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My Pack #3
Loving My Pack
As the craziest year of her life comes to a close, Kitten finds herself on the brink of a new journey. Motherhood. That’s right, there’s new life coming to the Ivaskov pack. Since meeting her mates, Kitten’s world has been a rollercoaster of ups and downs and everything in between. With a new baby on the way, Kitten and the guys take time to figure out their relationships and what it means to be family.
Well… sort of.
There’s also a war going on, more secrets than any wolf should have to handle, and somehow, the past always has a way of sneaking up on you when you’re least expecting it.
Well… sort of.
There’s also a war going on, more secrets than any wolf should have to handle, and somehow, the past always has a way of sneaking up on you when you’re least expecting it.
340 pages, Kindle Edition
First published March 26, 2019
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Lane Whitt
5 books877 followersLane Whitt is a reader turned writer who found her niche with Reverse-Harem. As an Ohio resident, she spends her summers outdoors and winters inside freezing her butt off. She likes sticking her tongue out at people from the safety of her car, ice cream, and short walks on the beach (walking in sand is hard, ya know?)
With no formal training in writing, Lane Whitt takes pride in writing in plain English for those who speak plain English.
With no formal training in writing, Lane Whitt takes pride in writing in plain English for those who speak plain English.
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September 9, 2019
Princess Kitten and her band of power rangers are saving the world, one wolf at a time.
Yes it’s Super Kitten to the rescue
There’s literally nothing this girl can’t do. The world falls at her feet when she uses her non threatening ignorance paired with her Alpha dominant personality.
I’ve listened to this whole series on audio and I quite enjoyed it. It was well produced. There’s no way would I have lasted reading this in paperback. So yes I would recommend the audio. Everyone got their steamy moment and everyone got a happy ending.
What I didn’t like was the dynamic shifting from the guys house in book one to moving to the pack house and solving all their problems in book 2/3. I was happy with just them, not this overkill on solving every wolf injustice in history. It’s too much. Gone was the ice skating and the laundry. So much of this book was spend on setting up a home and dealing with an adopted child. It missed having an overall baddie to slay. The action was missing. It was all drama and lovey dovey moments - along with Kitten explaining how she’s always right of course.
I’m glad it wrapped up in three books. You know what I wouldn’t have made it to the end if there wasn’t something keeping me listening (other than having spend my money already) I would have dropped it otherwise. It was old school 17 yr old broken, penniless, heroine with a heart of gold meets broken hero’s who are filthy rich and 100s of years old. They have a baby and save the world.
The end
Yes it’s Super Kitten to the rescue
There’s literally nothing this girl can’t do. The world falls at her feet when she uses her non threatening ignorance paired with her Alpha dominant personality.
I’ve listened to this whole series on audio and I quite enjoyed it. It was well produced. There’s no way would I have lasted reading this in paperback. So yes I would recommend the audio. Everyone got their steamy moment and everyone got a happy ending.
What I didn’t like was the dynamic shifting from the guys house in book one to moving to the pack house and solving all their problems in book 2/3. I was happy with just them, not this overkill on solving every wolf injustice in history. It’s too much. Gone was the ice skating and the laundry. So much of this book was spend on setting up a home and dealing with an adopted child. It missed having an overall baddie to slay. The action was missing. It was all drama and lovey dovey moments - along with Kitten explaining how she’s always right of course.
I’m glad it wrapped up in three books. You know what I wouldn’t have made it to the end if there wasn’t something keeping me listening (other than having spend my money already) I would have dropped it otherwise. It was old school 17 yr old broken, penniless, heroine with a heart of gold meets broken hero’s who are filthy rich and 100s of years old. They have a baby and save the world.
The end
April 2, 2019
Honestly, i don't know. I am giving this series 3.75 stars because i truly do like the story, however, it something about this was off.
The My Pack series was the 2nd or 3rd RH series that I started when I first found out about the RH genre. Now since I have read the 1st two books in this series, i have read many, many more RH series while waiting for the final book in this series to come out.
While I was reading the final book, I kept trying to find out what was wrong with the story, I mean I love Kitten still, her guys are adorable and the plot is okay....so what was wrong with it?
I finally figured it out, I feel like this story was written out of order. The 2nd book in this series had action, adventure, the kidnapping and the climatic reveal about Kitten's origins, it was a lot going on in book two.
In this book, it is pretty much just Kitten and the guys really getting to know each other and her restructuring the Pack, other than that nothing much happens. I think this would have been a great 2nd book for the series but it fell flat as an epic conclusion.
If you read the first two book than yup go ahead and finish up the series. I see that there will be a spin off featuring their kids and even though it sounds interesting, i will not be picking it up until the whole series is complete.
The My Pack series was the 2nd or 3rd RH series that I started when I first found out about the RH genre. Now since I have read the 1st two books in this series, i have read many, many more RH series while waiting for the final book in this series to come out.
While I was reading the final book, I kept trying to find out what was wrong with the story, I mean I love Kitten still, her guys are adorable and the plot is okay....so what was wrong with it?
I finally figured it out, I feel like this story was written out of order. The 2nd book in this series had action, adventure, the kidnapping and the climatic reveal about Kitten's origins, it was a lot going on in book two.
