyed this story the same as I enjoyed Labyrinth. On the very surface some harmless fun but dig deep and realize how darkly twisted the paths truly are. Get caught up frolicking through the adventure only to come face to face with grim consequences. I suppose the author's talent in writing this is a bit like that of a sword swallower! Or perhaps I ought to say a fire juggler!
June 5, 2020
This is a five book omnibus... Balagir awakes with no memory of his past. So starts his journey to find out who he is, what he is and what his purpose is. There are many diverse characters and strange creatures along the way. Fast paced with danger lurking around every corner. Plenty of twists and turns. There is a flawless flow from one scene to the next. The books are skillfully crafted. I was totally captivated.
September 8, 2021
Do you like adventure, misfits, shady characters, riddles, and puzzles? This story has all of that and more! How can I describe this book? I feel like Alice in Wonderland who fell down the rabbit hole. It really does have a little bit of everything.
In Fledgling Part 1, Balagir is the underdog. He starts out knowing almost nothing and gets taken advantage of from the get-go. He keeps his wits about him even in the trickiest of situations. His wits and sheer determination keep him alive in a world where anyone will use you for their own gain. As he succeeds at different challenges, he levels up like in a role-playing game. I love how he starts getting the hang of things. The first book ends with him sailing away in search of answers. The tone is hopeful as he heads towards his next adventure.
In Journeyman Part 2, Balagir heads to the high seas. He's the first Ashen to ever captain his own ship and most of his crew are Ashen too. He began as an underdog in Fledgling but has become a leader. He is more ruthless but only when necessary. He sees the value of having companions that won't stab you in the back. Those are hard to find among the Ashen.
Balagir faces new challenges as he journeys seeking answers about the Ashen and his origins. In these challenges, he has not only his own life to think about but also the lives of his men.
There is a bit of a recap in the last chapter. It's well done but I would prefer not to have it.
In Adept Part 3, Balagir's adventures continue. He forms a company of Ashen, but they aren't willing to give themselves a name just yet. He's a good leader and able to work out problems. The story moves at a fast pace and ends on a cliffhanger. The series is complete, so you don't have to wait to find out what happens next.
C.F. Welburn creates colorful characters and his descriptions are punchy. A few times I even chuckled.
In Hero Part 4, Balagir has seen a vision of the future. Trying to convince those on the brink of war to unite against a greater threat is turning into an impossible task, especially when he is betrayed. The more Balagir learns, the more questions crop up. He also meets heroes of legend, but they aren't what he was expecting. When the war starts, the battle is fierce. Will the heroes arrive in time to help?
Part 4 ends on a high note with questions left unanswered. I'm looking forward to the conclusion in Paragon. I wonder how C.F. Welburn will tie up all the loose ends.
Even though there are too many people to keep track of, I still followed the story without any problems.
When the ash falls, what will be left of the Ashen?
All our questions get answered in Paragon Part 5. This is the final battle, but it's fought on several fronts. Balagir has many clues to unravel, people to see, and places to be, but many places are no longer safe, and the Ashen are more despised than ever.
It's quite an epic tale. I felt sorry for Balagir and his closest companions, including the entity called Arrow. The ending is more satisfying than I thought it would be in light of all that goes wrong.
My only complaint with the final book is that too much was left at the end to wrap up. A few of the reveals could have been shared in earlier books.
I listened to the audiobooks. The narrator, Jez Jameson, perfectly captures the tone of the story and the voices of the individual characters. He's quite brilliant at it.
In Fledgling Part 1, Balagir is the underdog. He starts out knowing almost nothing and gets taken advantage of from the get-go. He keeps his wits about him even in the trickiest of situations. His wits and sheer determination keep him alive in a world where anyone will use you for their own gain. As he succeeds at different challenges, he levels up like in a role-playing game. I love how he starts getting the hang of things. The first book ends with him sailing away in search of answers. The tone is hopeful as he heads towards his next adventure.
In Journeyman Part 2, Balagir heads to the high seas. He's the first Ashen to ever captain his own ship and most of his crew are Ashen too. He began as an underdog in Fledgling but has become a leader. He is more ruthless but only when necessary. He sees the value of having companions that won't stab you in the back. Those are hard to find among the Ashen.
Balagir faces new challenges as he journeys seeking answers about the Ashen and his origins. In these challenges, he has not only his own life to think about but also the lives of his men.
There is a bit of a recap in the last chapter. It's well done but I would prefer not to have it.
In Adept Part 3, Balagir's adventures continue. He forms a company of Ashen, but they aren't willing to give themselves a name just yet. He's a good leader and able to work out problems. The story moves at a fast pace and ends on a cliffhanger. The series is complete, so you don't have to wait to find out what happens next.
C.F. Welburn creates colorful characters and his descriptions are punchy. A few times I even chuckled.
In Hero Part 4, Balagir has seen a vision of the future. Trying to convince those on the brink of war to unite against a greater threat is turning into an impossible task, especially when he is betrayed. The more Balagir learns, the more questions crop up. He also meets heroes of legend, but they aren't what he was expecting. When the war starts, the battle is fierce. Will the heroes arrive in time to help?
Part 4 ends on a high note with questions left unanswered. I'm looking forward to the conclusion in Paragon. I wonder how C.F. Welburn will tie up all the loose ends.
Even though there are too many people to keep track of, I still followed the story without any problems.
When the ash falls, what will be left of the Ashen?
All our questions get answered in Paragon Part 5. This is the final battle, but it's fought on several fronts. Balagir has many clues to unravel, people to see, and places to be, but many places are no longer safe, and the Ashen are more despised than ever.
