It is really too bad. This author found a fantastic story. The story of the McCormick Ranch is the stuff of legends. I live out here, I work with people who handled the evidence, I've heard all kinds of crazy rumors, and even know a Clapper as a family friend. This is a story that is waiting to be told and waiting to send shivers throughout the world.
This author just doesn't do it. Everything with the SPOOKS people is pure garbage. Skip it immediately and don't look back. That cuts this book by about a third, which is nice.
The research is terrible. She made a few interviews, read a few police reports, and couldn't even be bothered to talk with some locals. Not that it mattered because she really only focused on Michael's time away from Stratton. There could literally be HUNDREDS of bodies buried at this ranch, but we spend nearly two chapters running around trying to locate a missing trailer that had nothing to do with the real crimes.
The style is not my cup of tea. I wouldn't fault her for it completely, but this should have been written from an objective stand point, not as a narrative. It hurts the reality of what these men did. We don't need the author's point, we don't need an ominous sense of evil; we need honest work and research and for you to get to the bottom of something.
Finally, and most concerningly, did this author pass high school English? The editing here is absolute garbage. I'm not sure the author knows how to use apostrophes, commas, appositives, paragraphs, or spell. It is a joke that would send someone back to remedial classes. She can't get the right "to," she can't designate possession, and she couldn't even write a half decent bibliography. I don't expect perfection, but a small measure of professionalism may have been in order.
Too bad. In the hands of Krakauer, Dave Cullen, Michael Finkle, or even Stephen Jimenez (who I disagree with in his personal life, but darn can he do some good investigative journalism) this would be an excellent story. This is a story that needs to be told. This book simply doesn't do enough.