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The Sertorius Scrolls #2
The Noise of War
The only survivor of a brutal battle, driven by a desperate need to see his family again…Rome, 105 BC. Quintus Sertorius fought while the enemy slaughtered 90,000 of his brethren in the city’s bloodiest defeat. Battling night terrors and survivor’s guilt, he vows to preserve his beloved Rome and embarks on a covert mission deep into enemy territory.
Sertorius grows his beard and disguises himself in the garb of a Gaul, all the while his stomach churns with fear of discovery. But in order to gain vital information about the invaders, he must sink deeper into their ranks. As he uncovers the depths of the barbarian’s depravity he alone will have to rise to Rome’s aid.
Will Sertorius avenge his comrades and reunite with loved ones, or will the next massacre mark the end of the Republic?
The Noise of War is the second book in the best-selling Sertorius Scrolls historical fiction series. If you like vivid backdrops, the courage of conviction, and a fight for survival, then you’ll love Vincent B. Davis II’s compelling saga.
Buy The Noise of War to don your armor for a heart-pounding adventure today!
Sertorius grows his beard and disguises himself in the garb of a Gaul, all the while his stomach churns with fear of discovery. But in order to gain vital information about the invaders, he must sink deeper into their ranks. As he uncovers the depths of the barbarian’s depravity he alone will have to rise to Rome’s aid.
Will Sertorius avenge his comrades and reunite with loved ones, or will the next massacre mark the end of the Republic?
The Noise of War is the second book in the best-selling Sertorius Scrolls historical fiction series. If you like vivid backdrops, the courage of conviction, and a fight for survival, then you’ll love Vincent B. Davis II’s compelling saga.
Buy The Noise of War to don your armor for a heart-pounding adventure today!
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Published April 8, 2019
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Vincent B. Davis II
20 books116 followersVincent B. Davis II writes historical fiction books to keep the past alive through the power of storytelling. He is also an entrepreneur, speaker, and veteran who is a proud graduate of East Tennessee State University and was honorably discharged from the US Army in 2022. Armed with a pen and an entrepreneurial spirit, Vincent quit his day job and decided it was as good a time as any to follow his dream. He went on to publish six historical fiction novels, four of which have now become Amazon International Best Sellers.
Vincent is also a devoted and depressed Carolina Panthers fan and a proud pet parent to his rescue pups, Buddy and Jenny. Join Vincent in celebrating the past through the pages of his books. His newsletter, The Legion, is more than just another author email list. It’s a community of readers who enjoy free additional content to enhance their reading experience—HD Maps, family trees, Latin glossaries, free eBooks, and more. You can join the community and snag your freebies at https://vincentbdavisii.com/join-the-....
Vincent also loves connecting with his readers through social media. Find him on Facebook or Instagram @vbdavisii, vincentbdavisii.com, or email him at Vincent@thirteenthpress.com.
Vincent is also a devoted and depressed Carolina Panthers fan and a proud pet parent to his rescue pups, Buddy and Jenny. Join Vincent in celebrating the past through the pages of his books. His newsletter, The Legion, is more than just another author email list. It’s a community of readers who enjoy free additional content to enhance their reading experience—HD Maps, family trees, Latin glossaries, free eBooks, and more. You can join the community and snag your freebies at https://vincentbdavisii.com/join-the-....
Vincent also loves connecting with his readers through social media. Find him on Facebook or Instagram @vbdavisii, vincentbdavisii.com, or email him at Vincent@thirteenthpress.com.
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April 11, 2019
This exciting novel carries us on through the next stages in Sertorius' life. We see him right after the defeat at Arausio, the battle which he has lived through. Several other survivors join him, his friend, Lucius, and lover, Arrea, near the town of Arelate. Among these men is Centurion Scrofa, to me one of the most unforgettable characters in Roman historical fiction, an erstwhile prisoner of the Cimbri, now without thumbs and feeling completely useless. He had been released and sent back to the Roman lines as an example of what fate would await for Romans should they still oppose the Cimbri. Sertorius does make it back to Marius' camp with a handful of these men, after being turned away at another fort. Marius has instituted his military reforms. Upon his return from leave in Rome to visit his family, in Massilia, he does buy a horse and a slave, Apollonius, and also notes a possible insurrection, foiling an assassination attempt. On Marius' orders, the freshly promoted Tribune Sertorius infiltrates the Cimbri camp, disguised as a member of an allied tribe. He proves his worth in single combat, in hunting, and breaks a wild horse even the stable master could not. He escapes, with plenty of intelligence for Marius, leading several ex-POWs. There follow several big battles, finally wiping out the Cimbri, so they are no more threat. We see the beginning of the rift between Marius and Sulla. We do meet again the man who had helped Sertorius and the POWs escape, a Lusitanian, whom I feel we'll encounter again. As the book closes, Sertorius, on his way back to Rome again tells us:
"I had my life, no war to worry about, a horse and a friend alongside me"--Apollonius, now a freedman--"and a future ahead of me."
How bright will it be in the next installment? I anticipate the continuation eagerly.
This story was amazing; the only thing spoiling it were a few proofing errors. They did not spoil my enjoyment but it would be nice if they were corrected. There were some anachronisms: "barrel of potatoes", stirrups, which weren't used by Romans until centuries later, and, my old bugbear, some okay's. It wasn't until 1839-40 the word came into general use. There were some wrong word choices. Among them: "rank-in-file" instead of "rank-and-file"; "alter" instead of "altar"; "shuttered" instead of "shuddered"; "heard" instead of "herd"; "brows burrowed" instead of "brows furrowed". The last made me smile to attempt to visualize it as written. Would Sertorius have had such a close relationship with his slave in real life? They became intimate friends. The author did a marvelous job describing the various battles and the camaraderie among the men. The characterization was very strong.
Highly recommended.
"I had my life, no war to worry about, a horse and a friend alongside me"--Apollonius, now a freedman--"and a future ahead of me."
How bright will it be in the next installment? I anticipate the continuation eagerly.
This story was amazing; the only thing spoiling it were a few proofing errors. They did not spoil my enjoyment but it would be nice if they were corrected. There were some anachronisms: "barrel of potatoes", stirrups, which weren't used by Romans until centuries later, and, my old bugbear, some okay's. It wasn't until 1839-40 the word came into general use. There were some wrong word choices. Among them: "rank-in-file" instead of "rank-and-file"; "alter" instead of "altar"; "shuttered" instead of "shuddered"; "heard" instead of "herd"; "brows burrowed" instead of "brows furrowed". The last made me smile to attempt to visualize it as written. Would Sertorius have had such a close relationship with his slave in real life? They became intimate friends. The author did a marvelous job describing the various battles and the camaraderie among the men. The characterization was very strong.
Highly recommended.
