Almost rated this four stars, and I'll get to why in a moment.But first, this is labeled as number one, and I would assume it is part of a series? Except, for the life of me, I couldn't find a sequel? I'm very disappointed in that. *Update: Totally found a sequel. It's listed on Amazon but not on Goodreads. The Changing Use of Magic. Not I'm off to go read that, too.*
Anyway, the world this book is set in is lovely and interesting. I would love to see more of it.
The plot was an interesting blend of fantasy and romance. Parts of it did seem to drag a little, and I don't know that I was sold on the romance. Which may have been due to the dialogue. At parts, the dialogue between the two main characters was borderline ridiculous and felt pretty unrealistic. It was the type of flowery dialogue that you wouldn't hear in real life but that seems very popular in romances. To me, it's disorienting and throws me out of the scene. It's also why I decided on three stars instead of four.
However, I don't want to end on a bad note, so I will say that the first attempt at the magic getting a little botched was nicely done.You can't expect things to go perfectly the first time. Overall, I enjoyed the plot and the world. I just thought the dialogue could be more natural.