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The Prophecy
The Prophecy could cost Nathan everything.
Contains adult content. Read at your own risk.
Centuries ago, a great prophecy foretold the rise of the Arch Mage, an unstoppable power who would wield both white and black magic.
In a desperate bid to stop an evil mage from fulfilling the prophecy, Nathan has only one option. He must try to become the Arch Mage himself.
Joining forces with a beautiful rogue and a paladin he can’t stop fantasizing about, Nathan and his alluring companions travel across sinister lands, facing dangers he never expected and doing everything they can to keep each other alive.
Which mage will fulfill the prophecy?
This is an epic fantasy harem story containing sex, action, and violence, not necessarily in that order. It has hot chicks, mages, rogues, and even a dragon slayer. You have been warned.
Contains adult content. Read at your own risk.
Centuries ago, a great prophecy foretold the rise of the Arch Mage, an unstoppable power who would wield both white and black magic.
In a desperate bid to stop an evil mage from fulfilling the prophecy, Nathan has only one option. He must try to become the Arch Mage himself.
Joining forces with a beautiful rogue and a paladin he can’t stop fantasizing about, Nathan and his alluring companions travel across sinister lands, facing dangers he never expected and doing everything they can to keep each other alive.
Which mage will fulfill the prophecy?
This is an epic fantasy harem story containing sex, action, and violence, not necessarily in that order. It has hot chicks, mages, rogues, and even a dragon slayer. You have been warned.
256 pages, Paperback
Published March 23, 2019
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October 10, 2018
Well, where do I start. This feels like it's been written by a twelve year old. Sorry Caleb Zane.
The grammar and syntax are atrocious. Words are repeated over and over again despite being completely superflous. For example there were five short sentences strung together. All of them could've been boiled down to two. All of them ended with "here". Wow really? I thought between the first four "here" we had move far away, to "over there".
The characters are paper thin. Their interactions and motivations unrealistic and wooden at times extremely childish. The world building is crude and bare bones. Proper motivations, politics etc are never really established despite being central to the story the author is trying to tell.
There is "hints" of a litrpg put into this, for absolutely no good reason. I say hints because people refer to "quests" and "levels" but nothing is ever told about it beyond that. Which means we'd be better off without it entirely.
I could keep going but as this is right now. It's more of an idea for a story. A bare outline. A shoddy first draft.
The grammar and syntax are atrocious. Words are repeated over and over again despite being completely superflous. For example there were five short sentences strung together. All of them could've been boiled down to two. All of them ended with "here". Wow really? I thought between the first four "here" we had move far away, to "over there".
The characters are paper thin. Their interactions and motivations unrealistic and wooden at times extremely childish. The world building is crude and bare bones. Proper motivations, politics etc are never really established despite being central to the story the author is trying to tell.
There is "hints" of a litrpg put into this, for absolutely no good reason. I say hints because people refer to "quests" and "levels" but nothing is ever told about it beyond that. Which means we'd be better off without it entirely.
I could keep going but as this is right now. It's more of an idea for a story. A bare outline. A shoddy first draft.
October 11, 2018
Pretty good
Book was pretty good but had a lot of mistakes in it on sentence structure and repeating the same paragraphs. Overall I enjoyed it just seemed like it needed some help with editing.
Book was pretty good but had a lot of mistakes in it on sentence structure and repeating the same paragraphs. Overall I enjoyed it just seemed like it needed some help with editing.
November 17, 2018
Full story of myth and magic
Myth and magic of a different way. Defiantly worth the effort of reading not your normal adventures no way. This story shows a more accurate picture of what a guest in 👍
Myth and magic of a different way. Defiantly worth the effort of reading not your normal adventures no way. This story shows a more accurate picture of what a guest in 👍
October 30, 2018
Good story and characters
It seemed a little muddled to start but picked up nicely. Their back stories both good and dark developed clearly and cleanly.
It seemed a little muddled to start but picked up nicely. Their back stories both good and dark developed clearly and cleanly.
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