October 22, 2019
I enjoy visits to Ancient Rome and, since I listened to an audiobook of this one, it wasn’t even an armchair visit this time. First off, a disclaimer, I received this book gratis from Audioboom in exchange for a review. This review. I’ve just listened to another Davis’ book from a tangentially connected scrolls, but Quintus Sertorius’ storyline is by far my favorite. I even preferred the narration on this book, though both are done by the same person. Maybe I just like the protagonist that much more, a proper upright citizen, a good and moral man, navigating Roman war minded politics, this time Quintus becomes a spy and pretending to be a Gaul, joins their ranks to learn of their strategies and make them easier to defeat. Which is to say, this novel is bound to culminate in a military conflict and it does. A properly epic battle. Personally, I don’t read it for the military exploits, mainly I enjoy historical fiction for the descriptions, much like having a literary window into a bygone era. And the author does a really good job of creating such windows. Just as good of a job as he does with creating compelling interesting characters. In this book, Sertorius acquires a slave, a man of books and class, lowered in his circumstances, a terrific addition to the cast and a personal favorite. This novel also introduces Sulla, who is certain to be featured heavily in further scrolls. There are even excerpts of Sulla’s scrolls interspersed with the text, which personally I didn’t care for, I liked the uniformity of Quintus’ narration, but it was interesting to have a different perspective on the events. If characters and descriptions aren’t enough for you, there is plenty of action, excitement and dramatic suspense also. And then there’s Sertorious’ romantic challenges, because sometimes being an honorable man means putting family duties above one’s own desires. It all only serves to make him a more well rounded character, just when you thought a strict military Roman would be all angles. So yeah, at any rate, I’ve enjoyed this one very much and the narrator did a very good job with it, his voice has the appropriate gravitas for historical fiction and the character personalities were made authentically distinct. All in all I was perfectly entertained during several days of walks, bike rides and errands. This is normally my sort of thing, actually, I don't normally go for series or novels so heavily military themed, but there's something so engaging about Davis' Ancient Rome. Which is to say I’m looking forward to further adventures of Quintus Sertorius. Recommended for fans of historical fiction.
September 13, 2021
The second book in the Sertorius, Lucius series of ancient Rome is solidly packed with warfare and daring/risky feats of bravery featuring Sertorius on his own. He takes on the challenge of joining the tribe readying to defeat Rome at the behest of Marius. It is quite an adventure with enormous physical risk. The descriptions of these giant foes preparing to conquer Rome are over the top, certainly frightening to read of. How could Sertorius infiltrate this warrior tribe? Read the book to find out. Be prepared for some bloody scenes.
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One of the best descriptions of Ancient Roman battles I've ever read. Very sympathetic character in Quintus Sertorius—probably among the most misunderstood and tragic military heroes in antiquity.
May 2, 2019
Great book
This book is about the Late Roman Republic and the men who shaped her history. Many of the named characters in this story were real people that participated in the events in this book. I highly recommend this book to everyone.
This book is about the Late Roman Republic and the men who shaped her history. Many of the named characters in this story were real people that participated in the events in this book. I highly recommend this book to everyone.
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April 23, 2019If you are a fan of ancient Roman history, then you need to get on this series!
After the massacre of the Roman army by the Cimbri at Arausio, Quintus Sertorius finds that he is not the only survivor. He lost his brother, 90,000 fellow soldiers, and his own eye, but he still has his good friend Lucius and his lover Arrea. But such a crushing defeat weighs heavy on a man. Eventually, he and Lucius discover about a dozen more survivors who Quintus then leads back to the Roman camp now commanded by Marius. Once they arrive at the camp and begin to recover, Quintus reunites with Marius and meets his new legate Lucius Cornelius Sulla. They have devised a plan for Quintus to become a spy and infiltrate the Cimbri camp. Quintus realizes that this is likely suicide, but he feels compelled to accept the mission to avenge his brother and fellow soldiers. As he embarks on this new quest, will he be able to muster the courage to help save the Republic? Or is it all for naught anyway?
If you are a fan of ancient Roman history, then you need to get on this series! Davis has dug up some great history that is not well known to many people, even those of us that frequent Roman history quite a bit. He has chosen to chronicle out the life of Quintus Sertorius in this series of books. The first book, The Man with Two Names, is of his early service in politics and joining the legion through the defeat of Arausio. This new installment picks up where the previous left off and focuses on the continuation of his military service. This installment also introduces readers to Lucius Cornelius Sulla, who is much more well known throughout history as a consul, and who future books will no doubt clash with as he and Sertorius lead opposite ends in a future civil war. This book is rich with history of the Battles of Aquae Sextiae and Vercellae. Sertorius character continues to be developed in this book as he goes from a leader, threw a period of self-pity, to becoming a leader again, who often second guesses himself but displays a brilliant military mind nonetheless. One of my favorite parts of the first book was the developing relationship between Sertorius and Arrea. There are aspects of this in the book, but I leave it up to readers to discover what is going on between them.
I received a complimentary copy of this title from the publisher. The views and opinions expressed within are my own.
After the massacre of the Roman army by the Cimbri at Arausio, Quintus Sertorius finds that he is not the only survivor. He lost his brother, 90,000 fellow soldiers, and his own eye, but he still has his good friend Lucius and his lover Arrea. But such a crushing defeat weighs heavy on a man. Eventually, he and Lucius discover about a dozen more survivors who Quintus then leads back to the Roman camp now commanded by Marius. Once they arrive at the camp and begin to recover, Quintus reunites with Marius and meets his new legate Lucius Cornelius Sulla. They have devised a plan for Quintus to become a spy and infiltrate the Cimbri camp. Quintus realizes that this is likely suicide, but he feels compelled to accept the mission to avenge his brother and fellow soldiers. As he embarks on this new quest, will he be able to muster the courage to help save the Republic? Or is it all for naught anyway?
If you are a fan of ancient Roman history, then you need to get on this series! Davis has dug up some great history that is not well known to many people, even those of us that frequent Roman history quite a bit. He has chosen to chronicle out the life of Quintus Sertorius in this series of books. The first book, The Man with Two Names, is of his early service in politics and joining the legion through the defeat of Arausio. This new installment picks up where the previous left off and focuses on the continuation of his military service. This installment also introduces readers to Lucius Cornelius Sulla, who is much more well known throughout history as a consul, and who future books will no doubt clash with as he and Sertorius lead opposite ends in a future civil war. This book is rich with history of the Battles of Aquae Sextiae and Vercellae. Sertorius character continues to be developed in this book as he goes from a leader, threw a period of self-pity, to becoming a leader again, who often second guesses himself but displays a brilliant military mind nonetheless. One of my favorite parts of the first book was the developing relationship between Sertorius and Arrea. There are aspects of this in the book, but I leave it up to readers to discover what is going on between them.
I received a complimentary copy of this title from the publisher. The views and opinions expressed within are my own.