In this book, it is pretty much just Kitten and the guys really getting to know each other and her restructuring the Pack, other than that nothing much happens. I think this would have been a great 2nd book for the series but it fell flat as an epic conclusion.
If you read the first two book than yup go ahead and finish up the series. I see that there will be a spin off featuring their kids and even though it sounds interesting, i will not be picking it up until the whole series is complete.
lost-interest
March 27, 2019Guys, it's out.
WOW.
WOW.
January 19, 2020
Mated and pregnant Kitten and her men should be enjoying their bonds and the new phase of their lives/relationship, but impending war has them more than a little busy.
Not going to lie wanted a tad more character development when it came to Kitten, and I wanted way more action, but still a nice one time read.
Acquired via KU.
Not going to lie wanted a tad more character development when it came to Kitten, and I wanted way more action, but still a nice one time read.
Acquired via KU.
April 3, 2019
Ehh.
I wasn't like super pumped to read this but I got myself through it. Comparing the blurb for this one to the blurb for the original Loving My Pack that was supposed to be published years ago, I'm assuming the author did some major overhauls with the plot and generally it's fine.
Kitten remains as irritating and childish as usual (I'm sorry, the longer we go with her the more I hate her she like refuses to grow up and she's kind of a hypocrite. Her logic for shit just GRATES me), we get some more relationship exploration, there are babies, change and peace are sparked for all wolfkind in a matter of weeks, the end.
It's not a bad read but book #2 didn't leave me like super interested and with this one the events started to feel less and less interesting and I did a lot of skimming, so I don't really want to go in depth because it's just sort of... it happened, it was fine, thank you, next.
I think anyone who's a big fan of the other two books will probably find this a good, satisfying conclusion with the promise of a next-generation sequel someday. I might look into that, especially if the female lead is... not like Kitten. As much as I commend the author for trying something new with her character it just wasn't for me. It was okay in 1 book but by the third I was expecting to see maturity in her but it's like she just came into her sexuality and also like developed some legit bloodlust and was more of a brat. I'm happy this wasn't just "Kitty being crazy because of hormones" which felt like a possibility based on how Kitten normally acts.
*someone commented and indeed their are more children later who are fathered by the 3 mates who didn't get a child in the first litter. I didn't catch it the first time. Thanks for pointing that out!*
It's 6 a.m. and I've been awake all night to finish this so my reading challenge row would be all nice and pristine and I could close the chapter on this series in one fell swoop so this is probably not my most polished review but eh.
I got through it!
I wasn't like super pumped to read this but I got myself through it. Comparing the blurb for this one to the blurb for the original Loving My Pack that was supposed to be published years ago, I'm assuming the author did some major overhauls with the plot and generally it's fine.
Kitten remains as irritating and childish as usual (I'm sorry, the longer we go with her the more I hate her she like refuses to grow up and she's kind of a hypocrite. Her logic for shit just GRATES me), we get some more relationship exploration, there are babies, change and peace are sparked for all wolfkind in a matter of weeks, the end.
It's not a bad read but book #2 didn't leave me like super interested and with this one the events started to feel less and less interesting and I did a lot of skimming, so I don't really want to go in depth because it's just sort of... it happened, it was fine, thank you, next.
I think anyone who's a big fan of the other two books will probably find this a good, satisfying conclusion with the promise of a next-generation sequel someday. I might look into that, especially if the female lead is... not like Kitten. As much as I commend the author for trying something new with her character it just wasn't for me. It was okay in 1 book but by the third I was expecting to see maturity in her but it's like she just came into her sexuality and also like developed some legit bloodlust and was more of a brat. I'm happy this wasn't just "Kitty being crazy because of hormones" which felt like a possibility based on how Kitten normally acts.
*someone commented and indeed their are more children later who are fathered by the 3 mates who didn't get a child in the first litter. I didn't catch it the first time. Thanks for pointing that out!*
It's 6 a.m. and I've been awake all night to finish this so my reading challenge row would be all nice and pristine and I could close the chapter on this series in one fell swoop so this is probably not my most polished review but eh.
I got through it!
July 19, 2023
🌟Brief Summary:
Kitten was left as a baby in a dumpster. She was saved by a crazy old lady that thought she was a cat…. Hence the name Kitten.
-She grew up up on the streets and had a lot of tough but character building experiences.
-One night she is attacked and finds help in the form of 8 wolf shifters who want to help her.
-But as things progress her past is discovered and it leads to love, heartbreak and a whole lots of self discovery & more danger.
Can this young lady change the course of wolf shifters forever?
‼️ Opinion‼️:
Wow ok… this was a super sweet, very odd, pretty freaking funny, innocent yet totally sexy read. It was very enjoyable and went to places I wasn’t expecting.
-Book 1 was a bit odd at first and definitely different in a good way. Kitten is street smarts to a degree, book smart to a degree and TOTALLY NAIVE AND INNOCENT in almost everything. Odd combination? Yes! But it worked and was very entertaining to read.
-At first I was like 🤔 then I was like 👀 then I was like 😂 then I was like 💗. So yeah that about sums up the first book for me.
-😬So Kitten isn’t sure how old she is. She thinks 16yr old. So while we know her harem is hundreds of years old it could come across as pervy. But I assure you she is 20yrs old and her men take things VERY SLOW and are extremely understanding and patient with her. They are so sweet and do everything in their power to make her happy and comfortable.
