Several years ago I read a couple of Inspector Darko Dawson novels by Kwei Quartey and always planned to read more. Quartey was not a perfect writer, but he was one of the few African writers being published in North America, and his stories always contained interesting facts about life in Ghana.
Recently, I noticed that Quartey had begun a series about a new detective, Emma Djan, and downloaded it during a kindle sale. THE MISSING AMERICAN is the first in the Emma Djan series, initially published in 2020.
THE MISSING AMERICAN focuses on sakawa boys (internet swindlers) and on one of their victims, Gordon Tilson. Gordon had met and married his wife, Regina, a Ghanaian, in the 1980s while he was on Peace Corps duty. They had one son, Derek. Regina had died thirteen years earlier from cancer, and Gordon missed her dreadfully. He spent time on his computer interacting with members of a Facebook support group called Widows & Widowers. After several interactions with a member named Helena Barfour, a Ghanaian, he begins to send her money. Any rational, logical person would recognize an interact scam; Gordon doesn’t. I can believe this because almost weekly in the Canadian news is another story of an older man or woman (usually a woman) who sends thousands (sometimes hundreds of thousands) of dollars to an internet scammer in Africa. There seems to be a certain type of person who falls for these schemes, and in the news accounts that I read, they usually blame their bank for allowing them to do this—not themselves—for failing to recognize what is obvious to the majority of us.
In Gordon’s case, his son immediately perceives that Helena Barfour is a scammer, and warns his father, but Gordon doesn’t believe Derek, and instead flies to Ghana to meet Helena. Then he disappears, becoming the “missing American”.
The Helena internet scam is being carried out by Nii Kwei, who has a BA in political science but can’t find a job in Ghana. He was introduced to Kweku Ponsu, a ‘traditional’ priest (witch doctor) who had Nii undergo several disgusting rituals in order to become a successful sakawa boy. Nii pays a percentage of his earnings to Ponsu, who in turn, transfers a percentage of the money earned from his stable of sakawa boys to a mysterious “Godfather”.
At the beginning of the book, Emma Djan is a member of the Ghanaian police force. She had wanted to follow in her father’s footsteps by becoming a homicide detective but instead she is given boring routine tasks in the Commercial Crimes Unit. In her quest to move to the homicide division, she is almost raped by Commissioner Andoh (saved only by the fighting skills that her father trained her to use). However, as a result of her rejection of the Commissioner’s advances, she is fired from the police force. Later she is hired by Yemo Sowah, the head of a private detective agency. Then, the detective agency is hired by Derek Tilson to find his missing father.
There are other complexities interwoven through the story. Emma has a stepbrother, Bruno, who she dearly loves and who has just started working with Nii. Several members of the police force are corrupt—in particular, Detective Inspector Doris Damptey, who not only receives regular payouts from Nii, but also was put in charge of searching for Gordon Tilson, the missing American. In addition, several higher level members of the government are corrupt. ”Corruption in Ghana has given the country a black eye internationally.” Then there is Sana Sana, a journalist attempting to expose this corruption. His life is in constant danger, so he keeps his identity a secret, hiding his face behind a curtain of thick wires hanging from the brim of his hat, or sometimes behind a prosthetic face mask. Another main character is Josephine Afrofi, a woman who has a brief liaison with Gordon while visiting Washington, D.C., and meets him again in Accra. In Ghana, her husband is the Inspector General of Police, a political appointment. Finally, there is Casper Guttenberg, Gordon’s friend in Washington, who persuades Gordon to remain in Accra to find the sakawa boy who swindled him, so Casper can publish an article about internet scams in the Washington Post.
Consequently, it is a very complex story, and it is very easy to get lost among all this complexity.
What I Liked
(1) THE MISSING AMERICAN provides a detailed picture of an African county that is seldom in the news.
(2) The description of the internet scam operations, and of the type of people who fall for them.
What I Didn’t Like
(1) Given that it is a complex narrative, following a number of different interacting storylines, it is poorly organized, making it difficult for the reader to follow all the threads, especially considering that many of the characters’ names are tough to remember.
(2) There were times when I felt I was reading a porno novel, as several sex scenes are described in too much detail.
(3) There was too much detail about unimportant Ghanaian items, such as the food being eaten, slowing down the action.
(4) The organizational structure of the Ghanan police force is not clear.
(5) Emma should have been the star of this novel, yet I never felt emotionally attached to her.
Consequently, I felt this was a 3.5 star novel. However, I plan to read the next one in the series, given all the interesting information I derived from reading this one.