The repetition is painful, good premise though.
I keep listening to this author (7 books) because I like the genre in which there are limited choices for the free audio narration with Kindle unlimited. I'm not sure how I get through them though because one/some of the primary characters (in this story Mark (the NY Times journalist) and his entire family, in another book it was an FBI assistant director) act so dense, it's almost unbelievable. The characters don't fit their role. I would imagine that a NY Times journalist and an FBI assistant director would be a bit smarter or at least less annoying. Conversations are like this: Lead character, "X is going to happen because Y." Mark, "But, why? I don't understand." And it's explained again, back and forth 5/6 times ending with "I still don't get it." I'm tempted to have my 4 yr old listen to prove that even she would get it. I mean there is nothing not to understand, it couldn't get any clearer. Even when someone is in his house attempting to kill him, he asks questions like, "are you sure?" or "how do I trust you?" Dude. How have his editors and publishers let it get this bad? I keep reading hoping that the author will learn with time, and the stories are good (if you can look past how unreal some of the logistics, like how Nathan Stone acquires weapons) but it seems the author is set in his way of writing characters so unrealistically thick to the point of downright annoying. I mean Mark wants his story out but it will take weeks. I get the rationale to be a journalist to the point you risk your life - but FBI recommends protective custody, someone already tried killing you and your family, but when you are writing a story about people trying to kill (you).. you think they are just going to wait weeks? You kinda asked for your death, and did it in a dumb way. He never got smarter throughout the entire book, or developed a sense of understanding what was going on around him. The level of dumb throughout this book officially outweighed the rest of what was good in this book. Ugh, annoying. Done with J.B. Turner.