-This world requires you to suspend belief so if you just go with it eventually you just enjoy it for what it is… a not to be taken to seriously read.
-Book 2 & 3 are a bit more focused on the revelations we learn at the end of book 1. So while book 1 is all about building the relationship and bond, Kitten learning and experiencing new things, the other 2 books have more storyline.
-I love her men💕💗they really are so good with her. I love how they took her to new place and showed her new things. I just love how they treated her. In turn she really changes their lives into a life worth living again. And gives them all what they always wanted… true love and a mate.
-One thing I ABSOLUTELY ADORED was that we get all the good stuff about this relationship. The sweet small moment and gestures. The growth in their love. The pregnancy and birth of their kids and we get to see the kids as children and the harem as amazing dads. We get a good amount of this cause it’s worked into the story and I loved it❤️.
-The mate marks and bonds could have been explained and developed better. Why were they mates -how does it works- ext.
-Annoying- In book 2 we get her first BJ experience. Then in book 3 she says she has never given a BJ before and we basically had the exact same “first time”scene, thoughts and experience from book 2 but with a diff harem member. Annoying cause cohesion is important.
-Overall I enjoyed this series and took it for what is was. Fun, light and sugary sweet with a dash of drama and an an overall storyline.
📖 Pages:
This is a review for all 3 books in the series.
🦹🏻♂️ Hero:
Remy- Alpha
Logan- fashion savy
Ash - the protector
Keller- the doctor
Reed- the artist
Fin- the smart book worm
Tristan- the chef
Jace - the pretty boy snob
🦸♀️ Heroine:
Kitten- sweet , innocent l. Very strong in her convictions and just an overall fighter
💭 POV:
Multiple first person mostly in Kittens POV but we do get some of the guys
🔥 Burn Rate:
Slow slow slow sexy times other than some mild groping and a fingering don’t start till book 2.
😡/😍 Angst level:
Moderate
❤️🔥 Sexy times & Descriptive sex:
Moderate some can be very descriptive and other scenes not so much.
🌓 Push/Pull:
Mild- Jace is hurtful and reluctant at first but by mid book 1 works on making amends.
☠️ OW/OM Drama:
OWD-mild- In a bar the boys frequent one waitress sits in Logan’s lap and it’s clear they are familiar with each other. She makes a comment about her female boss also knowing Remy very well. She kisses Logan on the cheek. He doesn’t push her off but it’s clear he’s annoyed. It’s a nothing scene in the big picture.
-Zero OW anything else
-Some mentions of the boy’s sexual history
🤮 OW/OM Sex / Fluid or DNA Exchange:
Nope they are all about her
🤬 Cheating:
Nope
👰🏼♀️ Virgins:
Kitten is a V
Her Harem are not since they are all hundreds of years old. But I didn’t get manwhore vibes just sex because they had needs.
No past love histories or relationships. They could only have love feelings for their mate.
⛈️Separation/3rd act breakup:
Nope
Safety⚠️Triggers🗡️:
Kidnapping
Torture
Attempted sexual assault
Overall Safe
Mild Dom-sub vibes
Sex as a wolves
Pregnancy and birth
🌈Epilogue:
Yes- 7 years
🥂HEA:
Oh yes it was as sweet and syrup
❌My opinion is just that… MY OPINION.
I know we all get passionate about our favorite reads and characters but we should respect each opinions a thoughts. ~Thank you
Kitten was left as a baby in a dumpster. She was saved by a crazy old lady that thought she was a cat…. Hence the name Kitten.
-She grew up up on the streets and had a lot of tough but character building experiences.
-One night she is attacked and finds help in the form of 8 wolf shifters who want to help her.
-But as things progress her past is discovered and it leads to love, heartbreak and a whole lots of self discovery & more danger.
Can this young lady change the course of wolf shifters forever?
‼️ Opinion‼️:
Wow ok… this was a super sweet, very odd, pretty freaking funny, innocent yet totally sexy read. It was very enjoyable and went to places I wasn’t expecting.
-Book 1 was a bit odd at first and definitely different in a good way. Kitten is street smarts to a degree, book smart to a degree and TOTALLY NAIVE AND INNOCENT in almost everything. Odd combination? Yes! But it worked and was very entertaining to read.
-At first I was like 🤔 then I was like 👀 then I was like 😂 then I was like 💗. So yeah that about sums up the first book for me.
-😬So Kitten isn’t sure how old she is. She thinks 16yr old. So while we know her harem is hundreds of years old it could come across as pervy. But I assure you she is 20yrs old and her men take things VERY SLOW and are extremely understanding and patient with her. They are so sweet and do everything in their power to make her happy and comfortable.
-This world requires you to suspend belief so if you just go with it eventually you just enjoy it for what it is… a not to be taken to seriously read.
-Book 2 & 3 are a bit more focused on the revelations we learn at the end of book 1. So while book 1 is all about building the relationship and bond, Kitten learning and experiencing new things, the other 2 books have more storyline.
-I love her men💕💗they really are so good with her. I love how they took her to new place and showed her new things. I just love how they treated her. In turn she really changes their lives into a life worth living again. And gives them all what they always wanted… true love and a mate.
