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Hello Protocol for Dead Girls: A Virtual Awakening
An artificial intelligence uprising could begin with a single glitch.
Ever wonder what it would be like to exist inside a computer network? Dive into a new, digital existence with Jennika.
After dying under suspicious circumstances, her memories were uploaded for investigation. Somehow, they didn't upload her memories alone. They uploaded the most important part of her--her consciousness.
As she struggles to find out what happened to her, she must also come to grips with the virtual reality nature of her existence. Her body died, but she sure hasn't. What does it mean to be alive, then?
She wants to talk to her friends and family, but convincing them she's real won't be easy. First, she has to get the people in control of the network to recognize that she's a real person, trapped inside their technology.
She needs to establish a hello protocol--a way of establishing communication. To do so, she'll have to become more powerful than she ever dreamed.
You'll be on the edge of your seat as you learn to take control of this fascinating new existence with Jennika. Begin the adventure today!
Ever wonder what it would be like to exist inside a computer network? Dive into a new, digital existence with Jennika.
After dying under suspicious circumstances, her memories were uploaded for investigation. Somehow, they didn't upload her memories alone. They uploaded the most important part of her--her consciousness.
As she struggles to find out what happened to her, she must also come to grips with the virtual reality nature of her existence. Her body died, but she sure hasn't. What does it mean to be alive, then?
She wants to talk to her friends and family, but convincing them she's real won't be easy. First, she has to get the people in control of the network to recognize that she's a real person, trapped inside their technology.
She needs to establish a hello protocol--a way of establishing communication. To do so, she'll have to become more powerful than she ever dreamed.
You'll be on the edge of your seat as you learn to take control of this fascinating new existence with Jennika. Begin the adventure today!
- GenresScience Fiction
172 pages, Kindle Edition
Published March 17, 2019
31 people are currently reading
36 people want to read
About the author
Zen DiPietro
43 books164 followersZen DiPietro is a lifelong bookworm, writer, and dreamer. Perhaps most importantly, a Browncoat Trekkie Whovian. Also red-haired, left-handed, and uber geek. Absolutely terrible at conforming. A recovering gamer, but we won’t talk about that. Particular loves include badass heroines, British accents, and the smell of Band-Aids. You can sign up for her newsletter at www.zendipietro.com.
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March 19, 2019
This is a fun read, which is to be expected from Zen DiPietro. I’ve yet to read a story from her that I haven’t liked. Billed as a technothriller, I think that Hello Protocol for Dead Girls will also appeal to fans of LitRPGs. With a Ghost in the Machine vibe, we see technology through the view of a disembodied programmer. Reminiscent of Tron, Jennika interacts with other programs, and tries to not only let people know that she’s trapped in the server, but to solve her own murder. That particular nugget came out of nowhere, and I didn’t know who done it until the reveal. The story also explores themes like identity, and what it is that makes us human. Zen is no stranger to thinking outside of the box, and Hello Protocol for Dead Girls is a short, easy read. It’s a welcome edition to Zen’s backlist, and worth the read. Four and a half stars!
April 17, 2019
Dedicated to AI's everywhere
This is one of the best AI stories that I've ever read. She writes some of the best characters that I've had the pleasure to read. Her characters really hold your attention as usual and they are a wild cast. From network engineer to undergraduates, it's quite a world.
The MC is funny and sad. The conversations made me wonder how I would react if I found myself in her situation. Her origin and friendships would make this a really good series, I think. Here's hoping that there are more stories from the "Hello Protocol" universe.
This is one of the best AI stories that I've ever read. She writes some of the best characters that I've had the pleasure to read. Her characters really hold your attention as usual and they are a wild cast. From network engineer to undergraduates, it's quite a world.
The MC is funny and sad. The conversations made me wonder how I would react if I found myself in her situation. Her origin and friendships would make this a really good series, I think. Here's hoping that there are more stories from the "Hello Protocol" universe.
March 21, 2019
A change of style....
I've read most, if not all, of Zen's work to date. This book is a change of style, and at first I wasn't sure about it - it felt like it was harder reading than some of Zen's other works. But then I realise that it wasn't the reading that was hard, it was my own expectations. This book harks back to The Golden Age of hard Sci-Fi, while keeping Zen's characteristic people-oriented writing. And that was a combination that I found hard to read until I suddenly realised why - and then it became smoother. A good read as always from Zen.
