Sex: Dr Paul: Please undress and take a seat here

by Rebecca Scott

Victoria Nylon has always wondered why her sister is always so eager to get
treated by the handsome Doctor Paul. When she discovers she has a health
issue, her sister convinces her that this is her chance to find out by
herself. Victoria goes to the hospital and meets the handsome and hugely
popular Dr. Paul.

No one treats a woman like Dr. Paul, medically and other wise. Dr. Paul
gives Victoria a ‘special treatment’ in the examination room, one that
leaves here breathless, eager for me and desperate for an orgasm. Victoria
returns to the hospital and meets Dr. Paul for the next session where he
takes her through one thrilling sexual experience that she could never have
imagined. They cap it off with a slobbery payment method that Victoria uses
to ensure she comes back to see the doctor with the magic fingers.

The third visit is explosive and is one that occurs when they’re all alone
in that wing of the hospital. Fresh from a shattering orgasm and spent of
all energy, they hear a knock on the door. They weren’t alone after all.
How do a doctor and a patient explain sweaty bodies and a broken office
table?

40 pages, Kindle Edition

Published April 25, 2019

Reviews

[PelicanFreak · Rating 1 out of 5]

Wow - this is possibly the worst thing I’ve ever read. And I’ve read some terrible things and am known for holding no punches. It’s hard to know where to start… but I’ll try.

First of all, with that pathetic excuse for a cover, I’m not sure why I opened the book. I tend to steer clear of unprofessional covers for this very reason. We’ll call it morbid curiosity and move on.

Second of all, there is literally NO plot. This book is basically someone’s rape fantasy.
I’ll spare you, it goes like this.
Woman whines that she doesn’t feel well, how isn’t clarified.
Her sister recommends a doctor.
Doctor is a very large, muscled man who apparently wears a tshirt and silk slacks.
Previously-mentioned not-specified-how-but-supposedly-ill woman gets into the stirrups (because obviously you diagnose non-specific complaints by having the patient spread her legs) and the doctor proceeds to assault the patient. She eventually decides that she likes it, even though he leaves her hanging.

Need I say more ? I mean, I could go on but not by much.

As if that isn’t bad enough, there is absolutely NO editing or proofreading.
It reads as if someone whose first language isn’t English “wrote” this. (I use the word “wrote” loosely because let’s face it: no actual writing happened here.)

Seriously, spare yourself and keep scrolling.
My cat could write better porn than this. And that IS all it is: a substance-less sorry excuse for porn, somehow wrapped up and presented, pathetically and loosely as a book.

1 star - only because it’s impossible to select zero or negative stars.

[Mrs Margaret P Downing · Rating 2 out of 5]

Short story, not book.

It read as though written by someone who's first language is not English. It's a short story, not a book.