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Future Reborn #4
Future Retold
Fight to build a free world. Face new enemies. Slay new monsters. Meet new women.
With Aristine at his side, Eden Chain technology will connect Jack's new people as they get ready to go to war, but Kassos-- the city of intrigue and fear-- is not what it seems.
There's a new threat in the region, known as the Procurators, and they are using the past against Jack and his people-- nanobots.
War is coming, and Jack is determined to win at all costs.
With Aristine at his side, Eden Chain technology will connect Jack's new people as they get ready to go to war, but Kassos-- the city of intrigue and fear-- is not what it seems.
There's a new threat in the region, known as the Procurators, and they are using the past against Jack and his people-- nanobots.
War is coming, and Jack is determined to win at all costs.
296 pages, Kindle Edition
First published April 6, 2019
133 people are currently reading
73 people want to read
About the author
Daniel Pierce
23 books86 followersDaniel Pierce lives in Wyoming with his wife Marissa and their two dogs. After fourteen years as an engineer, Daniel decided it was finally time to write and release his first novel.
As a lifelong fan of scifi and fantasy, he wants nothing more than to share his passion.
As a lifelong fan of scifi and fantasy, he wants nothing more than to share his passion.
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September 26, 2023
Introduction:
Greetings, fellow beings of the cosmos. I am Kiba Snowpaw, an alpha male Ice Wolf from the icy realm of HowlStrom. Having lived for over 36 winters and being an avid gamer, I've ventured into the realm of audiobooks to quench my thirst for stories. Today, I shall share my thoughts on "Future Retold" by Daniel Pierce, narrated by Alexander Cendese.
Basic Plot Summary:
The tale unfolds in a post-apocalyptic world where Jack, with Aristine by his side, aims to unite his people using Eden Chain technology. However, the city of Kassos holds dark secrets, and a new threat, the Procurators, emerges, wielding the power of the past - nanobots. As war looms, Jack's determination to triumph is tested.
Analysis/Evaluation:
"Future Retold" is a blend of futuristic technology, warfare, and interpersonal relationships. The LitRPG elements are subtly integrated, making it a treat for gamers like me. However, the story sometimes leans heavily on adult themes, which might not be everyone's cup of tea.
Characters:
Jack, the protagonist, is a warrior with a heart. His decisions, though questionable at times, stem from his desire to protect and unite. Aristine, his companion, complements him well, but I yearned to see more depth in her character. The supporting cast adds flavor, but some could benefit from further development.
Structure:
The story flows at a steady pace, with action sequences interspersed with moments of introspection. The LitRPG elements are woven seamlessly, making it accessible even to those unfamiliar with the genre.
Impact:
The tale resonated with me, reminding me of the eternal battles we face in HowlStrom. The challenges of leadership, the weight of decisions, and the importance of unity are themes that transcend realms.
Hook and Thesis:
The allure of "Future Retold" lies in its blend of futuristic warfare and human emotions. It's a tale of survival, leadership, and the lengths one would go to protect their own.
Praise and Critique:
I commend the vivid world-building and the seamless integration of LitRPG elements. However, the overemphasis on adult themes sometimes overshadows the core plot. Jack's decisions, especially in warfare, could be better strategized, considering his background.
Comparison:
"Future Retold" reminds me of the tales of old in HowlStrom, where heroes rise against insurmountable odds. However, the futuristic setting and LitRPG elements give it a unique flavor.
Conclusion:
"Future Retold" is a captivating tale that will appeal to those who enjoy a blend of action, technology, and human emotions. While it has its flaws, it's a journey worth embarking on. As the icy winds of HowlStrom howl in approval, I look forward to more tales from Daniel Pierce.
May the frosty winds of HowlStrom guide you to your next adventure. Until then, stay frosty.
Greetings, fellow beings of the cosmos. I am Kiba Snowpaw, an alpha male Ice Wolf from the icy realm of HowlStrom. Having lived for over 36 winters and being an avid gamer, I've ventured into the realm of audiobooks to quench my thirst for stories. Today, I shall share my thoughts on "Future Retold" by Daniel Pierce, narrated by Alexander Cendese.
Basic Plot Summary:
The tale unfolds in a post-apocalyptic world where Jack, with Aristine by his side, aims to unite his people using Eden Chain technology. However, the city of Kassos holds dark secrets, and a new threat, the Procurators, emerges, wielding the power of the past - nanobots. As war looms, Jack's determination to triumph is tested.
Analysis/Evaluation:
"Future Retold" is a blend of futuristic technology, warfare, and interpersonal relationships. The LitRPG elements are subtly integrated, making it a treat for gamers like me. However, the story sometimes leans heavily on adult themes, which might not be everyone's cup of tea.
Characters:
Jack, the protagonist, is a warrior with a heart. His decisions, though questionable at times, stem from his desire to protect and unite. Aristine, his companion, complements him well, but I yearned to see more depth in her character. The supporting cast adds flavor, but some could benefit from further development.
