Overall, I did like this one. Evander was a well-developed character that I enjoyed reading about. Daphne was a bit annoying. Her whole "just think happy thoughts and my life will be good" and "send out love and the world will be good" attitudes were very foolish, especially when you have a five-year-old daughter who needs protecting. Someone really needed to tell her about "tough love". I'm glad she had a bit of a change of opinion by the end, and learned to be a bit tougher with those who meant to hurt her, but she flip-flopped a lot along the way. Even after someone tried to run her off the road and Evander saved her, she still kept blaming him for bringing bad energy into her life. Jean Oram clearly needed to keep the tension going, but it just frustrated me.
And speaking of frustrating, I'm sorry, but the whole Melanie getting engaged thing did not work. There was no build-up to it. Totally out of the blue, Melanie was calling across the room to Tristan and asking him to marry her. What the??? What happened that she just had to ask there and then?
And there was nothing romantic about it because it was cruel and selfish. They were in the middle of Daphne's birthday party but Melanie couldn't let her have her moment and chosen to ask Tristan later? And just weeks ago, Melanie was feeling lonely because her two older sisters had hooked up with men and she felt like the odd one out and destined to remain alone. She, of anyone, should have considered that maybe Daphne was feeling the same. I mean, wasn't Daphne so determined to have Mistrel in her life again? It was obvious she wanted a man. But Melanie, instead of being a caring sister, decided to steal her moment by asking Tristan to marry her. Sorry. Not romantic. Just awful. Badly done, Melanie.