The main character drinks Southern Iced Sweet Tea for the first time — therefore they are in the South.
Then a character is introduced: their hunting guide’s cousin. He is “dirty”, stupid, incompetent, mocks “city slickers”, ruins their hunts twice and lies about it.
Ummm….
Why are you perpetuating harmful stereotypes about southerners?
You DO realize southerners ARE your target audience, right?
Why are you perpetuating harmful stereotypes about your target audience?
Yikes, my dude.