-One thing I ABSOLUTELY ADORED was that we get all the good stuff about this relationship. The sweet small moment and gestures. The growth in their love. The pregnancy and birth of their kids and we get to see the kids as children and the harem as amazing dads. We get a good amount of this cause it’s worked into the story and I loved it❤️.
-The mate marks and bonds could have been explained and developed better. Why were they mates -how does it works- ext.
-Annoying- In book 2 we get her first BJ experience. Then in book 3 she says she has never given a BJ before and we basically had the exact same “first time”scene, thoughts and experience from book 2 but with a diff harem member. Annoying cause cohesion is important.
-Overall I enjoyed this series and took it for what is was. Fun, light and sugary sweet with a dash of drama and an an overall storyline.
📖 Pages:
This is a review for all 3 books in the series.
🦹🏻♂️ Hero:
Remy- Alpha
Logan- fashion savy
Ash - the protector
Keller- the doctor
Reed- the artist
Fin- the smart book worm
Tristan- the chef
Jace - the pretty boy snob
🦸♀️ Heroine:
Kitten- sweet , innocent l. Very strong in her convictions and just an overall fighter
💭 POV:
Multiple first person mostly in Kittens POV but we do get some of the guys
🔥 Burn Rate:
Slow slow slow sexy times other than some mild groping and a fingering don’t start till book 2.
😡/😍 Angst level:
Moderate
❤️🔥 Sexy times & Descriptive sex:
Moderate some can be very descriptive and other scenes not so much.
🌓 Push/Pull:
Mild- Jace is hurtful and reluctant at first but by mid book 1 works on making amends.
☠️ OW/OM Drama:
OWD-mild- In a bar the boys frequent one waitress sits in Logan’s lap and it’s clear they are familiar with each other. She makes a comment about her female boss also knowing Remy very well. She kisses Logan on the cheek. He doesn’t push her off but it’s clear he’s annoyed. It’s a nothing scene in the big picture.
-Zero OW anything else
-Some mentions of the boy’s sexual history
🤮 OW/OM Sex / Fluid or DNA Exchange:
Nope they are all about her
🤬 Cheating:
Nope
👰🏼♀️ Virgins:
Kitten is a V
Her Harem are not since they are all hundreds of years old. But I didn’t get manwhore vibes just sex because they had needs.
No past love histories or relationships. They could only have love feelings for their mate.
⛈️Separation/3rd act breakup:
Nope
Safety⚠️Triggers🗡️:
Kidnapping
Torture
Attempted sexual assault
Overall Safe
Mild Dom-sub vibes
Sex as a wolves
Pregnancy and birth
🌈Epilogue:
Yes- 7 years
🥂HEA:
Oh yes it was as sweet and syrup
❌My opinion is just that… MY OPINION.
I know we all get passionate about our favorite reads and characters but we should respect each opinions a thoughts. ~Thank you
February 2, 2024
So for the people that read my reviews, I will admit that I actually like this book better than the second book. There was still some humping and grinding but it wasn't overpowering. Just enough.
Now for the things I did not like. The fact that they kept on calling the grandfather Marcus when that's not his name. Marcus was the evil uncle. So why did they keep on screwing up and calling maksim, Marcus?
Also there were several grammar issues. Things that are so simple and can actually be corrected on any software.
And then calling the children different names. That drove me insane. Like Asher. At one point they called him Ashton. That kind of thing drives a person and saying.
Also there is a point in book 3 where they state that kitten has never given head before. However in book 2 she does to finn. In the library. Where she gets boned by Kellen and blows Finn. Yes I know that was a little adult there but whatever.
Attention to detail throughout her book when she was proofreading probably would have been much more appreciated.
All that aside I gave it an extra star because I actually did like the end of this book. Actually I like the entire book but the ending was my favorite.
Now I have to wonder, is there another book after this? I'm so confused. Or is it a spin-off? And is it completed? I guess I'm going to find out huh?
Now for the things I did not like. The fact that they kept on calling the grandfather Marcus when that's not his name. Marcus was the evil uncle. So why did they keep on screwing up and calling maksim, Marcus?
Also there were several grammar issues. Things that are so simple and can actually be corrected on any software.
And then calling the children different names. That drove me insane. Like Asher. At one point they called him Ashton. That kind of thing drives a person and saying.
Also there is a point in book 3 where they state that kitten has never given head before. However in book 2 she does to finn. In the library. Where she gets boned by Kellen and blows Finn. Yes I know that was a little adult there but whatever.
Attention to detail throughout her book when she was proofreading probably would have been much more appreciated.
All that aside I gave it an extra star because I actually did like the end of this book. Actually I like the entire book but the ending was my favorite.
Now I have to wonder, is there another book after this? I'm so confused. Or is it a spin-off? And is it completed? I guess I'm going to find out huh?
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
March 29, 2019
Looking back I don't love this series.
I think its an okay RH series, and they really have to be done right, and in my option, they shouldn't have more than 5 guys. I think 8 guys is too much.
overall, not a bad story. I dont like we had to wait like 3 years for it! It was out back in 2016 of June ( I read it last spring though so i only had to wait a year).
I didn't love Kitten as a character, and the story moved at times too slow for me.
But, i dont think its the most horrible RH i ever read. I mean some of them are BAD.