April 17, 2019
I very much enjoyed book 2 The Noise of War. I wasn't ready for it to end. I guess I'll just have to wait for the next installment.
The author does a great job describing the battles and the areas in which they are fought along with the structure of the camps etc. It makes it seem like you are there. The hero is someone you can empathize with. He's a stand up guy
The author does a great job describing the battles and the areas in which they are fought along with the structure of the camps etc. It makes it seem like you are there. The hero is someone you can empathize with. He's a stand up guy
December 29, 2022
History brought to life
History brought to life in a way which few authors can manage. The battle scenes stand out especially. They bring the mood, terror and emotion direct to the reader like a gladius through the spine. Truly excellent work!
History brought to life in a way which few authors can manage. The battle scenes stand out especially. They bring the mood, terror and emotion direct to the reader like a gladius through the spine. Truly excellent work!
June 16, 2024
Brutal and moving, tragic and hopeful. This second book in the series leaves me wanting more. The failing Roman Republic is depicted so vividly it felt as if I were there. War is a horror, no doubt about it.
September 27, 2019
Dang this was good. Full review here- https://www.alwroteabook.com/2019/09/...
April 19, 2021
It's probably my own fault for reading these books out of order (they do all stand alone, but I read the third one first). I can far too easily see the improvements made in the author's craft as he goes along. That is to be expected on some levels.
This time, Quintus Sertorius is asked to infiltrate a camp of Gauls in order to gain military intelligence ... which he does, by dint of linguistic skill. He seems surprised by how similar these men are to his own, with how they care about their brothers in arms, etc. Nevertheless, he gains the necessary information and, after witnessing some truly horrific treatment of prisoners of war, manages to get back to his own legion.
There are several realistic depictions of ancient warfare that may be upsetting to some readers ... but they are far from gratuitous. The historical Sertorius was, after all, a Roman tribune. The author has clearly done a lot of homework from primary sources, which is great.
What cost this book a star was the editing. Use of "exert" when "excerpt" was intended, as well as "stead" rather than "steed" were consistent ... and irksome ... throughout. Homophone errors are a pet peeve of mine.
This time, Quintus Sertorius is asked to infiltrate a camp of Gauls in order to gain military intelligence ... which he does, by dint of linguistic skill. He seems surprised by how similar these men are to his own, with how they care about their brothers in arms, etc. Nevertheless, he gains the necessary information and, after witnessing some truly horrific treatment of prisoners of war, manages to get back to his own legion.
There are several realistic depictions of ancient warfare that may be upsetting to some readers ... but they are far from gratuitous. The historical Sertorius was, after all, a Roman tribune. The author has clearly done a lot of homework from primary sources, which is great.
What cost this book a star was the editing. Use of "exert" when "excerpt" was intended, as well as "stead" rather than "steed" were consistent ... and irksome ... throughout. Homophone errors are a pet peeve of mine.
April 17, 2019
Firstly i'd like to say thank you to Vincent for giving me a copy of this book. It was very kind of him. I'd also like to say that in no way did that kindness make me give this book a 5 star rating. With that said here is my review. There are some authors in my reading life that i absolutely adore. They can do no wrong. Steven Saylor and Bernard Cornwell are just 2 of those. I now have another to add to my list. The Noise of War is the second book in the Sertorius Scroll series. It's a very well written historical fiction novel about Quintus Sertorius who lived from 123-72 BCE. If like me you can't get enough of anything that has to do with ancient rome then this book is for you. He made the characters come to life and i think it's a very import aspect of historical fiction. Another thing that i like are the battles don't drag on and on. Nothing bores me more than chapter after chapter of fighting. It's just a darn good book in my opinion :) I'm already looking forward to Book 3.
October 6, 2019
This is the third book that I've read by this author. Overall, while I've enjoyed these stories, this is the second one where I became a little confused with the names of the characters, as in following along with who was doing what. I don't know. I liked this one because it was longer than the two novellas I'd previously listened to, so there was much more going on. At this point, it's easy to tell that a lot of research went into this story; I love research, although I rarely have a reason for it. I'd love to know how much time went into this story in both the research and writing aspects. The descriptions made it very easy to imagine what the characters were experiencing throughout the story. I loved the relationship Quentus had with his horse and the slave (forgot his name). I'd definitely be interested in hearing more from this author.
I feel like I need to come up with more compliments for the narrator Joshua Saxon. The first time I heard his voice I knew he was a keeper. LOL
I received a free audiobook copy from the narrator in exchange for an honest review.
I feel like I need to come up with more compliments for the narrator Joshua Saxon. The first time I heard his voice I knew he was a keeper. LOL
I received a free audiobook copy from the narrator in exchange for an honest review.
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March 11, 2020
"I wanted to tell him how foolish he was. How misguided, how ruinously misguided were those stories. I wanted to tell him that if he was a soldier, his brothers would die, his friends would die, and that he too, eventually, would die. I wanted to tell him that there was nothing good in war, that there was no glory or adventure to be had in it."
“The only men who praise war are those who have never experienced it,”
The Noise of War is the continuation of The Sertorius Scrolls series which is set on the Late Roman Republic era and narrated the story of Centurion Quintus Sertorius.
“You’re living for your epitaph. You’re a man already dead, at least in your own mind. You must live in the present, warrior. In this world, not the next. Each day you do not, you miss an opportunity to write your legacy.”
“Legacies aren’t written on scrolls or iron tablets, but in the hearts and memories of men. Every day you waste an opportunity to speak into the lives of the men you serve with, your legacy wanes away.”
Battle of Arausio is over in which Rome faced a catastrophic defeat in the hands of the Cimbri tribe of Gaul. Quintius gravely injured barely survived the battle and returned home to his family at Nursia, where he was forced to marry his brother's widow. But soon he had to return to Consul Gaius Marius in Gaul where his legate Cornelius Sulla had devised a special task for him. Quintius is being promoted to Tribune and tasked with espionage duties in the enemy camp. To preserve his beloved Rome, Quintius disguising himself as a Gaul, embarked on a covert mission deep into Cimbri territory. But in order to gain vital information about them, he must sink deeper into their ranks. As he uncovers the depths of their war strategies and weakness, he alone will have to rise to Rome's aid. Will Sertorius avenge his comrades and reunite with loved ones, or will the next massacre mark the end of the Republic?
'War is a brutal and awful thing. In all my years living in it, I have never glorified it. But if there was ever a man to make it bearable, it was Gaius Marius.'
Review:
⚜️The cover is fascinating, but the title doesn't sound relatable to the book. The last defender of Rome could have been a more appropriate title, bcoz in the book Quintius and Marius are referred as the Last hope of Rome.
⚜️Like the first book, this one also structured as a memoir, written in the first-person narrative of Quintius. I miss Quintius's friend Lucius's POV here, but the addition of Sulla's POV is refreshing and interesting to read.