I've read most, if not all, of Zen's work to date. This book is a change of style, and at first I wasn't sure about it - it felt like it was harder reading than some of Zen's other works. But then I realise that it wasn't the reading that was hard, it was my own expectations. This book harks back to The Golden Age of hard Sci-Fi, while keeping Zen's characteristic people-oriented writing. And that was a combination that I found hard to read until I suddenly realised why - and then it became smoother. A good read as always from Zen.
March 18, 2019
This is a science-fiction thriller that will keep you on the edge of your seat! What would you do if you died and your memories were uploaded to a computer? Meet Jennika Monroe, a dead girl trapped inside a computer. She doesn't know how she died. The last she remembers is studying for her college exam. Then she discovers a couple of other girls like herself inside the system. How can she get people on the outside to notice them and what will she do when she discovers the truth concerning her death? The mystery builds as the story unfolds and the ending is unexpected! Surprisingly, this story isn't scary and it's more exciting than anything else. I recommend it for ages 11 and up.
I received an ARC and this is my honest and voluntary review.
I received an ARC and this is my honest and voluntary review.
March 21, 2019
I REALLY enjoyed this book. It was thought provoking, well plotted, witty, entertaining, and contains great dialogue. Jennika is fascinating!
I received a pre-published eARC for review consideration.
I received a pre-published eARC for review consideration.
October 25, 2020
Technology is the Foil for an Interesting Story of Sentient Beings
The book starts a little slowly. Early on, the technology juxtaposition of uploaded memory engrams and current computer technology seems a little disjointed. Fortunately, the story gets past this and you can focus on the evolving sentient being instead of the technology. The visualization of much of the technology is pretty decent (from the perspective of someone who knows it in detail).
Jennika, our protagonist, seems to act in ways that age and background appropriate. That makes the story more enjoyable. The character development is good and the world-view is quite vivid.
The story touches on interesting topics such as how to recognize sentient AI and the rights of sentient beings.
The book starts a little slowly. Early on, the technology juxtaposition of uploaded memory engrams and current computer technology seems a little disjointed. Fortunately, the story gets past this and you can focus on the evolving sentient being instead of the technology. The visualization of much of the technology is pretty decent (from the perspective of someone who knows it in detail).
Jennika, our protagonist, seems to act in ways that age and background appropriate. That makes the story more enjoyable. The character development is good and the world-view is quite vivid.
The story touches on interesting topics such as how to recognize sentient AI and the rights of sentient beings.
March 2, 2021
Good concept but flawed
Overall I like the book and if you are a geek you might too. But be warned the the overall mystery of the MCs death is not a very tight mystery story. I won’t say more than the fact that there would likely have been enough evidence for experienced defectives to put together a viable suspect. I little more work on making the mystery a little believable would have added a star or two to my review.
Overall I like the book and if you are a geek you might too. But be warned the the overall mystery of the MCs death is not a very tight mystery story. I won’t say more than the fact that there would likely have been enough evidence for experienced defectives to put together a viable suspect. I little more work on making the mystery a little believable would have added a star or two to my review.
April 26, 2019
Interesting
All bow down to our teen AI overload. A possibly disturbing, possibly awesome premise. This could almost be like a super hero origin type story. I enjoyed the read, and wish it was a bit longer. I would think a sequel would be well worth waiting for.
All bow down to our teen AI overload. A possibly disturbing, possibly awesome premise. This could almost be like a super hero origin type story. I enjoyed the read, and wish it was a bit longer. I would think a sequel would be well worth waiting for.
September 14, 2019
Unusual subject, engaging story
I really enjoyed this story. It was different and a quick read. Try it, you will be pleasantly surprised. Will definitely read more of this author’s books
I really enjoyed this story. It was different and a quick read. Try it, you will be pleasantly surprised. Will definitely read more of this author’s books
April 26, 2019
Good read
This wasn't my usual genre but I couldn't put my kindle down from start to finish. Very worthwhile book to read.
This wasn't my usual genre but I couldn't put my kindle down from start to finish. Very worthwhile book to read.
May 4, 2021
Scary
In some ways this book is scary....and it caught me up in the storyline very quickly and completely. Well worth the price and the reading. Kudos to Zen DiPietro !!
In some ways this book is scary....and it caught me up in the storyline very quickly and completely. Well worth the price and the reading. Kudos to Zen DiPietro !!
June 11, 2025
Wow. Why isn't this a series? I want more!
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