But, I do admire authors who self-publish, and even though it took forever to come out i understand the authors process of rewriting and reworking things.
I think its an okay RH series, and they really have to be done right, and in my option, they shouldn't have more than 5 guys. I think 8 guys is too much.
overall, not a bad story. I dont like we had to wait like 3 years for it! It was out back in 2016 of June ( I read it last spring though so i only had to wait a year).
I didn't love Kitten as a character, and the story moved at times too slow for me.
But, i dont think its the most horrible RH i ever read. I mean some of them are BAD.
But, I do admire authors who self-publish, and even though it took forever to come out i understand the authors process of rewriting and reworking things.
Want to read
April 28, 2017Why can't I find this!!
May 10, 2019
Third book of this little RH and ehh.
Loving My Pack was a bit boring to get into. I mean.. I started this on the 1st of the month.. and didn't finish it until like yesterday? Possibly the day before that (the days are blending my friends).
In this, you'll just re-meet everyone from the first book. Kitten is just ugh. I seriously hate the name now.. please don't nickname any Kitten around me. Or even call your kitten.. kitten. Just no. The name is now forever ruined for me.
Speaking of her, she is just so freaking childish. I honestly don't even remember how old she is at this point but she acts like a five year old. A five year old that has babies.. and is in a RH. It's just UGH - annoying and frustrating. Please grow up darling.
The only life-saving factor about this book is that there's hope for a new generation from it. ONE that doesn't include Kitten. I just hope if Lane does make it a real thing.. that she makes the MC the opposite of what Kitten was like. Please for the love of god - don't make me hate her.
Loving My Pack was a bit boring to get into. I mean.. I started this on the 1st of the month.. and didn't finish it until like yesterday? Possibly the day before that (the days are blending my friends).
In this, you'll just re-meet everyone from the first book. Kitten is just ugh. I seriously hate the name now.. please don't nickname any Kitten around me. Or even call your kitten.. kitten. Just no. The name is now forever ruined for me.
Speaking of her, she is just so freaking childish. I honestly don't even remember how old she is at this point but she acts like a five year old. A five year old that has babies.. and is in a RH. It's just UGH - annoying and frustrating. Please grow up darling.
The only life-saving factor about this book is that there's hope for a new generation from it. ONE that doesn't include Kitten. I just hope if Lane does make it a real thing.. that she makes the MC the opposite of what Kitten was like. Please for the love of god - don't make me hate her.
January 14, 2020
DNF
I really enjoyed book 1 but I’m not sure what happened here. It almost seems like the author took a break between writing the books but then forgot what she’d written previously. There were quite a few inconsistencies. The final one I read before giving up was Kitten telling her men she didn’t know how to do something... she’d literally done in book 2.
I really enjoyed book 1 but I’m not sure what happened here. It almost seems like the author took a break between writing the books but then forgot what she’d written previously. There were quite a few inconsistencies. The final one I read before giving up was Kitten telling her men she didn’t know how to do something... she’d literally done in book 2.
nope
July 19, 2018Cannot find on kindle
January 26, 2020
I didn't mind the first book, then they got progressively worse.
October 24, 2020
Pages: 330
My rating: 3
Read other books by this author in the future: don’t know
MC: Kitten, Jace, Tristan, Finn, Kellan, Remy, Logan, Reed
This book is the conclusion of the series but there will be a spin off with Kittens kids, which is announced at the end of the book.
It was an okay book.
At the beginning there were a lot of scenes where the guys or Kitten can’t keep the hormones in control. Some were graphic, some were bothering too. I did not like the graphic scene where she does a bj the first time and the guys show her how to do it properly. After that I skimmed over these scenes or just skipped them.
The story was slow and not very exiting. All in all it was a okay conclusion to this series. But after reading the third book I think I am not going to read the spin off.
August 7, 2019
The long awaited finale to the Kitten Trilogy
Kitten has gone from street rat to princess. Now she's got to adjust to the thought of being a mom. That's scary to a girl who's never had one. The Ivaskov pack is still in shambles, although her pack is doing their best to repair that. There's still a lot of opposition to having made wolves made alphas of a born wolf pack. And then there's the threat of war still coming from the Australian pack.
Spoilers ahead!
Finally! Readers have been waiting for this wrap up to Kitten's tale. Well, we'd been hoping for another book, and she even gives us teasers for the kids' book(s?) later on. Kitten may have been returned to her pack, and then joined with the bigger pack, but she's still solo in her head. The weeks of captivity and torture with Adam and Uncle left their mark. She still has problems eating, not good for pregnancy health, and still has street rat food pickiness on top of that. Add in that the guys aren't sharing the news about the war or letting her help with settling the pack and she's feeling rather useless. So she decides to do something about this war but she lacks people skills and her hormones are playing merry hell with her temperament.
There are a few typos and oopsies but nothing horrible and jarring.
Thank you, Ms Whitt for giving us this Kitten story.
Kitten has gone from street rat to princess. Now she's got to adjust to the thought of being a mom. That's scary to a girl who's never had one. The Ivaskov pack is still in shambles, although her pack is doing their best to repair that. There's still a lot of opposition to having made wolves made alphas of a born wolf pack. And then there's the threat of war still coming from the Australian pack.
Spoilers ahead!
