This book was disappointing, as is this series. I won't be reading any more. Two Reasons Why a) The Writing b) the supposedly Christian message.
a) The storyline really drags, is poorly plotted, and seriously needs an editor. For instance, seriously -- who is interested in pages and pages about the play-by-play of the 1966 Grey Cup? Yawn... Or pages and pages of a sermon by Fr. Engelmann, much of which is just scriptural verses? Much of the book seems like click-bait -- you just keep pressing the button on your Kindle to continue to another page and another and another until you get some actual action.
b) As a Christian, I am also quite disturbed by the messages this ostensibly Christian book sells:
1) It really bothers me that the whole series is based on a teenage summer crush which is totally blown out of proportion. What's more, it causes the teen heroes, Hank and Jenny, to sin for the rest of their lives. The purportedly Christian Hank ends up committing adultery in his heart for most of his marriage to another woman, though he prays daily and goes to confession and claims to be such a great Christian. Rape victim Jenny ends up in an abusive marriage, and is estranged from her children -- but is presented as a blessed martyr for her suffering. Her Christianity is rather "New-Agey" with its relationship to nature and angels.
2) Almost all of the plot in these novels is caused by sinful actions, not by any Christian virtues. For instance, Jenny is raped, Henry and Jenny are kept apart by Jenny's alcoholic father and lying mother, etc. Throughout the book lies and secrets prevail, not the truth... Christ thus does not seem victorious in these books; rather, the Father of Lies wins almost every time. The whole book seems to be a cautionary manual on how continue to sin all life long.
3) As a woman, the portrayal of woman -- as long-suffering victims -- really bothers me. Jenny seems to receive her halo because of all the abuse she valiantly suffers, be it rape, an abusive husband, giving her child for adoption, being estranged from her second son...etc Similarly, Julean (Henry's wife and mother of his four kids) puts up with Hank's adultery all her life, and instead of confronting him, constantly suggests that polygamy might solve their problems...
By contrast, Hank the main male in these books succeeds in all he does, though is constantly sinning in his heart and is fundamentally a coward. But no -- he is a great teacher, then a great counselor, then a great painter, then he successfully builds houses etc. Most importantly he is a great husband and father though it's obvious to the reader he is in love with another woman. Ugh -- it's just really annoying that he never suffers in the way that the female characters do! On the contrary he causes much of their suffering because he is not man enough to be honest or brave like a good Christian should be.
Anyways, I really wanted this series to be better, so I kept reading. But I am stopping now, because a) the storyline just drags on and b) the Christian messages are suspect.