⚜️Davis had immaculately fleshed out characters, both historical and fiction into life. Quintius is an ideal man from every perspective. Liked his relation with his horse Sura and slave, Apollonius. Other characters are also well developed, but my personal favorite is Sulla. He is absolutely a creepy character and going to be proved the most dreadful rival of Marius in the upcoming book.
⚜️Davis had perfectly portrayed the life of a soldier in the Roman army, their tough regime, mutual camaraderie, long arduous marches on foot, the night patrolling, drinking with comrades, feeling of homesickness, the misery of prisoners of war and PTSD of the survivors. Further, the battle scenes were written so beautifully that I feel experiencing the whole thing through my own eyes.
⚜️I didn’t like that the book doesn't include a map and a glossary which were given in the 1st book. To understand the meaning of Latin words I have to frequently refer to the 1st book which was annoying.
⚜️My other quibble with the book is that it had some proofing error, which I think could have been easily avoided. They didn't spoil my reading experience but it would be nice if they were corrected.
⚜️The climax is satisfactory. The story ends on a happy note and the introduction of a new Lusitanian character, Vallicus in the epilogue drops hints for the upcoming book.
Overall I enjoyed reading the book. The Noise of War had certainly set the expectation higher for the next book. I am looking forward to reading Bodies in the Tiber which will be released in May. Lastly, I highly recommend reading this book to all the fans of historical fiction.
My Rating: ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
“The only men who praise war are those who have never experienced it,”
The Noise of War is the continuation of The Sertorius Scrolls series which is set on the Late Roman Republic era and narrated the story of Centurion Quintus Sertorius.
“You’re living for your epitaph. You’re a man already dead, at least in your own mind. You must live in the present, warrior. In this world, not the next. Each day you do not, you miss an opportunity to write your legacy.”
“Legacies aren’t written on scrolls or iron tablets, but in the hearts and memories of men. Every day you waste an opportunity to speak into the lives of the men you serve with, your legacy wanes away.”
Battle of Arausio is over in which Rome faced a catastrophic defeat in the hands of the Cimbri tribe of Gaul. Quintius gravely injured barely survived the battle and returned home to his family at Nursia, where he was forced to marry his brother's widow. But soon he had to return to Consul Gaius Marius in Gaul where his legate Cornelius Sulla had devised a special task for him. Quintius is being promoted to Tribune and tasked with espionage duties in the enemy camp. To preserve his beloved Rome, Quintius disguising himself as a Gaul, embarked on a covert mission deep into Cimbri territory. But in order to gain vital information about them, he must sink deeper into their ranks. As he uncovers the depths of their war strategies and weakness, he alone will have to rise to Rome's aid. Will Sertorius avenge his comrades and reunite with loved ones, or will the next massacre mark the end of the Republic?
'War is a brutal and awful thing. In all my years living in it, I have never glorified it. But if there was ever a man to make it bearable, it was Gaius Marius.'
Review:
⚜️The cover is fascinating, but the title doesn't sound relatable to the book. The last defender of Rome could have been a more appropriate title, bcoz in the book Quintius and Marius are referred as the Last hope of Rome.
⚜️Like the first book, this one also structured as a memoir, written in the first-person narrative of Quintius. I miss Quintius's friend Lucius's POV here, but the addition of Sulla's POV is refreshing and interesting to read.
⚜️Davis had immaculately fleshed out characters, both historical and fiction into life. Quintius is an ideal man from every perspective. Liked his relation with his horse Sura and slave, Apollonius. Other characters are also well developed, but my personal favorite is Sulla. He is absolutely a creepy character and going to be proved the most dreadful rival of Marius in the upcoming book.
⚜️Davis had perfectly portrayed the life of a soldier in the Roman army, their tough regime, mutual camaraderie, long arduous marches on foot, the night patrolling, drinking with comrades, feeling of homesickness, the misery of prisoners of war and PTSD of the survivors. Further, the battle scenes were written so beautifully that I feel experiencing the whole thing through my own eyes.
⚜️I didn’t like that the book doesn't include a map and a glossary which were given in the 1st book. To understand the meaning of Latin words I have to frequently refer to the 1st book which was annoying.
⚜️My other quibble with the book is that it had some proofing error, which I think could have been easily avoided. They didn't spoil my reading experience but it would be nice if they were corrected.
⚜️The climax is satisfactory. The story ends on a happy note and the introduction of a new Lusitanian character, Vallicus in the epilogue drops hints for the upcoming book.
Overall I enjoyed reading the book. The Noise of War had certainly set the expectation higher for the next book. I am looking forward to reading Bodies in the Tiber which will be released in May. Lastly, I highly recommend reading this book to all the fans of historical fiction.
My Rating: ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
July 9, 2021
This is book two in the series; I had not read book one but had no trouble picking up the story. Told in first person, our protagonist Quintus Sertorius was one of the few ragged, beat-up survivors of the battle of Arausio. Rome suffered a terrible defeat and Quintus felt shamed that he lived when so many others, including his brother, died heroically. I would say that the whole book is devoted to his attempt to redeem himself. No one—except perhaps Quintus—would deny that he succeeded. Put into situations that would deter many a lesser man, Quintus not only succeeded in his missions, he went beyond all expectations. Perhaps he had a death wish; if so, he was denied that atonement.
Once General (and Counsul) Marius returned to the area, Quintus and his little band of companions rejoined the legion. Quintus was known to Marius and was reestablished in the great man’s favor. My knowledge of Marius and Sulla comes from Colleen McCullough (First Man in Rome), and these characters are written in the same mode; they felt very familiar. A New Man (in other words, not a noble), Marius was heroic, unbeaten, and fearless, but he still had to prove himself every step of the way. Sulla, on the other hand, was an aristocrat down on his luck. But he believed in his destiny and used Marius as a stepping-stone, hating him all the time. Both of them had a use for Quintus, who was sent to spy on the Tectosages, allies of the formidable Cimbri; they needed to be stopped before all the tribes joined forces. Naturally, Quintus was terrified; this had never been done before. How was he going to prove himself before they killed him? He obviously didn’t belong:
“It’s best you leave before you get yourself hurt,” the father said, his drunk sons cackling behind him. It was clear that they weren’t concerned for my safety.
“I’ll fight any man here to prove I’m able,” I said, spitting out the words before I could stop myself. As they turned around and sized me up, I immediately regretted my words. The Gallic prisoner had told me I must do this, but I wondered if I could have avoided it, if only for a bit longer. Too late now, though.
“Is that right?” the father said.
“Any man among you,” I said again, doubling down on my stupidity.
All eyes turned to one of the younger men, and it made sense why. As tall as all the other barbarians, this man was larger than the rest. His calves were thicker than my thighs, and the muscles of his back extended so that his arms hung out like wings.