It's quite an epic tale. I felt sorry for Balagir and his closest companions, including the entity called Arrow. The ending is more satisfying than I thought it would be in light of all that goes wrong.
My only complaint with the final book is that too much was left at the end to wrap up. A few of the reveals could have been shared in earlier books.
I listened to the audiobooks. The narrator, Jez Jameson, perfectly captures the tone of the story and the voices of the individual characters. He's quite brilliant at it.
August 6, 2024
A dark, yet fabulous tale about a man called Balagir, this story begins as he awakens without memory of his past. Balagir is forced to go through trials and riddles, one more dangerous than the next as he tries to uncover what has happened to him.
Written in most exquisite prose, this tale is expertly told. The book gives off an intriguing and creepy, almost fairytale-like, feel (the old kind, mind you), which I found highly entertaining. Everywhere Balagir turns, there is a challenged he must face, and it is absolutely fantastic!
And what a satisfying ending to an otherwise great series! The threads weaved throughout this story are flawless, and how it all comes together at the end is expertly done. I loved the conclusion!
I cannot recommend this enough, for I've absolutely devoured this series listening to the audiobooks! I feel empty now, knowing Balagir won't be joining me in my day-to-day life. The narration done by Jez Jameson leaves me wanting more on its own, let alone the fabulous story CF Welburn has penned here!
Fantastic world-building, great characters, superbly merged GameLit elements, intriguing mysteries, and great action! I cannot stress enough how great this series is. Just buy it already!
Written in most exquisite prose, this tale is expertly told. The book gives off an intriguing and creepy, almost fairytale-like, feel (the old kind, mind you), which I found highly entertaining. Everywhere Balagir turns, there is a challenged he must face, and it is absolutely fantastic!
And what a satisfying ending to an otherwise great series! The threads weaved throughout this story are flawless, and how it all comes together at the end is expertly done. I loved the conclusion!
I cannot recommend this enough, for I've absolutely devoured this series listening to the audiobooks! I feel empty now, knowing Balagir won't be joining me in my day-to-day life. The narration done by Jez Jameson leaves me wanting more on its own, let alone the fabulous story CF Welburn has penned here!
Fantastic world-building, great characters, superbly merged GameLit elements, intriguing mysteries, and great action! I cannot stress enough how great this series is. Just buy it already!
July 21, 2022
I am so glad I read this. Another new author for me to add to my favotites list. This story had so many wonderful elements to it that I didn’t want to put it down. It was full of magic, desire for the truth & darkness. It also had a wide variety of creatures which I loved. Balagir awakens by a fire with no idea how he got there and very few memories. He discovers that he has become Ashen. He is faced with trials and riddles as he tries to figure out what has happened to him and what his purpose is. Each task is more dangerous as time goes on. As his journey continues he will have to cross the sea if he hopes to find answers. As he becomes captain of the ship he proves he is devious & quite capable of completing his goal. This book has all 5 stories & it will keep you turning the pages. Wonderful world building and I advise you to listen to the audio version. This narrator brings these characters to life, each voice different. The narrator is AMAZING and will keep you captivated through the whole story. I would recommend this to anyone who enjoys fantasy. I will definitely be reading more from this talented author.
July 24, 2021
"Impossibility is the only Impossibility"
Balagir wakes up at a fire, there he sees the Piper and hears its music. He cannot remember his past. He finds out he is an Ashen, although he had no idea what that means, he also is addicted to the smoke that he must pay for powers.
A devious place that Balagir learns quickly about. He takes on oaths from others, when he does, one of the discs on his belt turns color. Meaning, he must fulfil it and will get smoke to pay to the piper when complete. He soon finds out that the oaths he has taken on are of dire consequences, he is a quick thinker, and it helps him through these perils. He goes through many quests to get his oaths completed, meeting many people on the way. People who have only their own interests in mind, no matter the consequences.
As I read this story, My mind portrayed it as if it was being narrated. A very interesting, detailed story that brings with it a sense of wonder and intrigue.
May 16, 2022
This was my first experience with C. F. Welburn's work, and it was awesome. There were five books in this omnibus verson, and they contained all the elements of a dark fantasy. The world building was formidable with unusual races and creatures. The unifying theme was a quest which led the protagonist and his companions to travel throughout the lands searching for the truth. The characters were dark and complicated. There was magic. There were twists and turns and surprising happenstances which kept the action flowing in each of the books. I recommend this series to others who enjoy this genre. Jez Jameson's narration was great and enhanced the story's entertainment. I was given a free copy of the audiobook, and I have voluntarily posted this review.
August 13, 2022
There Is enough of a PG dystopian paranormal quest here to fill a long weekend.
Fledgling: Allow a day for this strange PG quest of amnesiac Balagir which has all the illogic of a role-playing game. 4*
Journeyman: Allow a long afternoon for this stretch of Balagir's quest as he sets out to cross the channel on the Spite Spear. 5*
Hero: Allow another long afternoon for this extremely well-written dystopian quest which leaves a bitter aftertaste.
Adept: Allow another long afternoon as Belagir fights his way ever southward.
Paragon: Allow a full day for this concluding episode of the quest of Balagir. I had an ARC via Bookfunnel and this is my voluntary review
Fledgling: Allow a day for this strange PG quest of amnesiac Balagir which has all the illogic of a role-playing game. 4*
Journeyman: Allow a long afternoon for this stretch of Balagir's quest as he sets out to cross the channel on the Spite Spear. 5*
Hero: Allow another long afternoon for this extremely well-written dystopian quest which leaves a bitter aftertaste.
Adept: Allow another long afternoon as Belagir fights his way ever southward.
Paragon: Allow a full day for this concluding episode of the quest of Balagir. I had an ARC via Bookfunnel and this is my voluntary review
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