Finally! Readers have been waiting for this wrap up to Kitten's tale. Well, we'd been hoping for another book, and she even gives us teasers for the kids' book(s?) later on. Kitten may have been returned to her pack, and then joined with the bigger pack, but she's still solo in her head. The weeks of captivity and torture with Adam and Uncle left their mark. She still has problems eating, not good for pregnancy health, and still has street rat food pickiness on top of that. Add in that the guys aren't sharing the news about the war or letting her help with settling the pack and she's feeling rather useless. So she decides to do something about this war but she lacks people skills and her hormones are playing merry hell with her temperament.
There are a few typos and oopsies but nothing horrible and jarring.
Thank you, Ms Whitt for giving us this Kitten story.
February 6, 2020
2.5 Stars
Overall Rating ★★
Plot ★★
Humor ★★
Characters & Character Development ★★
Narration ★★★★★
Story: The first book was amazing. The second book had a lot of plot holes. This was not a good ending for this series. Plot holes weren't filled in from the previous book or this one. There was no character improvements in maturity or growth with Kitty. After all she's gone through, she still behaves like a child. I just didn't like the plot or how anyone behaved.
Narration: The narration was amazing and I love listening to most of this series but this one just didn't do it for me. I wish the narrator could save the book but it was just poorly written in my opinion. I gave the audiobook a higher rating because of the narrator, however, I couldn't justify giving the book alone a higher rating than 2.5 stars.
Overall Rating ★★
Plot ★★
Humor ★★
Characters & Character Development ★★
Narration ★★★★★
Story: The first book was amazing. The second book had a lot of plot holes. This was not a good ending for this series. Plot holes weren't filled in from the previous book or this one. There was no character improvements in maturity or growth with Kitty. After all she's gone through, she still behaves like a child. I just didn't like the plot or how anyone behaved.
Narration: The narration was amazing and I love listening to most of this series but this one just didn't do it for me. I wish the narrator could save the book but it was just poorly written in my opinion. I gave the audiobook a higher rating because of the narrator, however, I couldn't justify giving the book alone a higher rating than 2.5 stars.
March 8, 2018
Decent story. Enough to keep me interested but there are no surprises as the books are so predictable and sometimes I get bored. Its ok to listen to in the background but not a good actual read.
August 24, 2023
Quote's**
Friends get to tell other friends when they're being homicidal wolves with rage issues
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I know i like pink. And he'll be a baby, so he won't care. I'm the one who has to look at all his stuff.
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"I have a kid. He's a good thing." I tell him. "I kind of stole him." I admit.
He chuckles. "Of course, you did. You don't do anything half-assed, do you?"
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"You go away and bring me back an Australian?"
Friends get to tell other friends when they're being homicidal wolves with rage issues
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I know i like pink. And he'll be a baby, so he won't care. I'm the one who has to look at all his stuff.
**
"I have a kid. He's a good thing." I tell him. "I kind of stole him." I admit.
He chuckles. "Of course, you did. You don't do anything half-assed, do you?"
**
"You go away and bring me back an Australian?"
April 1, 2019
Love the ending!
It's been a long wait for the conclusion of this series! Kitten is still so innocent in many aspects but demonstrates strength amid so many challenges. The book focused mainly on their relationships and Kitten's role in the werewolf world. I loved the happy ending and the teaser!!
It's been a long wait for the conclusion of this series! Kitten is still so innocent in many aspects but demonstrates strength amid so many challenges. The book focused mainly on their relationships and Kitten's role in the werewolf world. I loved the happy ending and the teaser!!
April 8, 2019
Oh wow! I feel like I waited forever for this book and damn it was worth the wait! Kittens life is changing again and I absolutely loved it. The story is bought to a stunning conclusion with a few twists I never saw coming. We learn more about kitten and her wolves, see their relationships evolve and with plenty of drama and excitement this was a fabulous end to a fantastic journey
January 27, 2020
I wanted to finally read the last book in this RH series after loving the first two books but hot damn, I couldn't get past 10%. I thought the writing was really bad and I couldn't get past it. It's not something that often bothers me but here I just couldn't do it. And the author took so long to write this 'finale'... Well I just lost interest.
November 23, 2019
3.5 stars.
Solid ending to a RH series. Probably one of my favorite RH trilogies. Well thought-out plot and great exposure to the developing relationships. Great character development and realistic problems that weren't contrived or unnatural.
Solid ending to a RH series. Probably one of my favorite RH trilogies. Well thought-out plot and great exposure to the developing relationships. Great character development and realistic problems that weren't contrived or unnatural.
Read
August 9, 2019DNF
February 18, 2018
Love the series but when it did it already come out?