Needless to say, since he lived to tell the tale Quintus did well, even if he did take a couple of knocks. His information helped the Romans win the battle against the Tectosages, and then they had to take on the real enemy, two hundred thousand strong. This was to be Marius’s finest hour, and the battle against the Cimbri literally saved Rome. Quintus was there every step of the way, and his story gave us a good piece of history. I came away with a significant understanding of life in the Roman legions, good and bad, and how formidable they were even against impossible odds. Well recommended.
Once General (and Counsul) Marius returned to the area, Quintus and his little band of companions rejoined the legion. Quintus was known to Marius and was reestablished in the great man’s favor. My knowledge of Marius and Sulla comes from Colleen McCullough (First Man in Rome), and these characters are written in the same mode; they felt very familiar. A New Man (in other words, not a noble), Marius was heroic, unbeaten, and fearless, but he still had to prove himself every step of the way. Sulla, on the other hand, was an aristocrat down on his luck. But he believed in his destiny and used Marius as a stepping-stone, hating him all the time. Both of them had a use for Quintus, who was sent to spy on the Tectosages, allies of the formidable Cimbri; they needed to be stopped before all the tribes joined forces. Naturally, Quintus was terrified; this had never been done before. How was he going to prove himself before they killed him? He obviously didn’t belong:
“It’s best you leave before you get yourself hurt,” the father said, his drunk sons cackling behind him. It was clear that they weren’t concerned for my safety.
“I’ll fight any man here to prove I’m able,” I said, spitting out the words before I could stop myself. As they turned around and sized me up, I immediately regretted my words. The Gallic prisoner had told me I must do this, but I wondered if I could have avoided it, if only for a bit longer. Too late now, though.
“Is that right?” the father said.
“Any man among you,” I said again, doubling down on my stupidity.
All eyes turned to one of the younger men, and it made sense why. As tall as all the other barbarians, this man was larger than the rest. His calves were thicker than my thighs, and the muscles of his back extended so that his arms hung out like wings.
Needless to say, since he lived to tell the tale Quintus did well, even if he did take a couple of knocks. His information helped the Romans win the battle against the Tectosages, and then they had to take on the real enemy, two hundred thousand strong. This was to be Marius’s finest hour, and the battle against the Cimbri literally saved Rome. Quintus was there every step of the way, and his story gave us a good piece of history. I came away with a significant understanding of life in the Roman legions, good and bad, and how formidable they were even against impossible odds. Well recommended.
February 22, 2021
Okay, since I didn’t realize this when I picked up both books, I feel the need to note that this is a sequel to The Man With Two Names. And honestly, I think I liked it a little better. The author definitely improved between books!
The story follows Quintus Sertorius, picking up a few months after the end of the first book. It starts out bleak and dark and…honestly continues that way through much of the book, taking a good hard look at the nightmares and mental effects of war. I think the book really shines at that—the soldier’s attitudes toward battle and war, Quintus’s nightmares, everything is spot-on and very sobering.
Another thing this book takes a good hard look at is the way soldiers—and barbarians—behave. Talk, mention, and implication of sex (and sometimes in a crude way) is…a little more common than I expected, although it didn’t really bother me because I’ll take realism over unrealistically sanitized fiction any day. But it did throw me a little.
Quintus’s character arc was satisfying, beginning with his doubts and nightmares and ending with some bit of peace for him, and hope. I was a little thrown that there seemed to be no resolution to the romance element, but I figure that happens in the third book. But I loved his relationship with his best friend, his comrades, and his slave—this author definitely does friendships better than romance.
In general, the side characters are vivid and interesting, especially Marius. This book introduces more nuance with him—how much better is he, really, than the scheming politicians of the first book? Does every leader have their corruption?
The writing has improved, I think, since the first book, and I was almost never thrown out of the story by an odd turn of phrase.
Quintus’s time in the Cimbri camp was interesting, but a smaller part of the book than I expected. At first it seemed like the author was trying a little too hard to establish how horrible the Cimbri were, but by the time Quintus left, it really worked for me. (That one scene was especially…shudder.)
The climax of this book really shines, though. The battles, the ever-increasing stakes, the leadup are all spot-on. Battle is never glorified but there are moments of glory. The descriptions are graphic but the graphic-ness is never gratuitous—it serves to show the reality of war. All in all, I really enjoyed this book.
The story follows Quintus Sertorius, picking up a few months after the end of the first book. It starts out bleak and dark and…honestly continues that way through much of the book, taking a good hard look at the nightmares and mental effects of war. I think the book really shines at that—the soldier’s attitudes toward battle and war, Quintus’s nightmares, everything is spot-on and very sobering.
Another thing this book takes a good hard look at is the way soldiers—and barbarians—behave. Talk, mention, and implication of sex (and sometimes in a crude way) is…a little more common than I expected, although it didn’t really bother me because I’ll take realism over unrealistically sanitized fiction any day. But it did throw me a little.
Quintus’s character arc was satisfying, beginning with his doubts and nightmares and ending with some bit of peace for him, and hope. I was a little thrown that there seemed to be no resolution to the romance element, but I figure that happens in the third book. But I loved his relationship with his best friend, his comrades, and his slave—this author definitely does friendships better than romance.
In general, the side characters are vivid and interesting, especially Marius. This book introduces more nuance with him—how much better is he, really, than the scheming politicians of the first book? Does every leader have their corruption?
The writing has improved, I think, since the first book, and I was almost never thrown out of the story by an odd turn of phrase.
Quintus’s time in the Cimbri camp was interesting, but a smaller part of the book than I expected. At first it seemed like the author was trying a little too hard to establish how horrible the Cimbri were, but by the time Quintus left, it really worked for me. (That one scene was especially…shudder.)
The climax of this book really shines, though. The battles, the ever-increasing stakes, the leadup are all spot-on. Battle is never glorified but there are moments of glory. The descriptions are graphic but the graphic-ness is never gratuitous—it serves to show the reality of war. All in all, I really enjoyed this book.
June 5, 2019
I got this book when it was first released, but due to many events in life, I was not able to finish until almost two moths post release, having to set this book down for a week or longer at a time.... I say that to say this: if you have to put this book down for an extended time, it is very easy to get right back into the story.
Very well written, as one now comes to expect from this author, the story picks up right where the first book (The Man With Two Names) left off (side note, the interim story, Son of Mars, is a nice filler to keep the fan base's appetites whetted between The Man With Two Names and The Noise of War) .