Structure:
The story flows at a steady pace, with action sequences interspersed with moments of introspection. The LitRPG elements are woven seamlessly, making it accessible even to those unfamiliar with the genre.
Impact:
The tale resonated with me, reminding me of the eternal battles we face in HowlStrom. The challenges of leadership, the weight of decisions, and the importance of unity are themes that transcend realms.
Hook and Thesis:
The allure of "Future Retold" lies in its blend of futuristic warfare and human emotions. It's a tale of survival, leadership, and the lengths one would go to protect their own.
Praise and Critique:
I commend the vivid world-building and the seamless integration of LitRPG elements. However, the overemphasis on adult themes sometimes overshadows the core plot. Jack's decisions, especially in warfare, could be better strategized, considering his background.
Comparison:
"Future Retold" reminds me of the tales of old in HowlStrom, where heroes rise against insurmountable odds. However, the futuristic setting and LitRPG elements give it a unique flavor.
Conclusion:
"Future Retold" is a captivating tale that will appeal to those who enjoy a blend of action, technology, and human emotions. While it has its flaws, it's a journey worth embarking on. As the icy winds of HowlStrom howl in approval, I look forward to more tales from Daniel Pierce.
May the frosty winds of HowlStrom guide you to your next adventure. Until then, stay frosty.
April 22, 2019
The book itself is okay and would've likely gotten four stars but there are two issues. First, the books are critically short and second and more importantly. Jack Bowman is a TERRIBLE commander and shouldn't be in charge of tactics, ever.
Beware, spoilers ahead. At one point a "massive" enemy army is heading towards the Free Oasis. Jack and his followers know this. They're even tracking them using the drones. They could take this army out, quite easily so. He decides not to, to try and save the life's of these raiders and try to recruit them.
He proceeds to completely underutilize the tech and weapons available to him. Allowing this army to attack the Free Oasis, is completely caught off guards by their infiltrators and pays a staggering amount of lives for his plan. Which sees the drones take them out by putting them to sleep, allowing them to spare most of the enemy.
During this fight, several of the named characters including Aristine survive SOLELY because of plot armor. He's so obsessed with trying to spare these people and attempt to recruit them. People he can't logically trust nor should he at any point in the near future. He bleeds his own forces white, risks complete annihilation and exposes several of his girls to danger they needn't be in while also cockily underestimating how much of a risk this army poses.
The number given at the start for Free Oasis population is about 2000. In this single fight, he manages to get 83 of his own combatants killed. That's almost 5% of his overall population and likely a HUGE part of his fighting forces. Nobody calls him out on it, everyone treats this as a victory.
The kicker? They also let the enemy combatants leave. Even though they still outnumber them quite badly. Then they are happy when some of them return to join them and immediately allow them to do so. Easiest to infiltrate group ever.
Jack is a terrible commander, the needless loss of life of his own troops is staggering and his priorities seem to be completely messed up when it comes to preserving life. It would be incredibly easy for spies or an entire fifth column to infiltrate his group and wreak havoc or take it over entirely and the way he's spending his own troops lives he should both quickly run out of them and have some serious moral issues before long.
Beware, spoilers ahead. At one point a "massive" enemy army is heading towards the Free Oasis. Jack and his followers know this. They're even tracking them using the drones. They could take this army out, quite easily so. He decides not to, to try and save the life's of these raiders and try to recruit them.
He proceeds to completely underutilize the tech and weapons available to him. Allowing this army to attack the Free Oasis, is completely caught off guards by their infiltrators and pays a staggering amount of lives for his plan. Which sees the drones take them out by putting them to sleep, allowing them to spare most of the enemy.
During this fight, several of the named characters including Aristine survive SOLELY because of plot armor. He's so obsessed with trying to spare these people and attempt to recruit them. People he can't logically trust nor should he at any point in the near future. He bleeds his own forces white, risks complete annihilation and exposes several of his girls to danger they needn't be in while also cockily underestimating how much of a risk this army poses.
The number given at the start for Free Oasis population is about 2000. In this single fight, he manages to get 83 of his own combatants killed. That's almost 5% of his overall population and likely a HUGE part of his fighting forces. Nobody calls him out on it, everyone treats this as a victory.
The kicker? They also let the enemy combatants leave. Even though they still outnumber them quite badly. Then they are happy when some of them return to join them and immediately allow them to do so. Easiest to infiltrate group ever.
Jack is a terrible commander, the needless loss of life of his own troops is staggering and his priorities seem to be completely messed up when it comes to preserving life. It would be incredibly easy for spies or an entire fifth column to infiltrate his group and wreak havoc or take it over entirely and the way he's spending his own troops lives he should both quickly run out of them and have some serious moral issues before long.
