While I have read other books by Ms. Bryant and have enjoyed many of them, this one missed the mark for me. I was very drawn to the premise, even though it is based around what is basically everyone's worst nightmare, but saw the potential for a read full of emotional depth and courage and perseverance. Sadly, I didn't get much of that.
Another reviewer used the term "meandering" (Thanks Diane) and that perfectly described how I felt after the initial trauma took place. Nothing much happened.
Too much:
-Best friend talk between Shaylie and Marisa. They are besties forever (actual phrase used) and their babies shall grow up together and also be best friends, etc. This is when I wondered if this was written for a more YA audience. If that's the case, the book read quite well! But seen as though the two MCs were late 20's, I may be mistaken.
-Repeating phrases of rather mundane situations, for example how many times it was stated how beautiful the ranch was. The editing could have been tightened up.
-And also, how nice everyone was. Tied up in nice packages having nice family dinners, where there are nice ranchers with nice cops and nice parents and even nice baristas. I need some jerks thrown in!
I found it difficult to connect with the either MC, Shaylie or Piper. Shaylie survived the crash, yet had somewhat shallow/limited emotions from this massive event. This is really intense subject matter, and the scene itself was pretty detailed, though thankfully short, but the aftermath wasn't believable for me. Traumatizing feelings were suggested but didn't follow through, and I couldn't feel her depth..... No angst, no dark fears (except avoiding flying), no PTSD symptoms. And Piper fell flat. Though she lost two people on that flight, I got nothing from her besides liking yoga and tea. If the author tried alternating perspectives chapter to chapter, perhaps this would have given her more layers, and digging into her backstory may have made her more interesting. Overall a 2.75/5.
*Thanks much to the ARC I received from NetGalley in exchange for an honest review. *