Following the hero on his newest adventures, one becomes immediately immersed with the trials and tribulations while the story plays out in front of their eyes. I found myself with a heightened pulse and heavier breathing during the especially tense moments, envisioning Sertorious as he struggles to survive and complete his clandestine mission, fight for his life and the lives of his comrades during the heat of battle, and have conflict of conscience versus duty on and off of the blood stained battlefield... this story, like the previous two written by Mr. Davis, is a very enjoyable read that easily takes the reader away from the mundane tasks and stresses of everyday life and catapults them into the world of ancient Rome, and keeps the pages turning until the completion, which again leaves us eagerly awaiting the next installment of this series.
Until the time comes that the next book is released, I am left to my own devices, trying to guess where Mr. Davis will take us on the next literary adventure... but I am certain that the wait will definitely be greatly rewarded.... Bravo, yet again, Mr. Davis!!!!!!!!!
Very well written, as one now comes to expect from this author, the story picks up right where the first book (The Man With Two Names) left off (side note, the interim story, Son of Mars, is a nice filler to keep the fan base's appetites whetted between The Man With Two Names and The Noise of War) .
Following the hero on his newest adventures, one becomes immediately immersed with the trials and tribulations while the story plays out in front of their eyes. I found myself with a heightened pulse and heavier breathing during the especially tense moments, envisioning Sertorious as he struggles to survive and complete his clandestine mission, fight for his life and the lives of his comrades during the heat of battle, and have conflict of conscience versus duty on and off of the blood stained battlefield... this story, like the previous two written by Mr. Davis, is a very enjoyable read that easily takes the reader away from the mundane tasks and stresses of everyday life and catapults them into the world of ancient Rome, and keeps the pages turning until the completion, which again leaves us eagerly awaiting the next installment of this series.
Until the time comes that the next book is released, I am left to my own devices, trying to guess where Mr. Davis will take us on the next literary adventure... but I am certain that the wait will definitely be greatly rewarded.... Bravo, yet again, Mr. Davis!!!!!!!!!
December 12, 2019
( Format : Audiobook )
"Dampness rusts men like swords."
Following directly on from the ending of book one, The Man with Two Names, and the horrifying, almost total destruction of the Roman army, where some 90,000 Roman soldiers were believed to have died, miraculously, Quintus Sertorius wakes to find himself still alive. He has lost one eye, and his brother. Eventually, a battered group of some 27 men are regrouped from the total army and begin the treck back to find Marius and his army.
Set a little over 100 years B.C. and told in the first person from Sertonius' perspective, the book is based on actual events and historical people when Rome began it's expansion and military achievements. Well written, it is atmospheric, conveying the harshness of battle and of existence itself - they were a tough people, then. It is a thrilling read which pulls the reader through the terrors and sadness and leaves that person wanting more. Narration is by Joshua Saxon, whose slightly husky voice perfectly captures the presence of our main protagonist, Sertorius, as he recounts his story in his scrol!s. With excellent pacing, emotion and inflection, this is a fine performance.
I was most fortunate in being freely gifted with a complimentary copy of The Noise of War, by the rights holder, at my request. Thank you so much. Ever a fan of novels set in the historical Roman period, this book covers a slightly less written about era when the Republic still stood and before Rome seemed invincible. Definitely recommended for all who enjoy military engagements from the times when fighting was very close up and personal and all wishing to extend their understanding of the greatness that was the Roman Empire.
"Dampness rusts men like swords."
Following directly on from the ending of book one, The Man with Two Names, and the horrifying, almost total destruction of the Roman army, where some 90,000 Roman soldiers were believed to have died, miraculously, Quintus Sertorius wakes to find himself still alive. He has lost one eye, and his brother. Eventually, a battered group of some 27 men are regrouped from the total army and begin the treck back to find Marius and his army.
Set a little over 100 years B.C. and told in the first person from Sertonius' perspective, the book is based on actual events and historical people when Rome began it's expansion and military achievements. Well written, it is atmospheric, conveying the harshness of battle and of existence itself - they were a tough people, then. It is a thrilling read which pulls the reader through the terrors and sadness and leaves that person wanting more. Narration is by Joshua Saxon, whose slightly husky voice perfectly captures the presence of our main protagonist, Sertorius, as he recounts his story in his scrol!s. With excellent pacing, emotion and inflection, this is a fine performance.
I was most fortunate in being freely gifted with a complimentary copy of The Noise of War, by the rights holder, at my request. Thank you so much. Ever a fan of novels set in the historical Roman period, this book covers a slightly less written about era when the Republic still stood and before Rome seemed invincible. Definitely recommended for all who enjoy military engagements from the times when fighting was very close up and personal and all wishing to extend their understanding of the greatness that was the Roman Empire.
April 9, 2020
I received this Advanced Readers Copy for free from the author/publisher. I am leaving this honest review freely, without consideration.
This is book two in the The Sertorius Scroll series. I did not read book one in the series, but I did not find that to be a hindrance. This book picks up after the battle of Arausio, which was waged in 105 BC. My assumption is that book one told the story of how the protagonist came to be at that battle. It’s not necessary reading to enjoy this book, but I intend to go back and read it, as I thoroughly enjoyed this book.
The book follows the protagonist as he is sent to spy on the Cumbria as they prepare to continue their war with Rome. I’m happy the book didn’t fall into the trope that I feared it might at this point.
The characters were well developed, you felt for the main character, and the losses that he had had, and those he continued to experience. He was an easy soul to root for as the story continued.
The writing was well done. Antiquity is not my specialty, but it feels like it is a specialty of the author, that comes through strong in the story telling. The pacing was good, and the story flowed nicely. As I said, I’ll be going back to find the first book in this series, and will be looking forward to the next installment as well...
As a note, when I rate on a scale of 1 to 5, I use 4 as a good book that I enjoyed, and may well re-read in the future. I reserve 5 stars for incredible over the top achievements, which are far and few between...
This is book two in the The Sertorius Scroll series. I did not read book one in the series, but I did not find that to be a hindrance. This book picks up after the battle of Arausio, which was waged in 105 BC. My assumption is that book one told the story of how the protagonist came to be at that battle. It’s not necessary reading to enjoy this book, but I intend to go back and read it, as I thoroughly enjoyed this book.
The book follows the protagonist as he is sent to spy on the Cumbria as they prepare to continue their war with Rome. I’m happy the book didn’t fall into the trope that I feared it might at this point.
The characters were well developed, you felt for the main character, and the losses that he had had, and those he continued to experience. He was an easy soul to root for as the story continued.
The writing was well done. Antiquity is not my specialty, but it feels like it is a specialty of the author, that comes through strong in the story telling. The pacing was good, and the story flowed nicely. As I said, I’ll be going back to find the first book in this series, and will be looking forward to the next installment as well...
As a note, when I rate on a scale of 1 to 5, I use 4 as a good book that I enjoyed, and may well re-read in the future. I reserve 5 stars for incredible over the top achievements, which are far and few between...