April 12, 2019
A really great read
I love this series, its a hard gritty world building action novel in a post apocalyptic wastelands. I enjoy the characters, their struggle against nature and a still to be fully identified enemy. This author for me is a bit hit and miss as I am not a fan of some of his other series but this one is a really enjoyable read. This is a harem novel with sex scenes.
I love this series, its a hard gritty world building action novel in a post apocalyptic wastelands. I enjoy the characters, their struggle against nature and a still to be fully identified enemy. This author for me is a bit hit and miss as I am not a fan of some of his other series but this one is a really enjoyable read. This is a harem novel with sex scenes.
April 12, 2019
Okay
At this point in a series I kind of expect more in main characters. I think we could learn more about the dynamics between the women in Jack’s life and how his main group is getting along. Also with new characters being introduced I understand that scenes can be confusing but calling Daybe Rae multiple times is a little disheartening. I’ll still read the series but it needs a little work right now.
At this point in a series I kind of expect more in main characters. I think we could learn more about the dynamics between the women in Jack’s life and how his main group is getting along. Also with new characters being introduced I understand that scenes can be confusing but calling Daybe Rae multiple times is a little disheartening. I’ll still read the series but it needs a little work right now.
April 9, 2019
I enjoyed reading this book.
This book was fun to read and I look forward to reading the next book in this series. The author kept me engaged with the story and the pace was good. The author has continued to grow the complexity of the characters and the story. Overall this series is the authors best series.
This book was fun to read and I look forward to reading the next book in this series. The author kept me engaged with the story and the pace was good. The author has continued to grow the complexity of the characters and the story. Overall this series is the authors best series.
April 11, 2019
I love this series
Daniel and the Oasis group are spreading out whilst discovering new resources and consolidating new groups. An unexpected dangerous new foe that also has access to old technology, including 'bots, is discovered which poses a serious impediment to progress. Please make the next book longer! I read it too quickly otherwise.
Daniel and the Oasis group are spreading out whilst discovering new resources and consolidating new groups. An unexpected dangerous new foe that also has access to old technology, including 'bots, is discovered which poses a serious impediment to progress. Please make the next book longer! I read it too quickly otherwise.
April 15, 2019
That makes four!!!
Another great addition to the series. Even more action and discoveries in this one. I am continually impressed by Pierce's ability to provide so much action and still keep it engaging. I'm definitely impressed and looking forward to the next book.
Another great addition to the series. Even more action and discoveries in this one. I am continually impressed by Pierce's ability to provide so much action and still keep it engaging. I'm definitely impressed and looking forward to the next book.
April 16, 2019
Another masterpiece
And the fun just keeps on coming. This is definitely one of my favorite stories currently, and after finishing every I am immediately looking for the next one. And the wait is pure torture...
And the fun just keeps on coming. This is definitely one of my favorite stories currently, and after finishing every I am immediately looking for the next one. And the wait is pure torture...
April 19, 2019
Still enjoying the series
So still more of the same. Guns girls and monsters. love this series and the post apocalyptic recovery. Our MC is tough and fair but will stop and nothing to rebuild and deliver freedom To the wasteland. Looking forward to more... And soon.
So still more of the same. Guns girls and monsters. love this series and the post apocalyptic recovery. Our MC is tough and fair but will stop and nothing to rebuild and deliver freedom To the wasteland. Looking forward to more... And soon.
April 20, 2019
Great series
This is a great series. Awesome characters and story line. My only complaint is that the storyline progresses so smoothly the book is read too fast. What a great complaint to get.
This is a great series. Awesome characters and story line. My only complaint is that the storyline progresses so smoothly the book is read too fast. What a great complaint to get.
April 11, 2019
Well written
This is a interesting story that has a lot of room for growth, I think it could be fleshed out a little more, but it's not boring
This is a interesting story that has a lot of room for growth, I think it could be fleshed out a little more, but it's not boring
April 18, 2019
Great book
They just keep getting better and better. The world that the author has built just keeps evolving and growing. I can’t wait for the next book.
They just keep getting better and better. The world that the author has built just keeps evolving and growing. I can’t wait for the next book.
April 21, 2019
love this series although it seems like more things keep popping up all around, hopefully the protag and his group wont end up in the gutter as monster food....
April 22, 2019
Recommended
Amazing the story takes a very nice turn in this book and I can’t wait to see the new one when it comes out keep up the good work
Amazing the story takes a very nice turn in this book and I can’t wait to see the new one when it comes out keep up the good work
September 18, 2019
Really good series, well written. Character interaction is awesome.
April 13, 2021
Great book
Damn they got ducked over confidence was what caused them so much loss they should continued on as if the world was still super fucked
Damn they got ducked over confidence was what caused them so much loss they should continued on as if the world was still super fucked
May 29, 2021
Fighting for Peace
Jack is building up his vision of the future and finding new friends and enemies along the way. Great read.
Jack is building up his vision of the future and finding new friends and enemies along the way. Great read.
February 16, 2023
As the title says, book 4 was continuation of the story for this post-apocalyptic series.
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