Okay this review is going to be more like a rant than a good structured review. But I can’t ignore the frustrations and struggles that went along with reading this sequel. I often overanalyse things but this one was a real struggle.
First, this book is the sequel to A Book of Spirits and Thieves, a spinoff of the Falling Kingdoms- series. It again follows, Maddox, a necromancer in Mytica, Becca and Crystal, sisters in Toronto going up against the Hawkspear society and Farrell, a wealthy young man “struggling” to stay loyal to his master of the secret Hawkspear society.
The Falling Kingdoms series is incredible and I expected the same amazing storytelling in the spinoff series. But sadly it didn’t meet my expectations, actually it was far from it. The story moved really slow, the main characters in this sequel were irritating, some of the romances were incredibly forced (from my POV) and there was just too much talking, dialogue and repeating oneself for the story to move any faster. A fair warning I am going to compare The Darkest Magic a lot with its sister series Falling Kingdoms. First, because it’s within the story world and hard to ignore its connection. Second, because I’ve read FK, it was difficult to ignore the various similarities and dare I say: recycling.
If any of you want to know, the are the main issues I had with the story:
1. Separating her main characters.
Although having multiple POV gives you the chance to widen the story and story world, here it slowed things down. In Falling Kingdoms and its sequels, two or more characters often shared chapters. It made the story fast paced and more intriguing because the reader and the chapter often focused on a single event from multiple POVs. In The Darkest Magic, everyone is separated and it causes the plot to move slow and what bothered me was the divided focus on two worlds (Modern-day Toronto and Mytica). In Falling Kingdoms, chapters from different characters complemented each other and focused often on one event only.
2. Talking. So much talking.
When characters did sit together (or shared chapters), there was a lot of (unnecessary) dialogue and sometimes a lot of repetition. There were even chapters that consisted of merely the characters talking to each other and the plot not moving any further which I wasn’t used to with Morgan Rhodes’ writing. To give you an example why the dialogue bothered me so much: (warning spoiler alert) there is this scene where Farrell tries to kill Crys in Markus his mansion and just their dialogue and bittering, whatever you call it, slowed down the entire point of the scene. He’s standing in this doorway with the dagger and the constant back and forth dialogue takes away the tension and the suspension. After a while I didn’t even bother with the question is he going to kill her? because she kept him talking anyway.
3. The question burning on everyone’s lips for almost 300 pages.
I have a question I want to ask whoever is reading this review and has read the book. Why was it necessary to keep it a secret that Becca was the daughter of Markus? I’ll give you a second. What is that? you can’t come up with any reasons? Me neither! There was literally no reason to keep that a secret from her. Except for the fact that Jackie wasn’t ready to face that truth, I literally can’t come up with any other reason. It could’ve helped Becca understand her magic, the group would’ve worked better together with Becca aware of the problems at hand. When you’re using the ‘I’m-keeping-a-secret-from-you,-for-your-own-good.’-trope, you need a good reason for it. Here there wasn’t one provided. This frustrated the hell out of me.
4. The Crys and Farrell combination.
I dislike the whole Crystal and Farrell thing a lot. I didn’t like it from the beginning in ABOSAT. Their relation started with manipulation and deceiving from both sides, they hated each other afterwards right? There wasn’t a single scene where I saw the two of them having chemistry. Not once did I think they genuinly liked each other. I do love hate-love romance or the enemies to lovers trope but here I only saw their hate towards each other till the moment they kissed. It felt incredibly forced and I started cringing whenever one of them did brought up the possibility of being attracted to the other because it was often a joke or an insult more than a genuine thought. When were you in fact attracted to one other? Don’t tell me, show me.
If I can make you understand this, let me make a comparison to a similar duo: Magnus and Cleo. These two were not initially endgame and it’s noticeable but that’s good. Neither of these character existed purely to fill a romantic plot. Yes, it was a villain+heroine combination, however Magnus showed moments of humanity without needing Cleo to drag it out of him. Readers saw a redemption in him and so he got it and eventually earning Cleo’s love along the way.
Now Crys and Farrell don’t have that kind of love. They exist purely for the enemies to lovers trope but it is poorly executed in my opinion. But while Crys all of a sudden sees the good in him (to be fair with a little push from Damen) and decides to make out with him in the f-ing closet. I couldn’t see it. There wasn’t one point where Farrell showed me the chance of redemption except when Crys is trying to convince me of it. For me this romance felt forced and just upright wrong. I rather have one of them die, preferably Farrell, because that would make the plotline line more interesting. This whole enemies to lovers trope together with the ‘I’m coerced to kill you but I’m not telling you and I don’t want to’ isn’t just mixing well with me. It isn’t only poorly executed it’s a bit recycled if you’ve read FK.
In addition, I’m sorry but I hate Farrell as a character. I don’t see the good in him, compared to when I read Magnus’s story. There is no shown chemistry and that’s why I don’t see him with Crys, it just makes me uncomfortable.
5. Speaking of forced romance: Barnabas and Liana (aka Cleiona)
Aside from the bickering and some characters telling them they look cute together. I read zero romance or was it just me? I was genuinely confused when Barnabas kissed Liana, not surprised, I was confused. It was unnecessary and there was no built up towards the betrayal when she revealed her identity. No hints or notions that showed who she was or that there was any affection between the two.
I really do not want to come of as a mean reviewer. I really like Morgan’s books but this one was really disappointing compared to her other works.
What should have been better in my opinion?
• More chemistry and affection. It would’ve supported the romances more. Don’t tell me they’re meant for each other, show it.
• The plot. Twists are revealed with often a poor built up and the plot itself moved really slow. In my opinion, it just needed a few tweaks more before it was published.
• Leave out some dialogue.
What was good?
• Maddox is still my favourite character here but I would’ve liked it more if the story paid more attention to him struggling with his dark magic.
• Mytica’s lore.