March 18, 2020
The Noise of War is a very realistic portrayal of a dark time in Roman history when the Germanic Cimbri had just inflicted upon Rome one of the most significant defeats the Republic ever suffered—the loss of 90,000 legionnaires. Davis does an excellent job of portraying the fear this loss generates and the personal scorn that the survivors suffer for the loss. He also succeeds in creating a genuine sense of what makes the barbarians so distinctive.
It takes a long time to get to the battles in this novel and I wish I knew more about the accounts of the actual war because a couple of the “tricks” that are used didn’t feel credible to me. For example, if the legionnaires can stand on a hilltop looking down at barbarians relaxing in the river, you would think the barbarians could see them as well and might start scrambling to arm and armor themselves while Marius makes his speech. The cavalry trick also seemed unlikely to me, but the strange thing about reality is that sometimes it is the most unlikely tricks that win the day. The novel was obviously thoroughly researched, so on balance I tend to credit the author’s portrayal over my skepticism.
And that really is the great strength of this book. This novel is so well researched that it makes you feel like you are walking the streets of Rome 2100 years ago, and that really is an amazing accomplishment.
I received this book free from Audiobook Boom in exchange for an honest review.
It takes a long time to get to the battles in this novel and I wish I knew more about the accounts of the actual war because a couple of the “tricks” that are used didn’t feel credible to me. For example, if the legionnaires can stand on a hilltop looking down at barbarians relaxing in the river, you would think the barbarians could see them as well and might start scrambling to arm and armor themselves while Marius makes his speech. The cavalry trick also seemed unlikely to me, but the strange thing about reality is that sometimes it is the most unlikely tricks that win the day. The novel was obviously thoroughly researched, so on balance I tend to credit the author’s portrayal over my skepticism.
And that really is the great strength of this book. This novel is so well researched that it makes you feel like you are walking the streets of Rome 2100 years ago, and that really is an amazing accomplishment.
I received this book free from Audiobook Boom in exchange for an honest review.
April 12, 2020
It was good enough to finish, but a lot of issues that a good editor should have cleared up. The writing is pretty smooth, and the characters are generally believable. The research seemed good, which described the era and lives of Roman soldiers pretty well. However, many times the word 'stead' was used instead of 'steed', and 'rouse' instead of 'ruse'. This throws the reader off. There were 'letters' to give information from characters not involved in the immediate plot, which were just dropped in without much context, so they were much more confusing and distracting than useful. The worst thing was a big deal was made about the hero going into the enemy camp as a spy to obtain information, but no information was used in the battle plans, so it became a complete sidebar as opposed to an important element in the historical events. One of my pet peeves is to drop in countless Latin words, such as saying 'amicus' instead of 'friend', when the characters are speaking in 'translated' Latin. This makes the dialogue sound stilted, artificial. While I did enjoy the history and events enough to finish this book, I will not be reading the sequel.
November 2, 2020
I liked this second book in the Sertorius scrolls series. Sertorius, the main character is a well-developed, sympathetic character who constantly doubts himself but forges ahead, following the training and discipline that is ingrained in a Roman soldier. There wasn't as much of the story involved with the politics of Rome in this book, which made it more enjoyable for me. I think the author did a really good job of placing the reader in the setting for the story. He gives the reader a good picture of the battles that were fought and how brutal they were.
One thing that I felt really interrupted in the smooth flow of the narrative of the story was the somewhat poor editing, in that there were several words that were obviously misspelled. For the most part, they were words that spell check would have missed because they were actual words - just the wrong words for the sentence e.g.- wadding, instead of wading (across a stream). There were several other misspellings of this nature and make the editing seem a bit sloppy - these are easy mistakes to miss.
That being said, I did really like the book and look forward to reading the next in the series.
One thing that I felt really interrupted in the smooth flow of the narrative of the story was the somewhat poor editing, in that there were several words that were obviously misspelled. For the most part, they were words that spell check would have missed because they were actual words - just the wrong words for the sentence e.g.- wadding, instead of wading (across a stream). There were several other misspellings of this nature and make the editing seem a bit sloppy - these are easy mistakes to miss.
That being said, I did really like the book and look forward to reading the next in the series.
April 28, 2019
This is the second in the series and a great continuation of the life of Quintus Sertorius. It picks up pretty much where the first book leaves off with Quintus recovering from the injuries he incurred during an horrific Roman defeat, where so many of his comrades were killed. We see another side to the man as he fights his demons mental and physical as he heals and returns to duty.
Vincent B Davis is proving himself to be able not only to write a great story with great characterization, but also to provide an insight into the life of a soldier who can face battle with the possibility of death at any time. He shows that heroes are heroes because of what they do, not because they don't have fear, but in spite of it. - additionally that the effects of war does not end after the battle is over, but has an effect on that solder that stay with them. Some scars are not only on the surface.
Well done Vincent - eagerly looking forward to Book 3.
Vincent B Davis is proving himself to be able not only to write a great story with great characterization, but also to provide an insight into the life of a soldier who can face battle with the possibility of death at any time. He shows that heroes are heroes because of what they do, not because they don't have fear, but in spite of it. - additionally that the effects of war does not end after the battle is over, but has an effect on that solder that stay with them. Some scars are not only on the surface.
Well done Vincent - eagerly looking forward to Book 3.
July 16, 2020
Using one review for 3 books: All the books in the Sertorius Scrolls (1-3).
Story of a young in the time just before Sulla's takeover of the Republic of Rome. Setorius is a man of honor, from humble conditions. I kept going on in the hope the story would go someplace interesting, but it never did.
A woman that he is love with, that he cannot marry? Check. Comes to the attention of important people by chance, and they quickly promote him? Check. He becomes a hero? Check.
In addition, the author needed a basic copy editor. Things like confusing accept/except, typos, and odd word uses. He keeps referring to a morning levy, where a politician's clients come to visit him. Levy is a tax or mandatory service, or the results of that. (The levy raised was given to the governor.) Perhaps he's thinking of levee, a French term, but that's a formal ceremony in French court, starting in the 1600s.
I was hoping for this to succeed, but it didn't.
Story of a young in the time just before Sulla's takeover of the Republic of Rome. Setorius is a man of honor, from humble conditions. I kept going on in the hope the story would go someplace interesting, but it never did.
A woman that he is love with, that he cannot marry? Check. Comes to the attention of important people by chance, and they quickly promote him? Check. He becomes a hero? Check.
In addition, the author needed a basic copy editor. Things like confusing accept/except, typos, and odd word uses. He keeps referring to a morning levy, where a politician's clients come to visit him. Levy is a tax or mandatory service, or the results of that. (The levy raised was given to the governor.) Perhaps he's thinking of levee, a French term, but that's a formal ceremony in French court, starting in the 1600s.
I was hoping for this to succeed, but it didn't.
March 6, 2025
the noise of war
#2 in the Sertorius Scrolls historical history series, ending in 100 BC, about the life of Quintus Sertorius, an actual person, who grew up in the country away from the politics of Rome.
