What makes a sentence strong? Nora Bacon’s The Well-Crafted Sentence: A Writer’s Guide to Style demystifies grammatical concepts and stylistic choices by taking apart expert writers’ sentences as illustrations and asking students to practice crafting and revising their own. Examples throughout the text are excerpted from 11 readings collected in an anthology at the end of the book, so you can teach style in the context of a larger argument or narrative. With four new model texts, expanded explanations of grammatical concepts, and new coverage of figures of speech, the third edition invites students to experiment with sentence structures that make writing stronger.
Most books on style are pitched to fairly advanced writers, but this one addresses beginners. Bacon's advice is sensible and useful. I particularly like her five tips for sharpening the focus of subject-verb pairs in sentences (pp. 49–55).
Unfortunately, as often seems the case with books on style, her advice tends to be burdened by an excess of categories, qualifications, examples, and exercises. The book is often daunting on a visual level—cluttered with boxes, lists, underlinings, italics, and bolded terms—and as a result can feel a bit of a slog to get through.
This was my first good grammar book. I was surprised to find it wasn’t as boring as I expected. It explains a lot of sentence structures and how and when they should be used. It also has a great grammatical glossary in the back. You can use the whole book as a reference and you can just read the chapters individually and without chronological order.
really great guide to the sentence. been putting off reading this and i feel like, after reading through, i have a better grasp of my syntax. while i understood and recognized all the grammatical structures discussed, it's always nice to have it laid out in plain terms.
A nice handbook (complete with definitions and exercizes!), but one that focuses on effects and context a little more than most handbooks. Essays in the back to read to consider style and implications (and which are the sources of the exercises).