This book was silly and not in the best of ways. And this is the first time I’m getting a good look at the cover since I’ve only seen it in thumbnail versions. Yeah . . .
It got my attention because of the Titanic. What can I say? I’m weak. Obviously very weak. I didn’t know this was self-published until I started writing this review and pulled the information, although by the errors and somewhat sloppy writing I had a hunch. And looking at how often these books are churned out . . . yeah.
I mean A for effort in trying to do something different. I don’t read a lot of these spy-type novels and I like the concept of the Jack Reacher type blended with Indiana Jones. But James Acton, who does not play a dominant role in this book despite it being his series, is a bit of a know-it-all pedant that likes to show off his intellect every chance he gets. And of course it’s vaguely Barry Stu because everyone around him loves him for that particular trait when in reality random fact-dropping like he does would get you side-eyed at best. Unless, of course, you surround yourself with like-minded people, in which case it’s a moot point.
The story itself is, on the surface, interesting, but didn’t quite pan out in a sensical way. There were parts of the writing that had me raising my eyebrow. Little things like a character mentioning that this guy looked like a spy you see in the movies when we’re in the 1912 timeline. Okay so that’s a hardboiled look and you have another 10+ years before that makes an appearance in writing, let alone in movies. Which are still in silent films in 1912, at best. So what else did the author get wrong that I missed because I’m not paying too close attention?
The premise is this covert Navy ship sat just far enough away from the sinking Titanic to be visible to some people in far-out row boats to see in the dark, but cloaked enough that their own row boat could sneak up on the ship, get boarded by the people in it, and not be noticed. Yes, there was a lot of commotion going on as the ship was sinking. My question is, how are they not spotted rowing in the opposite direction as everyone else and not spotted boarding the ship by how many people in the water with nothing to look at but a sinking ship? And how did they get onto the boat? If I remember correctly they went through some doorway that was low enough to the water line for them to get in without being noticed. So they entered a flooding compartment without getting wet or noticed? Just too many logical leaps I’m having to make here for people that are supposed to be spies yet they’re not very good at their jobs.
And then the modern timeline stuff is all very Jason Bourne/Jack Reacher whatever with gunshots and a literally faceless entity controlling the world. Then there’s the chick with the convenient TBI that’s removed her humanity so she’s a human robot who feels nothing as she kills people around her. Meh.
I mean, I’m coming in in the middle of the series so there could be things I’m missing when it comes to things like character and world development. But from what I’ve read these books can be read as stand-alone and the writing wasn’t that great. So even though I may be missing something I’m really not missing much. This got past my 50 page cut-off simply because it was entertaining enough and not bad enough for me to put it down. Plus Titanic. That’s really what was fueling me, although it’s association pittered out to mere mentions about halfway in. Needless so say I won’t be reading anything else in this series.
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