This picks up months after the devastating defeat of 90,000 Roman soldiers in Gaul in a battle against the barbaric Cimbri and Teutones in which Quintus is one of the few survivors leaving him with a massive case of PTSD and survivors guilt.
Battling night terrors and survivor’s guilt, he vows to preserve his beloved Rome and embarks on a covert mission deep into enemy territory. Masquerading as a Gaul, he seeks to gain vital information about the invaders, he must sink deeper into their ranks uncovering the depths of the barbarian’s depravity, Information that mat help the Romans defeat these tribes.
#2 in the Sertorius Scrolls historical history series, ending in 100 BC, about the life of Quintus Sertorius, an actual person, who grew up in the country away from the politics of Rome.
This picks up months after the devastating defeat of 90,000 Roman soldiers in Gaul in a battle against the barbaric Cimbri and Teutones in which Quintus is one of the few survivors leaving him with a massive case of PTSD and survivors guilt.
Battling night terrors and survivor’s guilt, he vows to preserve his beloved Rome and embarks on a covert mission deep into enemy territory. Masquerading as a Gaul, he seeks to gain vital information about the invaders, he must sink deeper into their ranks uncovering the depths of the barbarian’s depravity, Information that mat help the Romans defeat these tribes.
March 5, 2020
The view of battles and Roman military life from inside the mind of the main character
A unique and sometimes confusing perspective that established honor, character, courage and fear from this inner man. It was an impressive description of living in camp as a soldier and then interestingly was successful in transporting the reader to a much more primitive and savage way of warriors of the enemy. Battle scenes were realistic and what seemed accurately presented was the confusing reality of what might happen in the next second to rob you of life and awareness. My only disappointment was that when the Cimbri were defeated our Tribune did not reunite with the massive black stallion he had trained for the king of the Cimbris.
A unique and sometimes confusing perspective that established honor, character, courage and fear from this inner man. It was an impressive description of living in camp as a soldier and then interestingly was successful in transporting the reader to a much more primitive and savage way of warriors of the enemy. Battle scenes were realistic and what seemed accurately presented was the confusing reality of what might happen in the next second to rob you of life and awareness. My only disappointment was that when the Cimbri were defeated our Tribune did not reunite with the massive black stallion he had trained for the king of the Cimbris.
July 18, 2020
In this work, Davis continues Sertorius's story, delving more into his relationship and experiences on Marius's leadership. When Marius sends him on an undercover job, Sertorius must use his wits and skills as a soldier and horseman to survive and even glean the admiration of the Gallic tribes, united against the Romans. The rest of the book deftly describes the ensuing battle.
The absolute strength of this series is the perspective Davis has as a soldier himself. He's a talented writer, but his mind is that of a warrior, and it bleeds into every word, situation, and characterization. As in the first book, there are occasional typos, but Davis has done his homework on the late Roman Republic, and I'm hooked.
The absolute strength of this series is the perspective Davis has as a soldier himself. He's a talented writer, but his mind is that of a warrior, and it bleeds into every word, situation, and characterization. As in the first book, there are occasional typos, but Davis has done his homework on the late Roman Republic, and I'm hooked.
August 12, 2020
A great story of the Roman war against the "Reds". A soldier's life is hard, and this story does a fantastic job of portraying that difficulty. Character building was excellent and the story well told. There were very few problems in the book, mostly typos and spelling...both of which would not be found with a spell checker. The errors did not distract much, only occasionally having to re-read to determine what the correct word choice should have been. But I still gave it 5 stars because the storyline is excellent. I hope there is another book to follow, because there are parts of the story that aren't finished (going home, wives, girlfriends, lives after war, etc.). I will look forward to reading it.
September 30, 2021
I like this series.
I give Book #1 a full five stars.
But in this book, I HATE adoration of the holy goddess Arrears (or whatever the fck she’s called), and all the Hero’s weakness, crying, breaking down, and gnashing of teeth.
Oh—and pah-len-ty of VOMIT!
Vomit everywhere.
Vomit from nearly everybody.
LOTS and lots of Trembling
Everybody “trembles.”
If anybody dies, a soldier, an enemy, or even his former sister-in-law, he feels it’s HIS fault.
“‘…Titus wouldn’t have let this happen. Your father wouldn’t have let this happen.’
‘I’ve not quite returned yet, Mother,’ I said, my voice weak.
‘…I feared I would be moved to tears….’
‘…Brother, forgive me. Your wife has joined you in the afterlife. And it is my fault.’”
EVEN IF THIS IS TRUE FOR THIS SOLDIER-AUTHOR, it has no place being so WAAAYYYYYyyyyyy overdone in this tale, in this book.
The “hero” is a fcking CREEP. A basket case. I LOATHE him.
“…But none of it was really mine. And the home still felt empty…This was someone else’s life and someone else’s home. But I wasn’t going to let anyone see my disappointment...it gave me enough time to dry my eyes and calm my thoughts as best as I could….”
“Reality sank in, and I realized how much my hands were shaking.”
What a DRAG!!!
In my opinion, the author’s apparent talent for insight is greatly misplaced.
It really drags this book down.
Plus there are just too many names and too much “intrigue.” I am UNABLE to “follow” all this and it makes for terrible reading.
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I give Book #1 a full five stars.
But in this book, I HATE adoration of the holy goddess Arrears (or whatever the fck she’s called), and all the Hero’s weakness, crying, breaking down, and gnashing of teeth.
Oh—and pah-len-ty of VOMIT!
Vomit everywhere.
Vomit from nearly everybody.
LOTS and lots of Trembling
Everybody “trembles.”
If anybody dies, a soldier, an enemy, or even his former sister-in-law, he feels it’s HIS fault.
“‘…Titus wouldn’t have let this happen. Your father wouldn’t have let this happen.’
‘I’ve not quite returned yet, Mother,’ I said, my voice weak.
‘…I feared I would be moved to tears….’
‘…Brother, forgive me. Your wife has joined you in the afterlife. And it is my fault.’”
EVEN IF THIS IS TRUE FOR THIS SOLDIER-AUTHOR, it has no place being so WAAAYYYYYyyyyyy overdone in this tale, in this book.
The “hero” is a fcking CREEP. A basket case. I LOATHE him.
“…But none of it was really mine. And the home still felt empty…This was someone else’s life and someone else’s home. But I wasn’t going to let anyone see my disappointment...it gave me enough time to dry my eyes and calm my thoughts as best as I could….”
“Reality sank in, and I realized how much my hands were shaking.”
What a DRAG!!!
In my opinion, the author’s apparent talent for insight is greatly misplaced.
It really drags this book down.
Plus there are just too many names and too much “intrigue.” I am UNABLE to “follow” all this and it makes for terrible reading.
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