FRACTAL: A Time Travel Tale

by Tony Ortiz

Prepare to embark on an epic journey that will challenge your very perception of reality. In " Fractal ," time is not a straight line but a tangled web waiting to be unraveled. Hector Herrera discovers an incredible power within himself - the ability to traverse time through his dreams. Imagine a world where you hold the key to righting the wrongs of the past. What would you do? Would you seize the opportunity to confront the injustices that have plagued humanity throughout history? Hector faces this life-altering choice, and so will you as you dive headfirst into the pages of " Fractal ." In a world where change sweeps through our lives, sometimes with our consent and often without it, individuals like Hector become the architects of transformation. But the burning question are they motivated by a genuine desire to improve the world, or do their intentions harbor hidden motives? As you immerse yourself in " Fractal ," you will grapple with the complexities of morality and the consequences of rewriting history. You will question your own perspective and find yourself at the crossroads of destiny and free will. " Fractal " is not just a time travel novel; it's an exploration of the human spirit, a thrilling adventure that will keep you on the edge of your seat until the very last page. Are you ready to unlock the secrets of time itself? Dive into "Fractal" and discover a world where the past, present, and future collide in a mesmerizing tale of redemption, choice, and the enduring power of the human soul. Your journey through time begins now.

Genres: Science Fiction Fantasy

345 pages, Kindle Edition

Published March 28, 2019

About the author

Tony Ortiz is a first-generation Dominican American born in Brooklyn and raised in Queens, New York. He is the host of the Spun Today Podcast, which is anchored in writing but unlimited in scope. He is a graduate of Baruch College in NYC and lives in Queens, New York with his wife and two sons.

Reviews

[Melissa Applegate · Rating 2 out of 5]

Tony Ortiz shows real promise as an author but is in desperate need of a professional editor. There are prolific errors on nearly every page of FRACTAL that detract from a positive reading experience. Conversations are not designated with quotation marks, punctuation is sporadic, and words are often misused and misspelled. In short, the author published what should have been considered a rough draft rather than a final submission. It is my hope that he will take this constructive criticism to heart and properly finish what he started. The story is clever and would result in a fun read once competent editing is finalized.

[Hschmeid · Rating 2 out of 5]

This is a DNF. I quit before Chapter Three because of the writing style. I could tell what was speech and what was description, but... not easily. Dialogue tags ("") would have made it so much more readable. Plotwise I have nothing at all to say; I didn't get far enough.

[Carol Bosselman · Rating 2 out of 5]

Had Potential

Good story but horrible editing, if it was edited at all. Words like bear and bare mixed up, some words used entirely wrong, no punctuation, all combined to make this hard to wade through. Good concept if polished and cleaned up.

[John Craig · Rating 4 out of 5]

A fun read

I enjoyed the read. Not quite what I was looking for in a time travel story though! Still a good read!