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Альфарим #2
Scurfifer
Volper finds this game too complicated and he decides to find the answers to some of the questions. Not for him, he simply doesn’t care about it, it’s important to find out everything at least for the sake of the guys who he decided to take care of. Also, he wants to unravel the mystery – connected with this strange profession - "Scurfifer". These are his plans for now. But will he be able to solve all the mysteries around him, and will he find someone who can answer at least some of his questions?
388 pages, Kindle Edition
Published May 21, 2019
About the author
Ros Per
14 books36 followersRosPer, author from Ukraine, in the past professional military who participated in real battles. But one of the injuries led to disability closing his further military career. His first book, Volper, began to be written as part of a psychological rehabilitation program in March 2017., which fascinated him so much that he decided to publish on one of the most popular online book resources in the Russian-language segment of the Internet.
Surprisingly, Alfarome very quickly began to gain popularity, bringing the author to the TOP 10 most popular Authors of the site with a large number of fans who were looking forward to the continuation of the Alfarome series.
And then came the moment when the series having a lot of fans appeared in English!
Author's e-mail for suggestions, and opportunities to express your opinion: rosperbook@gmail.com
Surprisingly, Alfarome very quickly began to gain popularity, bringing the author to the TOP 10 most popular Authors of the site with a large number of fans who were looking forward to the continuation of the Alfarome series.
And then came the moment when the series having a lot of fans appeared in English!
Author's e-mail for suggestions, and opportunities to express your opinion: rosperbook@gmail.com
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Displaying 1 - 13 of 13 reviews
July 7, 2019
This book could have been much better if the same translator was used for the 1st book. Having read several books from a native English speaker in between volumes made it highlight this fact even more. Not to be too rude, but the outcome would have been better if you entered the whole text into a well known online translator. Any witty one liners were lost as the text would be some sort of 'bastardised' literal translation with key elements missing. This also applied frequently when talking about a key subject/point. The problem was the subject would often be missing which left you thinking you had missed something. Either that or the key point/element would be highlighted 2/3 paragraphs later. I hope a revised addition is made as this could be as good as the first.
Overall the series is a good premise. If a third was made, I will also be reading that one.
Overall the series is a good premise. If a third was made, I will also be reading that one.
May 23, 2019
Great story, bad translation
Tentative 4 stars. I really like the story, however like some of the other reviewers mention, the translation seems to be worse in this book compared to the first. It's a real shame because the awkward or sometimes unintelligible pieces really drag it down.
Tentative 4 stars. I really like the story, however like some of the other reviewers mention, the translation seems to be worse in this book compared to the first. It's a real shame because the awkward or sometimes unintelligible pieces really drag it down.
June 23, 2019
Poor translation
I gave up reading this because the translation was very poor. All the words are understandable but the English comprehension is obviously lacking. It felt like reading a book of 5 word sentences and destroyed the enjoyment of the story. I would certainly retry with better translation.
I gave up reading this because the translation was very poor. All the words are understandable but the English comprehension is obviously lacking. It felt like reading a book of 5 word sentences and destroyed the enjoyment of the story. I would certainly retry with better translation.
July 10, 2019
Lazy inept translators
Poor editing and translation. I tried to read the second book, but I couldn’t get past the first chapter. Truly terrible, not the story but the inept staff you employed. I would definitely revisit this series once it’s been properly vetted, since the first book was enjoyable.
Poor editing and translation. I tried to read the second book, but I couldn’t get past the first chapter. Truly terrible, not the story but the inept staff you employed. I would definitely revisit this series once it’s been properly vetted, since the first book was enjoyable.
June 2, 2019
Gets boring
The first book was great..this one starts well but half way thru..got brining. It drones on and on..I couldn’t even finish it.
Seriously horrible. Don’t get this book.
The first book was great..this one starts well but half way thru..got brining. It drones on and on..I couldn’t even finish it.
Seriously horrible. Don’t get this book.
June 26, 2019
Would be 4 stars, but needs another round of editing since, while it was in English, the flow was off and all the translation errors caused me to stop for the day frequently - and I can read a book or 2 a day normally.
December 8, 2019
Great story Needs Better Translation
Really enjoyed book1 and this book continues the story but the English translation was terrible is some places. I hope the author can get a better translator for book 3 bc it is probably very good in the native language.
Really enjoyed book1 and this book continues the story but the English translation was terrible is some places. I hope the author can get a better translator for book 3 bc it is probably very good in the native language.
May 24, 2019
Enjoyed the story
Hated the translator. The writing was extremely difficult to understand and riddled with errors. Get an actual English speaker to edit.
Hated the translator. The writing was extremely difficult to understand and riddled with errors. Get an actual English speaker to edit.
June 1, 2019
No
First book was actually a a good read but this one i couldn't even get to third chapter after forcing myself to read first two. Wtf
First book was actually a a good read but this one i couldn't even get to third chapter after forcing myself to read first two. Wtf
January 17, 2022
excellent
Not your typical LitRPG, but very interesting and realistic with amazing world building. Great Mil Sci Fi flavored LitRPG. Great read!
Not your typical LitRPG, but very interesting and realistic with amazing world building. Great Mil Sci Fi flavored LitRPG. Great read!
March 25, 2025
MC's analytical skills go beyond me near the end. What an intricate mess he's got himself into 😅
August 27, 2021
Book two
Mistakes: Very thankful that the random money amounts didn't carry over to this book. I did find six mistakes, one in a chapter title.
Plot: Chasing parts of his suit and a new class.
Characters: Much better done in this book.
7/10
Mistakes: Very thankful that the random money amounts didn't carry over to this book. I did find six mistakes, one in a chapter title.
Plot: Chasing parts of his suit and a new class.
Characters: Much better done in this book.
7/10
August 29, 2021
EXCELLENT
Great combat, excellent thinking an all round Great book! Its well worth the time to read ! Don't miss it.!
Great combat, excellent thinking an all round Great book! Its well worth the time to read ! Don't miss it.!
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