May 7, 2020
Frustration
I get that the author wanted to create a vivid picture of the characters, descriptions of the actions, conversations and feelings. However, I feel that it was too much detail. It annoyed me so much that I started skimming pages, then skipping them altogether. She made Kitten strong at times, but completely clueless about simple things. Spoiler Alert: when Kitten feels her baby move for the first time, she freaks out, calls her mates and tells them the baby is angry and trying to escape! This is supposed to be the same woman that survived on her own, homeless after leaving the mentally challenged woman that fed her a milk only diet until she was at least 4, when she “wandered away on her own”! She made the Alpha of the Australian pack, disband his pack, ripped the head off of a disrespectful woman in a hidden village community of women, but she’s so modest that she has to go into a separate room to change from wolf to human form because she is modest, lol! No one could scent that she was pregnant and even though one of her mates is a doctor, he didn’t know she was carrying 5 pups. There was a guy named Davis that was mentioned and the author never explained who he was. Kittens father was a born wolf, her mother a human and yet she was not a wolf, she had to be bitten by one of her mates to become a wolf!!! The fiasco that took place in the women’s village was utter nonsense. Her mates put a tracking device under her skin, that she was supposed to press if she was in danger. However, when she changed to her wolf form, her paws kept pressing the device, so her mates were not sure of whether she was in danger or accidentally pressing the button. She didn’t know that kissing a guy could arouse him and lead to sex. She kissed Remington deeply and he pulled away and said she didn’t know what she was asking for and her inner thoughts were that she had no idea what that meant. I’m supposed to believe that this is the same person that completed high school equivalency at 12, with no formal education, homeless and as the author explained; so filthy that no one allowed her around their children. This story only needed one book. The grammatical errors were so numerous that I would correct the phrase or sentence in my head in order to continue reading. 8 guys for one girl that didn’t know how old she was and said that she counted 16 summers after she left the crazy cat lady, lol! This is the same girl that was allowed knew how to ice skate well enough to teach kids at the ice rink without earning any pay, do laundry for a hotel and got paid under the table. Oh, I can’t forget to mention that of the five pups that she had, all but two had different fathers. It made no sense to me.
I get that the author wanted to create a vivid picture of the characters, descriptions of the actions, conversations and feelings. However, I feel that it was too much detail. It annoyed me so much that I started skimming pages, then skipping them altogether. She made Kitten strong at times, but completely clueless about simple things. Spoiler Alert: when Kitten feels her baby move for the first time, she freaks out, calls her mates and tells them the baby is angry and trying to escape! This is supposed to be the same woman that survived on her own, homeless after leaving the mentally challenged woman that fed her a milk only diet until she was at least 4, when she “wandered away on her own”! She made the Alpha of the Australian pack, disband his pack, ripped the head off of a disrespectful woman in a hidden village community of women, but she’s so modest that she has to go into a separate room to change from wolf to human form because she is modest, lol! No one could scent that she was pregnant and even though one of her mates is a doctor, he didn’t know she was carrying 5 pups. There was a guy named Davis that was mentioned and the author never explained who he was. Kittens father was a born wolf, her mother a human and yet she was not a wolf, she had to be bitten by one of her mates to become a wolf!!! The fiasco that took place in the women’s village was utter nonsense. Her mates put a tracking device under her skin, that she was supposed to press if she was in danger. However, when she changed to her wolf form, her paws kept pressing the device, so her mates were not sure of whether she was in danger or accidentally pressing the button. She didn’t know that kissing a guy could arouse him and lead to sex. She kissed Remington deeply and he pulled away and said she didn’t know what she was asking for and her inner thoughts were that she had no idea what that meant. I’m supposed to believe that this is the same person that completed high school equivalency at 12, with no formal education, homeless and as the author explained; so filthy that no one allowed her around their children. This story only needed one book. The grammatical errors were so numerous that I would correct the phrase or sentence in my head in order to continue reading. 8 guys for one girl that didn’t know how old she was and said that she counted 16 summers after she left the crazy cat lady, lol! This is the same girl that was allowed knew how to ice skate well enough to teach kids at the ice rink without earning any pay, do laundry for a hotel and got paid under the table. Oh, I can’t forget to mention that of the five pups that she had, all but two had different fathers. It made no sense to me.
October 6, 2019
The boys’ reaction to her pregnancy is probably one of the cutest and most heart-warming things I’ve read. It was beyond precious. All of the guys and kitten have grown in maturity. Yes, the boys have lived for centuries, they should already be mature blah blah blah. I mean they have grown as people. They have gone so many years just living but not truly living. They were going through the motions unconsciously searching for something more., and they have finally found it.
Book one was so much innocence and sexual tension, and book two the author gifted us with some hot steamy moments. But was it enough!? Is it ever for reverse harem readers? Of course not! Did she deliver!? That would be a big fat YES! I was not risking reading this book in public with people’s wandering eyes.
The middle half of this book is a whirlwind of emotions. Like this was a trip man. Trust is broken on both sides, but both were done because of good intentions. So many conflicting emotions. At first, I thought I would get angry at the boys or kitten because I thought they were being unreasonable. Thankfully, the author did a great job of solving the conflict. There was new understanding, new backstories, and new compromises. Plus, the makeup sex! Yes! I’m convinced it can be the best kind of sex!
There are some major developments when she is interacting with a certain pack. The hidden past is brought to light, and with it is the sad truth of what actually happened to people very important to Kitten. She did not break. She showed her mates and the world how strong of a Luna she could truly be. We even got a peek into the world Kitten and her men helped create as well as a bit of adorable family interactions. Her children are precious. Plus, some new hints to a future series at the end!!!
Overall, this third book has solidified this series in my favorites category. The plot was well-done. There was good spelling, grammar, and dialogue. I was worried the turn towards a dystopia-style series would start to steer me away, but it never overwhelmed me, which I applaud the author for. Five stars!
