His Enemy Mate

Canyon Flats Shifters #1

by Bailey Dark

As the Enforcer of the Grizzly Pack in Canyon Flats, Malcolm Bishop is a triple threat: Dark, Dangerous and Deadly. He’s never met an enemy he couldn’t defeat or a woman he couldn’t have. But when the hunt for a wild vampire sends the mate of his dreams into his arms, can he lead with his heart or will duty overrule his desires?

For Lisa Bradley, a romantic weekend in the Cascade Mountains sounds like exactly what she needs. But those plans go straight to hell when she catches her boyfriend cheating. Humiliated and heartbroken she finds herself lost and caught in the clutches of a real-life vampire. Just in the nick of time, she’s rescued by an unexpected hero. But she quickly goes from saved—to suspect and the next thing she knows, she’s being taken back to his pack—Captive.

When passion reaches it’s breaking point and feelings can’t be ignored, will they deny their connection and resume their lives? Or will they embrace their Shifted Hearts?

Genres: Paranormal Romance, Shapeshifters, Romance

123 pages, Kindle Edition

Published April 19, 2019

About the author

Bailey Dark is obsessed with all things dark, hot, and supernatural.

From Fae to Aliens, her heroes are thoroughly alpha and pure raw masculinity. When she's not writing (which is hardly ever) she's busy watching every movie in the marvel universe, or binging supernatural on her couch.

So come along, and enter her dark world. . . .

Website: https://www.baileydarkromance.com/
CONTACT: BAILEYDARKROMANCE@GMAIL.COM

Reviews

[Gurasees · Rating 3 out of 5]

Nice plot,but editing was very bad. Plz edit this book. I was so confused. I have re-read a sentence again and again to understand. I loved Malcom and Lisa. I love supernatural romance and this book was very creative. Going to read more books by this author.

[Stacey · Rating 2 out of 5]

providing an honest review after receiving a complementary copy from the author via BookFunnel.

I found this book hard to read it was in need of some editing. It kept changing from first person to third person perspective which made it very difficult to understand what was happening and I had to reread sentences several time.

I did like the new twist to the genre that when a human mate is claimed they become a shifter which I have never read before, but not sure that would really be possible and is a bit unbelievable.
But if humans become shifter after mating I can not see why there would be such a big stigma against mating with a human.

Malcolm's treatment and feeling for Lisa very all over the place yo yoing for one extreme to the other I found this a little annoying.

At one point in the book Lisa becomes so mad at Malcolm that she tells him she is done and he has lost his chance but only to take him back in the next chapter. Come on why make such a big statement if you clearly don't mean it.

I would not read this book again but would be interested in reading other book by this author to see if they are better written and edited.

[Annemarie · Rating 3 out of 5]

Liked the storyline. Like Lisa and Malcolm as mates. He didn't have to turn her to a shifter. There are plenty of stories that don't automatically change humans to shifters. Lots of grammatical errors. Losing track of which person is speaking and using I a lot made reading confusing and disrupted the flow. And why no wedding or birth for them? I also want to see Sawyer get with Everly.... .next book?

[Mary Ann · Rating 3 out of 5]

Cute story with goid characters. She try's to surprise her boyfriend only to find he's cheating on her. She ends up in the wrong place at the wrong time. He try's to deny his feelings but gives in at the end.

I would give it 4* if the pov didn't keep getting messed up. There was also times the wrong character was mentioned.

[Michele Henderson · Rating 3 out of 5]

Lisa and Malcom meet under less than ideal circumstances. They can't fight the attraction they feel towards each other. The story has Bear shifter and vampires as well as human Lisa. This book is good just needs editing to fix the mistakes

[Justina Smyth · Rating 4 out of 5]

I liked the story & characters but it needs a good editor to go over it. Malcom saves Lisa from a vampire attack & mates her.

[Destiny · Rating 3 out of 5]

I really enjoyed the storyline and all the characters, but it was difficult to follow because of editing. If you need someone to proofread let me know.
I really hated giving you low stars.

[Patty · Rating 3 out of 5]

Story was 4*, but many editing issue made it hard to follow at times. I really liked the idea of humans, shifters and vampires being at odds in this plot.

[Tima · Rating 1 out of 5]

A reasonable premise but needed a good editor. The story kept changing from first to third person and there were grammatical errors throughout, which were incredibly distracting and detracted from reading enjoyment.