This review contains some spoilers:
As a reader, I found The Pack's Mate to have some intriguing moments, particularly at the beginning when Clara is kidnapped. I appreciated how she maintained a sense of calm in that tense situation. It was a smart choice on the author's part to allow readers to feel secure, knowing that her mates weren't actually going to harm her. This added an interesting layer to the narrative, as it created tension while showcasing Clara's level-headedness.
However, everything that follows this initial encounter felt lacking in depth and cohesion. Despite her calm demeanor during the kidnapping, Clara’s character quickly became frustratingly inconsistent. As a doctor, I expected her to demonstrate more critical thinking and emotional intelligence in later situations, yet she often made decisions that seemed naive or poorly thought out. For instance, the bear attack yes they were shifters but the only thing she did was hide in fear which could have been realistic if it was paired with her past experiences an example being her remembering how her ex cheated on her and even though there were 3 of them they couldn't protect her and her fiercely fighting too protect herself and maybe be helpful.
The pacing of the story became an issue after that gripping opening. The narrative felt rushed, making it hard for me to connect with Clara and her mates on a deeper level. Like when meeting her alpha's Dexter parents. The rapid development of their relationships, especially considering they only spent a day together, left me questioning the authenticity of their bonds. I wanted to see more nuanced interactions and emotional buildup rather than being told to accept their connections without sufficient groundwork. For example, Clara’s instant attraction to multiple mates felt forced, and moments that could have deepened their relationship—such as shared experiences or crises—were glossed over. The only thing they did was have sex.
Clara's backstory, particularly her struggles with her absent parents and past relationships, had the potential to enrich her character, but it remained underexplored. For instance, the revelation that her parents made her buy her own gifts for her birthday hinted at a lifetime of neglect, yet this theme wasn’t fully developed. I was left wanting a deeper understanding of how these experiences shaped her present actions and emotional responses. Instead, she often came across as emotionally distant and her excuse was on my very own person and I'm a doctor, which detracted from my ability to empathize with her journey.
Moreover, the world-building fell short. The paranormal elements, while intriguing, lacked clarity. I found myself confused about the dynamics of the shifter world and the significance of the mate bond. For example, the rules surrounding the mate bond were not well-defined, making it difficult to understand how they impacted Clara and her relationships. Could the mate bond be broken, what would happen if it was broken? How long do werewolf live? It's mentioned the last female pup was born 50 years ago but these guys are described as young looking? How old were the male lead? How are new pops born if everybody seems so hesitant to mate with humans? Why did the bear want to kill the wolves mates if they realize they're more similar than they seem? How did the bears know the wolves found their mate? This lack of detail made it harder for me to fully immerse myself in the story.
Emotional realism was another area where the story faltered. Clara’s reactions to traumatic events often felt superficial. While she showed fear during her kidnapping, it lacked the depth of trauma one would expect from such experiences. Her emotional arc did not evolve significantly throughout the narrative, leaving me wanting to see her grow and learn from her challenges. Author did try to show a bit of growth at the hospital where she refused to apologize to her boss because she's always giving 100% at work but because she is single and childless they often give her more responsibilities even when it's not in her duty or responsibility.
In summary, while I enjoyed the initial setup and the potential for an engaging story, the execution left me feeling unsatisfied. Clara’s character, the pacing, and the emotional depth of the relationships all needed more development to create a truly compelling read. I wanted to see her evolve, especially after her calmness in the face of danger, but instead, I was left with a sense of missed opportunities. The story had a promising foundation, but to truly resonate, it needed deeper character exploration, clearer world-building, and a more gradual development of relationships.