Book one was so much innocence and sexual tension, and book two the author gifted us with some hot steamy moments. But was it enough!? Is it ever for reverse harem readers? Of course not! Did she deliver!? That would be a big fat YES! I was not risking reading this book in public with people’s wandering eyes.
The middle half of this book is a whirlwind of emotions. Like this was a trip man. Trust is broken on both sides, but both were done because of good intentions. So many conflicting emotions. At first, I thought I would get angry at the boys or kitten because I thought they were being unreasonable. Thankfully, the author did a great job of solving the conflict. There was new understanding, new backstories, and new compromises. Plus, the makeup sex! Yes! I’m convinced it can be the best kind of sex!
There are some major developments when she is interacting with a certain pack. The hidden past is brought to light, and with it is the sad truth of what actually happened to people very important to Kitten. She did not break. She showed her mates and the world how strong of a Luna she could truly be. We even got a peek into the world Kitten and her men helped create as well as a bit of adorable family interactions. Her children are precious. Plus, some new hints to a future series at the end!!!
Overall, this third book has solidified this series in my favorites category. The plot was well-done. There was good spelling, grammar, and dialogue. I was worried the turn towards a dystopia-style series would start to steer me away, but it never overwhelmed me, which I applaud the author for. Five stars!
September 28, 2020
Absolutely Amazing!!
I decided to two this series after searching for something interesting to read..I've been an avid reader my entire life and after having read many, many books I've learned to mostly sticking to my favorite authors...but sometimes I like to look around and see if any book catches my interest...after a while I found this series and read the reviews...They all boasted that this story line was different from the other shifter stories out there...I will never regret having made the choice to read this series!!!
The story line is fantastic...I love it! It's very different. I have read many shifter stories and unfortunately many of them have pretty much the same concept...this one is different..from the changed wolves to the born wolves and the issues with the females and their infertility...I'm in awed of this series and I've only mentioned those story lines! I haven't even mentioned the characters!!!! Which I'm in love with by the way!!!!! I usually have a absolute favorite character in each book I've read but I couldn't even decide on these books!!they are all my favorite....we h character is different and offers something special to the story and of course to the relationship between them all... Kitten is badass!!!! No other way to say it..she is sweet strong, nieve but it works in her favor, kind, compassionate, gosh so many things!!!
I highly recommend this book to anyone who loves reverse harem shifter stories...this one is by far the best!!!! Lane Whitt you are an amazingly talented aur..Thank you for sharing your talent with us!!!!!! You have becoming one of every best and favorite author..
I decided to two this series after searching for something interesting to read..I've been an avid reader my entire life and after having read many, many books I've learned to mostly sticking to my favorite authors...but sometimes I like to look around and see if any book catches my interest...after a while I found this series and read the reviews...They all boasted that this story line was different from the other shifter stories out there...I will never regret having made the choice to read this series!!!
The story line is fantastic...I love it! It's very different. I have read many shifter stories and unfortunately many of them have pretty much the same concept...this one is different..from the changed wolves to the born wolves and the issues with the females and their infertility...I'm in awed of this series and I've only mentioned those story lines! I haven't even mentioned the characters!!!! Which I'm in love with by the way!!!!! I usually have a absolute favorite character in each book I've read but I couldn't even decide on these books!!they are all my favorite....we h character is different and offers something special to the story and of course to the relationship between them all... Kitten is badass!!!! No other way to say it..she is sweet strong, nieve but it works in her favor, kind, compassionate, gosh so many things!!!
I highly recommend this book to anyone who loves reverse harem shifter stories...this one is by far the best!!!! Lane Whitt you are an amazingly talented aur..Thank you for sharing your talent with us!!!!!! You have becoming one of every best and favorite author..
February 20, 2020
I liked the first book. Kitten was very immature but based on how she was raised I was okay with that. Some of the decision-making was a little off but I was okay with that too and it was an interesting story. The second book kitten was still immature but she was maturing. But she was getting on my nerves at times. This third book I was looking forward to but it was hard to read. Because she was still immature. Some of the decisions that she made and some of the comments that she made. Just annoying. There was no growth in her character at all from book one to now. That by itself wasn't all the problem. But I compare her character to Bella in the twilight series. She whined and I just wanted to smack her too. It is still an interesting story and has a good ending if you've read the first two and like them you will like this book probably but I can't give it five stars
November 19, 2020
Spoilers ahead
Kitten and her guys are now at her father's pack after killing her evil uncle. Kitten is no ordinary wolf though, she sets about making great changes in the wolf community. Some bumps in the relationship as she keeps a secret from the guys but things are sorted fairly easily
***we get Babies!!!! I love babies in my romances but I'm torn too as Kitten is just so young and inexperienced that I'd have liked her to live a little before pregnancy occurs
Nevertheless still a cute and entertaining reado
RH
Kitten and her guys are now at her father's pack after killing her evil uncle. Kitten is no ordinary wolf though, she sets about making great changes in the wolf community. Some bumps in the relationship as she keeps a secret from the guys but things are sorted fairly easily
***we get Babies!!!! I love babies in my romances but I'm torn too as Kitten is just so young and inexperienced that I'd have liked her to live a little before pregnancy occurs
Nevertheless still a cute and entertaining reado
RH
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