I like the idea of the book, and the series for that matter, but there's just something that is a little off about it. It could be that it is a bit of a mashup of about three different genres- fantasy, comedy, and romance. It takes elements of these genres sub genres, and at times it can be jarring. I of all people understand that high-fantasy can take itself a little too seriously, but when the author wants to hit hard on the comedy elements, she switches to a more modern style of expression, and it just feels off. Then there's using only Allegria's parts of the book as first person and the rest in third. It was distracting and annoying in the first book, and continues to be the same here. I don't get the point, other than it may signal that this Allegria is still the lead, even though it really is Allegria, Hallow, and Deo's story.
This book has more focus than the first - there's a lot a stake, and the author doesn't give her characters a lot of time to be overly silly. Allegria is still missing part of her magic - which bugs me as much as her - yet as integral as her magic is to her, there's no real effort in trying to figure out why its gone, or how to fix it. The book is mostly an extended rescue mission, and I thought that Allegria's regaining her powers would be integral to that. In that sense it was very disappointing, and some events that "even out" the playing field near the end of the book didn't help much. If she truly is the lead of this series, she didn't get a lot of growth or any type of movement. Everything was about finding Deo and Desa.
I am still interested in what happens as the series continues, as I think that this is worth a shot - it also is a pretty accessible high fantasy because of its romance and comedic elements, but it is hard to juggle all three. There's a lot to like from this outing, and I hope it continues to get better from here.
I received this ARC in exchange for my honest review.